I was sitting in my room on my computer, filling in a from. Age 25, female.

When
there was a knock on my bedroom door. I scenst who it was it was my John my Hel
len but know to my species as Hell and I was know to him as his shellen. He came
in dressed in lether black pants and a black skin tight top showing all his mus
cles. God he was so hot. I came off my computer and went straight into the arms
of my Hellen my lips met his and my toung invide his mouth with despration, ligh
tly going over his bottom lip and bighting teasingly. I pulled back "So you get
any Lessers?" "yeah" he said in a deep huskiy voice instently getting hot and we
t. "So you think father will let us be together?" "yes" John repley "I just worr
y becasue.." I pulled away going to sit on the bed. "I just worry becasue even k
now your a member of the brotherhood i feel like my father has to give me to som
eone the scrib virgin agrees with, but I love you and i am yours and your mine"
in a flash John was on top of me kissing me fercliy "don't worry about a thing m
y love we will have each other I promice you that!" I kissd him again and put my
had on his chest on the other on his erection which was hard and ready pushing
through his pants, god I loved how I had a affect on him. Once I put my had on h
is erection it was totaly game over.
John POV
I thrust my tongue into her mouth as I grabbed her hips and ground myself into h
er hand. Her moan of satisfaction cranked me even higher, and as her nails bit i
nto my back, I loved the little bursts of pain that felt becasue they meant she
was hungry as he was. I was on the bed ontop of her in a flash of a movement, I
pushed up her skirt and tore off her panties with vicious impatience. I didn't t
reat her blouse or bra any better. There would be time to savor later. Now was a
ll about raw sex. While he worked with her breasts with his mouth, her hands wer
e rough as she pulled his shirt from his chest. He left her long enough to undo
his pants and spring his erection. Then he linked his forearms behind one of her
knees, stetched her leg up, and plunged himself into her body. He heard her gra
sp at his powerful entry, and her slick heat grabbed onto him, pulsating as she
came. He froze in place, absorbing the sensations of her release, feeling her co
re stroke him. The headbord of the bed banged against the wall to the beat of hi
s thrusts, and she grabbed onto his straning wrists, trying to hold on her self
in place. He was drilling her deep.
short story tell me what you think shoud i do another chapter?
disclamer to J.R.Ward