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Mr. Naughton
English 2
23 February 2017
Antony vs Brutus
Have your parents ever tried to prove something to you but then you go BAM! and lay
down undeniable evidence? Antony and Brutus had an experience somewhat similar to that.
Antony and Brutus are characters in the play Julius Caesar written by William Shakespeare,
about the the life of arguably the greatest leader of all time, Julius Caesar. In the play both
characters give a speech after Caesar gets stabbed to death by seven people. Brutus, who stabs
Caesar even though he was Caesars closest friend, makes a speech about why they killed
Caesar. Antony on the other hand makes a speech about how great Caesar was and that he wasnt
a tyrant. The people of Rome have to decide who to trust and why. Both Brutus and Antony use
trust, logic, and emotion, but Antonys speech is more persuasive due to the fact that he uses
Brutus uses trust, logic, and emotion to try and convince the people that Caesar was a
tyrant. Trust was a very important factor to include in the speech because when Brutus kills
Caesar, the people need to know who to trust now that they dont have a king anymore. Brutus
calls the people Romans, countrymen, and lovers (3.2.14) to make them feel that Brutus cares
about them and that he is a very trustworthy man. He also made them think he was trustworthy
by talking about how great Caesar was. He also says that Caesar was a tyrant that he had just
saved every Roman. In his speech he included that [He] loved Rome more(3.2.23-24).
Showing the people that he too cares about Rome and its future. Using logic also helped Brutus
convey his message that Caesar was a tyrant. Logic is also very important to include in a speech
because it makes sense to the Romans why Caesar was killed. Brutus states that if Caesar were
alive... [you would] die all slaves (3.2.24-25) What brutus means by that is that if Caesar were
alive and he became king everybody in Rome would become slaves never to be freed. Brutus has
given Caesar death for his ambition(3.2.30). Brutus tells the people that Caesar was killed
because of his ambition even though he loved him no less than all the people. The final tactic
that was used in his speech was emotion. Emotion is the most important thing to have in Brutuss
speech because it ignites anger for Caesar, hatred for his thoughts, and guilt for thinking that
Caesar was going to be a good king. Brutus uses this by asking the people if there is someone so
rude that would not be a Roman(3.2.32-33). He basically asks the people if there is anyone that
is not a Roman or a person that believes in Rome. He makes them feel strongly about Rome so
that they start to trust Brutus even more. He tells everybody that he slew [his] best lover for the
good of Rome(3.2.47-48) making everybody feel sympathy towards him. Brutus uses all of
these tactics in his speech so that the Romans can trust him that he is saying the truth.
Antony on the other hand uses all of these tactics plus irony and dramatic pauses to make
his speech even more trustworthy. He uses these dramatic pauses to make the people feel shame
towards themselves for not believing in their King. He uses Irony because Brutus had told him to
not to talk bad about Brutus. Antony calls the people Friends, Romans, countrymen(3.2.82)
bringing them closer to him. Brutus never said friends and when antony says it, it makes them
feel united and indifferent. It builds a lot of trust between the romans and Antony. Antony
includes that he comes under the leave of Brutus and the rest(3.2.89) saying that he was trusted
enough to come here and speak with them all. It makes the people feel that he must not have bad
make the people mad and guilty for thinking that Brutus was able to make them think bad about
Caesar. Using irony was one of the best ways Antony was able to convince the people to believe
him. By mixing Irony and trustworthy words, he was able to make the Romans distrust Brutus
and trust Antony more. A lot of logic is also used in the speech just like Brutus used. Antony had
the will of Caesar and saying that if he read then they would go and kiss dead Caesars
wounds(3.2.144) .This makes the people want to hear the will to see what their king had left for
them. He also said that the will will inflame you(3.2.156 ) making them even more eager to
hear what the will has in it. Another important part to the speech is emotion and dramatic pauses.
Dramatic pauses allows Antony to add extra emotion to the speech. He uses this when he says
[his] heart is in the coffin there with Caesar(3.2.116) He means that he is am going to have to
wait until he can speak again because he is choking with tears. This allows the public to also
change their mind about Caesar being a tyrant. The emotion is used at the same time when
Antony says that his heart is there with Caesar. The audience then create a link between them
and Antony making them sad as well. All of these tactics together makes Antonys speech a
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