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by Kayla Moten
The justice system has continuously placed targets on the backs of minorities. The targeting of
minorities, the African American community to be exact is not a new topic. The war on drugs has
enabled upper-class white nationalists to silence people of color by creating drug laws that target
them, therefore incarcerating them. The war goes hand in hand with the mass incarceration and
death of minorities. Moreover, communities of color are disembodied and demoralized due to the
targets put on their backs (A Brief History of the Drug War). The real question is what people in
Dontrell Stephens was only 23 years old when he was targeted by law enforcement for
supposedly selling drugs (heroin, marijuana, and cocaine). Stephens was shot by Deputy Lin four
times. Lin thought Stephens was reaching in his waistband after signalling him over to the side
for a traffic violation. Dontrell Stephens at the young age of 23 years old is paralyzed for the
remainder of his life (Baker, Al). Eric Garner was another example of targets being placed upon
black people's backs. Garner was not only a father, husband, son, and friend, but an American
citizen who was shot and killed on videotape for selling cigarettes and other drugs on the street.
African- Americans and other minorities have a lasting affect on the image other US citizens
have of them. Because minorities are portrayed as uncivilized human beings, many view them as
a danger. Therefore when law enforcement officers go to handle a situation they are more likely
to take more procation when dealing with minorities than with majorities (Soffen, Kim).
and arrest individuals who are aiming to hurt and even kill minorities. Many individuals that hold
positions of power, such as police officers, believe they can kill people of color and get away
with it. Because all American people are equal they should be treated that way. If an officer
kills any individual, not even taking into account the color of their skin for no justified cause,
they should be reprimanded for it. If one officer gets reprimanded for what they have done, other
officers will know their wrong doings will also be justified. Sometimes lessons are better learned
through the punishment of the individuals around them. Minorities ability to see that the judicial
system is not on the side of higher up white nationalism will eventually end protest and
deteriorate the everlasting thought of white privilege that is prevalent in the United States.
Change takes time, and will not be accepted by everyone due to racism that still exist in the
United States. It is of great importance to act and take steps towards change. However, racist
people will exist in the United States no matter what, and reprimanding individuals is not always
enough. Potential jail time or even death sentencing will force racist police officers who are
killing off minorities into following correct procedures. This will not only salvage African
American and other minorities lives, but aid in destroying hatred in the United States. Not only
speaking on the majority hate of minorities, but the minority hate due to majority privilege and
the continuous killing majorities participate in against minorities. If there is change made in the
thought process that white people can do as they please because of the color of their skin,
References
"A Brief History of the Drug War." A Brief History of the Drug War. Drug Policy Alliance, n.d.
Baker, Al, Goodman, David J., Mueller, Benjamin. "Beyond the Chokehold: The Path to Eric
Garner's Death." The New York Times. The New York Times, 13 June 2015. Web. 19 Apr.
2017.
Soffen, Kim. "The Big Question about Why Police Pull over so Many Black Drivers." The
Sommerfeldt, Chris. "Florida Man Shot by Police Arrested for Selling Drugs near School." NY
Policy The policy The policy The policy The policy The policy
change: change is change is fairly change change needs to change is
clear and clear and needs to be be significantly missing.
20 pts. specific. specific. clearer clearer and/or
and/or more specific.
specific,
though
overall it is
adequate.
Ethos: The writers The writers The writer's One or more of The writer
arguments arguments are arguments the writer's did not use
15 pts. are strong. good. The are adequate. arguments and any
The writer writer The writer evidence is effective
introduces introduces and may not significantly arguments
and uses uses some introduce or weak. Intro- or
highly- well- respected use all ductions may be evidence.
respected sources. sources. lacking for most No intro-
sources. or all sources. ductions of
sources.
Pathos: The writer The writer The writer's The writers The writer
uses strong uses good appeals to the appeals to the did not use
15 pts. strategies to strategies readers' readers values any
appeal to appeal to the values and and beliefs is effective
the readers readers' values beliefs are inadequate or appeals to
values and and beliefs. uneven, often uneven. the readers'
beliefs. though overall values and
they are beliefs.
adequate.
Logos: The writer's The writers The writer's The writers The writer
organiza- organizational organizational organizational did not use
15 pts. tional structure structure and structure effective
structure provides good logic are provides organiza-
strongly support for the adequate to inadequate tion and/or
supports arguments. support the support for the logic.
the Logic is good. arguments, arguments. The
arguments. but are logic is often
The logic is sometimes uneven.
straight and uneven.
strong.
Kayla,
You provide a nice, well-reasoned argument. Your research are solid, and the stories
you cite provide excellent pathos. You needed a clear policy change, and your fluency
could use some fine-tuning, but overall, great job.
Dr. Wynne