Pre Had students move around the room and get information from other students. Had students share what they had learned from the previous activity. While Good use of process writing, starting You said that you liked childish with brainstorming of the topic. movies, instead of saying you like You shared with the students about children movies Childish is a negative your favorite type of movie. This term, whereas children is describing encouraged them to also share. the type of movie. Post Good use of process writing to share You made some language mistakes like with the class what they had written. Can you hear Moufida? instead of Can you listen Moufida? Students make a number of errors in their writing. What should you do to help students to fix their grammar mistakes and learn how to write correct sentences?
Strengths
Had students share with the class
Had students read other students work and suggest revisions. This was a good example of process writing.
Suggestions
Work on correcting your language mistakes.
Think about what you can do to help students fix their grammar mistakes and learn how to write correct sentences. Practicing assessment is a key focus during this TP. Think about another type of formative assessment you could use at the end of the lesson. Also try to incorporate a summative assessment. It doesnt have to be long, but it should test a unit or a block of lessons to see if HCT/FWC Education Division Jim Ishler EPC 2403
they achieved the learning outcomes for that group of lessons.
Your personal focus for the next lesson:
Work on correcting your language mistakes.
Work on making and using a formative and summative assessment.