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Socratic Seminar 33/33 -Great questions! Next time, I need to

Reflection: -Amazing Job! focus on grammar
This assignment such as punctuation
consisted of reflecting marks.
on how the socratic
seminar affected us
personally. In the
reflection we were to
include commentary
on what we thought
of the process, as
well as how we
believe we did.

Juvenile Justice 46/50 -Good intro Next time, I need to

Essay: -Provide more focus on going just a
This assignment evidence/ explanation bit more in depth and
consisted of writing -Last few paragraphs further explaining
an objective essay are the best ones some of my ideas.
describing what the -Unique voice within
flaws in the juvenile my writing
justice system are,
and how to fix them.
In the essay we were
to write about the
problem and share
what we believe the
solution should be.

Language, Gender, 47/ 50 -Your voice is Next time, I need to

and Culture Writing fantastic connect my ideas
Assignment: - Expand on the back to the prompt in
This assignment connection and what order to make the
consisted of writing a needs to be done essay well rounded.
narrative discussing a more
social issue that we
personally feel strong
about. In the essay,
we are to identify
what audience we are
going to address as
well as what the
purpose of writing this
paper is.
1984 Essay: 44/50
This assignment
consisted of writing
on one of three
prompts, in regards
to the novel 1984. In
the essay we were to
compare our society
to the one within the
book and analyze the
similarities and
differences.
1984 Socratic 20/25
Seminar:
In this assignment we
were to take part in a
socratic seminar
discussing the novel
1984. In the seminar,
we were to be apart
of one of the three
discussions (each on
different topics).
Final Project: N/A
This assignment
consisted of making a
handbook the
incoming freshmen.
In the assignment,
we were to talk about
the subject of bullying
along with how to
spot it and deal with
it.
-Awkward phrasing Next time, I need to
-Go into a bit more work on clueing in the
about the novel, just reader on the context
briefly stating at least of the prompt as a
what its main subject whole. Also, I must
is dive deeper into the
-Good thesis prompt to analyze it
statement further.
-And so?
-When comparing to
something, that
something should
have been previously
explained. Perhaps
set up the world of
Oceania first, then go
into our world.
-Good...interesting
read
N/A Next time, I believe I
should prepare even
a bit more. While I did
prepare, I know that if
I had a little more
information it really
could have benefitted
the discussion.
N/A Next time, I believe
that communication
and teamwork would
need to be utilized
more. Discrepancies
arose amongst my
group and that
caused slight tension
between us. If we
communicated better,
I know that this would
not have happened.