Beruflich Dokumente
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T Organization Strong use of topic Consistent use of Topic sentences Weak or no topic
sentences topic sentences used sentences used
E Organization is clear Organization is well- Some organization Little organization
and effective defined evident evident
N
N Concrete Concrete detail Concrete detail Concrete detail Some concrete detail
Detail: engaging and systematically builds supports thesis does not support
T Quality/ compelling argument Concrete detail is thesis
Quantity Concrete detail used relevant to position Weak data
consistently to form a Sufficient data to Incorrect use of
7 cohesive argument prove thesis concrete detail
5 Too much factual
data reads like a
P report
O
I Consistently weaves Commentary helps Some links between Commentary may be
N Commentary commentary and develop argument commentary, facts, present but not tied to
T : Quality/ concrete detail Persuades reader and thesis factual data
S Quantity Draws reader to Develops clear ties Convincing Insufficient use of
position between commentary Appropriate to topic commentary or too
Ideas clearly and thesis Holds readers much commentary
presented Ratio of facts to interest (essay like)
Compelling opinion well balanced Adequate balance Not engaging
Ratio of facts to and appropriate to between fact and Repetitive
opinion is effectively topic commentary commentary
balanced and
appropriate to topic
Synthesis of Compelling Effective Conclusion repeats
Conclusion information Clearly goes beyond Sense of completion opening or thesis
Raises issues to thesis Attempts to go Weak or lacking
greater whole Raises new or related beyond thesis conclusion
Smooth and logical issue for future Attempts to look at Leaves reader
discussion big picture hanging