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Chapter 1
The writing process
Steps in Writing & Adapting the Writing Process for Timed Exams
1. Pre-writing: prepare to write a draft
2. Drafting: the production of a text with a clear beginning
3. Revising: involves checking for major problems
4. Editing: involves checking over your completed writing
5. Proofreading: check for careless mistakes
Revision Checklist: Content
appropriate to the test question.
Proportion should match emphasis.
Check accuracy
Retain first-choice words.
Revision Checklist: Organization
1. Position ideas to indicate emphasis.
2. Use informative beadings and adequate white space.
3. Paragraph by idea and for eye appeal.
4. Use clear transitions between ideas.
5. Use clear references.
Editing Checklist: Style
1. Consider readability.
2. Vary sentence patterns and length.
3. Use concrete words and phrases in preference to vague, general ones.
4. Revise weak verbs
5. Prefer active-voice verbs.
6. avoid wordy constructions.
7. Cut clichs, redundancies, and little-word padding.
8. Use a more personal tone

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Chapter 4
Reading comprehension
How to create outline, Reference: The passage in the book page 42-44
Telework in Thailand tends to be popular
A. Cases of withholding information from the media and the public
- H5N1 avian flu virus(bird flu): Govt said avian cholera not affecting humans and Thai
chicken not infected by H5N1
- H1N1 swine flu virus: PHM stop talking to media, info. Must be screened; 90% o
infected people recover on their own
- Street riots, tsunamis, bombings, smoking, fast food, sexy movies, reason-prevent
panic and over reaction
B. Danger of policy
People dont understand a situation and cannot prepare themselves
Diseases(H5N1/H1N1): people get a false sense pf security, not seek medical advice(when sick):
disease spread
Ex. Two boys-seriously sick
Ts from the question or cases

Short essay example

Outline
A. How Line users can use the Line Pay service
Process= steps
1. Card no in Line Pay app
2. Set a 7 digits password
3. Purchase goods/services online or in stores
* via bank accounts with pre-deposited cash: debit card
*free of charge
B. Risks of using Line Pay service
- Hacking credit cards/ bank accounts not safe from hackers
- Potential debt line pay is convenient so people might not keep track of their purchases

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- children using their parents smartphones without parents knowledge

Line users can use Line Pay service by doing the following steps. First of all, they have to
register in the application by giving details about themselves and their credit card numbers.
Next, they need to create their own password that should have seven numbers. After that, they
can buy products or services through the internet or in shop by using their Line Pay accounts.
Debit card uses need to have some money in their bank accounts. All users do not have to pay
for using the app.
TS:
1. There are numerous risks of using Line Pay service.
2. Using Line Pay service can have numerous risks.
Focusing on main points
Ex. There are numerous risks of using Line Pay service. The first risk is the service is very
convenient. Because of this, people may not keep track of how they spend so they can incur a
lot of debt.

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Chapter 2&5
Letter and Email Formats
Letter example:
E-Mail Letter in Reply
To: Shashiar@messcodiscountstore.co.th
From: Menamdc@eathealthy.com
Date: 30. 11. 2011 10: 50: 40 GMT
Subject: Re: Eathealthy Campaign
CC: arisathep@mescodiscountstores.co.th

Dear Shashi
Thank you for the invitation. I shall be very happy to give ---the opening speech at the launch of
your "Eat Healthy Campaign" on Tuesday 15 December.
I am sure the campaign will be very popular as it looks exciting. I will forward the draft of my
speech to you as soon as it
is ready just to make sure it goes well with the promotion. Feel free to make comments about
it.
Meanwhile I look forward to receiving a provisional program from Arisa.
Finish off appropriately
Best regards
Menam Ducati
Chief Editor Healthy Eating Magazine
Telephone: 02-3004503-5
Mobile: 086-9193333

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Example: Traditional Semi-block, Mixed Punctuation Style

DEF Company
Sukhumvit Soi 10
Klongtoey, Bangkok 00000
Telephone: 00-000-0000
April 15, 2012
Mr. Brian Jones
Brown Wrapper Services, Ltd.
00/00 Convent Road
Bangkok 00000

Dear Mr. Jones:

Subject: Semi-block formatting
Please remember that we at DEF Company prefer our correspondence to be in semi-
block style with mixed punctuation.
In semi-block style formatting, the beginning of each paragraph is indented. Also, the
date and signature block are aligned to the right of page center.
l trust that you will appreciate our attention to detail. You are one of our major sub-
contractors, and we have had a pleasant business relationship for many years. I hope that it will
continue. I suggest you examine the enclosed file. Please contact me if you have any questions.
Sincerely yours,
(Signed by hand)
Lorrie Bloom
JLB: wjs Enclosure: File #3417-B

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Chapter 3
EDITING, PROOFREADING, AND VOCABULARY

Vocabulary part example:

Complete the following sentences with appropriate forms of the given words.
Response hinder proof capable default collapse equivalent
emergency depend consume
1.His impolite____________ to a valid question made the teacher angry.
2.The ____________of the mass of the two objects balances the wooden plank on
3. the Laziness is a ____________to progress.
4. In warm countries, household electricity____________is low during the cool
5. The investigation has____________that the suspect is guilty of the crime.
6. .Because he lost his job, he____________in his home loan payment.
7. .Drug____________is one of the major social problems faced by many countries.
8. .His managerial____________have been shown by his successful handling of his team.
9. Students should undergo proper training on how to deal with____________situation.
10.the school decided to purchase____________chairs for easy handling and storage.

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Instructions: Underline the 10 mistakes in the passage below. Write your correction/or each of
the mistakes in the space above the underlined mistakes.
As the low oil price seems to encourage motorists to be careless with energy consumption,
Thailands energy policymakers have expressed their concern. According to the energy Ministry,
the government is looking at raising the tax on fuel to increase her fund to promote alternative
fuels. The increase is yet to finalize as the Energy and Finance Ministries will discuss the
possibility of raising the tax on fuel and gases in the transport sector. The excise tax on diesel
bas already increased for 70 satang per liter since early January this year. The new tax is likely
to include liquefied petroleum gas and compressed natural gas to be fair to motorists because
large truck that use gas do not pay tax. The deeply slump in the crude oil price to below US$30
per barrel may make motorists happy and cut some imported product prices. However, it is
hurt the ministry's efforts to promote energy efficiency. In addition, airfares is cheaper in part
because of the lower oil price as fuel is a major cost in the aviation industry oil prices this year
are likely to stay low because of a present weak global economy.

Vocabulary for Midterm

vocab Definition
1 appeal(n)(v) a request to the public for money, information, or help
2 effect(n) (v) the result of a particular influence
3 compensation(n) money that is paid to someone in exchange for something
that has been lost or damaged or for some problem
4 recovery(n) the process of getting back something lost, especially
health, ability, possessions, etc.
5 provision(n) the act of providing something
6 growth(n) The growth of a person, animal, or plant is its process of
increasing in size
7 focus(n) (v) the main or central point of something, especially of
attention or interest
8 repetition(n) the act of doing or saying something again
9 launch(n) (v) an event to celebrate or introduce something new
10 integration(n) to mix with and join society or a group of people, often
changing to suit their way of life, habits, and customs
11endanger(v) to put someone or something at risk or in danger of being
harmed, damaged, or destroyed
12 critic, criticism(n) the act of saying that something or someone is bad
13drastic(adj) (especially of actions) severe and sudden or having very
noticeable effects

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14dispute(n)(v) an argument or disagreement, especially an official one

between, for example, workers and employers or two
countries with a common border
15settle(v) to reach a decision or an agreement about something, or
to end a disagreement
16 significance(n) importance
17source(n) the place something comes from or starts at, or the cause
of something
18slash(v)(n) to cut with a sharp blade using a quick, strong movement
19strategy(n) a detailed plan for achieving success in situations such as
war, politics, business, industry, or sport, or the skill of
planning for such situations
20supply(v)(n) to provide something that is wanted or needed, often in
large quantities and over a long period of time
21key(n) a piece of metal that has been cut into a special shape and
is used for opening or closing a lock, starting a car engine,
etc.
22investigation/investigator(n) the act or process of examining a crime, problem,
statement, etc. carefully, especially to discover the truth
23hamper(v)(n) to prevent someone doing something easily
24hinder(v) to limit the ability of someone to do something, or to limit
the development of something
25 trend(n) a general development or change in a situation or in the
way that people are behaving
26widespread(adj) existing or happening in many places and/or among many
people
27occupation(n) a person's job
28 recovery(n) the process of getting back something lost, especially
health, ability, possessions, etc.
29 prosperity(n) the state of being successful and having a lot of money
30 requirement(n) something that you must do, or something you need
31 reform(v) to make an improvement, especially by changing a person's
behaviour or the structure of something
32 merger(n) an occasion when two or more companies join together
33quantity(n) the amount or number of something, especially that can be
measured or is fixed
34predict(v) to say that an event or action will happen in the future,
especially as a result of knowledge or experience
35inflation(n) a general, continuous increase in prices
36impact(v) (n) the force or action of one object hitting another
37illegal(adj) not allowed by law
38hostility(n) an occasion when someone is unfriendly or shows that
they do not agree with or like something

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39 gradual(adj) happening or changing slowly over a long period of time or

distance
40frequent(adj) happening often; common
41fluctuation(n) to change, especially continuously and between one level
or thing and another
42 essential(adj) necessary or needed
43 equivalent(adj) having the same amount, value, purpose, qualities, etc.
44 emergency(n) something dangerous or serious, such as an accident,
which happens suddenly or unexpectedly and needs fast
action in order to avoid harmful results
45depend(v) to be decided by or to change according to the stated
thing
46default(v) to fail to do something, such as pay a debt, that you legally
have to do
47consume(v) to use fuel, energy, or time, especially in large amounts
48collapse(v) fall down suddenly because of pressure or having no
strength or support
49capable(adj) able to do things effectively and skilfully, and to achieve
results
50proof(n) a fact or piece of information that shows that something
exists or is true