Assignment Score Teacher Comments 2+ Improvement

Strategies

Memoir Essay 43/50 (86%) -Too broad -Help with transitions,

-Weak Transitions -re-read the essay
-Awkward word until it flows smoothly
choice

Memoir Project 22/25 (88%) Low Audio -Talk louder

- Go in the system
and make it louder.

Poetry Journal 23/25 (92%) Cute little -Make my poems all

Nice! on beans
-Do them on a topic I
enjoy

Poetry Timed Write 28/35 (80%) -Tell what the essay I have always
is about struggled with writing,
-work with the time, but I think if I learned
not figurative how to write under
language pressure, and if I
-Make one of my learned how to
body paragraphs the recognize figurative
focus of my essay language I would do
better.

Odyssey Podcast 18/25 (72%) -Put the fact as the

last sentence
-Even though we had
his journey and how
he was a hero, we
didnt say it in those
words and I think it
caused us points.

Odyssey Essay 20/25 -Clarify the texts I can put all of these
-discuss similarities into my essay, and I
-need topic sentence would be able to do it
-Show figurative better. I struggle with
language used hooks and topic
sentences.

Romeo & Juliet Final

Project