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Durnin - 20141733
marks
to
show
the
emotion
of
panic
for
the
reader.
In
saying
this,
I
would
like
to
see
you
working
on
your
use
of
capital
letters
within
your
writing
and
only
using
them
at
the
beginning
of
sentences
or
for
a
proper
noun.
Although,
I
can
tell
that
you
have
been
working
hard
on
your
spelling
as
you
have
spelt
words
using
your
sounding
out
strategy.
Even
though
some
of
the
words
are
not
correct,
I
can
still
understand
the
phonological
knowledge
used.
Overall,
your
drawing
at
the
bottom
is
an
excellent
correspondent
to
your
story,
so
beautiful
work!
You
have
created
a
piece
of
work
that
represents
an
excellent
understanding
of
English
and
I
look
forward
to
reading
more
of
your
work
in
the
future!
Best
wishes,
Miss
Durnin
Excel