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1. Introduction(para1)
Thesis statement: Parents will play a vital role in academic development, social
competences, and self-perceptions.
2. Body
B. Paragraph3(pro argument 2)
Support2- Mostly, mothers are the ones who used to take care about their children,
but as time has changed parenting styles has changed too.
Support3- Engaged parents are more likely to also be an important source of social
persuasion, providing positive feedback to their child about their ability to apply
themselves to their schoolwork, take on new challenges and learn new things.
C. Paragraph4(pro argument3)
Support2- However, childrens perceptions of their parents values were the most
important predictor over and above parent engagement behaviors - of childrens
academic motivations.
Support3- Through these positive actions, children will get strong motivations to
complete their tasks and these are all related with their academic achievements.
3. Conclusion(paragragh6)-restated thesis
It makes the subject stronger that parents should intervene in children. But always
remember that too much can be harmful to both parents and children.