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Your school is organising a

ceremony for your favourite English


teacher who is retiring. You have
been asked to give a farewell
speech.
Use the notes below about your
teacher to write your speech
Number of years teaching at your
school
She has been teaching at our
school for 15 years
Previous schools
Before she came to our school,
she worked at SMK Jerami Padi,
Kuala Nerus, Terengganu
Achievements
Being a goos teacher, she has
gained some success
-100% passes English Language
Every year, she has helped the
school to have 100% passes
English Language in SPM
Examinations
-innovative Teacher Award
Her biggest achievement is when
she was awarded the innovative
teacher of the year by our state
education department
Contributions to the school
For the past 15 years, she
contributed a lot to our school.
-Head of English Panel
She is the head of English Panel
of our school.
-teacher advisor debating team
She is also the teacher advisor of
the school debate team.
-organiser charity events
She has also become the
organiser of our school charity
events
Teachers plan after retirement
She is going to have alot of time
for herself and her family. She
personally mentioned to me that
she has a few plans after her
retirement.
-plan 1 ( give your own idea)
I know that she loves travelling
and she has been longing to visit
Nami Island in Korea.
-plan 2 ( give your own idea)
She also loves baking cakes and
cookies and she once told me
that she would open a bakery
shop.
Your opinion of the teacher
Personally, I really respect and
admire Puan Aminah binti
Abdullah because she is kind and
loving.
One good memory you have of
your teacher
Last year, when my mother died,
she helped me a lot . she
comforted when I felt
miserable. She offered me advice
and money. I will never forget
her kindness
Wish your teacher well for the
future
I hope that Puan Aminah will
have a good life and health and
be happy always.
First step:
Construct sentences using the phrases given to
make them meaningful .

She has been teaching at our school


for 15 years.Before she came to our
school, she worked at SMK Jerami
Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu.
Being a goos teacher, she has gained
some success . Every year, she has
helped the school to have 100%
passes English Language in SPM
Examinations. Her biggest
achievement is when she was
awarded the innovative teacher of
the year by our state education
department. For the past 15 years,
she contributed a lot to our school.
She is the head of English Panel of
our school. She is also the teacher
advisor of the school debate team.
She has also become the organiser
of our school charity events. She is
going to have alot of time for
herself and her family. She
personally mentuoned to me that
she has a few plans after her
retirement.
I know that she loves travelling
and she has been longing to visit
Nami Island in Korea. She also
loves baking cakes and cookies
and she once told me that she
would open a bakery shop.
Personally, I really respect and
admire Puan Aminah binti
Abdullah because she is kind and
loving. Last year, when my
mother died, she helped me a lot .
she comforted when I felt
miserable. She offered me advice
and money. I will never forget her
kindness. I hope that Puan
Aminah will have a good life and
health and be happy always.
Second step: use an appropriate
format and lay-out.
Greeting + audience
+ title/purpose of the speech

Good morning/ A The principal,


very Good beloved Puan Aminah
morning binti Abdullah, teachers
And fellow students

On this special day, I would to deliver a


speech to bid farewell to Puan Aminah
binti Abdullah who is retiring soon.
Good morning to the principal,
beloved Puan Aminah binti
Abdullah, teachers and fellow
students. On this very special day, I
would like to deliver a speech to bid
farewell to our beloved English
teacher, Puan Aminah binti
Abdullah.

Step 3: write a preceeding


statement = a sentence/ or two
sentences that will link the intro and
the content points.

Write a brief information about


Puan Aminah.

As you all know, Puan Aminah is one


of our English teacher. She will retire
at the end of this week. Let me talk
about her.

Step 4: state all the content points,


one by one.

She has been teaching at our school


for 15 years.Before she came to our
school, she worked at SMK Jerami
Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu.
Being a goos teacher, she has gained
some success . Every year, she has
helped the school to have 100%
passes English Language in SPM
Examinations. Her biggest
achievement is when she was
awarded the innovative teacher of
the year by our state education
department. For the past 15 years,
she contributed a lot to our school.
She is the head of English Panel of
our school. She is also the teacher
advisor of the school debate team.
She has also become the organiser
of our school charity events. She is
going to have alot of time for
herself and her family. She
personally mentuoned to me that
she has a few plans after her
retirement.
I know that she loves travelling
and she has been longing to visit
Nami Island in Korea. She also
loves baking cakes and cookies
and she once told me that she
would open a bakery shop.
Personally, I really respect and
admire Puan Aminah binti Abdullah
because she is kind and loving. Last
year, when my mother died, she
helped me a lot . she comforted
when I felt miserable. She offered
me advice and money. I will never
forget her kindness. I hope that
Puan Aminah will have a good life
and health and be happy always.

Step 5: Give more information about


the points= relevant info/ further
elaborations on the points.

She has been teaching at our school


for 15 years. She came to our school
in 2005. Before she came to our
school, she worked at SMK Jerami
Padi, Kuala Nerus, Terengganu. She
taught at the school for 8 years
before asking for transfer.
Being a good teacher, she has
gained some success . Every year,
she has helped the school to have
100% passes English Language in
SPM Examinations. She works very
hard and she is very determined in
her work.Her biggest achievement is
when she was awarded the
innovative teacher of the year by
our state education department.
She has innovated her teaching
techniques and approches making
all her lessons very interesting and
fun. For the past 15 years, she
contributed a lot to our school.
She is the head of English Panel of
our school. She is also the teacher
advisor of the school debate team.
Through her guidance, our debate
team has won the competition for
three consecutive years.
She has also become the organiser
of our school charity events. With
her help, we have managed to raise
a fund to help our needy students.
She is going to have alot of time for
herself and her family. She
personally mentioned to me that
she has thought a few plans after
her retirement. I know that she
loves travelling and she has been
longing to visit Nami Island in Korea.
She also loves baking cakes and
cookies and she once told me that
she would open a bakery shop.
Personally, I really respect and
admire Puan Aminah binti Abdullah
because she is kind and loving. Last
year, when my mother died, she
helped me a lot . she comforted
when I felt miserable. She offered
me advice and money. I will never
forget her kindness. I hope that
Puan Aminah will have a good life
and health and be happy always.
Step 6: write an appropriate ending

I would like to end my speech with


this special and meaningful quotes,
a great teacher like Puan Aminah
will always inspire us to be
successful and make our dreams
come true. Thats all, thank you.

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