Beruflich Dokumente
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Kelsey Drew
Michigan State University
TE 846 Smith
Summer 2015
Literacy Learner Analysis
occurring between races, different socioeconomic groups, native English speakers and English
language learners, and special education and general education students (Gambrell et al., 2011).
Because of the growing gaps the pressure for educators to become aware of the differences in
learners which is causing these gaps has become great. Educators across the country are daily
into their classroom to encourage students to have literacy goals. Differentiating instruction
and Mazzonis Ten Evidence-Based Best Practices for Comprehensive Literacy Instruction.
(2011)
One of the major set-backs facing students is the assumption that because of their statuses
(racial, socioeconomic, etc.) they are unable to learn. Gambrell, Malloy, and Mazzoni (2011)
quote E. W. Gordon saying, We know in the 21st century that the absence of a certain developed
ability because of the absence of opportunity to learn should not be interpreted as absence of
ability to learn, and the recognition of the fact of diverse human characteristics demands
remember that not all students have the same opportunities prior to entering or outside of school.
Modification, adaption, and Response to Intervention are all ways to help get all students on the
My own early literacy learning experiences were slightly different than the average
individual. I came from a well-educated, middle class family who chose to home school their
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children until high school. I was a highly motivated student with the values instilled by my
parents. I was taught to read by my mother using the book Teach Your Child to Read in 100 Easy
Lesson by Engelmann & Haddox (1986), which I loved as a young reader and could not get
enough. From that point on I was an avid reader going to the public library every other week and
always getting four or five books at a time. Because of my unique experience, I know very little
literacy learning goals into the classroom. I have been given few resources for the secondary
classroom. Also, I work in a rural community with very little racial diversity (majority Caucasian
and Native American students) and a very low socioeconomic standing. I am using this project to
analyze some of the ways literacy affects learning in my classroom, and what literacy
female, high school student. Alberta is just finishing her ninth grade year in a rural, K-12 public
school. She is Caucasian, from a lower-middle class family, she has never received any special
Albertas mother has two college degrees Alberta believes one in early childhood
education and the other is for writing short stories and articles. Albertas father is a lab tech and
works with college seniors working on their senior engineering projects at a local public college.
Alberta says because of both of her parents involvement in education they have always held her
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All names and locations have been changed for the privacy for those involved.
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During my discussion with Alberta, she told me about growing up in a family with high
standards. Her parents encouraged reading from a young age taking time to read to both her and
her older sister every night. Her parents have also set an example of reading for pleasure by
frequently reading as well. Alberta says that her mother is a fast reader and her father is a slower
reader. She also informed me her sister reads, ALL the time!
Emotional Climate
When I asked Alberta about how she felt about the emotional climate of our local school
her immediate response was, Not good. Alberta feels there is a lack of classroom control from
the teachers and she feels students do not have any respect for the teachers. Because of these two
factors Alberta feels the atmosphere of the school does not encourage cooperation, risk-taking,
Alberta shared the following thoughts on reading in the classroom, We read a lot in
English and history. A little bit in science. I really expected there to be more reading in high
school. Alberta does not struggle with the required reading and feels very confident when asked
to participate in literacy activities. She told me she feels she struggles with writing but has
Literacy History
As previously mentioned, Albertas family are all avid readers. Alberta and her sister
were encouraged to read from a young age and have never stopped. Their parents read to them
every night and have made a point of setting a good example of reading in the home. Alberta
says her home is full of books and she is often seeking challenging and interesting books outside
of school to keep her interested in reading. In fact, a few days before my initial meeting with
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Alberta, she came into my classroom to tell me how excited she was to have found Contact by
Alberta has never received any additional reading interventions during her schooling. She
told me she feels she is reading above grade level because she is not being challenged by her
coursework. Though, she did throw in the disclaimer of, With the exception of The Iliad and
Alberta says her biggest literacy struggle is in writing. She says, I dont like writing, I
dont feel good about it. Writing is more challenging to her because, even though it is done
often and cross-curricularly in our school, there is little feedback and little opportunity for
improvement. Alberta says she would like the opportunity to work on her writing skills and build
more confidence in them because, writing is a large part of college and I want to be prepared.
Since Alberta identified writing as an area she would like to work on, I identified the use
of outlines to assist her in organizing thoughts for her writing, as well as aid her in reading
comprehension. I have not used outlines in my class and have not seen them used in other classes
so I do not believe Alberta has used them very often. For pre- and post-assessments I had Alberta
create different outlines based on different writing prompts. For our first lesson, which focused
on creating outlines to organize a paper, I used creative writing prompts from a set created by
Catherine Reid (n.d.) at Warren Wilson College. For the second lesson, which focused on
creating outlines to organize key information from a text, I used a few different educational
articles from the National Science Foundation and National Geographic Society.
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Lesson 1
For the first pre-assessment I chose a writing prompt which I thought would be
interesting to Alberta allowing her a choice in her writing topic. The creative writing prompt
from Reid (n.d.), as described in Appendix A, instructs students to write about a first
experience. Since Alberta has recently started drivers education I thought this would appeal to
her. I presented Alberta with the Reids (n.d.) writing prompt and told her Please use an outline
to organize your ideas as if you were going to write a complete paper based on this prompt.
Alberta took about fifteen to twenty minutes to complete the outline and turn it back into me.
During this time I did not offer any tips, advice, or other aid to her.
The outline Alberta turned in for the pre-assessment showed basic organization but
included too much detail in some areas (introduction and conclusion) and did not have enough
details in others (just listing the senses but not very much about how they were affected by the
event). A picture of Albertas work is included in Appendix B. From her outline I was able to
see Alberta was very thorough and detailed with her thoughts but struggled to know when to
Because Alberta had difficulty with choosing how much detail to include in her outlines I
was able to use my lesson (Appendix C) to create an outline with Alberta on another writing
prompt from Reid (n.d.) allowing Alberta to choose what we wrote about to meet the directions
of the prompt. We focused on organizing key ideas with large bullet points, with a few smaller,
more detailed points underneath. We discussed the differences between big topics and
supporting details. Finally we discussed summarizing our ideas and not writing full sentences
in an outline.
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As a post-assessment for this lesson I chose another creative writing prompt from Reid
(n.d.) as described in Appendix E. Again this prompt allowed room for Alberta to make a choice
about what she could write about. I asked Alberta to create an outline as a basis for a paper she
would write using this prompt. During the time Alberta was working I did not offer an
assistance. Again Alberta took fifteen to twenty minutes to complete an outline. The outline she
created showed a much better understanding of how to organize an outline, the use of broad
topics, with a few supporting details below. Albertas work is pictured in Appendix F.
Lesson 2
This time I was not able to allow a choice for Alberta but, based on my knowledge of
Albertas interests, I chose an article on robotics by Rob Margetta (2015) from the National
Science Foundation which I thought she would find interesting. My directions to Alberta were to
create an outline taking notes on the articles. Alberta took about twenty minutes to complete her
work. When I reviewed the work (Appendix G) I noticed again that Alberta was very detailed in
her outline and often used complete sentences to fill in bullet points. Alberta again chose minor
Based on her initial outline I was able to create a fill in the blank outline to accompany an
article from National Geographic. I used this blank outline to scaffold my lesson (Appendix H).
Alberta and I focused our discussion on how to summarize and pull out key ideas based on the
For a post-assessment I presented Alberta with another article from the National Science
Foundation (Bates, 2015) which I thought would interest Alberta. The directions for the post-
assessment were the same as the pre-assessment, to take notes on the article by using an outline.
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Again Alberta took about twenty minutes to complete the outline and created a very well
organized outline of the information. She was able to identify key ideas and summarize them in
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audience.
(CCSS.ELA-
LITERACY.WHS
T.9-10.4)
Student will create
an outline
developing and
strengthening
writing by
planning and
trying a new
approach, and
focusing on
addressing what is
most significant
for a specific
purpose and
audience.
(CCSS.ELA-
LITERACY.WHS
T.9-10.5)
Foci: Using Outlines Student will use An educational Encouraging
to Organize Key an outline to article related outlines when
Ideas from a Text gather relevant which should be reading to keep
information from a interesting to the track of key
Date: 06/11/2015
published article. student (Lee, ideas from the
(CCSS.ELA- 2015). text.
LITERACY.WHS Pre-made outline, Continuing
T.9-10.8) leaving blanks for conversations
Student will use student to pull out with student
an outline to draw key ideas or guiding the
evidence from supporting student to use
informational texts details. these outlines as
to support a study tool.
analysis, reflection
and research.
(CCSS.ELA-
LITERACY.WHS
T.9-10.9)
Common Core State Standards retrieved from English Language Arts Writing Grade
9-10
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noticed that Alberta did not use any pre-writing activities to plan her writing. I had also not heard
any of the other teachers assigning pre-writing when requiring students to complete writing
assignments. Alberta expressed concern the orderliness of writing her papers. Karen Bromley
(2011) expressed the importance of Graves model of the writing process. The first step in the
During the pre-assessment (Appendix A), Alberta showed basic abilities of using an
outline. Alberta and I discussed her work on the pre-assessment (Appendix B) together and
compared it to an example of an outline (Online Writing Lab). After discussing the areas she felt
she might want to improve upon (brevity and orderliness) we created an outline together
(Appendix D) focusing on those areas which she had identified. I was very mindful to give
positive, meaningful feedback to build her confidence. After completing the lesson Alberta
completed another outline on her own as a post-assessment (Appendix F). Together, Alberta and
I compared the final outline to the example (Online Writing Lab) and again discussed how she
felt about the outline. Alberta said she felt much more confident moving into the final outline
and also that she felt she would be well prepared to move on to writing a paper from her outline
if we were to continue with the writing process steps described by Bromley (2011).
During the second lesson I continued with the theme of outlines to show the diversity of
their use. Knowing Alberta wants to continue in her education following high school I showed
her how to use an outline for note-taking. I chose a variety of article which I thought would
appeal to Alberta based on interests I had noticed through our year at school (robotics) and based
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Alberta mentioned she had used outlines to take notes before and moved quickly into
reading the article from the National Science Foundation (Margetta, 2015) and completing the
pre-assessment (Appendix G). Following the pre-assessment, I gave Alberta the beginning of an
outline I had created based on an article for National Geographic (Lee, 2014). Together we
finished filling in the notes and through our discussion I notice Alberta spent a lot of time trying
to re-word what was written in the text to complete her notes, and writing out complete
sentences. We discussed the importance of taking thorough notes but also that notes should be
easier to read and more convenient than having to re-read the text. Throughout finishing the
National Geographic outline (Lee, 2014) (Appendix I) we focused on using well known
abbreviations or short hands (i.e. < for less than), and remembering that in this situation it is
appropriate to take items word for word from the text if necessary. Finally, I also expressed to
Alberta, The information which you should put in an outline is the key information. The
information that you think I would give you a quiz on. This helped Alberta to focus on main
Alberta then moved into the post-assessment based on another National Science
Foundation article (Bates, 2015). When she had completed we discussed and compared the final
outline (Appendix J) to the outline we had created together (Appendix I). Alberta said that she
understood the benefits of using a short hand but it was going to take practice but she said she
did feel a lot better picking out key ideas remembering my statement What would I give you a
quiz over?
If I were to do these lessons again I would not have done them together. I would have
picked one but chose a different topic for the second lesson. For example, have lesson one still
focus on creating an outline for pre-writing but then having lesson two continue with the steps of
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the writing process as described by Bromley (2011). Ideally with a significant amount of time we
would be able to work all the way through writing process from pre-writing to publishing.
Overall, Alberta and I felt the lessons went well. I was able to give her choice in the first
lesson by giving broad creative writing prompts. Alberta said these prompts were engaging and
challenging to her. In the second lesson, I was able to include articles which I knew would
interest her. Alberta said the articles were informative and interesting making her time with
I feel there would be some difficulties adapting these lessons to whole class lessons and
still get the same benefits from them. The creative writing prompts would still allow for a lot of
choice but choosing engaging and interesting articles for the second lesson would be difficult for
an entire class. If the teacher chose the articles there would be students who would find the
articles uninteresting. One solution to this would be to allow students to choose their own article
The lessons described throughout this analysis focused on the benefits of using outlines
for both pre-writing and note-taking abilities. Alberta shows strength in her creativity, attention
to detail, and ability to summarize and re-word concepts. Alberta needs help with not getting
bogged down in minute details when note-taking as well as pre-writing. Alberta has a tendency
to write the whole paper in her outline instead of summarizing main topics.
For follow-up activities I would suggest instructors assign pre-writing activities to help
with the planning process. I would also suggest additional lessons on the writing process. Since
Alberta wants to continue her education having a clear writing process will help her as she
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continues through high school and on into college. I would also encourage Alberta to practice
using outlines for note-taking as she reaches higher levels of education and is required to read
texts it will benefit her to have these note-taking and study strategies. Finally, I would
recommend offering meaningful and immediate feedback to Alberta. Her biggest struggle in our
lessons was a lack of confidence in her abilities and consistently asking Am I doing it right?
By giving frequent feedback, Alberta will gain confidence in her abilities as well as learn what
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Appendix A
Pre-Assessment 1 Creative Writing Prompt
Create an outline to use as a basis for the following prompt: Describe a first (first apartment,
first kiss, first time driving a car, first lie, first big success, first roller coaster ride, first time in
this setting). Include as many details as possible, being sure to include an aspect relating to each
of the 5 senses. (Reid, n.d.)
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Appendix B
Student Work for Pre-Assessment 1
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Appendix C
Objective(s) for todays lesson: Using Outlines to Organize Ideas to Write a Paper
Student will create an outline developing a topic with well-chosen, relevant, and
sufficient facts, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples
appropriate to the audiences knowledge of the topic. (CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.WHST.9-
10.2.B)
Student will create an outline in order to produce clear and coherent writing in which the
development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
(CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.WHST.9-10.4)
Student will create an outline developing and strengthening writing by planning and
trying a new approach, and focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific
purpose and audience. (CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.WHST.9-10.5)
Rationale (Explain why this content and/or skill is important and worthwhile, and how you will work to
make it relevant to your students lives):
Alberta is very academically inclined. She is motivated by grades and her goals for the future.
She wants to build her writing skills so she is prepared for the coming years of high school and
college. According to Maria Magher (n.d.) outlining is a key pre-writing activity. By outlining
one is able to clarify thoughts and develop ideas, identify weaknesses in arguments, organize
ideas to stay on target, and save time. These are all useful qualities which will enhance a
students confidence and organization of writing.
Materials & supplies needed:
Example of an Outline (Online Writing Lab)
Writing Prompts (Reid, n.d.)
Lined paper
Writing Utensils
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Procedures and approximate time allocated for each Academic, Social and
event Linguistic Support during
each event
Introduction to the lesson (What will I say to help children
understand the purpose of the lesson? How will I help them make connections to
prior lessons or experiences in and out of school? How will I motivate them to
become engaged in the lesson and understand its real world purpose?) (_
minutes)
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Appendix D
Outline Created by Student during the Scaffolded Lesson 1
Location Removed
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Appendix E
Post-Assessment 1 Creative Writing Prompt
Create an outline to use as a basis for the following prompt: Describe a presence in your house
(childhood home/current place of residence) a person, a pet, a piece of furniture, an illness, a
secret. Use all five senses. Be as detailed as possible. (Reid, n.d.)
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Appendix F
Student Work for Post-Assessment 1
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Appendix G
Student Work for Pre-Assessment 2
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Appendix H
Objective(s) for todays lesson: Using Outlines to Organize Ideas from a Text
Student will use an outline to gather relevant information from a published article.
(CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.WHST.9-10.8)
Student will use an outline to draw evidence from informational texts to support analysis,
reflection and research. (CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.WHST.9-10.9)
Rationale (Explain why this content and/or skill is important and worthwhile, and how you will work to
make it relevant to your students lives):
Since Alberta plans on going to college she will need well-developed note-taking and study
skills. According to Cal Poly Student Academic Services (n.d) one of the most beneficial forms
of note taking is the outline method. University of Nebraska Graduate Studies (n.d.) published an
article on the importance of teaching students to take notes. Taking notes is not something that
comes naturally to students, so as teachers, we need to give students the necessary skills to take
notes.
Materials & supplies needed:
Article Whats the Difference between a Snowstorm and a Blizzard? (Lee, 2014)
Pre-created outline with blanks for student to fill in key ideas
Writing utensils
Procedures and approximate time allocated for each Academic, Social and
event Linguistic Support during
each event
Introduction to the lesson (What will I say to help children
understand the purpose of the lesson? How will I help them make connections to
prior lessons or experiences in and out of school? How will I motivate them to
become engaged in the lesson and understand its real world purpose?) (_
minutes)
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Appendix I
Outline Created by Student during the Scaffolded Lesson 2
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Appendix J
Student Work for Post-Assessment 2
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Appendix K
Recommendation to Parents
Dear Parents,
First and foremost thank you for allowing me to work with Alberta. It was a pleasure and
During our time Alberta and I worked on the use of outlines to enhance and strengthen
both her writing process and her note-taking. Some activities you may be interested in continuing
at home are discussing the writing process. This will be meaningful for Alberta to hear how the
writing process has helped you both in your careers and throughout your education. You can also
encourage Alberta to practice using outlines as a pre-writing activity and give her positive and
Additionally, Alberta has instructed on techniques to use an outline for note-taking. Some
discussions you may be able to have at home are how to then use those notes to study. I know
Alberta is looking forward to continuing her education in high school and further into college
and being able to take accurate notes and study from them is a valuable tool.
Thank you,
Kelsey Drew
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