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Punctuation 18
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Ashley Hemminger
Gage Howell
Honors 10
Mr.Bradley
5-23-17
Hamlet Literary Analysis
1
If the text had been written in a different time or place or Unoriginal text: 25 words
language or for a different audience, how and why might it studentshare.net/english/82831-if-the

differ 1?
2
What would people think of Hamlet if it was written 2 in Passive voice
2017? Would vengeance even be a thing or would it still
be considered murder?Hamlet cant 3 just go and kill his
3
uncle even if its vengeance for his father. Also 4 his uncle [can't cannot]
4
should be punished for what 5 he did to his brother 6 but [Also,]
5
back in that time 7 he had the power to do so. If these [for what for what]
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things were to happen in 2017 8 he would not get away [brother,]
7
[time,]
with it. 8
[2017,]
In the 1300s vengeance was a common thing 9 and so it
9
was for Hamlet's family. Hamlets father had died before [thing,]
the book 10 but no one knew that it was really 11 Hamlet's
10
uncle who had killed him. The dead king Hamlet's father 12 [book,]
11
wants Hamlet to get revenge by killing his uncle. [really]
12
Revenge his foul and most unnatural murder (page 57). Repetitive word: father
Since it is Hamlets father who was murdered 14 13 and his
uncle took his mother from him 15 Hamlet really 16 wants to
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take revenge for more than just his father. Passive voice
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In 2017 vengeance is something that is not exactly Repetitive word: murdered
15
aloud like it was back then. If someone were to kill your 17 [him,]
16
father 18 now 19 they 20 would be in trouble because it's 21 [really]

against the law. The law stops you 22 from taking revenge
on that person because if you 23 were to take revenge 24
17
you 25 would be in trouble for the exact same 26 thing as Personal pronoun in formal writing
18
they were for killing you 27 father. If Hamlet were to be in Repetitive word: father
19
[now,]
2017 28 his uncle would be jailed for murdering his father 20
[they he or she]
because now we have technology 29 and can determine the 21
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cause of death. In this case 30 Hamlet wouldn't 31 have to 22

[it's it is]
Personal pronoun in formal writing
23
get revenge because the revenge is watching his uncle rot Personal pronoun in formal writing
24

in prison for what he did. [revenge,]

25
Personal pronoun in formal writing
If Hamlet were written 32 in 2017 people would think it 26
[exact same same]
isn't 33 right for Hamlet to have a crush on his mother and 27
Personal pronoun in formal writing
28
want to be with her. Also 34 they would think that what [2017,]
29

really 36 35 drove Hamlet to killing 37 his uncle was the love [the technology or a technology]
30
[case,]
for his mother. If the book was 39 written 38 in 2017 Hamlet 31
[wouldn't would not]
wouldn't 41 of 40 put on a play of how his father died to see 32
Passive voice
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if his uncle was guilty. In Act 3 Scene 1 Hamlet puts on a [isn't is not]
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play to see how his uncle reacts about killing Hamlet's [Also,]
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father and if he acts weird and doesn't watch he's 42 guilty Overused word: really
36
and if nothing happens he's 43 not 44 and the ghost was [really]
37
[killing kill]
really 45 just the devil trying to get him to do evil things. 38
Passive voice
Hamlet in 2017 would just ask questions and interrogate 39
[was were]
his uncle to see if he killed his father or not. 40
[wouldn't of wouldn't have]
41
In 2017 people could see where Hamlet is coming [wouldn't would not]

from when it comes to getting revenge on his uncle for his

42
father. The people who read it would probably want to do [he's he is]
43
the same but then think about the law and know they [he's he is]
44
[not,]
can't 46. Many people say they have 47 seen ghost and so 45
[really]
has Hamlet (page 57) when he talked to his father the king
before his uncle, many would think it was the devil and
Hamlet thought it was to 48. Hamlet was unsure about
getting the revenge thinking the ghost was just an evil
spirit and people from 2017 would probably be like
Hamlet and question themselves before getting their
46
revenge. Hamlet never wanted to believe that the ghost [can't cannot]
47
was the devil so to make sure he tested his uncle to see if [have had]
he was guilty and Hamlet found out that the ghost wasn't 49
the devil or an evil spirit.
48
Possibly confused to and too
If the book Hamlet were written 50 now 51 you 52 can 53
see some of the ways in how someone might interpret it
comparing to back then. The way Hamlet took his revenge
can be seen 54 as something a normal person would do in
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the 1300s but in 2017 people would not think this is right
of him and that he shouldn't 55 get away with it. Also 56 we
see ghost 57 now in 2017 58 and people think 59 that the
49

ghost tell 60 us things that we didn't 61 know or that we [wasn't was not]

didn't 62 know the actual story behind and the same thing
went on in Hamlet with his father the ghost. Another thing
50

is revenge to people now sounds like a good thing 63 but Passive voice
51
[now,]
the people know that they can't 64 just go and kill someone 52
Personal pronoun in formal writing
for vengeance because a ghost tells them to do it. Lastly 65 53
[can could]
54
if the people in 2017 we're 66 stuck in a situation like Passive voice

Hamlet was and didn't know if the ghost was telling the
truth or if it was just the devil that they would do
55

something to prove that the person who did 67 the killing [shouldn't should not]
56

was guilty not exactly like Hamlet did but similar by [Also,]
57
[a ghost or the ghost]
interrogating them. 58
[2017,]
59
Repetitive word: think
60
[tell tells]
61

[didn't did not]

62
[didn't did not]
63
[thing,]
64
[can't cannot]

65

[Lastly,]
66
[we're we are]


Works Cited List:
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1.Hamlet 68 by William Shakespeare. Possibly confused do and make

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Missing verb