Name: __________________________

Class: ___________ School: _______

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SECTION B
Section B(i): 3 marks
Section B(ii): 12 marks

Formatted writing Year Textbook page

Book report 6 7

Electronic cards / e-cards 6 17

Announcement 6 36

Formal letter 6 88

Speech / formal talk 6 98

Cinquain 6 118

Email 6 139

Postcard 5 6

Notice 5 56

Informal letter 5 66, 138

Message 5 88

Email 5 99

Poem 5 119

Email 4 26, 150

Notice 4 68, 99

Message 4 79

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SECTION B
My marks: /12
My grade: A / B / C / D / F
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Checklist
o 50-80 words
o Write neatly and follow the format
o Do not write too many words in introduction
o Read the question carefully, tenses might be in present or past tense
o Add two or three suitable adjectives and adverbs
o End with a greeting

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SECTION C
25 marks

There are 8 essential items in writing an essay!

1. Verb
2. Adjective
3. Adverb
4. Simple sentence
5. Compound sentence
6. Complex sentence
7. Moral value (conclusion)
8. Sentence connectors

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SECTION C
My marks: /25
My grade: A / B / C / D / F
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Checklist
o 80-100 words
o Write neatly, be creative and imaginative
o Simple + compound + complex sentences
o Use sentence connectors to start a paragraph/sentence
o Dont forget XO adjectives, adverbs, & one idiom
o End with a moral value

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Common mistakes in Section C

Identify the mistake(s) and rewrite the correct sentence

1. I and my uncle visited the orchard last week.

2. Mat Dan waited for see you.

3. The boys was playing at the field.

4. Ain did not bought the book yesterday.

5. Nora loved to ate chicken burger.

6. There was many people in the night market.

7. Fattah and her wife went to the restaurant.

8. Puteri and his sister loved to play Barbie.

9. Asyraf and Ali played football at there.

10. They came and see me yesterday.

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Identify the mistake and rewrite the correct answer

Last week, it is a beautiful bright day. Ali and her family sailed to
an island to had a picnic. When they were arrived, they quickly
loaded all their bag, food and beverages.
Ali help his mother carry all the things. After that, Ali and her family
had their mouth-watering lunch prepare by his beloved mother.
Then, Ali go swimming while his father was fished on an enormous
rock nearby him.
Suddenly, in a split second, a huge branch fell under Alis legs.
Luckily, he is not badly injured. His father quickly helped and take
him out of the river.
The moral value of this story is Ali promises to be more careful in
the future. (112 words)
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When you want to write an essay, remember all these!!

1. Verb : Kata Kerja Wanted:

Preferred:
Purchased:
Stunned:

2. Adjective: Kata Scrumptious:

Sifat Tiny:
Huge:
Panoramic:
Picturesque:

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3. Adverb: Kata Danced gracefully:

Penerang Sang sweetly:
Slept soundly:
Screamed loudly:
Walked quickly:

4. Simple Sentence: Subject + verb + object

Ayat mudah

1. The boys played at the park near their house.

5. Compound Two or more independent clauses

Sentence: Ayat for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
berganda
1. Fatah wanted to eat burger but his brother did not agree.

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6. Complex One independent clause + one dependent clause

Sentence: Ayat who, which, whose, whom
kompleks since, before, when, although,
if, unless, because, while

1. I knew the man who drove the car.

2. Ali was fishing on the huge rock while his father was resting under a shady
tree.

7. Moral value: Nilai End your essay with a moral value

murni

The moral value of this story is .

he promises to be more careful in the future
always help people in need
effort is the key to success
he promises to listen to his parents in the future

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8. Sentence Use sentence connectors to start a new paragraph

connectors: or a new sentence.
penyambung ayat
Then,
Next,
After that,
Besides that,
Afterwards,
Later,
Finally,
Lastly,
Suddenly, in a blink of an eye,
Suddenly, in split seconds,
Out of the blue,

Mr. Ahmad Syamil bin Abdul Rahim

ahmadsyamil1989@gmail.com
SK Ulu Melaka, Langkawi

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