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Body of Discussion
Structure: You can organize your commentary in two ways:
1. A linear approach you discuss the poem chronologically and divide this
into sections of about 2 to 6 lines (or stanzas if the poem uses them), so
that they are units of meaning concerning an issue. Try to have a
heading for each section so that you dont just read the lines and explain
and you introduce the points with this, rather than the quote.
*Make sure you quote from the poem and talk about the meaning, the
techniques and their effect. Then you go on to the next section.
*You can talk about structure as you develop your discussion at the point
it appears in the section you are discussing, or as a separate point where
it fits.
3. And finally, after questioning the possibility of the Freedom Train being
accessible to all Americans, Hughes then invokes his readers/audience to
persevere.. or..
*As you discuss each of these themes, make sure you quote, explain and
evaluate the words, images and techniques that are used to explore this.
*If you use this approach, remember to cover the whole passage. So make
sure that your chosen themes are all encompassing. It also helps to try to plan
the commentary so that your themes are in the order they are presented in
the poem, as it is easier to find your quotes and build on your argument.
Follow this outline for each main section of your body (basically SEE, but concise):
1. Statement concerning theme/issue- make a statement- dont just give a
label or word, eg. suggest what is indicated about the theme/issue. (so not just
inequality or hope, but what is conveyed about these concepts)
Conclusion
Draw it together- give an overview of the main ideas you have covered and
make sure you address the Guiding Questions that have been provided. Avoid
repeating your thesis in the same you introduced it move beyond this. You
can comment on what the reader may be left thinking and or feeling at the end
of the poem and how this EFFECT links to the writers PURPOSE, or how the
different target audiences may receive the poem.
Or how does it fit in with writers other works in terms of purpose and effect.
You can also comment on the universality and/or timelessness of themes.