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EDUCATORS PRACTICE GUIDE WHAT WORKS CLEARINGHOUSE

Teaching Elementary School


Students to Be Effective Writers

NCEE 2012-4058
U.S. DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION
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IES Practice Guide

Teaching Elementary School Students


to Be Effective Writers
June 2012
Panel
Steve Graham (Chair)
Arizona State University

Alisha Bollinger
Norris Elementary School, Norris School District, Nebraska

Carol Booth Olson


University of California, Irvine

Catherine DAoust
University of California, Irvine

Charles MacArthur
University of Delaware

Deborah McCutchen
University of Washington

Natalie Olinghouse
University of Connecticut

Staff
M. C. Bradley
Virginia Knechtel
Bryce Onaran
Cassandra Pickens Jewell
Mathematica Policy Research

Project Officer
Joy Lesnick
Institute of Education Sciences

NCEE 2012-4058
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Contents

Teaching Elementary School Students


to Be Effective Writers

Table of Contents
Review of Recommendations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1

Acknowledgements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2

Institute of Education Sciences Levels of Evidence for Practice Guides . . . . . . . . 3

Introduction to the Teaching Elementary School Students


to Be Effective Writers Practice Guide . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6

Recommendation 1. Provide daily time for students to write . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10

Recommendation 2. Teach students to use the writing process for a variety of purposes . . . . 12

Understanding the Writing Process. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14

Recommendation 2a. Teach students the writing process . . . . . . . . . . . . 15

Recommendation 2b. Teach students to write for a variety of purposes . . . . . . 20

Recommendation 3. Teach students to become fluent with handwriting, spelling,


sentence construction, typing, and word processing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 27

Recommendation 4. Create an engaged community of writers . . . . . . . . . . . . 34

Glossary. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40

Appendix A. Postscript from the Institute of Education Sciences. . . . . . . . . . . . 43

Appendix B. About the Authors . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 45

Appendix C. Disclosure of Potential Conflicts of Interest. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47

Appendix D. Rationale for Evidence Ratings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 48

Endnotes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 81

References. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 99

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Table of Contents (continued)

List of Tables
Table 1. Institute of Education Sciences levels of evidence for practice guides . . . . . . . . 4
Table 2. Recommendations and corresponding levels of evidence . . . . . . . . . . . . 9

Table 3. Examples of writing strategies. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16


Table 4. Purposes for writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
Table 5. Examples of techniques within the four purposes of writing . . . . . . . . . . . 26
Table 6. Spelling skills by grade level . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 29
Table 7. Activities for sentence-structure development. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 31
Table D.1. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 1 . . . . . . 51
Table D.2. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 1. . . . 52
Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2. . . . . . 54
Table D.4. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 2. . . . 64
Table D.5. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 3. . . . . . 73
Table D.6. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 3. . . . 74
Table D.7. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 4 . . . . . . 78
Table D.8. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 4. . . . 79

List of Figures
Figure 1. Gradual release of responsibility to students. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18
Figure 2. Handwriting-practice diagram . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 28

List of Examples
Example 1. Applying the writing process in an upper elementary classroom . . . . . . . . 20
Example 2. Story emulation of Rosies Walk with 1st-grade students . . . . . . . . . . . 23
Example 3. Using text as a model . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 24
Example 4. The Westward Movement prompt . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 36
Example 5. Star of the Day . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 37
Example 6. Authors Chair. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 38

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Review of Recommendations
Recommendation 1.
Provide daily time for students to write.

Recommendation 2.
Teach students to use the writing process for a variety of purposes.
Recommendation 2a.
Teach students the writing process.
1. Teach students strategies for the various components of the writing process.
2. Gradually release writing responsibility from the teacher to the student.
3. Guide students to select and use appropriate writing strategies.
4. Encourage students to be flexible in their use of the components of the writing process.

Recommendation 2b.
Teach students to write for a variety of purposes.
1. Help students understand the different purposes of writing.
2. Expand students concept of audience.
3. Teach students to emulate the features of good writing.
4. Teach students techniques for writing effectively for different purposes.

Recommendation 3.
Teach students to become fluent with handwriting, spelling, sentence construction, typing, and
word processing.
1. Teach very young writers how to hold a pencil correctly and form letters fluently and efficiently.
2. Teach students to spell words correctly.
3. Teach students to construct sentences for fluency, meaning, and style.
4. Teach students to type fluently and to use a word processor to compose.

Recommendation 4.
Create an engaged community of writers.
1. Teachers should participate as members of the community by writing and sharing their writing.
2. Give students writing choices.
3. Encourage students to collaborate as writers.
4. Provide students with opportunities to give and receive feedback throughout the writing process.
5. Publish students writing, and extend the community beyond the classroom.

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Acknowledgments

T he panel appreciates the efforts of Virginia Knechtel, M. C. Cay Bradley, Bryce Onaran, and
Cassie Pickens Jewell, staff from Mathematica Policy Research who participated in the panel
meetings, described the research findings, and drafted the guide. We also thank Scott Cody, Kristin
Hallgren, David Hill, Claudia Gentile, Brian Gill, and Shannon Monahan for helpful feedback and
reviews of drafts of the guide.

Steve Graham
Alisha Bollinger
Carol Booth Olson
Catherine DAoust
Charles MacArthur
Deborah McCutchen
Natalie Olinghouse

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Levels of Evidence for Practice Guides
Institute of Education Sciences Levels of Evidence for Practice Guides

T his section provides information about the role of evidence in Institute of Education Sciences
(IES) What Works Clearinghouse (WWC) practice guides. It describes how practice guide panels
determine the level of evidence for each recommendation and explains the criteria for each of the
three levels of evidence (strong evidence, moderate evidence, and minimal evidence).

The level of evidence assigned to each recom- A rating of moderate evidence refers either to
mendation in this practice guide represents the evidence from studies that allow strong causal
panels judgment of the quality of the existing conclusions but cannot be generalized with
research to support a claim that, when these assurance to the population on which a recom-
practices were implemented in past research, mendation is focused (perhaps because the
positive effects were observed on student findings have not been widely replicated) or to
outcomes. After careful review of the studies evidence from studies that are generalizable
supporting each recommendation, panelists but have some causal ambiguity. It also might
determine the level of evidence for each recom- be that the studies that exist do not specifi-
mendation using the criteria in Table 1. The cally examine the outcomes of interest in the
panel first considers the relevance of individ- practice guide, although they may be related.
ual studies to the recommendation and then
discusses the entire evidence base, taking the A rating of minimal evidence suggests that the
following into consideration: panel cannot point to a body of research that
demonstrates the practices positive effect on
the number of studies student achievement. In some cases, this simply
means that the recommended practices would
the design of the studies be difficult to study in a rigorous, experimental
fashion;2 in other cases, it means that research-
the quality of the studies
ers have not yet studied this practice, or that
whether the studies represent the range there is weak or conflicting evidence of effec-
of participants and settings on which the tiveness. A minimal evidence rating does not
recommendation is focused indicate that the recommendation is any less
important than other recommendations with
whether findings from the studies can be a strong evidence or moderate evidence rating.
attributed to the recommended practice

whether findings in the studies are consis- In developing the levels of evidence, the panel
tently positive considers each of the criteria in Table 1. The
level of evidence rating is determined as the
lowest rating achieved for any individual cri-
A rating of strong evidence refers to consistent
terion. Thus, for a recommendation to get a
evidence that the recommended strategies,
strong rating, the research must be rated as
programs, or practices improve student
strong on each criterion. If at least one criterion
outcomes for a wide population of students.1
receives a rating of moderate and none receive
In other words, there is strong causal and
a rating of minimal, then the level of evidence
generalizable evidence.
is determined to be moderate. If one or more
criteria receive a rating of minimal, then the
level of evidence is determined to be minimal.

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Levels of Evidence for Practice Guides (continued)

Table 1. Institute of Education Sciences levels of evidence for practice guides

STRONG MODERATE MINIMAL


Criteria Evidence Base Evidence Base Evidence Base

Validity High internal validity (high- High internal validity but The research may include
quality causal designs). moderate external validity evidence from studies that
Studies must meet WWC (i.e., studies that support do not meet the criteria
standards with or without strong causal conclusions but for moderate or strong
reservations.3 generalization is uncertain). evidence (e.g., case studies,
AND OR qualitative research).
High external validity High external validity but
(requires multiple studies moderate internal validity
with high-quality causal (i.e., studies that support the
designs that represent the generality of a relation but
population on which the the causality is uncertain).4
recommendation is focused).
Studies must meet WWC
standards with or without
reservations.

Effects on Consistent positive effects A preponderance of evidence There may be weak or


relevant without contradictory of positive effects. Contradic- contradictory evidence
outcomes evidence (i.e., no statisti- tory evidence (i.e., statisti- of effects.
cally significant negative cally significant negative
effects) in studies with high effects) must be discussed
internal validity. by the panel and considered
with regard to relevance to
the scope of the guide and
intensity of the recommenda-
tion as a component of the
intervention evaluated.

Relevance to Direct relevance to scope Relevance to scope (ecologi- The research may be
scope (i.e., ecological validity) cal validity) may vary, includ- out of the scope of the
relevant context (e.g., ing relevant context (e.g., practice guide.
classroom vs. laboratory), classroom vs. laboratory),
sample (e.g., age and char- sample (e.g., age and char-
acteristics), and outcomes acteristics), and outcomes
evaluated. evaluated. At least some
research is directly relevant
to scope (but the research
that is relevant to scope does
not qualify as strong with
respect to validity).

Relationship Direct test of the recom- Intensity of the recommen- Studies for which the
between mendation in the studies dation as a component of intensity of the recommen-
research and or the recommendation the interventions evaluated dation as a component of
recommendations is a major component of in the studies may vary. the interventions evaluated
the intervention tested in in the studies is low; and/or
the studies. the recommendation
reflects expert opinion
based on reasonable extrapo-
lations from research.

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Levels of Evidence for Practice Guides (continued)

Table 1. Institute of Education Sciences levels of evidence for practice guides (continued)

STRONG MODERATE MINIMAL


Criteria Evidence Base Evidence Base Evidence Base

Panel confidence Panel has a high degree of The panel determines that In the panels opinion, the
confidence that this practice the research does not rise recommendation must be
is effective. to the level of strong but addressed as part of the
is more compelling than a practice guide; however, the
minimal level of evidence. panel cannot point to a body
Panel may not be confident of research that rises to the
about whether the research level of moderate or strong.
has effectively controlled
for other explanations or
whether the practice would
be effective in most or all
contexts.

Role of expert Not applicable Not applicable Expert opinion based on


opinion defensible interpretations
of theory (theories). (In some
cases, this simply means
that the recommended
practices would be diffi-
cult to study in a rigorous,
experimental fashion; in
other cases, it means that
researchers have not yet
studied this practice.)

When assess- For assessments, meets the For assessments, evidence Not applicable
ment is the standards of The Standards of reliability that meets The
focus of the for Educational and Psycho- Standards for Educational
recommendation logical Testing.5 and Psychological Testing
but with evidence of valid-
ity from samples not ad-
equately representative of
the population on which the
recommendation is focused.

The panel relied on WWC evidence standards to assess the quality of evidence supporting educa-
tional programs and practices. The WWC evaluates evidence for the causal validity of instructional
programs and practices according to WWC standards. Information about these standards is available
at http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/documentsum.aspx?sid=19. Eligible studies that meet WWC evidence
standards for group designs or meet evidence standards with reservations are indicated by bold text
in the endnotes and references pages.

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Introduction
Introduction to the Teaching Elementary School Students
to Be Effective Writers Practice Guide

T his section provides an overview of the importance of teaching writing and explains key
parameters considered by the panel in developing the practice guide. It also summarizes the
recommendations for readers and concludes with a discussion of the research supporting the
practice guide.

Writing today is not a frill for the few, but an essential skill for the many.6

Writing is a fundamental part of engaging Scope of the practice guide


in professional, social, community, and civic
activities. Nearly 70 percent of salaried employ- Audience. This guide is intended for use by
ees have at least some responsibility for writing,7 teachers, literacy coaches, and other educa-
and the ability to write well is a critical compo- tors. The recommendations focus on activities
nent of being able to communicate effectively and strategies teachers can implement in their
to a variety of audiences. Because writing is classrooms to increase their students writing
a valuable tool for communication, learning, achievement. Principals, districts, and curricu-
and self-expression,8 people who do not have lum developers may also find the guide useful.
adequate writing skills may be at a disadvan-
tage and may face restricted opportunities for Grade level. The recommendations provide
education and employment. strategies for teaching writing to students in
elementary school. The panel acknowledges
Students should develop an early foundation that instructional practices in kindergarten
in writing in order to communicate their ideas and 1st grade, when students are just begin-
effectively and efficientlyyet many Ameri- ning to learn letters and to write, can and will
can students are not strong writers. In fact, differ from practices in later grades. Writing,
less than one-third of all students performed like reading, is defined from a developmental
at or above the proficient level in writing on standpoint, which begins with the acquisition
the 2007 National Assessment of Educational of foundational skills and then leads to the
Progress Writing Assessment.9 application of more sophisticated techniques.
For younger students, for example, writing
The authors believe that students who activities could include interpretive draw-
develop strong writing skills at an early age ing, invented spelling, or interactive writ-
acquire a valuable tool for learning, communi- ing. Although these activities are not often
cation, and self-expression. Such skills can be considered traditional writing experiences,
developed through effective writing instruc- they accomplish the same goals: helping
tion practices that provide adequate time for students communicate thoughts and ideas
students to write.10 This guide, developed by to others, encouraging them to engage with
a panel of experts, presents four recommen- the text to deepen their understanding of the
dations that educators can use to increase content, and drawing connections to prior
writing achievement for elementary students learning experiences. The panel recommends
and help them succeed in school and society. that teachers adapt the recommendations as
These recommendations are based on the appropriate for the range of grades addressed
best available research evidence, as well as in this guide, and examples of such adapta-
the combined experience and expertise of the tions are included in the guide.
panel members.

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Introduction (continued)

Populations who are at risk for writing writing instruction is critically important. For
difficulties. Learning to write can be par- this reason, examples of how to do so are
ticularly challenging for students with learn- included in technology tip call-out boxes in
ing disabilities; those who find it difficult to this guide.
regulate their behavior when they become
frustrated; or those who struggle with related Assessment. Good instruction in any subject
skills such as reading, spelling, or handwrit- area requires that teachers continually assess
ing. While the recommendations in this guide the needs and skills of their students and
are primarily intended for teachers to use modify their instruction to suit those needs.
with typically developing students, most The panel encourages teachers to use assess-
teachers serve at least a few students with ment to guide their instruction and to deter-
special needs in their classrooms; in some mine when students are ready to move on to
general education classrooms, these students more challenging instruction.
comprise the majority. Research evidence
reviewed for this guide indicates that the rec-
ommendations are appropriate for use with
Summary of the recommendations
students with special needs when accompa-
The recommendations in this guide cover
nied by appropriate modifications.
teaching the writing process, teaching funda-
mental writing skills, encouraging students
Common themes to develop essential writing knowledge, and
developing a supportive writing environment.
Underlying this guide are three common All of these practices are aimed at achieving a
themes about the concept of writing, the role single goal: enabling students to use writing
of technology, and the role of assessment. flexibly and effectively to help them learn and
communicate their ideas.
The writing process. Writing is a process
through which people communicate thoughts A central tenet of this guide is that students
and ideas. It is a highly complex, cognitive, learn by doing. Indeed, to become effective
self-directed activity, driven by the goals writ- writers, students need daily opportunities to
ers set for what they want to do and say and learn and practice writing skills, strategies,
the audience(s) for whom they are writing. and techniques (Recommendation 1). Writing
To meet these goals, writers must skillfully practice also can be integrated into instruc-
and flexibly coordinate their writing process tion in other content areas to provide stu-
from conception to the completion of a text. dents with additional time to write.
Components of the writing process include
planning; drafting; sharing; revising; editing; Students need to think carefully about their pur-
evaluating; and, for some writing pieces, pose for writing, planning what to say and how
publishing. (See Recommendation 2 for more to say it (Recommendation 2). While evidence
information.) supports Recommendation 2 as a whole, the
steps to carry out this recommendation can
Technology. Increasingly, the ability to use be grouped into two categories. First, to help
technology is vital for success in school and students think critically about writing, teachers
contemporary life. This requires that students should focus their writing instruction on teach-
learn to type and use a word processor, use ing students to carry out the writing process
the Internet to collect information, navigate effectively and flexibly (Recommendation 2a).
computer- and web-based testing tools, and This includes helping students learn how to
understand how different writing conventions engage in the writing process to meet their writ-
apply to different media. The panel believes ing goals, as well as teaching students multiple
that integrating the use of technology into strategies for carrying out the components of

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Introduction (continued)

the writing process. Second, because writing


also is a form of communication with many pur- Measures of overall writing quality assess
poses, teachers should help students develop the effectiveness of a piece of writing. These
an understanding of these purposes and learn measures may take into account assessments
to write well for a variety of real-life purposes of intermediary outcome categoriesinclud-
and audiences (Recommendation 2b). ing writing output, mechanics, vocabulary,
sentence structure, organization, ideation,
voice, and genre (or text) elementsin a
Writing places multiple simultaneous demands
single assessment of the quality of a piece
on the writer. Mastering the foundational skills
of writing.
of good writing, including handwriting, spell-
ing, sentence construction, and typing, allows
students to devote more of their attention to
composing written texts by utilizing the strate- One challenge for teachers and researchers
gies and techniques associated with the writing alike is identifying what constitutes good
process. For this reason, it is important to teach writing. Unlike instruction in basic mathemat-
students foundational skills (Recommendation 3). ics, where there typically is a correct answer
and an incorrect answer, what constitutes
When students are part of a community of writ- good writing in one context is not always
ers, they collaborate with other writers, make good writing in another. Assessing writing
decisions about what to write and how to write is a fundamentally subjective judgment and
about it, and receive constructive feedback depends at least in part on the framework the
from peers and teachers. Teachers should cre- reader brings to the task. Despite the subjec-
ate a supportive and motivating environment tive nature of writing assessment, there are
so that young writers feel safe engaging fully in some features that many can agree contrib-
the writing process (Recommendation 4). ute to effective writing (e.g., following basic
language conventions so a reader is able to
interpret the texts meaning or developing a
Defining and assessing clear focus for the reader). In order to address
good writing some of the inherent subjectivity of writing
measures, the panel included only outcomes
Writing instruction is ultimately geared toward for which the researchers demonstrated
teaching students to produce high-quality that multiple raters could evaluate the same
writing for a variety of purposes. To assess students work consistently. Exceptions were
whether the practices in this guide were given to norm-referenced standardized tests
effective, the panel considered their impact and a small number of measures that were
on overall writing quality. However, given that more objective (e.g., word count).
the students targeted by this guide are in the
early stages of their writing development, Use of research
and that the cost of administering and scor-
ing assessments of overall writing quality can The literature used to create and support
be prohibitive, the panel also considered the the recommendations ranges from rigorous
impact of practices on intermediary out- experimental studies to expert reviews of
comesincluding genre elements, ideation, practices and strategies in writing; however,
mechanics, sentence structure, organization, the evidence ratings are based solely on high-
output, vocabulary, and voice (see the glos- quality experimental and quasi-experimental
sary for descriptions and examples of each design studies that met What Works Clear-
outcome). When measures of overall writing inghouse (WWC) standards. These studies
quality and measures of intermediary out- include both national and international
comes were both available, the panel priori- studies of strategies for teaching writing to
tized evidence on overall writing quality. students in kindergarten through 6th grade.

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Introduction (continued)

Single-case design (SCD) studies that meet the A rating of minimal evidence does not indicate
WWC pilot standards for well-designed SCD that the practices described in a recommenda-
research are also described, but these cannot tion are ineffective or that the recommendation
raise the level of evidence above minimal. is any less important than the recommenda-
tions with ratings of strong or moderate
The research base for this guide was identified evidence. Instead, it may indicate that little
through a comprehensive search for studies research has been conducted on the practices
evaluating instructional practices for improving (or the combination of practices) described in
students writing skills and techniques. An initial the recommendation. Some of the evidence
search for literature related to writing instruc- used to supplement the evidence of the effec-
tion and strategies in the past 20 years, supple- tiveness of the recommendations on typically
mented with recommendations by the panel achieving students comes from interventions
(including important studies conducted in 1970 administered to students who have been identi-
or later), yielded more than 1,500 citations. fied for special education services or who score
Of these studies, 118 used experimental and below average on assessments of related skills.
group quasi-experimental designs to examine
whether components of writing instruction Although all of the recommendations in this
increased students writing achievement. From guide are primarily based on evidence from
this subset, 41 met the causal validity standards studies with rigorous designs, the panel mem-
of the WWC, and 34 were relevant to the panels bers supplemented their explanation of how
recommendations and were included as sup- to execute the recommendations based on
port or supplemental evidence for the recom- their expert judgment and experience apply-
mendations in this practice guide.11 ing the recommendations. Throughout the
guide, statements not cited with studies are
The strength of the evidence supporting each based on the panels judgment.
recommendation in this guide varies; one
recommendation was supported by strong Table 2 shows each recommendation and the
evidence, one by moderate evidence, and strength of the evidence that supports it as
the remaining two recommendations by determined by the panel. Following the rec-
minimal evidence. Despite the varying levels ommendations and suggestions for carrying
of evidence, the panel believes that all of the out the recommendations, Appendix D pres-
recommendations in this guide are important ents more information on the research evi-
for promoting students writing achievement. dence that supports each recommendation.

Table 2. Recommendations and corresponding levels of evidence

Levels of Evidence

Strong Moderate Minimal


Recommendation Evidence Evidence Evidence
1. Provide daily time for students to write.
2. Teach students to use the writing process for a variety
of purposes.

2a. Teach students the writing process.
2b. Teach students to write for a variety of purposes.

3. Teach students to become fluent with handwriting, spelling,



sentence construction, typing, and word processing.

4. Create an engaged community of writers.

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Recommendation 1

Provide daily time for students to write.


Providing adequate time for students to write is one essential element of an effective writing
instruction program.12 However, recent surveys of elementary teachers indicate that students
spend little time writing during the school day.13 Students need dedicated instructional time to
learn the skills and strategies necessary to become effective writers, as well as time to practice
what they learn. Time for writing practice can help students gain confidence in their writing
abilities. As teachers observe the way students write, they can identify difficulties and assist
students with learning and applying the writing process.

Summary of evidence: Minimal Evidence In addition to this study, the research sup-
porting the practices recommended in the
While the panel believes it is critical to allo- remainder of this guide implies that the
cate sufficient time to writing instruction and practices required considerable time to imple-
practice, research has not explicitly examined ment.15 Merely providing time for writing is
whether providing daily opportunities to insufficient, however; the time for writing
write leads to better writing outcomes than must include instruction aligned with the
providing less frequent writing opportunities. recommendations that follow.
One study did conclude that students who
were given extra instructional time in writing The panel next describes how to carry out
had improved writing quality relative to stu- this recommendation.
dents who did not receive extra instruction.14

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Recommendation 1 (continued)

How to carry out the recommendation

The panel recommends a minimum of one hour


a day devoted to writing for students, begin- For students in kindergarten, at least 30
ning in 1st grade. The hour should include minutes each day should be devoted to
at least 30 minutes dedicated to teaching a writing and developing writing skills.
variety of writing strategies, techniques, and
skills appropriate to students levels, as detailed
in Recommendations 2, 3, and 4 of this guide.
The remaining 30 minutes should be spent on imaginary diary entries of people from the
writing practice, where students apply the skills time period they are studying in social stud-
they learned from writing-skills instruction. ies. Additionally, students can write before,
during, and/or after reading, to articulate
Time for writing practice can occur in the what they already know, what they want to
context of other content-area instruction. know, and what they learned. When teachers
In science, for example, lab reports require integrate writing tasks with other content-area
detailed procedural writing and clear descrip- lessons, students may think more critically
tions of observations. Students also can write about the content-area material.16

Potential roadblocks and solutions much time as possible for writing instruction
and in-class composing. In fact, teachers can
Roadblock 1.1. There is not enough time in use writing to augment instruction in other
the school day to devote an hour each day to subject areas. For example, if students are
writing instruction. learning to interpret graphs in math, teach-
ers can present students with a graph from
Suggested Approach. Teachers should a recent newspaper and ask them to write a
integrate writing and content-area instruc- paragraph about what the graph is trying to
tion wherever possible in order to maximize convey. This exercise encourages students to
instructional time and give students more think carefully about how effectively the graph
writing practice. The panel recognizes that conveys information, and at the same time,
educators face limited time and a number of it gives students an opportunity to apply and
conflicting priorities in each school day; how- practice writing strategies and skills.
ever, it is important for teachers to provide as

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Recommendation 2

Teach students to use


the writing process for
a variety of purposes.
Writing well involves more than simply
documenting ideas as they come to mind.
It is a process that requires that the writer
think carefully about the purpose for writing,
plan what to say, plan how to say it, and
understand what the reader needs to know.
Teachers can help students become effective
writers by teaching a variety of strategies for
carrying out each component of the writing
process17 and by supporting students in
applying the strategies until they are able to
do so independently.18 Over time, students will
develop a repertoire of strategies for writing.
Teachers should explain and model the fluid
nature in which the components of the writing
process work together, so that students can
learn to apply strategies flexiblyseparately
or in combinationwhen they write.19
Students also should learn that writing is used Genres are forms of writing with specific fea-
for a variety of purposes, such as conveying tures that provide context and structure for a
information, making an argument, providing a purpose. For example, a student might want
means for self-reflection, sharing an experience, to describe a warm summer day. To achieve
enhancing understanding of reading, or this purpose, the student might choose to
providing entertainment. Learning how to write write a poem or a journal entry. Both genres
(poem and journal entry) enable the student
well for different purposes is important not
to communicate the purpose, but they do
only for success in school, but also for active
so in different ways. Writers use genres to
participation in professional and social life.
achieve a wide variety of writing purposes.
Teachers should begin by teaching students the
different purposes for writing20 and how specific
genres, or forms of writing defined by specific features, can help students achieve their
writing goals. When students understand the connection between different genres and writing
purposes, they may be more likely to use different genres and think more critically about how
to structure their writing. Students also must learn to adjust their writing to be most effective
for their intended readers.21 Examples of good writing and techniques for writing in specific
genres can help students write more effectively for different purposes and audiences.22
Because writing is a complex process, the steps needed to carry out this recommendation
are numerous. For that reason, the individual how-to steps are separated into two sections.
Recommendation 2a discusses teaching students how to apply the writing process;
Recommendation 2b addresses teaching students to write for a variety of purposes. Because
research has examined all of these steps combined, we summarize and rate the evidence
supporting all of Recommendation 2 below.
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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Summary of evidence: Strong Evidence the effectiveness of goal setting among


typically achieving students in a whole-
The panel determined that there was strong class setting. The effects of goal setting
evidence supporting this recommendation. on overall writing quality were positive
Twenty-five studies that met WWC evidence when administered to typically achieving
standards tested the practices in this recom- students in small groups, although the
mendation on diverse populations of students effects on the quality of the sentences that
across a wide variety of settings and found students wrote were less clear.28
positive effects on a variety of outcomes,
including overall writing quality.23 Moderately or closely aligned to the
recommendation. These studies did not
The outcomes for typically achieving students on fall in either of the previous categories but
measures administered in a whole-class setting examined interventions that contained
are the focus of this summary, but more details at least 30 percent of the components
on the impacts on other groups and settings of Recommendation 2.29 The practices in
can be found in Appendix D. The studies can be these studies produced positive effects on
placed into four categories, based on the prac- the overall quality of students writing, as
tices they examine. The first two categories of well as the number of genre elements that
studies evaluated specific interventions that were students included in their stories.30
addressed by a large number of studies. The
Partially aligned to the recommenda-
remaining studies examined a range of interven-
tion. The final category of studies exam-
tions with varied components and are therefore
ined interventions that contained fewer
grouped by the degree of alignment between the
than 30 percent of the components of
studied practices and the recommendation:
Recommendation 2.31 The study of a typi-
cally achieving population found positive
Self-regulated strategy development
impacts on students overall writing quality
(SRSD).24 The first set of studies examined
and the number of elements they included
SRSD, an approach to writing instruction,
in their stories.32
which typically contains more than 70
percent of the specific practices detailed
A majority of studies examined SRSD and
in this recommendation In the SRSD
goal-setting interventions. The studies also
approach, students are taught different
showed that the practices in this recommen-
strategies and techniques using a gradual
dation are effective when tested on students
release of responsibility to help them navi-
with characteristics that make them at risk for
gate the writing process and to regulate
writing difficulties or students who have been
their writing behavior.25 Studies of SRSD
labeled as gifted. Interventions delivered to
showed uniformly positive effects on writ-
students in a whole-class setting sometimes
ing outcomes, including the overall quality
led to smaller gains in students' writing; how-
of students writing.26
ever, the practices proved to be effective
Goal setting. These studies examined an regardless of the mode of delivery.
approach whereby students receive a vari-
ety of concrete goals to help them improve The panel describes the four components of
the quality of their writing.27 Typically, Recommendation 2a and the four components
goal-setting interventions contained fewer of Recommendation 2b after explaining the
than 30 percent of the components of writing process on the next page.
Recommendation 2. No studies examined

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Understanding the Writing Process Technology Tip


The writing process is the means through Word processing can make it easier for
which a writer composes text. Writing is not a many students to carry out the writing
linear process, like following a recipe to bake process. For instance, text can be added,
a cake. It is flexible; writers should learn to moved, deleted, or rewritten easily, encour-
move easily back and forth between compo- aging students to move flexibly between
nents of the writing process, often altering components of the writing process. Some
their plans and revising their text along the software programs help students organize
way. Components of the writing process their ideas for writing, provide feedback
include planning, drafting, sharing, evalu- on what they write, and allow students to
ating, revising, and editing. An additional publish their writing in a variety of forms
component, publishing, may be included to and formats.
develop and share a final product.

Planning often involves developing goals (see Recommendation 4 for more information
and generating ideas; gathering information about providing students with opportunities
from reading, prior knowledge, and discus- to give and receive feedback throughout the
sions with others; and organizing ideas for writing process).
writing based on the purpose of the text
(see Recommendation 2b for more informa- Revising and editing require that writers make
tion about writing for a variety of purposes). changes to their text based on evaluations
Students should write down these goals and of their writing. Revising involves making
ideas so that they can refer to and modify content changes after students first have
them throughout the writing process. evaluated problems within their text that
obscure their intended meaning. Students
Drafting focuses on creating a preliminary should make changes to clarify or enhance
version of a text. When drafting, students their meaning. These changes may include
must select the words and construct the reorganizing their ideas, adding or remov-
sentences that most accurately convey their ing whole sections of text, and refining their
ideas, and then transcribe those words and word choice and sentence structure.
sentences into written language. Skills such
as spelling, handwriting, and capitalization Editing involves making changes to ensure
and punctuation also are important when that a text correctly adheres to the conven-
drafting, but these skills should not be the tions of written English. Students should be
focus of students effort at this stage (see particularly concerned with reviewing their
Recommendation 3 for more information spelling and grammar and making any neces-
about these skills). sary corrections. Editing changes make a text
readable for external audiences and can make
Sharing ideas or drafts with teachers, other the writers intended meaning clearer.
adults, and peers throughout the writing pro-
cess enables students to obtain feedback and Publishing typically occurs at the end of
suggestions for improving their writing. the writing process, as students produce a
final product that is shared publicly in written
Evaluating can be carried out by individual form, oral form, or both. Not all student
writers as they reread all or part of their writing needs to be published, but students
text and carefully consider whether they are should be given opportunities to publish their
meeting their original writing goals. Evalua- writing and celebrate their accomplishments
tion also can be conducted by teachers and (see Recommendation 4 for more information
peers who provide the writer with feedback about publishing students writing).

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Recommendation 2a. Teach students the writing process.

How to carry out the recommendation

1. Teach students strategies for the various components of the writing process.
Students need to acquire specific strategies for
each component of the writing process.33 Table A strategy is a series of actions (mental,
3 shows 10 examples of writing strategies physical, or both) that writers undertake to
and the grades for which they are appropri- achieve their goals. Strategies are tools that
ate. Students should learn basic strategies, can help students generate content and carry
such as POW (Pick ideas, Organize their notes, out components of the writing process.
Write and say more), in 1st or 2nd grade. More
complicated strategies, such as peer revising,
should be introduced in 2nd grade or later. then devise a plan for periodically assessing
Many strategies can be used to assist students their progress toward meeting these goals as
with more than one component of the writ- they write. As students evaluate their draft
ing process. For example, as students plan to text, they may reread their paper to determine
write a persuasive essay, they may set goals whether they have met the goals they articu-
for their writing, such as providing three or lated during planning. If not, students may
more reasons for their beliefs. Students should revise their writing to better meet their goals.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Table 3. Examples of writing strategies34

Component of the Writing Grade


Writing Process Strategy How Students Can Use the Strategy Range

Planning POW Pick ideas (i.e., decide what to write about). 16


Organize their notes (i.e., brainstorm and organize possible
writing ideas into a writing plan).
Write and say more (i.e., continue to modify the plan while writing).
Ordering Brainstorm/generate ideas for their paper. 12
ideas/outlining Review their ideas and place a number by what will go first,
second, third, and so on.
Brainstorm/generate ideas for their paper. 36
Decide which are main ideas and which are supporting ideas.
Create an outline that shows the order of the main ideas and
the supporting details for each main idea.
Drafting Imitation Select a sentence, paragraph, or text excerpt and imitate the 16
authors form (see Recommendation 2b, examples 2 and 3).
Sentence Try out sentences orally before writing them on paper. 36
generation Try multiple sentences and choose the best one.
Use transition words to develop different sentence structures.
Practice writing good topic sentences.
Sharing Peer sharing35 In pairs, listen and read along as the author reads aloud. 26
Share feedback with their writing partner, starting with what
they liked.
Authors Sit in a special chair in front of peers and read their writing K6
Chair (see Recommendation 4, example 6, for more detail).
Evaluating Self-evaluating Reread and ask these questions: 26
Are the ideas clear?
Is there a clear beginning, middle, and end?
Does the writing connect with the reader?
Are sentence types varied?
Self-monitoring Self-assess and ask these questions, either out loud or 36
internally:
Did I meet the goals I developed for my writing? If not, what
changes should I make to meet my goals?
Did I correctly use strategies that were appropriate for this
task? If not, what should I change?
Record their answers to self-assessment questions on a chart or
teacher-provided questionnaire in order to track their progress
toward writing goals and strategy use.
Congratulate themselves, and inform their teacher, when they
meet their goals.
Revising Peer revising36 Place a question mark (?) by anything they do not understand 26
and editing in their writing partners paper.
Place a carat (^) anywhere it would be useful to have the author
include more information.
COPS (editing) Ask the COPS editing questions: 26
Did I Capitalize the first word in sentences and proper names?
How is the Overall appearance of my paper?
Did I use commas and end-of-sentence Punctuation?
Did I Spell each word correctly?

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

2. Gradually release writing responsibility from the teacher to the student.


Writing strategies should be taught explic- Figure 1 illustrates the gradual release of
itly and directly through a gradual release responsibility from teacher to student. In this
of responsibility from teacher to student.37 scenario, the teacher uses brainstorming, a
Teachers should ensure that students have planning strategy. Brainstorming can be used
the background knowledge and skills they with any grade level; students may brainstorm
need to understand and use a writing strat- by writing words or drawing pictures to repre-
egy. Then, teachers should describe the sent their ideas.
strategy and model its use. Teachers also
should articulate the purpose of the strategy, To adapt writing strategy instruction to individ-
clearly stating why students might choose ual students, teachers should assess students
to use it as a way of improving their writing. as they acquire new strategies, determining
Teachers then should guide students to col- where instruction needs to be reinforced.
laborate in small groups to practice applying Teachers may need to model an entire strategy
the strategy. or parts of a strategy again before students
can work independently. Some students may
Once students demonstrate an understanding need more time, practice, and assistance to
of the strategy, the teacher should encourage master a strategy. While the amount of guided
students to practice applying it as they write practice that individual students need will vary,
independently. Teachers should make sure practice is necessary for all students. In other
they do not release responsibility to students words, it is not enough to simply describe the
too early. In some cases, this may mean strategy and show how to use it.
having students spend more time in activities
that are teacher directed until they develop For students who acquire a strategy easily and
the knowledge and skills to become more more quickly than their peers, teachers should
independent. Conversely, if some students consider increasing the complexity of the
are particularly strong in understanding and strategy. For example, teachers can increase
applying a new strategy, teachers can cre- the complexity of the brainstorming activity by
ate collaborative peer groups in which more additionally requiring students to research their
adept students help peers better understand, topic online. Students also can explore using
use, and apply new strategies. the strategy in new ways and with new tasks.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Figure 1. Gradual release of responsibility to students38

Sharing Responsibility for the Task Gradual Release of the Brainstorming Strategy
The teacher provides background knowledge, including why
Teach students should use the strategy and how it will help them:
background What you write will be more interesting for others to read
knowledge if you have a lot of good ideas, so you should take the time
to write down all your ideas before you get started. One way -
to do this is to use a strategy called brainstorming. In brain-
storming, you write down as many ideas as you can think
of without worrying about whether they are good or bad.
The teacher describes the strategy: Brainstorming helps
Describe the you think about what you already know. You write down
strategy as many ideas as you can think of. You do not think about
whether they are good or bad ideas while you do this. When
you write down a lot of ideas, you may find some ideas that
you didnt think about before. This is a good strategy to use
when you dont have many ideas or when you arent sure
what you want to include in your writing.
The teacher models how to use the strategy, soliciting ideas
Model the from students: I am going to show you how to brainstorm
strategy before writing a story on your topic. First, I will write down
any idea that I think of about this topic. If I get stuck, I will
keep thinking. I will not ask myself if an idea is a good one
until I am done brainstorming. I will just write down any
idea that pops into my head. The teacher thinks aloud while
modeling brainstorming, then asks: Does anyone else have
any ideas to add to my list?
Students collaborate in small groups to practice applying the
Collaborative strategy. The teacher explains: I want each of you to pair up
use with another student. Before you start to write your story,
the two of you should brainstorm as many ideas as you
can for your paper on this topic. Remember not to worry
about whether the ideas are good or bad. Right now, I just
want you to focus on writing down as many ideas as you
can. While students practice using the strategy, the teacher
checks to see that students are using the strategy properly
and returns to earlier steps as needed.
Students practice the strategy, with assistance from the
Guided teacher as needed. The teacher says: Remember to brain-
practice storm as many ideas as you can before you actually start
writing your own paper. While students generate their lists,
the teacher walks around and assists students in applying
the strategy.
Students apply the strategy independently. The teacher re-
Independent minds them: Before you start to write, you should stop and
use ask if it will be helpful for you to use brainstorming to think -
about ideas for writing. Remember that brainstorming works
well when you dont have many ideas or you arent sure what
you want to include in your writing. If, in future lessons or
on future topics, the teacher notices that students are having
a hard time planning, he or she can remind students to use
student responsibility teacher responsibility the brainstorming strategy.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

3. Guide students to select and use appropriate writing strategies.


When students initially learn to use writing Beyond knowing when and how to use a
strategies, teachers frequently should discuss strategy, students must actually use it as
when and how to use the strategies through- they write. This can be facilitated by having
out the writing process, as well as why the students set a goal to use the strategy in one
strategies are helpful.39 Once students learn or more identified situations, followed by a
to use a variety of strategies independently, discussion (and/or instruction) on how the
through the gradual release process, teachers strategy needs to be modified.40 For example,
should help them understand how to select planning strategies may vary based on the
appropriate strategies and use them across a purpose of students writing. Ordering ideas
range of writing tasks. and outlining strategies lend themselves to
report writing; brainstorming strategies can
To help students select the appropriate writ- be useful for narrating; and setting goals,
ing strategy, teachers might consider posting particularly audience goals, can help students
strategies on a wall chart in the classroom. improve their persuasive writing (see Recom-
One column of the chart might include a list of mendation 2b for information about teaching
all the strategies, and another column might students to write for a variety of purposes).
provide a list of situations in which these strat- Students should evaluate their success in
egies could be used. Once students are able to applying the strategy to the new situation
use a strategy effectively and independently, and should consider how they can make the
they can identify and add situations to the strategy work even better.41
chart. Students also can identify opportunities
to apply strategies in different content areas.

4. Encourage students to be flexible in their use of the components of the writing process.
Writing requires flexibility and change. Once writing must be polished to make it suitable
students have acquired a set of strategies to for publication.
carry out the components of the writing pro-
cess, they need to be purposeful in selecting Teachers should engage students in writing
strategies that help them meet their writing activities in which the writing process does
goals. They also need to learn to apply these not move in a lockstep fashion from planning
strategies in a flexible manner,42 moving back to drafting to revising to editing to publishing.
and forth between different components of Rather, teachers should design activities in
the writing process as they develop text and which students are encouraged to move back
think critically about their writing goals. For and forth between the components of the
example, plans and already written text may writing process as their text takes shape (see
need to be revised and edited numerous Example 1).
times to communicate more effectively, and

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Example 1. Applying the writing process in an upper elementary classroom

Operation Robot

Students in grades 4 through 6 wrote about robots as part of a class project.43

Process of Writing

The class discussed robots and what robots could do if they had certain specialty parts,
such as telescopes on their heads to see great distances. Prompts such as toy robots and
pictures of robots were used to spark discussion (planning).
Students created robot diagrams with vivid pictures and written descriptions of their
robots (drafting). Students then wrote stories about their robots, explaining how they
became friends and what they do together (drafting). They used their diagrams to help
them describe their robots in the stories.
Each student shared his or her story with another student (sharing), who provided posi-
tive and constructive feedback (evaluating). The students then revised their stories using
the feedback, along with their own evaluation of their texts (revising and evaluating).
Students read their stories aloud in class (sharing). The class commented on what they
liked and asked questions about anything that was unclear (evaluating). Students again
revised their stories and were invited to publish them in a class book about robots.

Recommendation 2b. Teach students to write for a variety of purposes.

How to carry out the recommendation

1. Help students understand the different purposes of writing.


Students should understand the purpose of a real-world scenario of students writing a
each genre so that they can select the genre persuasive letter to convince their parents
best suited to their writing task.44 In teaching that a friend should be allowed to spend the
a particular genre, teachers should emphasize night, or a letter to the principal asking for
the purpose of that genre and how its features permission to go on a special field trip. Table
are related to the purpose. Teachers also 4 provides examples of specific genres within
should relate genres to real-world scenarios. four purposes: describe, narrate, inform, and
For example, the purpose of a persuasive persuade/analyze. Although the table links
letter is to convince the reader to agree with genres to specific purposes, teachers should
the writer. To achieve this purpose, writers note that many genres can be used for various
should think of compelling reasons for readers purposes. For example, a letter can be written
who might not agree, then state those reasons to persuade someone to do something, to nar-
clearly and support them with appropriate rate an event to a friend, or to inform a family
evidence. In class, teachers might provide member about an upcoming event.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Table 4. Purposes for writing

Purpose Explanation45 Examples of Genres

Describe to describe something, such as a person, descriptions (e.g., people, places, or events)
place, process, or experience, in vivid detail character sketches
nature writing
brochures (personal, travel, and so on)
Narrate to tell a story of an experience, event, diary entries (real or fictional)
or sequence of events while holding the folktales, fairy tales, fables
readers interest short stories
poems
eyewitness accounts
Inform to examine previously learned information summaries of new or previously learned
or provide new information information
instructions or directions
letters
newspaper articles
science reports
Persuade/analyze to give an opinion in an attempt to convince persuasive essays
the reader that this point of view is valid or to editorials
persuade the reader to take a specific action compare-and-contrast essays
(writing to express an opinion or make an reviews (e.g., of books and movies)
argument has a similar purpose); to analyze literary analysis
ideas in text, for example, by considering their
veracity or comparing them to one another

2. Expand students concept of audience


Writing for different purposes often means
writing for different audiences.46 To help Technology Tip
students understand the role of audience Find examples of exemplary texts online
in writing, it is important to design writing from the American Library Associations
activities that naturally lend themselves to list of Newbery Medal award winners, the
different audiences. Otherwise, students may Database of Award-Winning Childrens Liter-
view writing in school as writing only for their ature (http://dawcl.com/introduction.html),
teacher. When discussing writing purposes, or state department of education websites
teachers and students can generate a list of (e.g., http://www.cde.ca.gov/ci/rl/ll).
potential audiences for a given writing assign-
ment. Students then can choose the audience
that best fits their writing topic. For example, and suit their audience. To develop this skill,
when writing persuasive letters, students students might write about the same topic for
could write for parents, friends, companies, different audiences. For example, students
or newspapers, depending on their chosen could write a description of their favorite video
topic. When working on narratives, students game for a friend who also plays the game.
could write a fable to read to preschool stu- Then, they could write a description for an
dents. It is important that students writing is adult, such as the school principal, who is
shared with their intended audience. unfamiliar with the game. Allowing students to
write for a range of audiences enables them to
Students should learn to adjust their tone and think of writing as an authentic means of com-
word choice to better convey their meaning munication to accomplish a variety of goals.
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Recommendation 2 (continued)

3. Teach students to emulate the features of good writing.

Students should be exposed to exemplary Students of all ages can participate in emulat-
texts from a variety of sources, including ing text activities. The closeness with which
published or professional texts, books and students will emulate the text, as well as
textbooks, the teachers own writing, and peer the complexity and length of the text itself,
samples.47 Teachers should select texts that will depend on the instructional goals of the
lesson and on students abilities. At the word
support the instructional goals of the lesson level, for example, after reading Rosies Walk
are appropriate for the students reading (Example 2), teachers could introduce a variety
levels and abilities of synonyms for the word walk and physically
demonstrate the examples in front of the
provide exemplary models of what students class. Students could then arrange the words
will write in order from slow to fast (e.g., trudge, amble,
stroll, walk, stride, scurry, and run). Students
Exemplary texts can illustrate a number of fea- also could emulate sentences from the text,
tures, including text structure; use of graphs, replacing synonyms in the sentences.
charts, and pictures; effective word choice;
and varied sentence structure. For example, Struggling writers or students in lower grades
if the instructional goal is to teach 4th-grade may specifically focus on emulating sentence
students to describe a setting using concrete, patterns or identifying and substituting words
sensory details, the teacher could read a chap- in appropriate places. Students should read
ter from E. B. Whites Charlottes Web in which a story, or have a story read to them, and
the author uses sensory details, such as sights, then complete a story frame to create a story
sounds, smells, and movements, to bring a emulation (see Example 2).
barn to life. Students then can apply what they
learn to compose a rich, sensory description of In middle and upper elementary grades, stu-
their own setting. dents may use concepts in exemplary texts
as a springboard for developing their own
Teachers should either read exemplary texts writing. In Example 3, 6th-grade students
out loud or direct students to read and reread read the poem Where Im From, by George
selected exemplary texts, paying close atten- Ella Lyon. Using the structure of the text, they
tion to the authors word choice, overall applied knowledge from a recent science les-
structure, or other style elements, based on son to create a poem about earthquakes.
the instructional goals of the lesson. Teachers
should explain and students should discuss Text emulating exercises can vary in length
how each text demonstrates characteristics based on available instructional time, be
of effective writing in that particular genre. assigned as homework, and/or be incorpo-
Students will then be prepared to emulate rated into activities across the curriculum.
characteristics of exemplary texts at the word, Once students are comfortable analyzing and
sentence, and/or text level (see Example 2), emulating writing styles, they may be better
or they can use the text as a springboard for able to enhance their own writing style, think-
writing (see Example 3). ing critically about the meaning they wish to
convey and the words they choose to convey
that meaning.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Example 2. Story emulation of Rosies Walk with 1st-grade students

Rosie the hen went for a walk


across the yard
around the pond
Original text of Rosies Walk, over the haystack
by Pat Hutchins48 past the mill
through the fence
under the beehives
and got back in time for dinner.

____________________________ went for a __________


across the_______________________________________
around the______________________________________
Frame of Rosies Walk, provided over the_________________________________________
as a worksheet by the teacher past the_________________________________________
through the_____________________________________
under the________________________________________
and got back in time for________________________ .

Ms. Foster the teacher went for a stroll


across the playground
around the jungle gym
Text developed by a over the jump rope
1st-grade student past the swings
through the bicycle racks
under the basketball hoop
and got back in time for the morning message.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Example 3. Using text as a model

Original text of Where Im From, Text developed by a


by George Ella Lyon49 6th-grade classroom50

I am from clothespins, I am from elastic strain, from


from Clorox and carbon-tetrachloride. the focus and the epicenter.
I am from the dirt under the back porch.
(Black, glistening, I am from the destructive surface
it tasted like beets.) waves that run through the
I am from the forsythia bush 40200 kilometer fault zones.
the Dutch elm
whose long-gone limbs I remember I am from the Ring of Fire, the
as if they were my own. tectonic and lithospheric plates.

Im from fudge and eyeglasses, I can cause tsunamis and fires.


from Imogene and Alafair.
Im from the know-it-alls I am from convergent, divergent,
and the pass-it-ons, and transform plate boundaries.
from Perk up! and Pipe down!
Im from He restoreth my soul I am from seismographs that
with a cottonball lamb determine my strength.
and ten verses I can say myself.
I am from speedy but weak
Im from Artemus and Billies Branch, p-waves, from slow and hardy
fried corn and strong coffee. s-waves, but I do not reach.
From the finger my grandfather lost
Seismic waves are caused by me.
to the auger,
the eye my father shut to keep his sight.
Who am I? An earthquake.
Under my bed was a dress box
spilling old pictures,
a sift of lost faces
to drift beneath my dreams.
I am from those moments
snapped before I budded
leaf-fall from the family tree.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

4. Teach students techniques for writing effectively for different purposes.


Students also must learn to use techniques responsibility from teacher to student until
that are specific to a purpose of writing.51 students are able to apply the techniques
Table 5 shows five examples of techniques independently (see Recommendation 2a,
specific to the four purposes for writing, Figure 1). Teachers should describe the tech-
accompanied by the grade levels for which the nique, articulate how it relates to specific
technique is appropriate. These techniques writing purposes, and model its use. Students
help students frame their writing for a specific should learn to select techniques that help
purpose. When developing a persuasive essay, them achieve their writing purpose and reach
for example, students can use the TREE (Topic their target audience. Teachers should encour-
sentence, Reasonsthree or more, Ending, age students to practice applying the tech-
Examine) technique, whereby they make a plan niques as they flexibly use the components of
for their paper that includes what they believe, the writing process. (See Recommendation 2a
reasons to support their beliefs, examples for for more information on gradually releasing
each reason, and an ending.52 writing responsibility from the teacher to the
student, teaching students to select and use
Techniques should be taught explicitly techniques, and teaching students to use the
and directly through a gradual release of components of the writing process flexibly.)

Potential roadblocks and solutions also can ask students to monitor and report
what strategies and techniques they used to
Roadblock 2.1. Students use strategies and develop and complete their text.
techniques when they are first taught them,
but over time, they stop using the strategies Roadblock 2.2. State assessments ask stu-
and techniques. dents to write in only one or two genres, so
time spent on other genres may not help them
Suggested Approach. When students meet the assessment requirements.
transition to using strategies and techniques
independently, teachers should continue to Suggested Approach. Regardless of current
monitor student use of the strategies and assessment practices in a particular state,
techniques and assess whether students are it is important for students to learn to write
appropriately applying them to components for varied purposes. Writing for multiple pur-
of the writing process and/or specific writ- poses encourages preparation for high-stakes
ing purposes. After teaching a strategy for assessments, even if those assessments
planning, for example, teachers should check define the purposes of writing more narrowly.
to see if students are using the strategy In fact, writing in one genre often calls on
and if their planning skills are improving. If expertise from other types of writing. Writing
students are no longer using the strategy, a persuasive essay, for example, can involve
but their planning skills have improved, it providing a narrative example, drawing a
may mean they no longer need the strategy. comparison, or explaining a scientific concept
Alternatively, if students continue to struggle in order to support a point. As teachers intro-
with planning components of the writing duce new genres of writing, they can point
process, the teacher may need to reteach the out writing strategies or elements of writing
strategy to the whole class or provide more that also transfer to other kinds of writing,
opportunities for collaborative practice for a including the types of writing required for the
small group of struggling students. Teachers state writing assessment.

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Recommendation 2 (continued)

Table 5. Examples of techniques within the four purposes of writing


Specific Grade
Purpose Technique How Students Can Use the Technique Range

Describe Sensory Use their five senses, as applicable: K3


details What did you see? How did it look?
What sounds did you hear?
What did you touch? How did it feel?
What could you smell?
What did you taste?
Narrate Story Consider the following questions when developing their story: 13
grammar Who are the main characters?
When does the story take place?
Where does the story take place?
What do the main characters want to do?
What happens when the main characters try to do it?
How does the story end?
How does the main character feel?
In older grades, expand the strategy in the following ways: 46
Tell the story from the point of view of a character other than the main character.
Add an interesting or surprising twist to the story.
Inform Report Complete a K-W-L chart: 26
writing What I Know
What I Want to know
What I Learned
In the K-W-L chart, gather appropriate information:
Brainstorm. (What do I know about the topic?)
Extend brainstorming. (What do I want to know about the topic?
What other information would be helpful to learn about the topic?)
Gather additional information and add to the chart. (What have I learned?
Did I list anything during brainstorming that was inaccurate and needs to
be crossed off the chart?)
Review the K-W-L chart and circle the most important ideas to include in the report.
Develop an outline, showing which ideas will be included in the report and
the order in which they will be presented.
Continue planning while writing, gathering new information, and adding to
the outline as needed.
Be sure to implement each aspect of the plan as they write.
Persuade/ STOP Before they write, STOP and: 46
analyze Suspend judgment.
Take sides.
Organize ideas.
Plan to adjust as they write.
DARE53 DARE to check their paper to be sure they have:
Developed their thesis.
Added ideas to support their ideas.
Rejected arguments on the other side.
Ended with a strong conclusion.
TREE As they write: 23
Tell what they believe. (State a topic sentence.)
Provide three or more Reasons. (Why do I believe this?)
End it. (Wrap it up right.)
Examine. (Do I have all my parts?)
In older grades, expand the strategy as follows: 46
Replace the Examine step with Explain reasons. (Say more about each reason.)

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Recommendation 3

Teach students to become


fluent with handwriting,
spelling, sentence
construction, typing,
and word processing.
When basic writing skills become relatively
effortless for students, they can focus less
on these basic writing skills and more on
developing and communicating their ideas.54
However, younger writers must typically
devote considerable attention to acquiring
and polishing these skills before they become
proficient.55 Problems with basic writing skills
have an impact on the quality of a persons
writing.56 Spelling skills can affect the words
students choose because they may be less likely
to use words they cannot spell.57 Students also
need to be able to generate strong, interesting
sentences that vary in length and complexity
in order to convey their intended meaning and
engage readers.
When a students writing contains spelling Handwriting, spelling, and sentence con-
mistakes and poor handwriting, it can be struction are all basic writing skills that
difficult for the reader to understand what the students must draw upon to translate their
thoughts and ideas into writing. Students
student is trying to convey. Word-processing
also draw on typing and word processing
programs can make many aspects of the
skills when composing electronically.
writing process easier for students, including
assisting students with spelling and handwriting
difficulties to write more fluently. Teaching typing can help students compose more easily on
a computer, a skill that is increasingly necessary as computer-based technologies are used
throughout daily life.

Summary of evidence: Moderate Evidence practiced writing the letters repeatedly in


short sessions.59 Three studies tested explicit
The panel determined that there is moderate instruction in phonological awareness, spell-
evidence to support this recommendation. ing phonics, morphological spelling, and
This evidence is drawn from nine studies of word study.60 Two studies tested sentence-
instruction in handwriting, spelling, sentence construction interventions and examined the
construction, and word processing.58 The effectiveness of sentence-combining instruc-
practices in the studies were closely related to tion and teaching students to apply standard
those recommended by the panel. Three stud- writing conventions to their own writing;61
ies tested handwriting instructionin which and one study tested the effectiveness of
students were taught how to form letters and practice using a word processor.62 At least

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Recommendation 3 (continued)

five of the studies involved opportunities to Seven of the studies were conducted on popu-
apply the skills as students drafted original lations the panel determined were at risk for
text (authentic writing).63 writing difficulties,67 and all but two68 involved
interventions delivered to pairs or small groups
Eight of the nine studies found generally of students. The panel believes it is critical
positive effects on outcomes such as spelling, that teachers carefully match instruction in
handwriting, sentence structure, the quantity these skills to areas of student need. The panel
of text produced, and the overall quality of cannot confirm that whole-class instruction
student writing.64 However, in some of these without regard to varying student abilities will
studies, positive effects on one outcome were produce effects of the same magnitude.
mixed with no effects or negative effects on
another.65 In the ninth study, which examined The panel describes the four components of
spelling instruction, no effects were found.66 this recommendation below.

How to carry out the recommendation

1. Teach very young writers how to hold a pencil correctly and form letters fluently
and efficiently.
Early writing instruction should begin with dem- Figure 2. Handwriting-practice diagram
onstrations of how to hold a pencil comfortably
between the thumb and forefinger, resting on 1 2
the middle finger.69 Although many students
will alter this grip over time,70 a comfortable
pencil grip is necessary in order to avoid fatigue,
which can discourage students from writing.

Teachers also should show young writers the


most efficient and legible ways to form each
letter, regardless of whether print or cursive
script is used.71 Younger students may have
a tendency to draw rather than to write
letters, using more strokes than necessary
to replicate the letter. Guided practice can be
helpful, using letters with numbered arrows
depicting the order and direction of each such diagrams and practice sheets for print
stroke. Handwriting-practice diagrams, such and cursive, and some curricula may be
as the one depicted in Figure 2, can be down- available for little or no cost on the Internet.
loaded for free from the Internet. The specific curriculum is less important than
teaching fluent, effortless letter formation.
Students also should practice writing letters
from memory. To do this, the teacher can Because handwriting is a motor skill, it works
show students the letter with numbered best to practice in multiple short sessions.73
arrows and then cover the letter while the Students might practice a specific letter only
students practice writing it from memory. To five to eight times before moving to another
help students commit the letter to memory, activity. However, writing letters in isolation is
teachers gradually should increase the length insufficient; students also should apply their
of time the letter is covered before students handwriting skills in sentences and in authen-
write it.72 Many handwriting curricula include tic writing activities.

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Recommendation 3 (continued)

2. Teach students to spell words correctly.


A relatively small number of words (850) Teachers also should help students acquire the
account for 80 percent of the words elemen- skills they need to generate and check plausible
tary-grade students use in their writing.74 spellings for words.76 Table 6 provides exam-
Teachers should help students learn to spell ples of lessons for developing spelling skills.
words they commonly use.75 Although many When drafting, students should learn skills for
elementary schools have an explicit spelling applying spelling rules to words they wish to
curriculum, teachers should connect spelling include, such as invented spelling or spelling by
instruction with writing as much as possible. analogy. These skills allow students to generate
Students should be encouraged to learn an approximation of the spelling with minimal
words they frequently misspell, as well as disruption to the generation of ideas.77 When
words they wish to include in their writing. editing, students can also use spelling by anal-
ogy to check for correct spelling, or they can
use a dictionary for this purpose.

Table 6. Spelling skills by grade level


Grade
Spelling Skill Explanation Example Lesson Range

Phonological Awareness of the The teacher shows students two cards with pictures repre- K2
awareness sound structure of senting words that illustrate target features (e.g., hat and bed
spoken words to differentiate two types of vowel-consonant word-ending
patterns). The teacher pronounces the words with extra
emphasis on the target feature. Students sort additional cards
by matching based on the target feature (e.g., red and sled
with bed; cat and bat with hat).78
Spelling Knowledge of how The teacher shows students a card with a picture (e.g., a ship), K3
phonics to connect the pronounces the word, and describes the targeted sound (in
sounds of spoken this example, /sh/). The teacher then names the letters in the
English with letters associated spelling unit (s, h) and writes them on the board.
or groups of letters The students repeat the example by chanting along with the
teacher and writing the sound or word down on paper. The
teacher continues with additional words that contain the
sound (e.g., fish, shape).79
Morphological Understanding of The teacher shows students a card with three written words 26
spelling the meaning of the (e.g., walked, wagged, wanted) and points out that although
parts (e.g., prefixes the part (in this case, the ed on the end of each word)
and suffixes) of sounds different (/t/, /d/, /ed/), in all cases the spellings
words. signal the same thing (that the action happened in the past).

Very young children may not have the spell- correctly spell more words. Teachers can use
ing skills to correctly spell words. However, a process such as the following:
teachers can encourage children to write by
allowing them to use invented spelling while Beginning in kindergarten, encourage stu-
they learn spelling skills. When using invented dents to invent spellings for words they do
spelling, students attempt to spell a word not know, or to spell a word phonetically
using their existing knowledge about letter (e.g., wuz for was).
sounds and patterns. Invented spelling should
become less prevalent as students gain By 2nd grade, students should be review-
more complex spelling skills and are able to ing the spelling they generated to see if

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Recommendation 3 (continued)

it looks correct (i.e., whether it follows


the spelling patterns of words the student A Reminder:
knows). If not, students should try a differ- Connect Spelling and Writing
ent spelling and determine how the second Starting in 2nd grade, teachers should help
spelling looks. students develop proofreading strategies to
check their spelling. Teachers should begin
As students move into the 3rd and 4th with basic skills such as reading aloud,
grades, encourage them to consider how which forces the student to focus on each
many syllables are in a word before gener- word and draws attention to errors. Teach-
ating and checking a plausible spelling. ers then can move on to more targeted
skills throughout the year, such as tailor-
Students also should learn to spell words by ing proofreading for specific problems.
analogy as they draft.80 This involves using the Students should be encouraged to identify
spelling of a known word to generate a plausible areas in which they often make mistakes
spelling for an unknown word (e.g., If I can spell (e.g., possessives, ant versus ent, and
lamp, I can figure out how to spell stamp.). so on) and develop proofreading skills
Like invented spelling, spelling by analogy can designed to target those mistakes.
prevent disruptions during drafting by allow-
ing students to focus on the writing process.
Starting in 2nd grade and continuing through first few letters in a word, find the word in an
6th grade, teachers should demonstrate how to alphabetical listing, and recognize the word
spell words by analogy, and students should use once the search is narrowed. For younger
the strategy when writing.81 students, teachers could provide students
with a personal dictionary that contains an
As part of the editing process, students alphabetical listing of the correct spelling of
should learn how to use a dictionary. Starting words the student has previously misspelled.
in 2nd grade, students should begin using Students also can add words from their writ-
a dictionary to determine the spelling of the ing to their personal dictionary.

3. Teach students to construct sentences for fluency, meaning, and style.


Students should learn to write strong sentences and demonstrating how to write them.83 In
that convey their intended meaning and engage 1st and 2nd grades, the teacher can model
readers. Teachers should focus sentence-level how to identify run-on ideas and break them
instruction on sentence construction, encour- into shorter sentences. Students then can
aging students to consider the meaning and independently practice writing their ideas in
syntax of the sentences they develop.82 Teach- complete sentences, using invented spelling
ers also should explicitly demonstrate how if necessary. Once students understand the
sentence construction and sentence mechanics, concept of a sentence, they then need instruc-
such as punctuation and capitalization, interact tion in how to apply standard conventions
to form strong sentences. for sentence writing, including punctuation
and capitalization. Teachers should explicitly
Beginning in kindergarten, students should teach the conventions of written English,
develop an understanding of what sentences embedding instruction as much as possible in
are and should learn the basic principles of students own compositions.84
capitalization and punctuation. Teachers can
use students oral language skills to support Students also need instruction on how to use a
written language skills. As students convey variety of sentence structures in their writing.85
their ideas orally, the teacher can put those Sentence instruction moves students from
ideas in writing while explaining sentences writing with a series of simple sentences
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Recommendation 3 (continued)

to including more complex and interesting sentence-construction skills. Each activity


sentences in their compositions (i.e., com- can be used for any sentence structure
pound, complex, and compound-complex type, depending on the grade and skills
sentences). Sentence instruction, therefore, of the students. Teachers can create sentence-
should include teaching students a variety of construction exercises from books in the
sentence types and demonstrating how to use classroom, activities in the lives of students,
them.86 The instructional activities described school events, newspaper or magazine arti-
in Table 7 can be used to develop students cles, or students own writing.87

Table 7. Activities for sentence-structure development


How the Teacher Can
Activity Description Examples Implement the Activity

Sentence Teachers provide sen- I like _______________________________ . 1. Develop a sentence frame for students
framing tence frames to guide to use.
students sentence 2. Model the use of the sentence frame.
writing. Frames can I like to ____________ and ____________ .
3. Have students use the sentence
range from simple to
frame to construct their own
complex.
My ________________ is ______________ . sentences.
4. Have students share their sentences
with peers and discuss their word
When I ____________ , I like to _______ . choices.
5. Slowly fade the use of the sentence
She didnt go to ______________________ frame during instruction until
because ____________________________ . students can write sentences
independently.
Sentence The teacher provides The dog napped. 1. Introduce a short sentence.
expanding88 a short sentence.
Students expand the 2. Model how to add to the sentence
using different parts of speech, and
sentence using differ- The brown dog napped.
demonstrate appropriate capital-
ent parts of speech.
ization and punctuation as the sen-
The brown dog napped on tence is expanded.
the couch. 3. Have students provide suggestions
for different parts of speech (e.g.,
subjects and predicates) to add to
The lazy, brown dog napped
the short sentences.
on the couch.
4. Have students work independently
or in pairs to expand a sentence.
The lazy, brown dog napped
5. Encourage students to share their
on the couch while I read a book.
expanded sentences in small groups,
providing feedback to their peers.
Sentence Students combine My dog is brown. My dog is big. 1. Choose sentences for combining.
combining89 two or more sen-
tences into one 2. Model how to combine the sen-
tences using several examples; with
simple, compound, My brown dog is big.
older students, introduce moving,
complex, or com- deleting, and adding words or parts.
pound-complex
3. Have students rate the quality of the
sentence.
new sentence, provide alternatives to
The boy was riding his bike. The boy
the new sentence, and discuss which
was careless. The boy ran into a tree.
sentences sound better and why.
4. Encourage students to work in pairs
The boy was careless while riding his to combine sentences, creating sev-
bike, so he ran into a tree. eral new possibilities and rating the
quality of their new sentences.

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Recommendation 3 (continued)

As students practice sentence construction, Teachers should model how to use sentence-
teachers and students should evaluate sen- construction skills during drafting and revis-
tences based on meaning, style, and gram- ing.92 During the revision process, students
matical correctness.90 Evaluation criteria could should be encouraged to revise their original
include clarity (Does this make sense? Is it easy sentences for clarity and meaning. Revising
to read?) and intended audience (Is it appropri- helps students apply their skills in authentic
ate for the audience?).91 If the answer is no settings, as opposed to editing language
to any of the questions, teachers can demon- on a generic worksheet. As students revise
strate how to revise the sentence. This could their drafts, they can use their newly learned
include identifying missing parts, incorrect sentence-construction skills to improve their
punctuation, wordiness, or words that are too compositions. Older students also can review
simple or complex for the intended audience. or edit one anothers work.93

4. Teach students to type fluently and to use a word processor to compose.

Students should learn how to type fluently,


preferably without looking at the keyboard.94 National Assessment of Educational
Typing-instruction software is one way to Progress (NAEP)
teach students to use correct fingering and The 2013 administration of the NAEP will re-
monitor their speed and accuracy. Teachers quire 4th-grade students to complete the writ-
should monitor students use of typing soft- ing assessment using a computer. Therefore,
ware to encourage the use of correct finger- students must learn to use word processing
ing. As with handwriting instruction, typing and related software in the early grades in
lessons should occur regularly but be short order to adequately demonstrate their writing
and focused. skills on this important national test.95

Students should be introduced to typing in


1st grade. By 2nd grade, students should
begin regular typing practice. By the end of By the end of 2nd grade, students should be
2nd or 3rd grade, students should be able to able to use a word processor to produce and
type as fast as they can write by hand. revise text.

Instruction in typing should be accompanied by Spell checkers are helpful tools for writers at
instruction in how to use a word processor.96 all levels, but students need to understand the
Teachers should guide students through the limitations of the software, as well as skills to
basic skills involved in using a word processor, compensate for those limitations. First, teach
such as launching the program; opening and students that spell checkers do not flag spell-
saving files; and adding, moving, and deleting ing errors that are real words (e.g., sad for said
text. Instruction should include guidance about or there for their). Second, spell checkers do
how word-processing programs are part of the not always suggest the correct spelling. One
writing process (see Recommendation 2a). For skill to deal with this problem is to spell the
example, teachers can demonstrate that editing word phonetically (i.e., using the invented
features of word-processing programs, such as spelling skill described previously), which will
spelling and grammar checkers, can be turned usually prompt the correct spelling. Finally,
off during the brainstorming and drafting spell checkers will often incorrectly flag proper
phase so that students are not distracted by nouns as errors. Use these and other spell-
basic writing skills; instead, they can focus check limitations to demonstrate to students
on conveying their ideas. Students can begin that proofreading and editing are still neces-
learning to use a word processor in 1st grade. sary, even with the computer.
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Recommendation 3 (continued)

Potential roadblocks and solutions developing a bulletin board on which


students post creative examples of spelling
Roadblock 3.1. Students struggle to develop words used correctly in context
handwriting and spelling skills, making writing
reviewing students compositions to identify
a frustrating experience.
repeated errors and including those spelling
patterns as part of spelling instruction
Suggested Approach. If a student has dif-
ficulty with handwriting or spelling, consider having students set specific goals targeted
having the student switch to typing as the toward identifying spelling errors during
primary mode of composing. If the move to the editing process, then monitor and
typing is part of an Individualized Educational track progress toward spelling goals
Plan (IEP), many schools may be able to find
additional resources for the technological Roadblock 3.3. The schools writing or
support. Teachers will need to provide these English language arts curriculum includes
students with extra instruction in typing and only isolated grammar instruction using
using the word processor and spell checker. worksheets or copying tasks to teach sentence-
writing skills.
Roadblock 3.2. Students do not consistently
transfer words they have learned success- Suggested Approach. Grammar instruction
fully in their spelling lessons to their written that relies on worksheets or copying tasks to
compositions. teach sentence-writing skills can be discon-
nected from students actual writing. Students
Suggested Approach. Misspellings may occur may be able to correctly circle parts of speech
in initial drafts, when the writers focus is on or identify and correct errors in punctuation,
getting ideas on paper. Teach proofreading as but they often do not develop the ability to use
part of the editing process. Additional strate- these skills in their own work. One approach is
gies to connect spelling instruction to authentic to follow the grammar curriculums scope and
writing activities could include the following: sequence but modify the method of teaching.
For example, teachers can use the sentences
encouraging students to write sentences in the program as models, but teach using
or short texts using as many of their the modeling and gradual release methods
spelling words as possible, then having described in Recommendation 2. Most impor-
students review their writing, circle the tantly, teachers should have students practice
new spelling words, and check that they these skills while drafting, revising, and editing
used the correct spelling their own writing.

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Recommendation 4

Create an engaged community of writers.


Students need both the skill and the will to develop as writers.97 Teachers should establish a
supportive environment in their classroom to foster a community of writers who are motivated
to write well. In a supportive writing environment, teachers participate as writers, not simply
instructors, to demonstrate the importance of writing. By taking part in writing lessons and
activities, teachers convey the message that writing is important, valued, and rewarding.
To further develop students motivation to write, teachers should include opportunities for
students to choose their own topics and/or modify teacher-selected prompts related to the
purposes and genres being taught. When students choose their own topics, they may become
more engaged and motivated to write. Such engagement and motivation could potentially lead
students to write more frequently and become more involved in the writing process and the
writing community.
Students and teachers also should have regular and structured opportunities to interact
through giving and receiving feedback as well as collaborating on writing activities.
Collaboration can increase the sense of community in a classroom, as well as encourage
students to become engaged in the writing process with their peers. When students feel
connected to one another and to the teacher, they may feel safe participating in the writing
process and sharing their writing with peers. Publishing students work also can help them feel
valued in their community.

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Recommendation 4 (continued)

Summary of evidence: Minimal Evidence led to positive effects on the quality of students
writing, one of the studies produced mixed
The level of evidence for this recommendation effects on overall writing quality.99 The panel
is based on five studies that examined interven- believes, however, that the practices described
tions related to creating an engaged community in this recommendation are an integral compo-
of writers.98 The panel cautions that the studies nent of effective writing instruction.
varied with respect to how closely they were
aligned to the recommendation. While all the The practices tested in the studies included
studies examined practices that are related to teachers writing with their class,100 students
the recommendation, some were only partially choosing their topic,101 peers brainstorming
aligned to the recommendation (they exam- or editing together or writing interactively,102
ined interventions that contain fewer than 30 teachers or peers providing structured feedback
percent of the components of the recommenda- on writing,103 and publication of student writ-
tion). In addition, many of the studies examined ing.104 Researchers conducted the studies in
the effectiveness of practices designed to classrooms for students in grades 36, and two
engage students when combined with other of the studies took place in countries other than
practices that were not related to this recom- the United States.105 Four studies found positive
mendationfor example, instruction in the effects on writing quality and writing output;106
structure and elements of stories and persua- however, one study found negative effects as
sive essays (Recommendation 2). In these cases, well as positive effects,107 and one study found
it was impossible to assess whether the effects no evidence of an effect.108
resulted from the engaging practices or from
other practices included in the intervention. The panel describes the five components of
Furthermore, though the majority of practices this recommendation below.

How to carry out the recommendation

1. Teachers should participate as members of the community by writing and sharing


their writing.
Teachers should model how the ability to visible to students. A teacher also could col-
write affects their daily lives, demonstrate laborate with all students on a writing project,
the importance of writing to communicate, such as composing a how-to guide for carv-
model the perseverance required to create ing a Halloween pumpkin or writing a class
a good piece of writing, and express the newsletter. Teachers also should take part in
satisfaction that can come from creating a writing assignments. For instance, if students
meaningful text.109 For example, a teacher are asked to describe a favorite family tradi-
could draft a letter or an email to a friend in tion, the teacher could offer his or her own
front of students, thinking out loud to make example, actively conveying how selecting a
the invisible act of composingwhich occurs topic one is interested in can generate excite-
internally for experienced writersmore ment about writing.

2. Give students writing choices.

Teachers should provide opportunities for prompt.110 One way to foster choice is for
student choice in writing assignmentsfor students to keep a notebook in which they
example, choice in selecting writing topics record topics for writing, such as memories,
or the freedom to modify a teacher-selected pets, vacations, firsts (e.g., first time riding

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Recommendation 4 (continued)

a bike, first soccer goal, first day at camp), to write while ensuring that students prac-
and favorite holidays.111 Students should add tice writing skills aligned with the teachers
topics often and consult their notebooks instructional purpose (e.g., a specific genre or
throughout the school year. Teachers also can a specific purpose). The prompt should clearly
encourage students to write for themselves; state expectations with regard to content and
their peers; an imaginary audience (e.g., a writing skills, while still giving students room
character in a story); adults (e.g., their parents to express themselves. For example, students
or an author); or a wider, unknown audience. might be prompted to write about a historical
figure or a character from a story (see Exam-
Teachers need to provide instruction and ple 4). Prompts enable teachers to emphasize
opportunities for students to practice writing specific content standards as well as promote
to prompts. A prompt should inspire students engagement and community-building.

Example 4. The Westward Movement prompt

For grades 5 and 6

Choose a group of people who interested you during our study of the Westward Movement.
These people might be settlers, pioneers, or explorers. Consider the challenges these people
faced in moving West.

Write a multi-paragraph paper that describes two or three difficulties or problems encoun-
tered by these people. Describe how they solved, or attempted to solve, these problems and
whether or not their solutions worked. You are writing an explanation, not telling a story.
Your paper will be used as the opening article in our class book on the Westward Movement
and will be followed by first-hand accounts from settlers and explorers.

In your explanatory paper:


write in the third person (the they point of view)
identify and explain their challenges/problems
describe how they solved or tried to solve their problems
explain whether or not their solutions worked
choose vocabulary words that clearly illustrate the problems and solutions
use correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar

Adapted for early elementary use (grades 2 and 3)

Choose a character from a story you read or a story read to you. Describe a problem that
this character had. Describe how this character solved, or tried to solve, this problem. Explain
whether the solution worked.

Examples of a character and a problem to be solved:


Ramona Quimby having to give a speech
little pig protecting himself from the hungry wolf

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Recommendation 4 (continued)

3. Encourage students to collaborate as writers.

Teachers can encourage students to collabo- Example 5. Star of the Day


rate throughout the writing process by brain-
storming ideas about a topic, responding to In the Star of the Day activity, each stu-
drafts in a writing group, or helping peers dent is celebrated on his or her own day.
edit or revise their work.112 Collaboration also Seated at the front of the classroom, the
can take the form of collaborative writing, Star of the Day answers interview ques-
whereby students jointly develop a single tions from peers using a pretend mi-
text. Younger students, for example, can take crophone. After the interview, students
turns sharing the pen as they create a mes- compose one sentence about the Star of
sage on chart paper. Older students can col- the Day. These sentences are shared and
laborate by publishing a class newspaper or combined into a class paragraph, which
composing stories to share with their friends is then displayed on the class bulletin
or classmates. One collaborative activity that board, as demonstrated by this example
from a 1st-grade classroom:
helps build a community of writers is Star of
the Day (see Example 5). Jordan is the Star of the Day.
He likes the color blue. He
loves to eat ice cream. His
favorite animal is a tiger.
Jordan
Jordan lives in Irvine. Its
his birthday today!113

4. Provide students with opportunities to give and receive feedback throughout the
writing process.
Students need to know whether their writing Without explicit instruction in how to provide
is accurately and appropriately conveying its and receive feedback, students may focus
message. One way students can determine solely on the conventions of writing. For
this is by sharing their writing and respond- example, if teachers focus only on spelling
ing to written and verbal feedback from the errors as they grade writing assignments,
teacher and their peers.114 Although teach- student writers will likely point to similar
ers should provide feedback to students mistakes when providing feedback to peers.
through teacher-student conferences and Therefore, teachers should develop rules and
rubrics, peers also should be encouraged to procedures for providing and sharing feed-
participate in the feedback process. Students back on writing.115 When teachers emphasize
may be able to identify problems in other meaning over form and correctness in early
peoples writing more easily than they can drafts, students may learn to do the same.
identify issues in their own work. Addition-
ally, when students provide written feedback Teachers also should model and provide
and assessment to peers, their comments and sample language to encourage appropriate
observations may enhance their understand- verbal feedback. During Authors Chair, for
ing of their own writing. example, teachers can encourage students to
practice giving kind commentsconstruc-
Students need to be taught strategies and tive comments and positive statements about
appropriate language for written feedback. peers writing (see Example 6).

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Recommendation 4 (continued)

Example 6. Authors Chair

During the Authors Chair activity, one student, sitting in a special


chair, reads his or her work to peers as they sit on the rug. The teacher
then models and facilitates giving kind verbal comments,
such as the following:

I really like ______________________________ .

A standout line in your text for me is


______________________ because __________________________________________________________ .

I could really picture ____________________ because ______________________________________ .

5. Publish students writing, and extend the community beyond the classroom.
Students may begin to see themselves as
writers if they have opportunities to publish Technology Tip
their writing.116 Publishing can take a variety With appropriate safeguards and permis-
of forms, including displaying student work sion, teachers can create class blogs for stu-
prominently in the classroom. For example, dents to post their work online or encourage
teachers can create a Wall of Fame featuring them to submit their work to online sites
the best excerpts from students writing on a that publish student writing.
bulletin board in the classroom.

Teachers also can use publishing to extend


the community beyond the classroom. poster board, decorate them, and hang them
Students can publish stories in books that around the school or classroom to simulate
include an About the Author page. These an art gallery. Students then circulate around
books can be made available in the school the gallery, reading one anothers pieces,
or classroom library. Students work also can writing kind comments on sticky notes, and
be displayed in the hallway or administration attaching the notes to the work on display.
building, and teachers can have students Publishing student work in this manner
participate in a Gallery Walk. In this activ- celebrates writing and helps create a physical
ity, students frame their poems or stories on environment that is conducive to learning.

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Recommendation 4 (continued)

Potential roadblocks and solutions an element of choice. For example, when


teaching the personal narrative, teachers can
Roadblock 4.1. Teachers may be uncomfort- have students select a photograph of a vaca-
able with their own writing and therefore tion, favorite place, or important event and
hesitant to share their writing and discuss the use their writing to dramatize what happened.
writing process with their students. When teaching persuasive writing, teachers
can allow students to select an issue, or select
Suggested Approach. Part of creating a which side of an argument to defend.
community of writers involves establishing
a supportive environment in which every Roadblock 4.3. Providing feedback on all
member of the community has room to grow student writing is overwhelming and time
and it is acceptable to take risks and make consuming.
mistakes. Writing is a lifelong skill, and it is
important for students to understand that Suggested Approach. It is not necessary for
writing requires effort even when you are the teacher to provide feedback on all student
older and have been writing for many years. writing; teachers should share the respon-
Making mistakes, demonstrating how to sibility of providing feedback with students
recognize those mistakes, and then correcting through student self-evaluation and peer
mistakes or revising word choice or sentence evaluations. In fact, students should be able
structure to make the writing more compel- to write without expecting that every piece
ling can be a powerful model and learning of writing will be assessed by the teacher.
experience for all members of the class. When students do complete writing pieces for
teacher review and feedback, teachers should
Roadblock 4.2. If students are allowed to focus on specific elements, and they should
choose their own topics for writing, teachers discuss these expectations with students in
may not be able to focus on the content stan- advance. In this way, teachers can focus their
dards adequately. comments on specific elements, such as a
compelling opening, descriptive language, or
Suggested Approach. Teachers can expose effective use of transition words. Providing
students to the genres of writing required in targeted feedback will help students better
the content standards and still allow students understand how to improve their writing.

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Glossary

A
Audience refers to the reader for whom a piece of writing is intended. Audience can range from the
writer who produces the text (e.g., a diary entry) to peers, teachers, parents, or other trusted adults.

B
Students draw upon basic writing skills, such as handwriting, spelling, and sentence construction,
to translate their thoughts and ideas into writing. Students also draw on typing and word-processing
skills when composing electronically.

C
Collaborative writing is a process whereby students jointly develop a single text. Examples include
younger students sharing a pen to draft a message on chart paper, or older students publishing a
class newspaper or composing stories to share with their friends or classmates.

E
Exemplary text is a written piece used as an example of quality writing. This text is commonly a
published piece of writing, but it also can be writing created by a student or teacher. The exemplary
text demonstrates specific ideas and/or structure. The writer can emulate exemplary text in his or her
own writing. Exemplary text is sometimes referred to as model text or touchstone text.

F
Fluency is the ability to communicate ideas in writing accurately and quickly with relatively little
effort. Fluency is an important factor in a writers ability to manipulate sentence structures to produce
comprehensible text. Writing fluency also requires automatic or relatively effortless handwriting, typ-
ing, and spelling skills.

G
Genre is a form of writing with specific features that provides context and structure for a particular
purpose and audience. For example, the narrative genre includes personal or made-up stories and
typically includes elements such as characters and plot, whereas the persuasive genre can include
letters and essays that incorporate features such as an introduction, thesis statement, supporting
material, and conclusions.
Genre elements, sometimes referred to as text elements, refer to specific features typical of a par-
ticular genre. For example, the elements of a story include place, a starting event, action, and ending.
Gradual release of responsibility is an instructional model whereby a teacher teaches a strategy
explicitly and then gradually decreases the level of support to the student, ultimately releasing the
student to use the strategy independently.117

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Glossary (continued)

I
Ideation refers to the development and quality of ideas students include in their writing. Qualitative
measures of ideation include the overall richness and number of ideas in a composition. Quantitative
measures include the number of different ideas.
Invented spelling is a students attempt to produce a plausible spelling for an unknown word. This
can range from using one letter to represent an entire word (e.g., b for bed), using the first and last
sounds of a word (e.g., gl for girl), or spelling a word phonetically (e.g., wuz for was).

M
Mechanics refers to assessments of handwriting, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. The term
usage also may be applied and typically refers to the combination of capitalization and punctuation.

O
Measures of organization assess the structure of a composition. This can include the connection
between ideas in the text, as well as how well individual ideas are organized or connected to meet a
writers purpose (often referred to as cohesiveness).
Measures of overall writing quality assess the overall effectiveness of a piece of writing. These
measures may take into account assessments of intermediary outcome categoriesincluding ide-
ation, genre (or text) elements, mechanics, organization, output, sentence structure, vocabulary,
and voicein a single assessment of the quality of a piece of writing. Overall writing quality may be
assessed either analytically or holistically. Analytic writing quality is measured using scales for which
multiple attributes of writing (e.g., mechanics, vocabulary, sentence structure, organization, ideation,
and voice) are each judged separately and then summed to obtain a single score. To measure holistic
writing quality, the assessor makes a single judgment about overall quality, considering a variety of
attributes at the same time. Although different elements of writing qualityfor example, organization,
ideation, or mechanicsmay contribute to the overall quality of the piece, these different elements
are not evaluated separately in holistic writing quality measures.

P
Purpose refers to the objective a writer is trying to achieve with a particular piece of writing. There
are four general purposes for writing (describe, narrate, inform, and persuade/analyze), and each
purpose has a variety of genres that can help provide context and structure for a particular pur-
pose and audience.

R
A rubric is an assessment tool. Rubrics typically include a set of criteria for assessing performance
on written assignments, allowing for standardized evaluation according to the specified criteria.
Rubrics can be used by teachers to evaluate student work, or by students for self-evaluation and/or
peer review.

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Glossary (continued)

S
Measures of sentence structure typically assess sentence correctness or sentence complexity. For
example, a sentence-structure measurement might count the number of sentences in a composition
that are syntactically correct.
A strategy is a series of actions (mental, physical, or both) that writers undertake to achieve their goals.
Strategies are tools that can help students generate content and carry out components of the writing process.
For example, students can use peer-sharing strategies to give and receive feedback with a writing partner.

T
A technique is a specific tool that students can use to generate content and frame their writing for a
specific genre. Whereas a strategy can be applied to all genres, techniques are specific to a particular
genre and the features that provide context and structure for the genre. For example, students can
use the TREE technique (described in Recommendation 2b) to plan and draft a persuasive essay.
Text structure refers to the way in which a text is organized to convey meaning to the reader. It encompasses
how the main point is conveyed (e.g., sequence of events, comparison, or cause and effect) and the vocabu-
lary the author selects to convey meaning to the reader. In text-structure instruction, students are taught
to identify common text structures and use them to organize the information they are reading or writing.

V
Vocabulary refers to the types of words used by the student in his or her writing. Vocabulary may
be assessed by counting specific types of words (e.g., the number of different words or the inclusion
of content-specific words), or by examining the complexity of words (e.g., number of syllables).
Voice often is referred to as tone, mood, or style, and it tells the reader about the writers per-
sonality in the composition. Voice typically is assessed by rating how well the student establishes
mood, tone, style, or his or her individual personality in writing.

W
Writing is the process through which people communicate thoughts and ideas. Writing can include
beginning scribbles, drawings, random letter strings, single-letter spellings, invented spelling, or complete
sentences and paragraphs. Writing also can include students dictating ideas to an adult or peer for tran-
scription. Writing can be done through paper and pencil, typing, audio recording, or speech synthesis.
Authentic writing involves student generation of original text, including sentences, paragraphs, or longer
pieces. For example, students might develop a paragraph in response to a writing prompt. Writing from
dictation, correcting grammatical errors on a worksheet, and combining two sentences generated by a
teacher do not qualify as authentic writing, because students are not generating the content themselves.
Measures of writing output refer to the actual quantity of text produced. Some examples of output
measures include the number of sentences or the number of words in a composition.
The writing process is the approach a writer uses to compose text. Components of the writing process
include planning, drafting, sharing, revising, editing, and evaluating. These components are recursive.
They can occur at any point during the writing process, and students should learn to skillfully and flex-
ibly move back and forth between the components while composing text. On occasion, an additional
component, publishing, is added to the process as a final product to conclude the writing process.

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Appendix A
Postscript from the Institute of Education Sciences

What is a practice guide?

The Institute of Education Sciences (IES) publishes practice guides to share rigorous evidence and
expert guidance on addressing education-related challenges not solved with a single program,
policy, or practice. Each practice guides panel of experts develops recommendations for a coherent
approach to a multifaceted problem. Each recommendation is explicitly connected to supporting
evidence. Using standards for rigorous research, the supporting evidence is rated to reflect how
well the research demonstrates that the recommended practices are effective. Strong evidence
means positive findings are demonstrated in multiple well-designed, well-executed studies, leav-
ing little or no doubt that the positive effects are caused by the recommended practice. Moderate
evidence means well-designed studies show positive impacts, but some questions remain about
whether the findings can be generalized or whether the studies definitively show the practice is
effective. Minimal evidence means data may suggest a relationship between the recommended
practice and positive outcomes, but research has not demonstrated that the practice is the cause
of positive outcomes. (See Table 1 for more details on levels of evidence.)

How are practice guides developed? and summarizing the research and in produc-
ing the practice guide.
To produce a practice guide, IES first selects a
topic. Topic selection is informed by inquiries
IES practice guides then are subjected to
and requests to the What Works Clearinghouse
rigorous external peer review. This review
Help Desk, formal surveys of practitioners,
is done independently of the IES staff who
and a limited literature search of the topics
supported the development of the guide. A
research base. Next, IES recruits a panel chair
critical task of the peer reviewers of a practice
who has a national reputation and expertise
guide is to determine whether the evidence
in the topic. The chair, working with IES, then
cited in support of particular recommenda-
selects panelists to coauthor the guide. Panel-
tions is up-to-date and that studies of similar
ists are selected based on their expertise in the
or better quality that point in a different direc-
topic area and the belief that they can work
tion have not been overlooked. Peer reviewers
together to develop relevant, evidence-based
also evaluate whether the level of evidence
recommendations. IES recommends that the
category assigned to each recommendation is
panel include at least one practitioner with
appropriate. After the review, a practice guide
relevant experience.
is revised to meet any concerns of the review-
ers and to gain the approval of the standards
The panel receives a general template for
and review staff at IES.
developing a practice guide, as well as exam-
ples of published practice guides. Panelists
A final note about IES practice guides
identify the most important research with
respect to their recommendations and aug- In policy and other arenas, expert panels
ment this literature with a search of recent typically try to build a consensus, forging
publications to ensure that supporting evi- statements that all their members endorse.
dence is current. The search is designed to Practice guides do more than find common
find all studies assessing the effectiveness of ground; they create a list of actionable recom-
a particular program or practice. These stud- mendations. When research clearly shows
ies then are reviewed against the What Works which practices are effective, the panelists
Clearinghouse (WWC) standards by certified use this evidence to guide their recommen-
reviewers who rate each effectiveness study. dations. However, in some cases, research
WWC staff assist the panelists in compiling does not provide a clear indication of what
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Appendix A (continued)

works, and panelists interpretation of the what a school or district could obtain on its
existing (but incomplete) evidence plays own. Practice guide authors are nationally
an important role in guiding the recom- recognized experts who collectively endorse
mendations. As a result, it is possible that the recommendations, justify their choices
two teams of recognized experts working with supporting evidence, and face rigorous
independently to produce a practice guide independent peer review of their conclusions.
on the same topic would come to very differ- Schools and districts would likely not find
ent conclusions. Those who use the guides such a comprehensive approach when seek-
should recognize that the recommendations ing the advice of individual consultants.
represent, in effect, the advice of consultants.
However, the advice might be better than Institute of Education Sciences

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Appendix B
About the Authors Dr. Olson received the Alan C. Purves Award
in 2007 and the Richard A. Meade Award in
Panel 2009 from the National Council of Teachers
of English for outstanding research in the
Steve Graham, Ph.D., is the Warner Professor field of English education. She is the author
of Special Education at Arizona State University. of The Reading/Writing Connection: Strategies
His research focuses on identifying the factors for Teaching and Learning in the Secondary
that contribute to writing development and Classroom, 3rd edition, published by Allyn &
writing difficulties, as well as developing and Bacon/Pearson.
validating effective instructional procedures for
teaching writing. He is the author of the Hand- Catherine DAoust is the coordinator of
book of Writing Research, Handbook of Learn- English language arts, K12, in the Saddleback
ing Disabilities, Writing Better, Best Practices in Valley Unified School District in Mission Viejo,
Writing Instruction, APA Educational Psychology California, where she is responsible for imple-
Handbook, and Powerful Writing Strategies for menting and monitoring a comprehensive
All Students. Dr. Graham also authored Writing district language arts program focusing on
Next, Writing to Read, and Informing Writing for instruction in reading and writing in language
the Carnegie Corporation of New York. He is a arts and across content areas. She is the codirec-
former editor of Contemporary Educational Psy- tor of the University of California, Irvine (UCI)
chology and Exceptional Children. He currently site of the National Writing Project, where she
serves as the senior editor of the What Works assists teachers in fostering their writing abilities
for Special Needs Learners series published by and enhancing their teaching practice in writing.
Guilford Press. Ms. DAoust is a contributing author to books
on writing, including Practical Ideas for Teaching
Alisha Bollinger, M.Ed., received her B.A. Writing as a Process, Thinking Writing, and Port-
from Benedictine College and her M.Ed. from folios in the Writing Classroom: An Introduction.
the University of Nebraska at Kearney. She
has 10 years of experience as an elementary Charles MacArthur, Ph.D., is a professor in
teacher and special education teacher. Ms. Bol- the School of Education at the University of
linger has served as a mentor for new teachers, Delaware. Dr. MacArthur received his Ph.D.
a staff development facilitator, and a curriculum from American University. His research interests
leader, in addition to participating in professional include writing development and instruc-
learning communities. She also has worked on tion with struggling writers, technology and
both building- and district-wide teams to develop literacy, and development of self-regulated
writing curricula and has worked as a teacher strategies. His significant research projects
leader in the implementation of those plans. have involved the development of a writing
Ms. Bollinger currently teaches 4th grade at curriculum for students with learning disabili-
Norris Elementary School in Firth, Nebraska. ties, writing-strategy instruction in classroom
settings, development of multimedia tools to
Carol Booth Olson, Ph.D., is an associate support reading in content areas, speech rec-
professor in the Department of Education at ognition as a writing accommodation, project-
the University of California, Irvine (UCI), and based learning in social studies in inclusive
director of the UCI site of the National Writing classrooms, and adult literacy. He currently
Project. Her research focuses on the impact of is principal investigator of a research project
cognitive strategiesbased professional devel- developing a writing curriculum for basic writ-
opment and curriculum design on the read- ing courses in community colleges. In addition
ing, thinking, and writing ability of students to publishing his own research, Dr. MacArthur
in grades K12, with special emphasis on the has served as editor of The Journal of Special
academic literacy of mainstreamed English Education and coedited the Handbook of Writing
language learners in middle and high school. Research and Best Practices in Writing Instruction.

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Appendix B (continued)

Deborah McCutchen, Ph.D., is a professor participated in other meta-analyses and syn-


of education at the University of Washington. theses focused on paraprofessional home-vis-
Dr. McCutchens teaching and research inter- iting programs, interventions for oppositional
ests include the psychology of reading and defiant disorder, and mathematics education.
writing, teacher knowledge, and classroom
learning. Her work, supported by the National Virginia Knechtel, M.P.P., is a researcher
Institutes of Health and more recently by the at Mathematica Policy Research and a former
Institute of Education Sciences, examines the special education teacher. Ms. Knechtel has
linguistic bases of reading and writing skills. served as a reviewer for What Works Clearing-
Her research has ranged from basic research house topic areas and practice guides and as
on cognitive processes supporting literacy a practice coordinator for two practice guides,
to studies of the subject-matter knowledge including Improving Reading Comprehension
needed by teachers of reading. She is a in Kindergarten Through 3rd Grade. She sup-
former coeditor of Cognition and Instruc- ported the panel in analyzing the evidence for
tion and contributor to volumes such as the effective writing practices that was reviewed
Handbook of Writing Research, the Handbook for this practice guide. Ms. Knechtel has expe-
of Research on Learning and Instruction, and rience on a range of evaluations, primarily in
the Handbook of Research on Writing. the area of education.

Natalie Olinghouse, Ph.D., is an assistant Bryce Onaran, M.P.A., is a program analyst


professor of educational psychology and a at Mathematica Policy Research. He has served
research scientist in the Center for Behavioral as staffing coordinator for the What Works
Education and Research at the University of Clearinghouse, where he managed the plan-
Connecticut. Dr. Olinghouse earned her doctor- ning and operation of the project. Mr. Onaran
ate in learning disabilities at Vanderbilt Uni- provided logistical support to the panel and
versity. Her research interests include writing assisted with efforts to translate research find-
assessment, relations between reading and ings into practitioner-friendly text. In addition
writing, and vocabulary in writing. Dr. Oling- to his work on the What Works Clearinghouse,
houses recent research, funded by the Institute Mr. Onaran also worked on data collection
of Education Sciences, seeks to identify key efforts to evaluate teachers who have entered
aspects of states writing content standards and teaching through highly selective routes to
assessments that are related to students writ- alternative certification for the Institute of Edu-
ing achievement. She has published numerous cation Sciences, U.S. Department of Education.
journal articles and book chapters on writing
assessment and instruction for both research Cassandra Pickens Jewell, M.S.Ed., is
and K12 educator communities. Dr. Olinghouse a research analyst for Mathematica Policy
also is a former elementary special education Research. She has served as project analyst
teacher with 12 years of experience. for the What Works Clearinghouse, as well as
coordinator in several areas of the Clearing-
Staff house, including practice guides and outreach
and development. She also served as practice
M. C. Bradley, Ph.D., is a researcher at coordinator for the Using Student Achievement
Mathematica Policy Research and a former Data to Support Instructional Decision Making
high school science teacher. She has both practice guide. Ms. Pickens Jewell supported
delivered and evaluated education and social the panel in translating research findings
work programs. Dr. Bradley supported the into practitioner-friendly text. In addition to
panel in the review and documentation of her work on the Clearinghouse, she works
evidence. She has reviewed evidence for previ- on data collection and program evaluation
ous What Works Clearinghouse practice guides design and analysis efforts, primarily in the
and topic areas. Dr. Bradley also conducted or area of education.
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Appendix C
Disclosure of Potential Conflicts of Interest
Practice guide panels are composed of individuals who are nationally recognized experts on the
topics about which they are making recommendations. IES expects the experts to be involved pro-
fessionally in a variety of matters that relate to their work as a panel. Panel members are asked to
disclose these professional activities and institute deliberative processes that encourage critical exam-
ination of their views as they relate to the content of the practice guide. The potential influence of
the panel members professional activities is further muted by the requirement that they ground their
recommendations in evidence that is documented in the practice guide. In addition, before all practice
guides are published, they undergo an independent external peer review focusing on whether the
evidence related to the recommendations in the guide has been presented appropriately.

The professional activities reported by each Strategies for Composition and Self Regulation
panel member that appear to be most closely (Brookline Books); Powerful Writing Strategies
associated with the panel recommendations for All Students (Brookes); and Writing Better:
are noted below. Teaching Writing Processes and Self-Regulation
to Students with Learning Problems (Brookes).
Steve Graham receives royalties as an author
of SRA/McGraw-Hill Imagine It, a reading/writ- Self-regulated strategy development (SRSD) is
ing program for students in kindergarten an approach to writing instruction comprised
through 6th grade, and Zaner-Bloser Spell of a set of practices, not a branded curriculum
It Write, a spelling program for students in that can be purchased. Dr. Grahams wife, Dr.
kindergarten through 8th grade. He also is Karen Harris, developed SRSD. Dr. Grahams
a consulting author on Zaner-Bloser Hand- work on SRSD includes developing strategies
writing, a handwriting program for students and testing their effectiveness.
in kindergarten through 8th grade. These
programs are not mentioned in the guide. Carol Booth Olson receives royalties as a
senior program consultant on Houghton-Miff-
Dr. Graham also receives royalties on the sale lin McDougal Littell Literature, a language arts
of the following textbooks he has authored textbook, and The Reading/Writing Connec-
on instruction in writing strategies, that are tion: Strategies for Teaching and Learning in
discussed in this guide: Best Practices in Writ- the Secondary Classroom (Pearson), a profes-
ing Instruction (Guilford); Helping Young Writ- sional book for teachers. These publications
ers Master the Craft: Strategy Instruction and are not mentioned in the guide.
Self Regulation in the Writing Process (Brook-
line Books); Making the Writing Process Work:

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Appendix D
Rationale for Evidence Ratingsa
The research used in this practice guide was identified through a search for research on practices for
improving students writing. The search focused on studies published between 1989 and 2009 that
examined practices for teaching writing to students in elementary school settings.118 In addition to
identifying intervention studies conducted with typically developing students, the search included
studies of students with diagnosed learning disabilities or designated as English language learners.
Studies examined students in both the United States and other countries. The search was supple-
mented with studies recommended by the panel based on its expertise in the area of writing research.

The search identified more than 1,575 studies, including 118 with designs that could be reviewed
against What Works Clearinghouse (WWC) standards for randomized controlled trials (RCTs) and
group quasi-experimental designs (QEDs). From this subset, 41 met the WWC evidence standards,
and 34 were relevant to the panels recommendations and were included as support or supplemen-
tal evidence for the recommendations in this practice guide. Twenty studies were eligible for review
against the WWC pilot standards for well-designed single-case design (SCD) research. Of these, 13
met the pilot standards and 11 were included as supplemental evidence for the recommendations
in this guide. While group design studies (RCTs and QEDs) contribute to the level of evidence rating
for a recommendation, SCD studies cannot raise the level of evidence above minimal.

In this practice guide, a group design study do not adjust statistical significance for mul-
result is classified as having a positive or tiple comparisons or student clusters where
negative effect when it meets either of the the unit of assignment is different from the
following criteria: unit of analysis (e.g., classrooms are assigned
to conditions, but student test scores are
the result is statistically significant analyzed). When full information is available,
(p 0.05)119 the WWC adjusts for clustering and multiple
comparisons within an outcome category.121
the result is substantively important as
defined by the WWC (effect sizes greater Eligible outcomes. The guide focuses on
than 0.25 or less than 0.25, regardless of nine outcome categories. In general, the panel
statistical significance)120 only considered measures of student ability
based on original, student-written products
SCD studies are classified as having a posi- (or authentic writing), because it is not clear
tive effect if visual analysis finds at least three whether students translate skills practiced on
demonstrations of an effect (for more informa- worksheets and spelling tests into improve-
tion on the pilot WWC standards for single-case ments in authentic writing. For example,
design or visual analysis, please see the WWC students who correctly identify grammatical
Procedures and Standards Handbook, available errors in a worksheet may not transfer that skill
on the IES website at http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/ to their authentic writing.122 The panel made
wwc/documentsum.aspx?sid=19). one exception to this rule: norm-referenced
standardized tests of writing achievement.
When a result meets none of these criteria, it This exception was made because teachers
is classified as having no effect. are increasingly called upon to demonstrate
improvement on these tests and are likely
Some studies meet WWC standards (with or to be interested in interventions that have
without reservations) for causal designs but demonstrated impacts on these types of

a
Eligible studies that meet WWC evidence standards or meet evidence standards with reservations are indicated by bold text in the
endnotes and references pages.

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Appendix D (continued)

assessments. The nine outcome categories for Mechanics refers to assessments of


this practice guide follow: handwriting, spelling, capitalization, and
punctuation. The term usage also may be
Overall writing quality measures applied and typically refers to the combi-
the effectiveness of a piece of writing. nation of capitalization and punctuation.
These measures may take into account
assessments of intermediary outcome Organization assesses the structure of
categoriesincluding ideation, genre (or a composition. This can include the con-
text) elements, mechanics, organization, nection between ideas in the text, as well
output, sentence structure, vocabulary, as how well individual ideas are organized
and voicein a single assessment of the or connected to meet a writers purpose
quality of a piece of writing. Overall writ- (often referred to as cohesiveness).
ing quality may be assessed either analyti- Sentence structure typically assesses
cally or holistically. Analytic writing quality sentence correctness or sentence complexity.
is measured using scales for which mul- For example, a sentence structure measure-
tiple attributes of writing (e.g., mechanics, ment might count the number of sentences
vocabulary, sentence structure, organiza- in a composition that are syntactically correct.
tion, ideation, and voice) are each judged
separately and then summed to obtain a Vocabulary refers to the types of words
single score. To measure holistic writing used by the student in his or her writing.
quality, the scorer makes a single judg- Vocabulary may be assessed by counting
ment about overall quality, considering specific types of words (e.g., the number of
a variety of attributes at the same time. different words or the inclusion of content-
Though different elements of writing qual- specific words), or by examining the com-
ityfor example, organization, ideation, plexity of words (e.g., number of syllables).
or mechanicsmay contribute to the
overall quality of the piece, these different Voice is often referred to as tone,
elements are not evaluated separately in mood, or style, and it tells the reader
holistic writing quality measures. about the writers personality in the com-
position. Voice is typically assessed by
Writing output refers to the actual quantity rating how well the student establishes
of text produced. Some examples of output mood, tone, style, or his or her individual
measures include the number of sentences personality in writing.
or the number of words in a composition.
The panel was most interested in interven-
Genre elements, sometimes referred tions that demonstrate improvements in over-
to as text elements, measure whether all writing quality, since teaching students
features typical of a particular genre are to write effectively is the ultimate objective
present. For example, one might assess of writing instruction. However, particularly
whether elements of a story, such as char- because this guide focuses on students in
acters, place, a starting event, action, and the early stages of writing development, the
ending, are present in students writing. panel believes that improvements on interme-
diary outcome categoriesincluding writing
Ideation assesses the development and output, mechanics, vocabulary, sentence
quality of ideas students include in their structure, organization, ideation, voice, and
writing. Qualitative measures of ideation genre elementsare relevant and important.
include the overall richness and number of As a result, the panel accepted outcomes in
ideas in a composition. Quantitative mea- any of these categories.
sures include the number of different ideas.

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Finally, given the subjective nature of many exposed to a particular intervention (treat-
writing assessments, the panel felt strongly ment condition) to the writing of students
that minimum thresholds of inter-rater reliabil- who were not exposed to the intervention
ity must be documented on the study sample of interest (comparison condition). The panel
for subjective writing assessments included refers to the comparison condition in studies
as evidence of a practices effectiveness. One for which the interventions were provided as
common measure of inter-rater reliability is a supplement to students typical classroom
Pearson correlation, for which a minimum instruction or as a replacement for some por-
correlation of 0.70 was required; however, the tion of students typical classroom instruction
panel accepted a variety of different measures as regular classroom instruction. In other
of inter-rater reliability, and the minimum cases, students exposed to the intervention
thresholds varied across these measures. were compared to students receiving a dif-
Norm-referenced standardized tests were ferent, well-defined intervention, which the
exempted from this requirement. panel refers to as a treated comparison.

To facilitate comparisons, the panel focused on Writers who are at risk. While the rec-
the outcome closest to the end of the interven- ommendations in this guide are primarily
tion; these are labeled posttests. All outcome intended for teachers to use with typically
measures administered after the posttest are developing students, some of the studies
labeled maintenance in appendix tables. Mea- used to support the recommendation were
sures the panel believes require students to conducted on populations of students at
apply knowledge or skills in a new context are greater risk of experiencing difficulty learning
labeled transfer outcomes in appendix tables. to write, including students with identified
When studies have multiple posttest outcome learning disabilities; students with low base-
measures administered within the same line scores on assessments of handwriting,
category, effect sizes for each measure are spelling, or writing ability; or students strug-
averaged, and the overall average is reported. gling with behavior. In the appendices, at
risk refers to cases in which more than 50
Multicomponent interventions. Many of percent of the sample in a study met one of
the studies that contributed to the evidence these criteria. In some cases, exactly 50 per-
ratings for this guide examined the effective- cent of the student population was at risk for
ness of several instructional practices tested writing difficulties, in which case the sample
together. For example, one study tested is referred to as half at risk.
the effectiveness of an after-school writing
club for struggling writers. The intervention
included instruction in a process approach Recommendation 1. Provide daily time
to writing (Recommendation 2), but it also for students to write.
included providing extra time for writing
instruction (Recommendation 1). In these Level of evidence: Minimal Evidence
cases, it was not possible for the panel to
determine which of the practices included in The panel judged the level of evidence for this
the intervention caused any observed effects recommendation to be minimal evidence. While
on writing outcomes; however, they provided a considerable amount of time is required
evidence of the effectiveness of the practice to implement the practices in this guide, no
of interest, when implemented with the other studies that met WWC evidence standards
practices in the multicomponent intervention. explicitly examined whether providing stu-
dents with daily opportunities to write leads
Classifying the comparison condition. to better writing outcomes than providing
The studies cited as evidence for this guide less frequent writing opportunities. Nonethe-
compared the writing of students who were less, in light of recent surveys of elementary

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teachers indicating that students spend very a standardized measure of sentence structure
little time writing during the school day,123 the relative to comparison group members who
panel believes it is important to acknowledge did not attend the writing clubs. The additional
the time required to implement the practices in instructional time included instruction in genre-
this guide by making daily writing instruction specific writing strategies aligned with the
and practice its own recommendation. The practices described in Recommendation 2b.
panel cautions that time for writing is neces-
sary, but not sufficient on its own; additional Supplemental evidence comes from two stud-
time for writing will improve students writ- ies, both SCDs, in which the total additional
ing achievement only when aligned with the time for writing instruction was more limited
recommendations in this guide. and was delivered over a shorter period of
time.126 Both studies examined the effective-
Limited support for this recommendation ness of additional instructional time, provided
comes from one study of additional writing as a supplement to students regular class-
instruction and time for writing practice that room instruction, using self-regulated strategy
meets WWC evidence standards for group development (SRSD, described in greater detail
designs.124 Table D.1 summarizes the character- in the description of the evidence supporting
istics of the study that contributes to the level Recommendation 2). The characteristics of
of evidence rating for this recommendation. In supplemental studies are included in Table
the study, students who were at risk for writing D.2. Both studies led to positive effects on
difficulties attended a before- or after-school the number of elements students included in
writing club, which involved additional time their writing (persuasive or story). Though the
for writing instruction and practice twice a interventions were short in duration, the panel
week for an hour over seven months, in addi- believes that sustained additional instructional
tion to their regular instruction in writing.125 time could lead to continued improvements in
The study found that students assigned to the and maintenance of the promising results.
writing clubs demonstrated improvement on

Table D.1. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 1
Study Details

Analytic Sample Intervention Group (Dosage)129


Study Citation Size128 and
and Design127 Population Comparison Group131 Outcome, Effect Size130
Berninger et al. 90 students in 4th after-school writing clubs sentence structure,
(2006) grade who were at risk whole class in addition to regular instruction 0.63 (ns)
Study 4 (64 sessions, 60 minutes each)
RCT
regular classroom instruction

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Table D.2. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 1


Study Details

Analytic Sample Intervention Group (Dosage)134


Study Citation Size133 and
and Design132 Population Comparison Group136 Outcome, Effect Size135
Mason and Shriner 6 students in 2nd SRSD instruction with minor modifications Persuasive:
(2008) through 5th grade for students with behavioral challenges in genre elements,
SCD who were at risk addition to regular instruction positive effects
individual
(1113 sessions, 30 minutes each)
regular classroom instruction
Saddler et al. (2004) 6 students in 2nd SRSD instruction in addition to regular Story:
SCD grade who were at risk instruction genre elements,
pairs positive effects
(912 sessions, 25 minutes each)

regular classroom instruction

All of the studies cited as evidence of the Level of evidence: Strong Evidence
effectiveness of the practices recommended
in this guide noted the provision of time for The panel judged the level of evidence for
quality writing instruction, writing practice, Recommendation 2a and Recommendation
or both. The time required to implement the 2b, when implemented together, as strong
interventions varied (see Tables D.3, D.4, evidence. Altogether, 25 studies that meet WWC
D.5, D.6, D.7, and D.8, which summarize the evidence standards provide causal support for
evidence for Recommendations 2, 3, and 4). this multipart recommendation.137 The interven-
Dedicated writing time is needed in order tions tested in the studies were closely related
to implement the recommendations in this to those recommended by the panel, including
guide, and the panel believes this should be eight studies that tested an intervention contain-
at least 30 minutes per day for students in ing at least six of the eight practices in Recom-
kindergarten and at least an hour per day for mendation 2.138 The studies found predominantly
all other students in elementary school. positive effects on a range of outcomes; 18
studies found positive effects on overall writing
quality.139 One study reported mixed effects in
Recommendation 2. Teach students the overall writing quality domain, including
to use the writing process for a variety a substantively important negative effect at
of purposes. posttest.140 The panel cautions against drawing
strong conclusions from this study because the
The individual how-to steps are separated study itself tested only a minor modification to
into two sections because writing is a com- a comprehensive set of practices recommended
plex process and the steps needed to carry by the panel. Both the treatment and comparison
out this recommendation are numerous. Rec- groups received most of the practices recom-
ommendation 2a discusses teaching students mended by the panel, and both the treatment
how to apply the writing process, while Rec- and comparison groups improved at posttest.
ommendation 2b addresses teaching students Overall, this study demonstrates mixed effects
to write for a variety of purposes. Because for only one practice, explicit self-regulation
research has examined all of these steps in strategies. The studies were conducted in set-
combination, we describe the evidence sup- tings and among populations that mirror the
porting all of Recommendation 2 below. variety of settings and populations for which
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Appendix D (continued)

this guide is intended, including a wide range 30 percent components of the panels
of achievement levels, grades, and regional recommendation).
settings. The panel is confident that when
implemented together, the practices described All of the studies examined interventions that
in Recommendation 2a and Recommendation contained one or more practices described in
2b can be effective in improving a variety of Recommendation 2.
student writing outcomes, including the overall
quality of students writing. Supplemental For each group of studies, this section first
evidence comes from nine SCD studies.141 describes the general nature of the intervention
and then provides an example or two of the
Studies testing the effectiveness studies that tested it, focusing on those that
of instruction in strategies tested the intervention among a population of
typically achieving students in a whole-class
As a result of the large number of studies that instructional setting. Next, this section sum-
provide support for this recommendation, the marizes the effectiveness of all the studies in
panel grouped the studies into four categories that category, focusing primarily on measures
for discussion: of overall writing quality. When appropriate,
this section discusses how the effectiveness of
The first broad category of studies tested the the intervention varied when administered to a
effectiveness of self-regulated strategy devel- population that was at risk or when delivered
opment (SRSD), an intervention that typically outside of a whole-class setting. Finally, this
includes more than 70 percent of the com- section describes how minor variations in the
ponents of the panels recommendation, and intervention impacted its effectiveness.
minor modifications to this intervention.142
The panel believes it is important to implement
The studies in the second category exam- the practices in Recommendations 2a and 2b in
ined the effectiveness of interventions combination but notes that the studies varied
focused strictly on various types of goal in terms of how closely the intervention studied
setting, a component of the panels recom- aligns to the panels recommendation. Table D.3
mendation that has demonstrated consid- summarizes the characteristics of the studies
erable promise for improving students that contribute to the level of evidence rating
writing. Typically, goal-setting interven- for this recommendation and the components
tions contain fewer than 30 percent of the that are included in the intervention(s) tested
components of Recommendation 2. within each study.
The third category consists of studies that
fall in neither of the first two categories but The characteristics of supplemental studies
examine interventions that are moderately are included in Table D.4. These studies were
or closely aligned with the recommenda- rated using the WWC pilot standards for well-
tion. Studies that are moderately aligned designed SCD research. SCD studies alone
are those that contain at least 30 percent, cannot raise the level of evidence above mini-
but fewer than 80 percent, of the com- mal; however, they do provide supplemental
ponents of the panels recommendation; support for this recommendation, which is
studies that are closely aligned are those rated as strong evidence based on the group
that contain at least 80 percent of the com- design studies that appear in Table D.3. The
ponents of the panels recommendation.143 panel used the descriptions of the interventions
in the studies to identify the components of the
Similarly, the final category contains stud- recommendations included in each intervention,
ies that are not of SRSD or goal setting and relying on its expert knowledge of the inter-
are only partially aligned with the panels ventions and the research to supplement the
recommendation (containing fewer than descriptions when appropriate.
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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Studies testing the effectiveness of self-regulated strategy development (SRSD) on typically achieving students
Whole-class setting
Tracy, Reid, 120 students in SRSD instruction Story posttest: X X X X X X X
and Graham 3rd grade whole class overall writing quality,
(2009) 0.35 (ns)
(time unknown)
RCT genre elements, 0.70 (ns)
output, 0.54 (ns)
Transfer effects,
regular classroom narrative posttest:
instruction overall writing quality,
0.52 (ns)
genre elements, 0.72 (ns)
output, 0.52 (ns)
Small-group or paired setting
Glaser and 69 to 72 SRSD instruction Posttest: X X X X X X X
Brunstein students in (full model)151 overall writing quality,
(2007) 4th grade in small groups 1.20 (ns)
RCT Germany150 (4 sessions, 90 genre elements, 2.14*
minutes each) Maintenance effects
(5 weeks):
regular classroom overall writing quality,
instruction 1.62*
genre elements, 2.35*
Glaser and 69 to 72 SRSD instruction Posttest: X
Brunstein students in (full model) overall writing quality, 153

(2007) 4th grade in small groups 0.86 (ns)


RCT Germany152 (4 sessions, 90 genre elements, 1.49*
minutes each) Maintenance effects
(5 weeks):
SRSD instruction overall writing quality,
without self-regula- 1.07 (ns)
tion components genre elements, 2.28*
Studies testing the effectiveness of SRSD on students who were at risk
Whole-class setting
Curry (1997) 30 students in SRSD instruction in overall writing quality, X X X X X X
QED 4th grade who an inclusive 0.87 (ns)
were at risk setting154
whole class
(32 sessions; 45
minutes each)
Writers Workshop
in an inclusive
setting

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Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Small-group, paired, or individual setting
Garcia- 80 students SRSD instruction155 output, 2.49 (unknown)156 X X X X X X
Sanchez in 5th and 6th small groups
and Fidalgo- grade in Spain (25 sessions, 4555
Redondo who were minutes each)
(2006) at risk
RCT regular classroom
instruction
Graham, 24 pairs of SRSD instruction Story posttest: X X X X X X X
Harris, and students in plus peer support157 overall writing quality,
Mason (2005) 3rd grade who pairs 1.74*
RCT were at risk (60 sessions, 20 genre elements, 2.04*
output, 1.78*
minutes each)
Persuasive posttest:
overall writing quality,
1.75*
genre elements,
0.89 (ns)
output, 1.02 (ns)
Transfer effects,
narrative posttest:
regular classroom overall writing quality,
instruction 0.20 (ns)
genre elements, 1.38*
output, 0.19 (ns)
Transfer effects,
informative posttest:
overall writing quality,
0.82 (ns)
output, 0.97 (ns)
Maintenance effects
(10 weeks), story:
overall writing quality,
1.09*
genre elements, 1.42*
output, 0.54 (ns)

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Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Graham, 24 pairs of SRSD instruction Story posttest: X
Harris, and students in plus peer support overall writing quality,
Mason (2005) 3rd grade who pairs 0.22 (ns)
RCT were at risk genre elements,
(60 sessions,
0.69 (ns)
20 minutes each)
output, 0.39 (ns)
Persuasive posttest:
overall writing quality,
0.57 (ns)
genre elements, 1.17*
output, 0.82 (ns)
Transfer effects,
narrative posttest:
overall writing quality,
SRSD instruction 0.42 (ns)
only genre elements,
0.86 (ns)
output, 0.46 (ns)
Transfer effects,
informative posttest:
overall writing quality,
0.38 (ns)
output, 0.24 (ns)
Maintenance effects
(10 weeks), story:
overall writing quality,
0.22 (ns)
genre elements, 0.08 (ns)
output, 0.14 (ns)

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Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Harris, 22 pairs of SRSD instruction Story posttest: X X X X X X X
Graham, and students in plus peer support158 overall writing quality,
Mason (2006) 2nd grade who pairs 0.91 (ns)
RCT were at risk output, 1.01 (ns)
(2733 sessions,
genre elements, 4.94*
20 minutes each)
Persuasive posttest:
overall writing quality,
1.58* to 2.77*
genre elements, 1.14*
to 2.83*
output, 0.50 (ns) to 1.56*
regular classroom Transfer effects, narrative
instruction posttest:
overall writing quality, 0.20 (ns)
genre elements, 2.19*
output, 0.51 (ns)
Transfer effects, informative
posttest:
overall writing quality,
1.22*
output, 1.92*
Maintenance effects
(6 months), story:
overall writing quality, 1.21*
genre elements, 1.96*
output, 1.22*
Harris, 22 pairs of SRSD instruction Story posttest: X
Graham, and students in plus peer support overall writing quality, 0.14 (ns)
Mason (2006) 2nd grade who pairs genre elements, 0.46 (ns)
RCT were at risk output, 0.36 (ns)
(2733 sessions,
20 minutes each) Persuasive posttest:
overall writing quality,
0.38 (ns) to 0.44 (ns)
genre elements, 0.63 (ns)
to 0.87 (ns)
output, 0.19 (ns) to 0.06 (ns)
Transfer effects, narrative
posttest:
overall writing quality, 0.11 (ns)
genre elements, 0.89 (ns)
SRSD instruction output, 0.12 (ns)
only Transfer effects, informative
posttest:
overall writing quality,
0.64 (ns)
output, 0.05 (ns)
Maintenance effects
(6 months), story:
overall writing quality,
0.40 (ns)
genre elements, 0.23 (ns)
output, 0.21 (ns)

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Sawyer, 8 groups of stu- SRSD instruction Posttest:160 X X X X X X X
Graham, and dents in 5th and (full model)159 overall writing quality, 161

Harris (1992) 6th grade who small groups 0.00 (ns) to 0.63 (ns)
RCT were at risk genre elements, 0.84 (ns)
(average of 8
to 1.37 (ns)
sessions, averaging
40 minutes each) Maintenance effects (2 weeks):
overall writing quality,
direct instruction 0.46 (ns)
in strategies genre elements, 0.40 (ns)
Maintenance effects (4 weeks):
overall writing quality,
0.34 (ns)
genre elements, 0.22 (ns)
Sawyer, 8 groups of stu- SRSD instruction Posttest: X
Graham, and dents in 5th and (full model) overall writing quality, 162

Harris (1992) 6th grade who small groups 0.35 (ns) to 0.18 (ns)
RCT were at risk genre elements, 0.01 (ns)
(average of 8
to 0.54 (ns)
sessions, averaging
40 minutes each) Maintenance effects (2 weeks):
overall writing quality, 0.17 (ns)
SRSD instruction genre elements, 0.71 (ns)
(partial model) Maintenance effects
without self-regula- (4 weeks):
tion component overall writing quality,
0.81 (ns)
genre elements, 0.28 (ns)
Studies testing the effectiveness of goal-setting interventions on typically achieving students
Small-group or individual setting
Ferretti, 24 students in writing in response 4th grade:164 X X
Lewis, and 4th grade and to a prompt with overall writing quality,
Andrews- 24 students in specific goals 0.88*
Weckerly 6th grade163 related to the char- genre elements (average),
(2009) acteristics of good 0.10 (ns)165
RCT persuasive writing 6th grade:166
individual overall writing quality,
(1 session, 1.11*
45 minutes) genre elements
(average), 0.41 (ns)167
writing in response
to a prompt with-
out specific goals

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Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Schunk 30 students in product goals to Posttest: X
and Swartz 5th grade supplement instruc- overall writing quality,
(1993)168 tion in a general 1.49*
Study 1 planning strategy sentence structure, 0.21 (ns)
RCT small groups
(20 sessions,
45 minutes each)
general goal to sup-
plement instruction
in a general plan-
ning strategy
Schunk and 30 students in process goals to Posttest:169 X
Swartz (1993) 5th grade supplement instruc- overall writing quality,
Study 1 tion in a general 2.48*
RCT planning strategy sentence structure, 0.00 (ns)
small groups
(20 sessions,
45 minutes each)
general goal to sup-
plement instruction
in a general plan-
ning strategy
Schunk and 20 students in product goals to Posttest: X
Swartz (1993) 4th grade supplement instruc- overall writing quality,
Study 2 tion in a general 1.08*
RCT planning strategy sentence structure, 0.56
small groups (ns)
Maintenance effects
(20 sessions,
(6 weeks):170
45 minutes each)
overall writing quality,
general goal to sup- 1.19 (ns)
plement instruction sentence structure, 0.16 (ns)
in a general plan-
ning strategy
Schunk and 20 students in process goals to Posttest:171 X
Swartz (1993) 4th grade supplement instruc- overall writing quality,
Study 2 tion in a general 2.62*
RCT planning strategy sentence structure, 2.72*
small groups Maintenance (6 weeks):172
(20 sessions, overall writing quality,
45 minutes each) 1.74*
sentence structure, 2.47*
general goal
to supplement
instruction in a
general planning
strategy

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Studies testing the effectiveness of goal-setting interventions on students who were at risk
Whole-class setting
Ferretti, 57 students in writing in response 4th grade:174 X
MacArthur, 4th grade and to a prompt with overall writing quality,
and Dowdy 61 students in specific goals re- 0.05 (ns) to 0.12 (ns)
(2000) 6th grade, half lated to the char- 6th grade:175
RCT of whom were acteristics of good overall writing quality,
at risk173 persuasive writing 0.62* to 0.73*
whole class
(2 sessions, 45
minutes each)
writing in response
to a prompt with-
out specific goals
Midgette, 49 students in content goals overall writing quality, X
Haria, and 5th grade who for revising176 0.50 (ns)
MacArthur were at risk whole class genre elements (average),
(2008) 0.05 (ns)
(2 sessions;
RCT minutes unknown)
general goals
for revising
Midgette, 49 students in audience goals overall writing quality, X X X
Haria, and 5th grade who for revising 0.54 (ns)
MacArthur were at risk whole class genre elements
(2008) (average), 0.48 (ns)
(2 sessions;
RCT minutes unknown)
general goals
for revising
Midgette, 49 students in audience goals overall writing quality, X X X
Haria, and 5th grade who for revising 0.09 (ns) 177

MacArthur were at risk whole class genre elements


(2008) (average), 0.52 (ns)
(2 sessions;
RCT minutes unknown)
content goals for
revising
Individual setting
Graham, 39 students in goal to add overall writing quality, X
MacArthur, 4th through information178 0.75*
and Schwartz 6th grade who individual output, 0.51 (ns)
(1995) were at risk (2 sessions, no
RCT time restrictions)
goal to make
papers better

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Studies testing the effectiveness of moderately or closely aligned interventions on typically achieving students
Whole-class setting
Gordon and 54 students in instruction in Posttest: X X X
Braun (1986) 5th grade in narrative text genre elements, 0.28 (ns)
RCT Canada structure Maintenance effects
whole class (6 weeks):
(15 sessions, genre elements, 0.06 (ns)
60 minutes each)
instruction in
poetry structure
Guastello 167 students in instruction and overall writing quality, X X X
(2001) 4th grade179 practice using 1.27*
RCT rubrics to evaluate
writing
whole class
(time unknown)
regular classroom
instruction
Pritchard 1,284 students National Writing overall writing quality, X X X X
and Marshall in 3rd through Project tiered 0.39 (unknown)180 181

(1994) 6th grade staff-development


QED model
whole class
(time unknown)
regular classroom
instruction
Studies testing the effectiveness of moderately or closely aligned interventions on students who were at risk
Whole-class setting
MacArthur, 29 students in student-editor overall writing quality, X X X X X X
Schwartz, 4th through strategy within 1.42* 183

and Graham 6th grade who a process writing mechanics (average),


(1991) were at risk approach 0.43182
RCT whole class
(2432 sessions,
3045 minutes each)
process writing
approach only
Riley (1997) 114 students story grammar output, 1.03* X X X
RCT in 3rd through instruction184
5th grade who whole class
were at risk (18 sessions,
2030 minutes each)
process writing
approach

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Small-group or paired setting
Gambrell 40 students explicit story Story posttest: X X X
and Chasen, in 4th and 5th structure instruction genre elements, 0.86* 185 186 187

(1991) grade who small groups of organization, 0.90*


RCT were at risk 812 students
(3 sessions;
minutes unknown)
story structure
awareness
instruction
Garcia and de 99 students reflexive writing Descriptive: X X X X X
Caso-Fuertes in 5th and 6th process with output, 0.59*
(2007) grade in Spain strategies Narrative:
RCT who were at small groups of output, 0.64*
risk 68 students Essay:
(25 sessions, output, 0.57*
50 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Troia and 20 students highly explicit Story posttest: X X X X X X X
Graham in 4th and 5th strategy instruction overall writing quality, 189 190 191 192

(2002) grade who pairs 0.83 (ns)


RCT were at risk output, 0.09 (ns)
(7 sessions,
averaging 75 Persuasive posttest:
minutes each) overall writing quality,
0.48 (ns)
process writing output, 0.16 (ns)
instruction with pre-
Maintenance effects
instruction in the
(4 weeks), story:188
elements of a good
overall writing quality, 1.71*
story and essay,
output, 1.19 (ns)
including identify-
ing parts in a model
text193
(7 sessions,
averaging 77
minutes each)
Studies testing the effectiveness of partially aligned interventions on typically achieving students
Dressel 48 students in high-quality overall writing quality, X
(1990) 5th grade literature 0.48*
RCT whole class genre elements, 0.55*194
(49 sessions, 4560
minutes each)
lesser-quality
literature

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.3. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 2 (continued)
2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience148

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)146
Analytic
Sample Size145
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design144 Population Group149 Effect Size147
Studies testing the effectiveness of partially aligned interventions on students who were at risk and gifted
Whole-class setting
Berninger 90 students in after-school writing sentence structure, X X
et al. (2006) 4th grade who clubs 0.63 (ns) 195

Study 4 were at risk whole class in


RCT addition to regular
instruction
(64 sessions,
60 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Small-group or paired setting
Berninger 24 pairs of composing Informative: X
et al. (2002) students in instruction196 overall writing quality,
RCT 3rd grade who pairs 0.40 (ns)
were at risk (24 sessions, Persuasive:
20 minutes each) overall writing quality,
0.18 (ns)
keyboarding and
mechanics, 0.12 (ns)
writing practice
sentence structure, 0.14 (ns)
Jampole, 87 students imagery training197 Posttest: X
Mathers, and in 3rd and 4th small groups overall writing quality,
Konopak grade who 0.93*
(8 sessions,
(1994) were gifted ideation, 0.68*
45 minutes each)
RCT Maintenance effects (1 month):
writing practice
overall writing quality,
0.41 (ns)
ideation, 0.20 (ns)

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Table D.4. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 2


2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience202

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)200
Analytic
Sample Size199
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design198 Population Group203 Effect Size201
Studies testing the effectiveness of self-regulated strategy development (SRSD) on typically achieving students
Whole-class setting
Danoff, 3 students in SRSD instruction genre elements, X X X X X X X
Harris, and 4th and 5th whole class205 positive effects206
Graham grade204 (911 lessons;
(1993) minutes unknown)
SCD
regular classroom
instruction
Small-group or paired setting
Zumbrunn 6 students in SRSD instruction output, X X X X X X X
(2010) 1st grade pairs positive effects
SCD (1012 sessions,
2030 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Studies testing the effectiveness of SRSD on students who were at risk
Small-group, paired, or individual setting
Graham and 3 students in SRSD instruction Persuasive: X X X X X X X
Harris (1989) 6th grade who small groups genre elements,
SCD were at risk positive effects
(58 sessions,
40 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Graham et al. 4 students in SRSD instruction Persuasive: X X X X X X
(1992) 5th grade who individual genre elements,
207

SCD were at risk positive effects


(68 sessions,
40 minutes each)
preteaching in using
a word processor
and typing as well
as the elements of
a good story and
essay, including
identifying parts in
a model text
Lane et al. 6 students in SRSD instruction Story: X X X X X X X
(2008) 2nd grade who with minor modifi- genre elements,
SCD were at risk cations for students positive effects
with behavioral
challenges
individual
(1015 sessions,
30 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.4. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 2 (continued)


2b. Teach
2a. Teach Students to Write
Students the for a Variety
Study Details Writing Process of Purposes

Strategies

Gradual Release

Strategies
Select and Use
Flexible Use

Purpose

Audience202

Exemplary Texts

Techniques
Genre
Intervention
Group (Dosage)200
Analytic
Sample Size199
Study Citation and Comparison Outcome,
and Design198 Population Group203 Effect Size201
Lienemann 6 students in SRSD instruction Story: X X X X X X X
et al. (2006) 2nd grade who individual genre elements,
SCD were at risk positive effects
(68 sessions,
3045 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Mason and 6 students in SRSD instruction Persuasive: X X X X X X X
Shriner (2008) 2nd through with minor modifi- genre elements,
SCD 5th grade who cations for students positive effects
were at risk with behavioral
challenges in ad-
dition to regular
instruction
individual
(1113 sessions,
30 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Saddler 6 students in SRSD instruction Story: X X X X X X X
(2006) 2nd grade who pairs overall writing quality,
SCD were at risk positive effects
(1011 sessions,
30 minutes each) genre elements,
positive effects
regular classroom
output, positive effects
instruction
Saddler et al. 6 students in SRSD instruction in Story: X X X X X X X
(2004) 2nd grade who addition to regular genre elements,
SCD were at risk instruction positive effects
pairs
(912 sessions,
25 minutes each)
regular classroom
instruction
Troia, 3 students in SRSD instruction Story: X X X X X X X
Graham, and 5th grade who individual genre elements, 208

Harris (1999) were at risk positive effects


(7 sessions, 6090
SCD minutes each)
preteaching in the
elements of a good
story and essay,
including identify-
ing parts in a model
text and techniques
for story and essay
writing
(time unknown)

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Appendix D (continued)

Studies testing the effectiveness of self- often are used to model the elements of strong
regulated strategy development (SRSD). stories and persuasive pieces for students.
Seventeen of the studies examined interven- Students often read and respond to the writ-
tions labeled as SRSD.209 SRSD is an interven- ing of their peers to provide an audience for
tion that was originally developed to improve their writing. The instruction usually includes
the writing performance of struggling writers a component in which students discuss how
and has since been tested in a wide variety of they can select a strategy or technique to use
instructional settings among a variety of differ- in particular contexts, or how to adapt the
ent student populations. The intervention typi- strategy for use in other settings. In some
cally includes all of the separate components cases, peers provide support to assist students
recommended by the panel, with the excep- with applying the strategies in other settings.
tion of encouraging students to use strategies
flexibly. The intervention also emphasizes Studies of SRSD instruction, delivered to
teaching students the background knowledge typically achieving students in a whole-class
they need to use the strategies targeted for setting, showed uniformly positive effects on
instruction (one step in the gradual-release writing outcomes, including overall writing
process). Students often are taught general quality.210 For example, in one study, typically
strategies as well as techniques for writing achieving 3rd-grade students in a rural loca-
in one or more genres. In some studies, this tion received SRSD instruction in story writing
has involved teaching a general strategy for in a whole-class setting.211 The SRSD instruc-
planning writing, called POW, as well as spe- tion entailed instruction in a general strategy
cific techniques to frame writing for different (POW) for planning, organizing, and expanding
purposes, including WWW, TREE, or STOP and student ideas, as well as a technique (WWW)
DARE (the POW strategy and these techniques for including the seven parts of a good story in
are described in Recommendation 2). their writing. First, students practiced identify-
ing the parts of an exemplary story (included in
Throughout the instructional sequence, stu- the WWW strategy) and were explicitly taught
dents are taught different strategies to help how to apply the POW and WWW strategies
them navigate the writing process and to together. Students were taught when and
regulate their writing behavior. For example, how to use the strategies, and they were told
when writing a story, students often are taught that these strategies could be transferred to
to set goals for their writing (i.e., I will include other contexts. Teachers modeled how to use
all seven story parts in my text or I will write the strategies, and students practiced using
a story that is fun to read). The intervention the strategies collaboratively and later inde-
also can include teaching self-instruction or pendently. Throughout the instruction, the
things students can say to themselves to help teacher modeled and explained self-regulation
them write, including for self-evaluation (Does strategies, including setting a goal to include
what I wrote make sense?) and self-reinforce- all seven parts of a story in their writing and
ment (I used a great word!). Students practice graphing their progress toward meeting this
monitoring their performance by counting and goal. Students receiving SRSD instruction wrote
graphing the number of parts they include in stories with higher overall quality relative to
their writing. a comparison group that received regular
classroom instruction. Students who received
The strategies and techniques usually are instruction in SRSD also included more story
taught using gradual release of responsibility elements in their writing and produced more
until the students are able to write well for a text. The intervention also produced positive
specific purpose without support from their effects on the overall quality of students nar-
teacher, peers, or the graphic organizers and rative writing, a similar but uninstructed genre,
charts supplied to help them internalize the as well as the number of narrative elements
strategy. During instruction, exemplary texts and the quantity of text produced in this genre.

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Another study examined the effectiveness of of TREE) found positive effects on students
SRSD instruction for typically achieving sub- overall writing quality, the number of story
urban 4th- and 5th-grade students.212 Instruc- elements they included in their writing, and
tion covered the same strategies, techniques, the quantity of text they produced.219
and instructional components as the previous
study. The intervention was associated with The remaining studies that tested SRSD inter-
students including more story elements in ventions on students at risk for writing dif-
their writing than they did prior to receiving ficulties varied in the specific combination of
the intervention. strategies taught and contained minor varia-
tions in instruction, but the basic instructional
Two other studies examined the effectiveness model followed a similar pattern.220 They pro-
of SRSD instruction delivered to pairs or small duced almost universally positive effects on
groups of typically achieving students.213 In measures of overall writing quality as well as
one study of 4th-graders in Germany, small- genre elements and output. Across 13 studies
group instruction in SRSD produced positive of SRSD interventions among students with
effects on the overall quality of students learning disabilities, 10 showed consistently
writing, as well as the number of story ele- positive effects on all posttest outcomes that
ments they included in their writing, relative to met standards including overall writing qual-
students regular instruction.214 The study also ity,221 genre elements,222 and quantity of text
showed positive effects on students overall produced,223 as well as maintenance out-
writing quality and the number of story ele- comes224 and outcomes that tested transfer to
ments included on a maintenance test five other, uninstructed, genres of writing.225
weeks later.215 The other study took place in
a predominantly middle-class midwestern Two more studies tested the effectiveness
elementary school in the United States and of SRSD with an added peer-support compo-
produced positive effects on the quantity of nent relative to students regular classroom
text students produced.216 The effects of SRSD instruction.226 The peer-support component
instruction were larger when it was delivered was designed to help students apply SRSD to
to small groups or pairs of students. writing in other contexts. It involved students
discussing with the instructor when the
Other studies tested the effectiveness of strategy could be applied and how it could be
instruction in SRSD on students with learning adapted to a different context, setting goals
disabilities or otherwise at risk for writing and reminding their partner to use the strat-
difficulties.217 For example, in one study, an egy in another class, and discussing difficul-
instructor taught individual students general ties they encountered applying the strategies
strategies and a technique for persuasive in different contexts (these practices are
writing (TREE) using gradual release of described in Recommendation 2a, action step
responsibility until students could apply the 3). The studies showed positive effects on
technique independently.218 Participants also overall writing quality, genre elements, and
were taught to think about their audience and output in two genres (story and persuasive),
purpose for writing, self-regulation strategies as well as on the same measures (story only)
(such as self-evaluation and self-reinforce- at a maintenance test 10 weeks later, relative
ment) to improve their writing of exemplary to students who received their regular instruc-
texts, and how the technique could be tion in writing. However, positive effects on
modified for use in other writing projects. All measures of transfer to other, uninstructed,
participants were identified as students with genres were mixed with some instances of
learning disabilities. The intervention led stu- no effects. A final study examined the effec-
dents to include more persuasive elements in tiveness of instruction in SRSD compared
their writing. A similar intervention for story to direct instruction in strategies and found
writing (using the WWW technique instead positive effects on genre elements and no

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Appendix D (continued)

effects on overall writing quality.227 The panel addition, the study found a mix of positive
cautions that although the comparison group effects and no effects on measures of transfer
in this study did not receive the full SRSD to uninstructed genres. In short, the variation
intervention, it did receive instruction in the in peer support shows some promising results
strategies and techniques associated with for teaching students to apply these strategies
SRSD; therefore, smaller differences between and techniques to uninstructed genres of writ-
the two groups are expected. ing; however, the inconsistent findings suggest
that more study is needed to assess whether
Four studies examined how small variations these variations in peer support do indeed
impacted the effectiveness of SRSD in addi- improve writing quality.
tion to testing the effectiveness of the broader
intervention and found mixed effects on a vari- In another example of small variation to SRSD,
ety of outcomes.228 Because, for the most part, researchers compared the effectiveness of
these studies were small and tested only minor teaching strategies using the full SRSD model
modifications to the panels recommendation, relative to the effectiveness of teaching strate-
the panel cautions against drawing strong gies using only a partial, gradual release of
conclusions from this group of studies.229 responsibility for which the teacher did not
fully relinquish control of the strategies.233
For example, two studies tested the effective- Both interventions were delivered in small
ness of an SRSD instruction model plus a groups to 5th- and 6th-grade students. The
peer-support component (described above) full model produced negative effects on the
relative to SRSD alone.230 The peer-support overall quality of students writing at posttest,
component was designed to help students mixed with positive effects and no effects on
apply the writing strategies they learned to other outcomes measured at posttest and two
other settings and contexts. The modifica- different maintenance points.
tions (tested once on 3rd-graders and once on
2nd-graders) showed mixed effects on writing Finally, one study examined the effectiveness
outcomes. of the full SRSD model compared to instruction
in strategies without self-regulation strategies,
In the first study with a peer-support com- among 4th-grade students in Germany.234
ponent, there were positive effects on the Students who received the full model wrote
number of story elements students included higher quality stories with more story parts at
in students writing as well as the length of the posttest and at a maintenance test five weeks
stories they wrote; however, the peer-support later. Thus, the panel believes it is important to
components did not produce additional teach students both the strategies for specific
effects on story-writing quality and produced elements of the writing process and strategies
significant negative effects on students such as goal setting and self-assessment for
persuasive writing.231 The intervention also regulating their own writing.
produced positive effects on the quality of
students writing in two uninstructed genres: Studies of goal setting. Another cluster of
narrative and informative writing. studies examined interventions that tested
strategies and techniques related to goal
The other peer-support study again found pos- setting.235 These studies did not emphasize
itive effects on the number of story elements the other components of SRSD, although the
and the length of students stories, combined SRSD interventions often included a goal-
with no additional effects on story-writing setting component. Generally, the effects of
quality; however, this study found positive goal-setting interventions on overall writing
effects on the quality of students persuasive quality were positive, though effects on other
writing as well as the number of persuasive outcomes produced a mix of positive effects
elements they included in their writing.232 In and no effects.
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Appendix D (continued)

The interventions tested a variety of different Students in another study were tested individu-
types of goals. For example, some studies ally using a prompt, which required students to
tested setting goals for students to learn a spe- write a persuasive letter.242 The prompt included
cific strategy (learning goals),236 while others a set of goals for making students writing more
involved goals for students to include certain persuasive, such as You have to remember that
elements of a particular genre of writing in other people have different opinions about this
their pieces (specific goals).237 Some of the stud- issue, so you need to mention that other people
ies of specific goals also included components have a different opinion. Students in 4th and
designed to prompt students to consider the 6th grade receiving the specific goals wrote
audience for whom they were writing (audience higher quality text, relative to students who
goals).238 In all of the studies, students given received the same prompt without the specific
learning or specific goals were compared with goals for making their writing more persuasive.
students given more general goals (e.g., a goal The 6th-graders also included more elements of
to write a good piece). The panel believes that persuasive writing in their work.
goal setting is a powerful instructional tool to
help students regulate their writing progress Three other studies examined the effective-
and focus on the concrete things they can do ness of setting specific goals for students at
to write more effectively. risk for writing difficulties, and these goals
sometimes included specific prompts to help
In one study, typically achieving 5th-grade students consider the audience for their writ-
students were taught a general planning ing.243 Two of these studies tested goals for
strategy and given two different types revision of preliminary drafts.244
of goals designed to help them learn and
apply the strategy to their writing (learning In one study, the same intervention produced
goals).239 One group was told, While youre positive effects on 6th-graders overall writ-
working, it helps to keep in mind what youre ing quality, but the intervention produced no
trying to do. Youll be trying to learn how to effects for 4th-graders.245 Still another study
use these steps to write a descriptive para- tested specific goals with and without audi-
graph.240 The other group was told, While ence components and found that both had
youre working, it helps to keep in mind what positive effects on students overall writing
youre trying to do. Youll be trying to write quality.246 However, students in the group with
a descriptive paragraph.241 Both types of specific goals related to audience were more
goals helped students produce higher qual- effective at increasing the number of genre ele-
ity writing than students who received just ments included in their writing than students
a general goal to do their best in addition to with the specific goal without an audience
instruction in the planning strategy; however, component. A final study found that a goal
neither had an impact on the sentence quality to add three things to their papers to make
of participating students. Though both types them better when they revised their writing
of goals had an impact on students writing led students to write higher quality and longer
quality, the first goal was more effective at pieces, relative to students who were given a
improving students overall writing quality. general goal to make their papers better.247
This study was replicated among a group of
4th-grade students, and the authors contin- The panel cautions that authentic writing
ued to find positive effects of both types of experiences do not typically come with
goals on students overall writing quality at specific, predetermined goals. Thus, although
posttest and at a maintenance test six weeks initially providing specific goals for students
later. In this case, the goals also showed can be a useful instructional technique, stu-
mostly positive effects on students sentence dents eventually will need to learn to set their
structure, with the exception of the second own goals for their writing, with instructional
goal at a six-week maintenance test. supports removed.
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Appendix D (continued)

Studies of moderately or closely aligned Five more studies examined moderately or


interventions. Other studies examined closely aligned interventions among students
interventions that contained three or more at risk for writing difficulties.252 All but one253
components of Recommendations 2a and 2b showed consistently positive effects on all
(moderately or closely aligned) but did not fall writing outcomes, including writing qual-
into one of the previous large clusters of stud- ity. For example, one study examined the
ies.248 Studies of moderately aligned interven- effectiveness of a student-editor strategy for
tions delivered to typically achieving students revision and editing embedded in a process
in a whole-class setting produced positive writing approach.254 As part of the interven-
effects on the overall quality of students writ- tion, 4th- through 6th-grade students in a
ing and the number of elements they included suburban school district met with their peers
in their stories at posttest.249 For example, in and used a revising strategy to suggest
one study, classes of students learned how to and discuss possible improvements to one
use a rubric to self-evaluate their writing.250 anothers papers. Following revisions, student
Students and teachers first discussed the six pairs met again and used a checklist tool to
criteria assessed by the rubric (topic focus, suggest mechanical improvements. The strat-
organization, content, sentence structure, egies were taught using a gradual release of
language, and mechanics) and practiced responsibility, and teachers also modeled how
evaluating sample compositions on the dif- students could use the strategy to revise and
ferent criteria. Some elements of the rubric edit their own writing. The intervention led to
prompted students to think about their audi- positive effects on the overall quality of stu-
ence and purpose for writing. These students dents writing relative to a comparison group
wrote higher quality texts as assessed by the that received regular instruction in process
same rubric, compared to students who were writing. Both groups practiced using a word
not taught how to use the rubric. processor to type. The intervention also con-
tained engaging elements aligned with Rec-
In another study, 5th-grade students in Canada ommendation 4; the panel cannot determine
received instruction in narrative structure; whether the intervention would have had the
instructional components included a teacher same effects without those components.
modeling the composition of a narrative while
describing his or her thought processes.251 The A final study of a closely aligned intervention
instructor then guided the students through on students who were at risk, discussed in
discussion of a few narratives, including iden- greater detail in the later section on Recom-
tification of the story parts and flexibility of mendation 4, produced positive effects on
the story categories. Students practiced writ- the overall quality of students story writing
ing collaboratively as a class and generated at posttest, as well as the quality and quan-
ideas in small groups. This was followed by tity of their writing at a maintenance test four
practice composing narratives independently. weeks later, but there were negative effects
Students who received instruction in narra- on the quality of students persuasive writing
tive structure produced stories containing at posttest and no effects on two measures
more story elements compared to students of writing output (story and persuasive)
who received instruction in poetry following at posttest.255 The intervention condition
parallel procedures. At a maintenance test six involved several components of the panels
weeks later, there were no longer differences recommendation; however, the comparison
between the two groups. Though both groups condition also featured elements of Recom-
were instructed using a gradual release of mendations 2 and 4. The mixed effects are
responsibility and exemplary texts, the study not surprising, given that the effectiveness of
isolates the effectiveness of instruction in a some components of the panels recommen-
particular technique on the quality of writing in dations is being compared to the effective-
that particular genre. ness of others.

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Studies of partially aligned interventions. higher quality pieces with descriptions of


A final group of studies examined interven- more sensory categories (e.g., auditory, tactile)
tions that were only partially related to the compared to a group that practiced listening to
recommendations in this practice guide: those and discussing short stories and then practiced
interventions with fewer than 30 percent of composing. The intervention did not produce
the components of the panels recommenda- effects in ideation.
tions that did not fall into one of the previous
large clusters of studies.256 One study exam-
ined the effectiveness of using high-quality Recommendation 3. Teach students
exemplary texts compared to using low- to become fluent with handwriting,
quality texts as a model for student writing.257 spelling, sentence construction, typing,
Before the pretest, the teacher discussed the and word processing.
15 traits of high-quality literature (as defined
by the criteria for the selection of ALSC New- Level of evidence: Moderate Evidence
bery Medal winners and traits of the classical
detective genre) with students and applied The panel determined the level of evidence for
these traits to examples from stories and tele- this recommendation to be moderate evidence.
vision. During the first half of each session, The nine studies that contribute to the evi-
5th-grade students assigned to the interven- dence rating for this recommendation included
tion group listened to high-quality literature populations of students in 1st through 4th
as defined by the 15 traits, while students grade.261 Seven of the nine studies that pro-
in the comparison group listened to lesser vide support for this recommendation were
quality literature. Classroom discussions for conducted with students who were at risk for
both groups centered on how authors devel- writing difficulties,262 and all but two of the
oped the 15 traits. Students practiced brain- studies involved instruction provided to pairs
storming and developing their own detective or small groups of students.263 Supplemental
stories, but they were not explicitly told to evidence comes from one additional SCD
use the stories that had been read aloud as study.264 The panel cautions that the effects
models for their own writing. The interven- seen in these studies may not be replicated
tion produced positive effects on the overall when the intervention is provided to a whole
quality of students writing and the number class or if the instruction is not tailored to
of elements they included in their stories. areas of individual student need. However, the
panel believes similar effects would be seen in
Three more studies examined the effective- whole-class instruction with some tailoring of
ness of partially aligned interventions on instruction for individual students, such as pro-
populations of students at risk for writing viding handwriting instruction only to students
difficulties or on gifted students.258 The stud- struggling with handwriting.
ies produced generally positive effects on a
variety of measures, including overall writ- Studies of the handwriting and spelling
ing quality. However, in some cases, positive practices described in this recommendation
effects were mixed with no effects.259 For showed generally positive effects on students
example, in one study, gifted 3rd- and 4th- handwriting and spelling skills.265 The instruc-
grade students learned to close their eyes tion led students to write better sentences and
and listen to passages with rich descriptions sometimes to produce longer texts, providing
of sensory details.260 Students then visualized preliminary evidence that as students focus
what the passages were about and discussed less attention on handwriting and spelling,
their mental images with the class. After listen- they are able to concentrate on conveying
ing to the passages, the students practiced more of their ideas more effectively.266 How-
composing their own passages. The students ever, few studies tested the effect of these
who learned the strategy for visualizing wrote practices on the panels primary outcome,

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overall quality of students writing, and those There was evidence that instruction in sen-
that did found no evidence that handwriting tence-construction skills, focused on teaching
and spelling practices led to improvements. students to craft clear sentences based on
Moreover, the panels decision to limit eligible the conventions of Standard English, does
outcomes to those that included the pro- lead to improvements in the overall quality
duction of original text or norm-referenced of students writing.267 Because sentence-
standardized tests meant that there were few construction instruction emphasizes crafting
eligible measures of spelling and handwriting. strong sentences for the purpose of more
Yet the panel believes instruction in handwrit- effectively communicating the writers mean-
ing and spelling will help students produce ing to his or her audience, the panel views
higher quality writing, because as basic writ- the relation between sentence-construction
ing skills become second nature, students can instruction and overall writing quality as more
focus more of their attention on conveying direct than the relation between handwriting
their intended meaning. and overall writing quality.

Immediate effects of spelling and handwrit- Studies of word processing and typing inter-
ing on overall writing quality are unlikely for ventions on eligible outcomes were limited.
two reasons. First, though the panel believes One study found that practicing writing using
that instruction in these skills makes it easier a word processor led students to produce
for students to get their ideas written down, longer texts, but no other eligible measures
elementary students are likely to continue were assessed in the study.268
to face considerable challenges in spelling,
handwriting, and word processing following Table D.5 summarizes the studies cited to
a brief intervention. As students progress document the effectiveness of this recom-
from kindergarten to 6th grade, these skills mendation. The characteristics of one study
will gradually become more automatic, and that provides supplemental evidence for this
students will increasingly focus on the qual- recommendation are included in Table D.6.
ity of their writing. Moreover, freeing up The effects in these tables are separated into
students attention to focus on the quality direct effects, defined as effects on the spe-
of their writing is likely to be ineffective in cific writing skill targeted by the intervention,
increasing writing quality without instruction and generalization effects, defined as effects
and practice in the strategies and techniques on writing skills related to, but not directly
they can use to convey their ideas more targeted by, the intervention. The panel sepa-
effectively. Thus, instruction in basic writing rately examined the research on the effective-
skills should be accompanied by instruction in ness of instruction in handwriting, spelling,
tools for effective writing (Recommendation sentence construction, and typing and word
2), as well as time allotted to practice such processing for this recommendation.
skills and tools (Recommendation 1), in order
to produce gains in overall writing quality.

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.5. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 3
Study Details

Analytic Direct Effects: Generalization


Intervention Group (Dosage)271
Study Citation Sample Size270 Outcome, Effects: Outcome,
and Design269 and Population Comparison Group274 Effect Size272 Effect Size273
Studies testing the effectiveness of handwriting interventions
Berninger 40 students in 1st visual cue and memory retrieval no eligible measures sentence structure,
et al. (1997) grade who were at training 0.89*
RCT risk small groups (3)
(24 sessions, 20 minutes each)275
phonological awareness training
Denton, Cope, 38 students in 1st therapeutic practice in addition Memory: no eligible measures
and Moser through 4th grade to regular instruction276 handwriting
(2006) who were at risk small groups (up to 3) (mechanics), 0.17 (ns)
RCT (20 sessions, 30 minutes each) Dictated:
handwriting
regular classroom instruction (mechanics),
0.44 (ns)
Copied:
handwriting
(mechanics), 0.08 (ns)
Graham, 36 students in 1st supplemental handwriting program no eligible measures Posttest:
Harris, and grade who were at in addition to regular handwriting overall writing
Fink (2000) risk277 instruction quality, 0.04 (ns)
RCT individual output, 1.29*
sentence structure,
(27 sessions, 15 minutes each)
0.62 (ns)
phonological awareness training Maintenance effects
in addition to regular handwriting (6 months):
instruction sentence structure,
0.84*
Studies testing the effectiveness of spelling interventions
Berninger 47 students in 3rd training on alphabetic principle and no eligible measures output, 0.34*278
et al. (2000) grade who were at syllable awareness
Study 2 risk individual
RCT (24 sessions, 20 minutes each)
keyboard training and training on
alphabetic principle only
Berninger 24 students in 3rd spelling instruction279 spelling (mechanics), Informational:
et al. (2002) grade who were at pairs 0.21 (ns) overall writing
RCT risk quality, 0.08 (ns)
(24 sessions, 20 minutes each)
Persuasive:
keyboard training and writing overall writing
practice quality, 0.11 (ns)
Other:
sentence structure,
0.21 (ns)
Graham, 30 pairs of students in spelling instruction in addition to no eligible measures Posttest:
Harris, 2nd grade who were regular spelling instruction output, 0.42 (ns)
and Fink- at risk280 pairs sentence structure,
Chorzempa 0.77 (ns)
(48 sessions, 20 minutes each)
(2002) Maintenance effects
RCT math instruction in addition to regular (6 months):
handwriting instruction output, 0.06 (ns)
sentence structure,
0.58 (ns)

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Table D.5. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 3 (continued)
Study Details

Analytic Direct Effects: Generalization


Intervention Group (Dosage)271
Study Citation Sample Size270 Outcome, Effects: Outcome,
and Design269 and Population Comparison Group274 Effect Size272 Effect Size273
Studies testing the effectiveness of sentence-construction interventions
Fogel and Ehri 59 students in 3rd and exposure to text, explicit instruction no eligible measures output, 0.27 (ns)
(2000) 4th grade who were in Standard English conventions,
RCT at risk guided practice, and feedback281
whole class282
(2 sessions, total of 60 minutes)
exposure to text only
Saddler and 21 to 22 pairs of stu- sentence-combining instruction sentence structure, overall writing
Graham dents in 4th grade283 pairs 1.80* (MSW), quality,
(2005) (30 sessions, 25 minutes each) 1.45* (LSW)284 0.52 (ns, MSW),
RCT 0.51 (ns, LSW)
traditional grammar instruction output, 0.65
pairs (ns, MSW), 0.13
(ns, LSW)285
Studies testing the effectiveness of typing/word-processing interventions
Jones (1994) 20 students in 2nd magic slate word processor no measures output, 0.48*286
RCT grade large groups (10)
(4 weeks; time unknown)
regular classroom instruction

Table D.6. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 3


Study Details

Analytic Direct Effects: Generalization


Intervention Group (Dosage)289
Study Citation Sample Size288 Outcome, Effects: Outcome,
and Design287 and Population Comparison Group292 Effect Size290 Effect Size291
Studies testing the effectiveness of spelling interventions
Gettinger 4 students in 2nd direct instruction spelling, mixed no eligible measures
(1993) grade, half of whom individual effects293
SCD were at risk and half (24 sessions, 15 minutes each)
of whom were above
average invented spelling

Studies testing the effectiveness of sentence-construction interventions


Saddler, 6 students in 4th sentence-combining instruction sentence structure, overall writing
Behforooz, grade who were at pairs no effects quality, positive
and Asaro risk effects
(18 sessions, 25 minutes each)
(2008)
SCD regular classroom instruction

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Appendix D (continued)

Handwriting. Handwriting instructionspe- Researchers in a third study examined the


cifically instruction whereby students are effectiveness of individual or small-group
taught how to form letters, given opportunities handwriting instruction that included work-
for repeated practice in short sessions, and sheets to practice handwriting by copying, in
practice handwriting in the context of authen- response to dictation, and from memory, as
tic writing opportunitiescan lead to improve- well as practice applying handwriting skills
ments in spelling, sentence structure, and to real-life writing and writing for fun.297
writing output. Three studies provide causal Participants in the study were 1st- through
evidence for this component of the panels 4th-grade students who were at risk for
recommendation.294 In the first, urban and writing difficulties. Meanwhile, students in
suburban 1st-grade students who were at risk the comparison group received their regular
met individually with tutors, who administered in-class instruction. The intervention led to
lessons in the alphabet and modeled letter positive effects on a dictated scale of hand-
formation.295 This was followed by student writing ability but no effects on memory or
practice forming letters, sentence-copying and copied scales.
progress-tracking activities, and handwriting
fun, whereby students incorporated target Spelling. Explicit instruction in the under
letters into pictures or wrote letters in unusual lying patterns of words (e.g., phonological
ways. Students in the comparison condition awareness, spelling phonics, and morpho-
received instruction in phonological aware- logical spelling) can lead to achievement
ness. The intervention led to positive effects gains in spelling that transfer to other writing
on students sentence construction and writ- outcomes.298 Three studies examined inter-
ing output, but it produced no effects on the ventions in which students were taught the
overall quality of students writing. The posi- underlying patterns of words.299 In one study,
tive effects on sentence construction persisted 3rd-grade students who were at risk for spell-
at maintenance, six months later. ing difficulties received paired instruction in
morphological spelling, supplemented with
In a similar study, suburban 1st-grade students instruction in spelling phonics.300 The study
who were at risk for writing difficulties practiced found large positive effects on students
viewing letters marked with numbered arrows composition length compared to a compari-
and then covering them up and writing the son group that received only instruction in
letters from memory.296 Gradually, graduate spelling phonics. The authors reported that
student tutors increased the length of time the students in the treatment condition outper-
letters were covered before the students wrote formed students in the comparison condition
them from memory. Handwriting instruction on a measure of writing output.
took place for 10 minutes twice a week in small
groups. Students in the comparison group In another study, 3rd-grade students who
received instruction in phonological awareness. were at risk in an urban region received
Instruction in both groups was supplemented paired, explicit instruction in phonological
with practice composing and sharing work, awareness and spelling phonics.301 The con-
along with graphing progress throughout the trol group practiced writing and typing. The
intervention. Students in the intervention group intervention produced no effects on two mea-
outperformed students in the comparison group sures of overall writing quality. Standardized
on measures of sentence construction. The panel measures of spelling and sentence structure
believes that the effects reported for this study favored the treatment group but did not reach
and the previous study may underestimate significance or substantive importance.
the true impact of the intervention since the
phonological awareness training provided to In a third study, 2nd-graders who were at risk
the comparison group also would be expected in an urban region received paired instruction
to improve writing outcomes for students. in phonological awareness, spelling phonics,
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Appendix D (continued)

and morphological spelling using a variety of Sentence construction. Explicit instruction


activities including word sorting, word hunt- in sentence constructionalong with oppor-
ing, word spelling, phonics warm-up, and tunities to practice sentence-construction
word building.302 Students in the comparison skills within authentic writing experiences
group received math instruction. The inter- can produce positive effects on sentence
vention led to positive effects on a measure structure, writing output, and overall writing
of sentence structure at posttest and at quality.305 Two studies provide causal sup-
maintenance; however, it also found negative port for this practice.306 One study provides
effects on writing output at posttest. By the supplemental evidence for this practice.307
maintenance test, there were no effects on Two of the studies tested sentence-combining
writing output. interventions similar to those recommended
by the panel.308 The first compared the effec-
The panel also believes that instruction in tiveness of explicit instruction in sentence
the spelling of specific words can lead to combining, along with practice applying
improvements in writing quality. One study, sentence-combining skills to authentic writ-
described earlier, examined instruction in ing, to traditional grammar instruction, pri-
commonly used words, in addition to instruc- marily in parts of speech.309 Instruction was
tion in spelling skills including phonological delivered to pairs of 4th-grade students in an
awareness, spelling phonics, and morpho- urban location. Each pair included a more-
logical spelling.303 The results suggest that skilled writer and a less-skilled writer. At the
a spelling-instruction program that includes conclusion of the study, there were positive
instruction in spelling skills and word study effects favoring the intervention condition on
can produce positive effects on students writ- a standardized test of sentence construction
ing output and sentence structure. However, and on overall writing quality for both more-
the effectiveness of the word-study compo- and less-skilled writers. There were negative
nent alone cannot be isolated. Another study effects on writing output for the more-skilled
alternated individualized direct instruction writers; however, the panel did not view
in the spelling of specific words with instruc- these as problematic, because the purpose of
tion in invented spelling and found no effects combining sentences is to say the same thing
on spelling for three students and positive in fewer sentences.
effects for the direct instruction condition for
one student.304 The panel cautions against The second study examined the effectiveness
drawing conclusions from this study because of sentence-combining instruction that was
it compares the effectiveness of one inter- similar to the instruction in the first study
vention recommended by the panel to the but included a peer-support component for
effectiveness of another. The panel believes urban 4th-graders who were at risk.310 Writing
that both interventions are likely to improve samples collected following the intervention
students spelling outcomes and therefore showed positive effects on writing quality but
that the mixed effects are not surprising. no effects on sentence structure.

No studies that met WWC evidence standards A third study also supports the panels rec-
tested the effectiveness of instruction in using ommendation that instruction in applying
a dictionary, or spelling by analogy. However, standard conventions for sentence writing be
the panel believes instruction in these skills embedded in students own compositions.311
will help students when they are uncertain In the study, 3rd- and 4th-graders were
about how to spell specific words, and that exposed to stories modeling Standard English
teachers should build on a strong foundation features, provided exposure and instruc-
in phonological awareness, spelling phonics, tion on the rules of Standard English, and
and morphological spelling skills to develop given guided practice in applying the rules
these strategies. of Standard English to their writing. Students

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Appendix D (continued)

in the comparison condition received only of Recommendation 4 (see Tables D.7 and
story exposure. Though the instruction was D.8).314 Though the majority of the findings
delivered to the whole class, the researchers were positive,315 one study found negative
examined only the effects on African Ameri- effects as well as positive effects,316 and one
can students who displayed characteristics SCD study found no effect.317 The outcomes
of Black English Vernacular in their writing. included overall writing quality and writing
The group receiving the full intervention output. Researchers conducted the studies in
wrote longer stories at posttest than stu- 3rd- through 6th-grade classrooms, with two
dents exposed to stories only. Though this of the studies taking place in countries other
study involved a very specific population than the United States.318 The interventions
and type of sentence-construction instruc- tested in the studies varied in how closely
tion, the panel believes that the instructional they were aligned to the recommendation.
techniques could be adapted easily to other One study contained fewer than 30 percent of
sentence-construction lessons. the components the panel believes contribute
to the creation of an engaged community of
Typing and using a word processor. writers (partially aligned). Three contained at
Practice using a word processor can lead least 30 percent, but fewer than 80 percent,
to an increase in writing output over using of the components (moderately aligned),
pencil and paper.312 Second-grade students and two of the studies contained at least 80
practiced writing on a word processor, while a percent of the components (closely aligned).319
comparison group of students from the same
elementary school practiced using pencil and The panel cautions that although the studies
paper.313 After four weeks of practice, both meet WWC standards and primarily were deliv-
groups were assessed using pencil and paper, ered to the whole class, the findings may not
and the intervention group produced more be replicated in all settings. Because strategy
text. No studies that meet WWC evidence instruction was combined with practices con-
standards examined the impacts of typing tributing to an engaged community of writers
practice on writing outcomes. in four of the six studies, it is not possible to
determine how much of the effect is due to
the strategy instruction and how much of the
Recommendation 4: Create an engaged
effect is due to the building of a community of
community of writers.
engaged writers.320 One of the studies that did
not include strategy instruction found positive
Level of evidence: Minimal Evidence
effects on overall writing quality.321 Writers
who were at risk were the focus of three of
The panel assigned a rating of minimal evi-
the studies;322 however, the effects are similar
dence to this recommendation based on five
in magnitude for studies that did not focus on
studies that meet WWC standards with or
writers who were at risk.323
without reservations and include components

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.7. Studies that contribute to the level of evidence for Recommendation 4
Study Details Action Steps Tested

Teacher Participation

Writing Choices

Collaboration

Feedback

Publication

of Recommendation 2
Included Components
Intervention That
Study Tested an
Intervention Group
(Dosage)326

Analytic
Study Citation Sample Size325 Comparison Outcome,
and Design324 and Population Group328 Effect Size327
Curry (1997) 56 students in Writers Workshop overall writing X X X X X X
QED 4th grade who focused on process quality, 0.44 (ns)329
were at risk of writing in an
inclusive setting
whole class
(32 sessions,
45 minutes each)
skills-based direct
instruction
MacArthur, 29 students in student-editor overall writing X X X X
Schwartz, and 4th through 6th strategy quality, 1.42*330
Graham (1991) grade who were whole class
RCT at risk (68 weeks, no addi-
tional information on
dosage)
Writers Workshop
Pritchard and 1,292 students staff development by overall writing X X X
Marshall (1994) in 3rd through teacher consultants quality, 0.39
QED 6th grade in National Writing (unknown)331
Project
whole class
(no dosage
information)
regular classroom
instruction
Troia and 20 students in process writing Story posttest: X X X X X
Graham (2002) 4th through 5th instruction overall writing
RCT grade who were whole class quality, 0.83 (ns)
at risk output, 0.09 (ns)
(7 sessions, averaging
77 minutes each) Persuasive posttest:
overall writing
highly explicit strategy quality, 0.48 (ns)
instruction output, 0.16 (ns)
pairs Maintenance effects,
(7 sessions, averaging story (4 weeks):332
75 minutes each) overall writing
quality, 1.71*
output, 1.19 (ns)
Yarrow and 28 students who paired writing process: overall writing X X X
Topping (2001) were 10 and more-able writers tu- quality, 0.58 (ns)
RCT 11 years old in tored less-able writers
Scotland whole class
(24 sessions, no addi-
tional information on
dosage)
individual writing
process

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Appendix D (continued)

Table D.8. Supplemental evidence supporting the effectiveness of Recommendation 4


Study Details Action Steps Tested

Teacher Participation

Writing Choices

Collaboration

Feedback

Publication

of Recommendation 2
Included Components
Intervention That
Study Tested an
Intervention Group
(Dosage)335

Analytic
Study Citation Sample Size334 Comparison Outcome,
and Design333 and Population Group337 Effect Size336
Jerram, Glynn, 24 students in handwritten feedback writing output, X
and Tuck 5th grade in from the teacher, no effects
(1988) New Zealand focusing on content
SCD whole class
(116 sessions,
15 minutes each)
no written feedback
on content

Studies of interventions closely aligned in pairs.340 Students were writers in grade 4


with the panels recommendation or grade 5 who were at risk in a suburban
elementary school. Students in both the
Two studies examined interventions closely
process writing and strategy instruction
aligned with the panels recommendation,
groups received pre-instruction to familiar-
finding both positive and negative effects.338
ize them with the structure and elements of
The first study examined the effect of a
stories and persuasive essays. Students in the
Writers Workshop compared to skills-based
process writing group reviewed and received
instruction for writers who were at risk in
direct instruction in the four steps of writing:
4th grade in an urban school district.339 A
drafting, revising, proofreading and editing,
Writers Workshop typically involves teacher
and publishing. The teacher modeled using
participation in writing; student choice of top-
the four steps to write a story. Each student
ics; students review of one anothers work,
collaborated with the teacher to write a story,
providing opportunities for feedback and
which was shared with a partner for feedback,
collaboration; and publishing of writing. The
revised, and ultimately published in a bound
intervention tested included teacher participa-
portfolio. The researchers found positive
tion, student choice of topics, peer editing,
effects on overall writing quality for persuasive
teacher conferencinga form of feedback
essays immediately following the interven-
and publishing of class books. Compared to
tion. Negative effects were found for overall
students receiving skills-based direct instruc-
story-writing quality immediately following the
tion, a program that emphasized spelling,
intervention and four weeks later for overall
punctuation, capitalization, and grammar, the
story-writing quality and story output. The
Writers Workshop students produced higher
panel cautions that the negative effects were
quality writing. However, the intervention also
observed when the engaging practices were
involved the use of a process approach to
compared to instruction in specific writing
writing whereby students moved through the
strategies, an approach that is closely aligned
elements of the writing process flexibly, a key
to practices addressed in Recommendation 2
component of Recommendation 2.
and that also included some engaging ele-
The second study estimated the impact of ments. The panel recommends providing an
a process writing approach compared to engaged community of writers in addition to,
highly explicit strategy instruction delivered not instead of, practices in Recommendation 2.

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Appendix D (continued)

Studies of interventions training in their classrooms; researchers


moderately aligned with the panels reported statistically significant differences in
recommendation the frequency of the use of 9 of 13 practices
between the trained and nontrained teach-
Researchers examined interventions mod-
ers, including that trained teachers used peer
erately aligned with the panels recommen-
groups and published student writing more
dation in three studies and found positive
often. However, only 40 percent of trained
effects on overall writing quality.341 Students
teachers and 19 percent of untrained teachers
identified as writers who were at risk in
responded to the survey, and the WWC could
suburban 4th-grade through 6th-grade class-
not confirm that differences were statisti-
rooms learned to use structured peer meetings
cally significant. The panel cautions that the
within a Writers Workshop classroom.342 The
emphasis on engaging practices was only
intervention included opportunities for student
part of a broad intervention; therefore, it is
choice of topics, collaboration, and feedback.
impossible to determine whether the differ-
Pairs of students held two meetings. The first
ences between the two groups resulted from
meeting focused on substantive revisions that
the engaging practices emphasized by the
could be made in their work. Students were
National Writing Project.
given specific instructions to do the follow-
ing: listen and read along as the author read
Researchers in Scotland examined the effec-
aloud, discuss what the paper was about and
tiveness of paired writing with structured
what the editor/listener liked best, reread the
interaction and paired writing without interac-
paper quietly and make notes about revision
tion for 10- and 11-year-old students.345 Both
questions, and discuss the editors sugges-
groups of students were trained in paired
tions with the author. In the second meeting,
writing, including specific roles to facilitate
students focused on correction of mechani-
peer-assisted learning through prompting.
cal errors in the writing. Teachers provided
Students in the intervention group were paired
a checklist focusing on four common errors:
and assigned specific roles. The control group
complete sentences, capitalization, punc-
worked in pairs only for the training sessions
tuation, and spelling. The students in this
and practiced writing individually. Follow-
student-editor group produced higher quality
ing the intervention, students were assessed
papers than students who participated in the
individually; students who practiced writing
Writers Workshop without these structured
in pairs wrote higher quality pieces than their
opportunities for collaboration.343
peers who practiced writing individually.
Another study examined the effect of teacher
Studies of interventions partially aligned
professional development on the writing of
with the panels recommendation
students attending grade 3 through grade 6
in urban, suburban, and rural districts.344 The Researchers conducted a study in which the
intervention involved teachers training other amount of teacher feedback varied for 5th-
teachers in writing techniques associated grade students in suburban New Zealand.346
with the National Writing Project. A year after The intervention tested the impact on writing
the professional development, the research- output when the teacher provided detailed
ers reported that students taught by trained written comments on the students writing
intervention teachers had higher quality nightly, compared to writing output when
writing than students taught by teachers who the teacher told students she was too busy to
were not trained. At that time, the teachers provide comments on their writing. The study
completed a survey that focused on whether showed no evidence of an effect.
they used the practices emphasized in the

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Endnotesa
1. Following WWC guidelines, improved out- http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/documentsum.
comes are indicated by either a positive aspx?sid=19. Twenty studies were eligible
statistically significant effect or a positive, for review against the WWC pilot standards
substantively important effect size. The for well-designed SCD research. Thirteen
WWC defines substantively important, or of these studies met the pilot standards for
large, effects on outcomes to be those well-designed SCD research, and 11 were
with effect sizes greater than 0.25 stan- included as supplemental evidence for the
dard deviations. See the WWC guidelines at recommendations in this guide. While group
http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/DocumentSum. design studies (RCTs and QEDs) contribute
aspx?sid=19. to the level of evidence rating for a recom-
2. For more information, see the WWC Fre- mendation, SCD studies cannot raise the
quently Asked Questions page for practice level of evidence above minimal.
guides, http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/Docu- 12. National Commission on Writing (2003).
ment.aspx?sid=15. For an example of a study that includes the
3. Studies include randomized controlled tri- provision of additional time for writing, see
als (RCTs) and quasi-experimental designs Berninger et al. (2006), experiment 4.
(QEDs). Studies not contributing to levels of 13. Cutler and Graham (2008); Graham et al.
evidence include single-case designs (SCDs) (2003).
evaluated with WWC pilot SCD standards 14. Berninger et al. (2006) reported the
and regression discontinuity designs (RDDs) results of four experiments; the evidence
evaluated with pilot RDD standards. related to this recommendation comes from
4. The research may include studies generally experiment 4. Mason and Shriner (2008)
meeting WWC standards and supporting and Saddler et al. (2004), reviewed with the
the effectiveness of a program, practice, or WWC pilot standards for well-designed SCD
approach with small sample sizes and/or research, provide supplemental evidence for
other conditions of implementation or analy- this recommendation.
sis that limit generalizability. The research 15. The time required to implement the interven-
may include studies that support the gen- tions is noted in Tables D.3, D.4, D.5, D.6,
erality of a relation but do not meet WWC D.7, and D.8 which summarize the evidence
standards; however, they have no major for Recommendations 2, 3, and 4.
flaws related to internal validity other than 16. Tierney and Shanahan (1991).
lack of demonstrated equivalence at pretest
17. Curry (1997); Danoff, Harris, and Gra-
for QEDs. QEDs without equivalence must
ham (1993); Garcia and de Caso-Fuertes
include a pretest covariate as a statistical
(2007); Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-
control for selection bias. These studies
Redondo (2006); Glaser and Brunstein
must be accompanied by at least one rel-
(2007); Graham and Harris (1989); Graham,
evant study meeting WWC standards.
Harris, and Mason (2005); Graham,
5. American Educational Research Association, MacArthur, and Schwartz (1995); Graham
American Psychological Association, and et al. (1992); Guastello (2001); Harris,
National Council on Measurement in Educa- Graham, and Mason (2006); Jampole,
tion (1999). Mathers, and Konopak (1994); Lane et al.
6. National Commission on Writing (2003), p. 11. (2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); MacArthur,
7. National Commission on Writing (2004). Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Mason
8. Graham (1982). and Shriner (2008); Pritchard and Mar-
9. Salahu-Din, Persky, and Miller (2008). shall (1994); Riley (1997); Saddler (2006);
Saddler et al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham,
10. National Commission on Writing (2003).
and Harris (1992); Schunk and Swartz
11. Reviews of studies for this practice guide (1993); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009);
applied WWC Version 2.0 standards. See
a
Eligible studies that meet WWC evidence standards or meet evidence standards with reservations are indicated by bold text in the
endnotes and references pages. For more information about these studies, please see Appendix D.

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Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, Garcia and de Caso-Fuertes (2007);
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo
18. Curry (1997); Danoff, Harris, and Gra- (2006); Glaser and Brunstein (2007);
ham (1993); Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo- Graham and Harris (1989); Graham, Harris,
Redondo (2006); Gambrell and Chasen and Mason (2005); Graham et al. (1992);
(1991); Glaser and Brunstein (2007); Guastello (2001); Harris, Graham, and
Gordon and Braun (1986); Graham and Mason (2006); Lane et al. (2008); Liene-
Harris (1989); Graham, Harris, and Mason mann et al. (2006); MacArthur, Schwartz,
(2005); Graham et al. (1992); Harris, Gra- and Graham (1991); Mason and Shriner
ham, and Mason (2006); Lane et al. (2008); Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur
(2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); MacArthur, (2008); Pritchard and Marshall (1994);
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Mason and Saddler (2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Saw-
Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler et yer, Graham, and Harris (1992); Tracy,
al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris Reid, and Graham (2009); Troia and
(1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009); Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, and Harris
Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, (1999); Zumbrunn (2010).
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). 22. Berninger et al. (2002); Berninger et al.
19. Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Garcia (2006); Curry (1997); Danoff, Harris, and
and de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Garcia- Graham (1993); Dressel (1990); Ferretti,
Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly (2009);
Glaser and Brunstein (2007); Graham Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy (2000);
and Harris (1989); Graham, Harris, and Gambrell and Chasen (1991); Garcia and
Mason (2005); Graham et al. (1992); Har- de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Garcia-Sanchez
ris, Graham, and Mason (2006); Lane et and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Glaser and
al. (2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); MacAr- Brunstein (2007); Gordon and Braun
thur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991); (1986); Graham and Harris (1989); Graham,
Mason and Shriner (2008); Pritchard and Harris, and Mason (2005); Graham et
Marshall (1994); Saddler (2006); Saddler et al. (1992); Harris, Graham, and Mason
al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris (2006); Lane et al. (2008); Lienemann et al.
(1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009); (2006); Mason and Shriner (2008); Midgette,
Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, Haria, and MacArthur (2008); Pritchard
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). and Marshall (1994); Riley (1997); Sad-
20. Curry (1997); Danoff, Harris, and Gra- dler (2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Sawyer,
ham (1993); Garcia and de Caso-Fuertes Graham, and Harris (1992); Tracy, Reid,
(2007); Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo- and Graham (2009); Troia and Graham
Redondo (2006); Glaser and Brunstein (2002); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999);
(2007); Graham and Harris (1989); Gra- Zumbrunn (2010).
ham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Graham 23. Berninger et al. (2002); Berninger et al.
et al. (1992); Guastello (2001); Harris, (2006); Curry (1997); Dressel (1990);
Graham, and Mason (2006); Lane et al. Ferretti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly
(2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); MacArthur, (2009); Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Mason (2000); Gambrell and Chasen (1991);
and Shriner (2008); Midgette, Haria, and Garcia and de Caso-Fuertes (2007);
MacArthur (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo
et al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris (2006); Glaser and Brunstein (2007)
(1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009); [two tests]; Gordon and Braun (1986);
Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005) [two
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). tests]; Graham, MacArthur, and Schwartz
21. Berninger et al. (2006); Curry (1997); (1995); Guastello (2001); Harris, Gra-
Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Ferretti, ham, and Mason (2006) [two tests]; Jam-
Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly (2009); pole, Mathers, and Konopak (1994);

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MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991); (1995); Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur
Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008) (2008); Schunk and Swartz (1993).
[three tests]; Pritchard and Marshall 28. Schunk and Swartz (1993).
(1994); Riley (1997); Sawyer, Graham, 29. Gambrell and Chasen (1991); Garcia and
and Harris (1992) [two tests]; Schunk de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Gordon and
and Swartz (1993) [article summarizes two Braun (1986); Guastello (2001); MacAr-
studies, each with two tests]; Tracy, Reid, thur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991);
and Graham (2009); Troia and Graham Pritchard and Marshall (1994); Riley
(2002). Supplemental evidence comes from (1997); Troia and Graham (2002).
10 studies that tested the practices in this
30. Gordon and Braun (1996); Guastello
recommendation and met the WWC pilot
(2001); Pritchard and Marshall (1994).
standards for well-designed SCD research:
Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Graham 31. Berninger et al. (2002); Berninger et
and Harris (1989); Graham et al. (1992); Lane al. (2006); Dressel (1990); Jampole,
et al. (2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Mason Mathers, and Konopak (1994).
and Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler 32. Dressel (1990).
et al. (2004); Troia, Graham, and Harris 33. For examples of studies that include practices
(1999); Zumbrunn (2010). recommended for teaching strategies, see
24. Self-regulated strategy development (SRSD) Curry (1997); Danoff, Harris, and Graham
is an approach to writing instruction consist- (1993); Garcia and de Caso-Fuertes (2007);
ing of a set of practices. While SRSD is not a Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo
branded product that can be purchased, it (2006); Glaser and Brunstein (2007);
should be noted that Dr. Graham has authored Graham and Harris (1989); Graham, Harris,
books that provide guidance for teachers on and Mason (2005); Graham, MacArthur,
implementing SRSD, and he receives royalties and Schwartz (1995); Graham et al. (1992);
from the sale of those books. Furthermore, Guastello (2001); Harris, Graham, and
Dr. Grahams wife, Karen Harris, developed Mason (2006); Jampole, Mathers, and
SRSD, and Dr. Graham has authored evalua- Konopak (1994); Lane et al. (2008); Liene-
tions of SRSD. See Appendix C for disclosure mann et al. (2006); MacArthur, Schwartz,
of potential conflicts of interest. and Graham (1991); Mason and Shriner
25. Studies that contribute to the level of evi- (2008); Pritchard and Marshall (1994);
dence: Curry (1997); Garcia-Sanchez and Riley (1997); Saddler (2006); Saddler et
Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Glaser and al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris
Brunstein (2007); Graham, Harris, and (1992); Schunk and Swartz (1993); Tracy,
Mason (2005); Harris, Graham, and Reid, and Graham (2009); Troia and
Mason (2006); Sawyer, Graham, and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, and Harris
Harris (1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (1999); Zumbrunn (2010).
(2009). Supplemental evidence: Danoff, 34. Unless otherwise indicated, many of these
Harris, and Graham (1993); Graham and Har- strategies are taken or adapted from Graham
ris (1989); Graham et al. (1992); Lane et al. and Harris (2005).
(2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Mason and 35. Adapted from MacArthur, Schwartz, and
Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler et Graham (1991).
al. (2004); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999); 36. Adapted from MacArthur, Schwartz, and
Zumbrunn (2010). Graham (1991).
26. Study that contributes to the level of evi- 37. For examples of studies that include prac-
dence: Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009). tices recommended for using a gradual
Supplemental evidence: Danoff, Harris, and release of responsibility, see Curry (1997);
Graham (1993). Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Garcia-
27. Ferretti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006);
(2009); Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy Gambrell and Chasen (1991); Glaser and
(2000); Graham, MacArthur, and Schwartz Brunstein (2007); Gordon and Braun

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(1986); Graham and Harris (1989); Graham, 44. For examples of studies that include prac-
Harris, and Mason (2005); Graham et al. tices recommended for teaching different
(1992); Harris, Graham, and Mason (2006); purposes of writing, see Curry (1997);
Lane et al. (2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Garcia
MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991); and de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Garcia-
Mason and Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006);
Saddler et al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Glaser and Brunstein, (2007); Graham
Harris (1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham and Harris (1989); Graham, Harris, and
(2009); Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Mason (2005); Graham et al. (1992); Guas-
Graham, and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). tello (2001); Harris, Graham, and Mason
38. Graphic adapted from Duke and Pearson (2006); Lane et al (2008); Lienemann et
(2002) in Shanahan et al. (2010). al. (2006); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
39. For examples of studies that include prac- Graham (1991); Mason and Shriner (2008);
tices recommended for discussing when Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008);
and how to use strategies, see Danoff, Har- Saddler (2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Saw-
ris, and Graham (1993); Garcia-Sanchez yer, Graham, and Harris (1992); Tracy,
and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Glaser Reid, and Graham (2009); Troia and
and Brunstein (2007); Graham and Har- Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, and Harris
ris (1989); Graham, Harris, and Mason (1999); Zumbrunn (2010).
(2005); Graham et al. (1992); Harris, 45. Purposes from The Writing Site (2008).
Graham, and Mason (2006); Lane et al. 46. For examples of studies that include prac-
(2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); MacArthur, tices recommended for teaching students
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Mason and the concept of audience, see Berninger et
Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler et al. (2006); Curry (1997); Danoff, Harris,
al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris and Graham (1993); Ferretti, Lewis, and
(1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009); Andrews-Weckerly (2009); Garcia and
Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Garcia-Sanchez
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Glaser
40. For examples of studies that include prac- and Brunstein (2007); Graham and Har-
tices recommended for setting goals to ris (1989); Graham, Harris, and Mason
use strategies in different contexts, see (2005); Graham et al. (1992); Guastello
Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Har- (2001); Harris, Graham, and Mason
ris, Graham, and Mason (2006); Saddler (2006); Lane et al. (2008); Lienemann et
(2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Troia, Graham, al. (2006); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
and Harris (1999). Graham (1991); Mason and Shriner (2008);
41. For examples of studies that include prac- Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008);
tices recommended for teaching students Pritchard and Marshall (1994); Saddler
to evaluate their success using strategies (2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Sawyer, Gra-
in other contexts, see Graham, Harris, ham, and Harris (1992); Tracy, Reid,
and Mason (2005); Harris, Graham, and and Graham (2009); Troia and Graham
Mason (2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Troia, (2002); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999);
Graham, and Harris (1999). Zumbrunn (2010).
42. For examples of studies that include prac- 47. For examples of studies that include the
tices recommended for teaching students use of exemplary texts, see Curry (1997);
to use the components of the writing pro- Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Dressel
cess flexibly, see Garcia-Sanchez and (1990); Gambrell and Chasen (1991);
Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); MacArthur, Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-Redondo
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Pritchard (2006); Glaser and Brunstein (2007);
and Marshall (1994). Gordon and Braun (1986); Graham
and Harris (1989); Graham, Harris, and
43. Adapted from Gatlin and Krebs (1992).
Mason (2005); Graham et al. (1992); Harris,

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Graham, and Mason (2006); Lane et al. 58. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et al.
(2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Mason and (2000); Berninger et al. (2002); Denton,
Shriner (2008); Pritchard and Marshall Cope, and Moser (2006); Fogel and
(1994); Riley (1997); Saddler (2006); Saddler Ehri (2000); Graham, Harris, and Fink-
et al. (2004); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris Chorzempa (2002); Graham, Harris,
(1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009); and Fink (2000); Jones (1994); Saddler
Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, and Graham (2005). Supplemental evi-
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010). dence comes from Gettinger (1993) and
48. Hutchins (1968). Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008), both
49. Lyon (1999), p. 3. of which meet the WWC pilot standards
for well-designed SCD research. The first
50. Reprinted with permission from Pipp (2010).
study compared the effectiveness of direct
51. For examples of studies that include prac- instruction in spelling specific words to
tices recommended for teaching genre instruction in invented spelling and found
techniques, see Berninger et al. (2002); mixed effects. The second study tested
Berninger et al. (2006); Curry (1997); sentence construction interventions and
Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993); Fer- demonstrated positive effects mixed with
retti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly no effects.
(2009); Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy
59. Berninger et al. (1997); Denton, Cope,
(2000); Gambrell and Chasen (1991);
and Moser (2006); Graham, Harris, and
Garcia and de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Gla-
Fink (2000).
ser and Brunstein (2007); Gordon and
Braun (1986); Graham and Harris (1989); 60. Berninger et al. (2000); Berninger et
Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Har- al. (2002); Graham, Harris, and Fink-
ris, Graham, and Mason (2006); Lane et Chorzempa (2002).
al. (2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Mason 61. Fogel and Ehri (2000); Saddler and
and Shriner (2008); Midgette, Haria, and Graham (2005).
MacArthur (2008); Riley (1997); Sad- 62. Jones (1994).
dler (2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Sawyer, 63. Berninger et al. (2000); Denton, Cope,
Graham, and Harris (1992); Tracy, Reid, and Moser (2006); Fogel and Ehri (2000);
and Graham (2009); Troia and Graham Jones (1994); Saddler and Graham (2005).
(2002); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999); 64. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et al.
Zumbrunn (2010). (2000); Denton, Cope, and Moser (2006);
52. Graham and Harris (1989); Graham, Harris, Fogel and Ehri (2000); Graham, Harris,
and Mason (2005); Harris, Graham, and and Fink-Chorzempa (2002); Graham,
Mason (2006); Mason and Shriner (2008). Harris, and Fink (2000); Jones (1994);
53. Troia and Graham (2002); Troia, Graham, Saddler and Graham (2005).
and Harris (1999). 65. Positive effects mixed with no effects: Den-
54. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et ton, Cope, and Moser (2006); Graham,
al. (2000); Fogel and Ehri (2000); Get- Harris, and Fink (2000). Positive effects
tinger (1993); Graham, Harris, and Fink- mixed with negative effects: Graham, Har-
Chorzempa (2002); Graham, Harris, and ris, and Fink-Chorzempa (2002); Saddler
Fink (2000); Jones (1994); McCutcheon and Graham (2005).
(1995); Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008); 66. Berninger et al. (2002).
Saddler and Graham (2005). 67. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et al.
55. Graham and Harris (2000); McCutchen, (2000); Berninger et al. (2002); Denton,
Covill, Hoyne, and Mildes (1994). Cope, and Moser (2006); Fogel and
56. Graham, Berninger, Abbott, Abbott, and Ehri (2000); Graham, Harris, and Fink-
Whittaker (1997). Chorzempa (2002); Graham, Harris, and
57. Graham (1999). Fink (2000).
68. Fogel and Ehri (2000); Jones (1994).

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69. Graham and Weintraub (1996). 96. Jones (1994).


70. Ibid. 97. Gambrell, Malloy, and Mazzoni (2007).
71. Berninger et al. (1997); Denton, Cope, 98. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
and Moser (2006); Graham, Harris, and Graham (1991); Pritchard and Marshall
Fink (2000). (1994); Troia and Graham (2002); Yar-
72. Berninger et al. (1997); Denton, Cope, row and Topping (2001). Supplemental
and Moser (2006). evidence for this recommendation also
73. Berninger et al. (1997); Denton, Cope, comes from Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988),
and Moser (2006); Graham, Harris, and reviewed with the WWC pilot standards for
Fink (2000). well-designed SCD research.
74. Graham, Harris, and Loynachan (1993) con- 99. Mixed effects: Troia and Graham (2002).
tains a list of the words most frequently One SCD study demonstrated no effects
used by elementary-grade students. For on writing output: Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck
a longer list of words frequently used by (1988).
elementary-grade students, see Farr, Kelleher, 100. Curry (1997); Troia and Graham (2002).
Lee, and Beverstock (1989). 101. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
75. Graham, Harris, and Fink-Chorzempa Graham (1991).
(2002). 102. Curry (1997); Pritchard and Marshall
76. Berninger et al. (2000); Berninger et (1994); Troia and Graham (2002); Yar-
al. (2002); Graham, Harris, and Fink- row and Topping (2001).
Chorzempa (2002). 103. Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988) included
77. Gettinger (1993). teacher feedback. Curry (1997); MacAr-
78. Graham, Harris, and Fink-Chorzempa thur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991);
(2002). Pritchard and Marshall (1994); Troia
and Graham (2002); and Yarrow and
79. Berninger et al. (2002).
Topping (2001) included peer feedback.
80. Englert, Hiebert, and Stewart (1985).
104. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz,
81. Graham (1999). and Graham (1991); Troia and Graham
82. Fogel and Ehri (2000); Saddler, Behforooz, (2002); Yarrow and Topping (2001).
and Asaro (2008); Saddler and Graham 105. Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988) took place in
(2005). New Zealand; Yarrow and Topping (2001)
83. Saddler and Graham (2005). took place in Scotland.
84. Fogel and Ehri (2000). 106. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
85. Fogel and Ehri (2000); Saddler, Behforooz, Graham (1991); Pritchard and Marshall
and Asaro (2008); Saddler and Graham (1994); Yarrow and Topping (2001).
(2005). 107. Troia and Graham (2002) found positive
86. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008); Saddler effects on writing quality immediately after
and Graham (2005). the intervention; negative effects on writ-
87. Saddler and Asaro-Saddler (2009). ing quality were found four weeks after the
88. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008). initial post-intervention assessment.
89. Saddler (2005); Saddler and Graham (2005). 108. Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988).
90. Saddler and Graham (2005). 109. For an example of a study that include
91. Neman (1995). teachers participating as members of the
community, see Curry (1997).
92. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008); Saddler
and Graham (2005). 110. For an example of a study that includes
student choice in writing assignments, see
93. Ibid.
Curry (1997).
94. Burke and Cizek (2006).
111. For an example, see Atwell (1998).
95. Institute of Education Sciences (2010).

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112. For examples of studies that include student addition to regular writing instruction (thus
collaboration while writing, see MacArthur, providing additional time for writing) or in
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Pritchard place of regular writing instruction. In other
and Marshall (1994); Yarrow and Top- studies that examined interventions that
ping (2001). reported providing additional time for writing
113. Reprinted with permission from Ramirez instruction, the additional instruction was
(2006). limited to instruction in writing skills such as
114. For examples of studies that include stu- handwriting and spelling and did not provide
dents sharing their work, see Curry (1997); a comprehensive curriculum aligned with the
Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988); MacArthur, panels recommendations [see, e.g., Denton,
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Yarrow Cope, and Moser (2006); Graham, Harris,
and Topping (2001). and Fink-Chorzempa (2002)].
115. Pritchard and Marshall (1994). 125. Berninger et al. (2006).
116. For examples of studies that include the 126. Mason and Shriner (2008) and Saddler et al.
publication of students work, see Curry (2004) meet WWC pilot standards for well-
(1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and Gra- designed SCD research. SCD studies cannot
ham (1991). raise the level of evidence above minimal.
117. The gradual release of responsibility model 127. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED =
was coined by Pearson and Gallagher (1983). quasi-experimental design; SCD = single-
case design.
118. Acknowledging that 6th-graders are some-
times included in an elementary setting, the 128. Note that sample sizes are presented in
evidence base for this guide includes studies the units that the authors selected for their
of 6th-grade students when these students analyses. For example, if the author ana-
were receiving instruction in an elementary lyzed pairs rather than individual students,
school setting (e.g., in schools with kindergar- the sample size presented is of pairs. In
ten through 6th grade, 4th through 6th grade, some cases, the unit of analysis does not
or kindergarten through 8th grade). match the unit in which the intervention was
delivered. For example, the analysis was
119. For a definition of statistical significance, see
conducted at the student level even though
the WWC glossary at http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/
the intervention was delivered to pairs of
wwc/glossary.aspx.
students.
120. Recognizing that some studies lack the sta-
129. The components of the intervention most
tistical power to classify practically impor-
relevant to the recommendation are the
tant effects as statistically significant, the
focus of the description. Dosage for the
panel also accepts substantively important
comparison group is the same as the inter-
effects as evidence of effectiveness. For
vention group, except where noted. If it is
a definition of effect size, see the WWC
clear from the study that the intervention
glossary at http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/
was delivered in place of typical instruc-
glossary.aspx.
tion, that is noted in the description of the
121. For multiple comparison adjustments and intervention.
cluster corrections, see the WWC Handbook
130. All effect sizes and significance levels are
at http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/pdf/wwc_pro-
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise
cedures_v2_standards_ handbook.pdf.
noted. WWC calculations sometimes dif-
122. Graham (1999). fer from author-reported results due to
123. Cutler and Graham (2008); Graham et al. WWC adjustments for baseline differences,
(2003). clustering, or multiple comparisons. Effect
124. Berninger et al. (2006) reported the results sizes that were significant by WWC calcula-
of four experiments; the evidence related to tions or author calculations where no WWC
this recommendation comes from experi- adjustments were required (p 0.05) are
ment 4. In other studies, it often was unclear marked with an asterisk (*); ns refers to
whether the intervention was provided in effects that were not significant. Outcomes

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listed in bold are statistically significant MacArthur, and Dowdy (2000); Gram-
or substantively important as defined by brell and Chasen (1991); Garcia and de
the WWC. Only outcomes that meet WWC Caso-Fuertes (2007); Garcia-Sanchez
evidence standards are listed here. and Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Glaser
131. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip- and Brunstein (2007) [two tests]; Gor-
tion of a treated comparison group. don and Braun (1986); Graham, Harris,
132. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED = and Mason (2005) [two tests]; Graham,
quasi-experimental design; SCD = single- MacArthur, and Schwartz (1995); Guas-
case design. tello (2001); Harris, Graham, and Mason
(2006) [two tests]; Jampole, Mathers, and
133. Note that sample sizes are presented in the
Konopak (1994); MacArthur, Schwartz,
units that the authors selected for their analy-
and Graham (1991); Midgette, Haria, and
ses. For example, if the author analyzed pairs
MacArthur (2008) [three tests]; Pritchard
rather than individual students, the sample
and Marshall (1994); Riley (1997); Saw-
size presented is of pairs. In some cases, the
yer, Graham, and Harris (1992) [two
unit of analysis does not match the unit in
tests]; Schunk and Swartz (1993) [article
which the intervention was delivered. For
summarizes two studies, each with two
example, the analysis was conducted at the
tests]; Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009);
student level even though the intervention
Troia and Graham (2002).
was delivered to pairs of students.
138. Curry (1997); Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-
134. The components of the intervention most rel-
Redondo (2006); Glaser and Brunstein
evant to the recommendation are the focus of
(2007); Graham, Harris, and Mason
the description. Dosage for the comparison
(2005); Harris, Graham, and Mason
group is the same as the intervention group,
(2006); Sawyer, Graham, and Harris
except where noted. If it is clear from the
(1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009);
study that the intervention was delivered in
Troia and Graham (2002).
place of typical instruction, that is noted in
the description of the intervention. 139. Berninger et al. (2002); Curry (1997);
Dressel (1990); Ferretti, Lewis, and
135. All effect sizes and significance levels are
Andrews-Weckerly (2009); Ferretti,
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise
MacArthur, and Dowdy (2000); Glaser
noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ
and Brunstein (2007); Graham, Harris,
from author-reported results due to WWC
and Mason (2005); Graham, MacArthur,
adjustments for baseline differences, clus-
and Schwartz (1995); Guastello (2001);
tering, or multiple comparisons. Effect sizes
Harris, Graham, and Mason (2006); Jam-
that were significant by WWC calculations or
pole, Mathers, and Konopak (1994);
author calculations where no WWC adjust-
MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991);
ments were required (p 0.05) are marked
Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008);
with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that
Pritchard and Marshall (1994); Sawyer,
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold
Graham, and Harris (1992); Schunk and
are statistically significant or substantively
Swartz (1993); Tracy, Reid, and Graham
important. Only outcomes that meet WWC
(2009); Troia and Graham (2002).
evidence standards are listed here.
140. Sawyer, Graham, and Harris (1992).
136. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip-
tion of a treated comparison group. 141. Graham and Harris (1989); Graham et al.
(1992); Lane et al. (2008); Lienemann et al.
137. In some cases, individual studies tested the
(2006); Mason and Shriner (2008); Saddler
effectiveness of more than one intervention,
(2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Troia, Graham,
or multiple studies were described in the
and Harris (1999); Zumbrunn (2010).
same article. Berninger et al. (2002); Ber-
ninger et al. (2006) [experiment 4]; Curry 142. Self-regulated strategy development (SRSD)
(1997); Dressel (1990); Ferretti, Lewis, is an approach to writing instruction consist-
and Andrews-Weckerly (2009); Ferretti, ing of a set of practices. While SRSD is not
a branded product that can be purchased,

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it should be noted that Dr. Graham has 148. The panel considered activities to have an
authored books that provide guidance for implied audience component if students
teachers on implementing SRSD, and he shared their writing with other students or
receives royalties from the sale of those published their writing for others to read.
books. Furthermore, Dr. Grahams wife, 149. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip-
Karen Harris, developed SRSD, and Dr. Gra- tion of a treated comparison group.
ham has authored evaluations of SRSD. 150. A range of sample sizes is presented because
See Appendix C for disclosure of potential the study reported the attrition of three
conflicts of interest. participants; however, it was not clear from
143. In discussing evidence for this recommen- which group(s) the attrition occurred.
dation, we group together studies that are 151. This study contained two treatment groups
moderately and closely aligned because only and a comparison group. The panel deter-
one study met the criteria for being closely mined that the comparisons between the full
aligned. SRSD treatment (strategy and self-regulation
144. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED = instruction) and the comparison group and
quasi-experimental design; SCD = single- between the full SRSD treatment and the
case design. SRSD treatment without the self-regulation
145. Note that sample sizes are presented in the components were the most relevant to this
units that the authors selected for their analy- recommendation.
ses. For example, if the author analyzed pairs 152. A range of sample sizes is presented because
rather than individual students, the sample the study reported the attrition of three
size presented is of pairs. In some cases, the participants; however, it was not clear from
unit of analysis does not match the unit in which group(s) the attrition occurred.
which the intervention was delivered. For 153. This modification tested the effectiveness
example, the analysis was conducted at the of explicit self-regulation strategies. Both
student level even though the intervention treatment groups received the remaining
was delivered to pairs of students. components of the SRSD model.
146. The components of the intervention most rel- 154. This study compared two delivery mod-
evant to the recommendation are the focus of els (resource pull-out and in-class direct),
the description. Dosage for the comparison and four treatments within each delivery
group is the same as the intervention group, model. The panel focused its review on
except where noted. If it is clear from the the comparisons between treatments deliv-
study that the intervention was delivered in ered in the in-class direct model, because
place of typical instruction, that is noted in the panel determined this model to be the
the description of the intervention. most relevant to the broad population for
147. All effect sizes and significance levels are which this guide is intended. Among the
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise in-class model treatment comparisons,
noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ only the comparisons between SRSD and
from author-reported results due to WWC Writers Workshop and between Writers
adjustments for baseline differences, clus- Workshop and skills-based instruction met
tering, or multiple comparisons. Effect sizes evidence standards (the others did not meet
that were significant by WWC calculations or baseline-equivalence minimums). The panel
author calculations where no WWC adjust- determined that the comparison between
ments were required (p 0.05) are marked SRSD and Writers Workshop was the most
with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that relevant to this recommendation.
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold 155. This study contained two treatment groups
are statistically significant or substantively and a comparison group. The panel deter-
important as defined by the WWC. Only mined that the comparison between the SRSD
outcomes that meet WWC evidence standards treatment and the comparison group was
are listed here. the most relevant to this recommendation.

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156. The number of groups assigned to condi- 166. There were substantively important differ-
tions was not clear. As a result, the WWC was ences between the intervention and com-
unable to compute adjustments for clustering. parison groups at baseline, favoring the
157. This study contained two treatment groups comparison group.
and a comparison group. The panel deter- 167. No pretest data were reported for this out-
mined that the comparisons between the come category, so the WWC could not adjust
SRSD-including-peer-support treatment and for any baseline differences.
the comparison condition and between the 168. This article summarizes the results of two
SRSD-including-peer-support treatment and studies, each with three treatment groups
the SRSD-only treatment were the most and a comparison group. The panel deter-
relevant to this recommendation. mined that the comparisons between the
158. This study contained two treatment groups product-goal treatment and the general-goal
and a comparison group. The panel deter- treatment and between the process-goal treat-
mined that the comparisons between the ment and the general-goal treatment were
SRSD-including-peer-support treatment and the most relevant to this recommendation.
the comparison condition and between the 169. The panel cautions that the process-goal
SRSD-including-peer-support treatment and treatment also produced positive effects on
the SRSD-only treatment were the most overall writing quality (1.54*) and sentence
relevant to this recommendation. structure (0.21, ns) relative to the product-
159. This study contained three treatment groups. goal treatment; however, they do not include
The panel determined that the comparisons that comparison here as the panel does not
between the full-SRSD treatment and the offer recommendations on which type of
direct-instruction-in-strategies treatment goals would be more appropriate for instruc-
and between the full-SRSD treatment and tion in this recommendation.
the partial-SRSD treatment (without the 170. The researchers also reported another
self-regulation component) were the most maintenance test at seven weeks. This test
relevant to this recommendation. required students to verbalize their thoughts
160. Two posttests were administered: the first to the assessor while writing and therefore
in the same setting as the intervention, and may have been less reflective of students
the second in the students classroom by authentic writing; however, the effects were
their regular special education teacher. similar for overall writing quality (0.53, ns)
161. Some components of the gradual-release and sentence structure (0.22, ns).
model were present, but participants were 171. The panel cautions that the process-goal
not instructed to full independence. treatment also produced positive effects on
162. This modification tested the effectiveness overall writing quality (0.39, ns) and sentence
of explicit self-regulation strategies. Both structure (2.33*) relative to the product-goal
treatment groups received the remaining treatment; however, the panel does not
components of the SRSD model. include that comparison here as the panel
163. This study separately examined results for does not offer recommendations on which
typically achieving students and students with type of goals would be more appropriate for
learning disabilities. Only the results for typi- instruction in this recommendation.
cally achieving students are presented here. 172. The researchers also reported another
164. There were substantively important differ- maintenance test at seven weeks. This test
ences between the intervention and com- required students to verbalize their thoughts
parison groups at baseline, favoring the to the assessor while writing and therefore
comparison group. may have been less reflective of students
authentic writing; however, the effects were
165. No pretest data were reported for this out-
similar for overall writing quality (0.59, ns)
come category, so the WWC could not adjust
and sentence structure (1.14*).
for any baseline differences.

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173. This study provided separate results for typi- 181. The panel inferred that students were
cally achieving students and students with encouraged to use the components of the
learning disabilities. The results for the full writing process flexibly in this model, given
sample are reported here, because the WWC the date and the practices of the National
was unable to confirm that attrition from the Writing Panel; however, this could not be
typically achieving sample was low enough confirmed based on the text of the study.
to meet WWC evidence standards. 182. Mechanics outcomes were mixed. Students in
174. No pretest data were reported for this outcome the intervention group reduced the frequency
category, so the WWC could not adjust for any of their spelling errors in their third draft
baseline differences. The authors also reported relative to students in the comparison condi-
outcomes in the genre-elements category; tion; however, the intervention produced no
however, they were unable to confirm low changes on students punctuation errors.
attrition for these outcomes, and no measure 183. This component was present in both the
of baseline equivalence was collected. treatment condition and the comparison
175. No pretest data were reported for this outcome condition; however, the panel viewed it as
category, so the WWC could not adjust for any an essential component of the intervention.
baseline differences. The authors also reported 184. This study contained three treatment groups.
outcomes in the genre-elements category; The panel determined that the comparison
however, they were unable to confirm low between the story-grammar treatment and
attrition for these outcomes, and no measure the comparison group was the most relevant
of baseline equivalence was collected. to this recommendation.
176. This study contained two treatment groups and 185. Some components of the gradual release
a comparison group. The panel determined model were present, but participants were
that the comparisons between all three condi- not instructed to full independence.
tions were relevant to this recommendation. 186. This component was present in both the
177. This component was present in both the treatment condition and the comparison
treatment condition and the comparison condition; however, the panel viewed it as
condition; however, the panel viewed it as an essential component of the intervention.
an essential component of the intervention. 187. Students in both groups were taught the
178. This study contained two treatment groups background knowledge, but only the stu-
and a comparison group. The panel deter- dents in the explicit-story-structure-instruc-
mined that the comparison between the tion group were taught the procedures
goal-to-add-information treatment and the required to apply the strategy.
general-goal group was the most relevant 188. Only 10 of 20 participants were included in
to this recommendation. the maintenance test at four weeks following
179. It was not clear from the text whether there the intervention.
was any attrition in this study; however, the 189. Some components of the gradual release
two groups met WWC standards for equiva- model were present, but participants were
lence at baseline. The study was conducted in not instructed to full independence.
three phases. The panel determined that the
190. This component was present in both the
practices implemented in phase 2 were the
treatment condition and the comparison
most relevant to this recommendation; thus,
condition; however, the panel viewed it as
this row shows student growth from phase
an essential component of the intervention.
1 to the end of phase 2 of the intervention.
191. This component was present in both the
180. Statistical significance of WWC-calculated
treatment condition and the comparison
effect sizes could not be determined
condition; however, the panel viewed it as
because of missing information on the num-
an essential component of the intervention.
ber of teachers per district. The effects dis-
played here are for the elementary school 192. This component was present in both the
sample only. treatment condition and the comparison

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condition; however, the panel viewed it as 201. All effect sizes and significance levels are
an essential component of the intervention. calculated by the WWC unless otherwise
193. The comparison condition included back- noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ
ground instruction on techniques, instruc- from author-reported results due to WWC
tion in components of the writing process, adjustments for baseline differences, clus-
identifying other settings in which to use tering, or multiple comparisons. Effect sizes
the process approach, and components of that were significant by WWC calculations or
Recommendation 4. author calculations where no WWC adjust-
194. Significance level is reported by the author; ments were required (p 0.05) are marked
no WWC adjustments were required. with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold
195. The text is not explicit as to whether or not
are statistically significant or substantively
the graphic organizers were genre specific,
important. Only outcomes that meet WWC
but the panel believed this to be a reason-
evidence standards are listed here.
able assumption given that the students
were learning to write for select purposes 202. The panel considered activities to have an
and the lead author used genre-specific implied audience component if students
graphic organizers in the other study exam- shared their writing with other students or
ined for this guide. published their writing for others to read.
196. This study contained three treatment groups 203. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip-
and a comparison group. The panel deter- tion of a treated comparison group.
mined that the comparison between the 204. This study reported results for typically
composition-only (p. 296) treatment and achieving students and students with learn-
the treated comparison group was the most ing disabilities. Only the results for typically
relevant to this recommendation. achieving students are presented here.
197. This study contained three treatment groups. 205. Instruction was delivered to the whole
The panel determined that the comparison class; however, data were collected for only
between the imagery-training treatment and six students, half of whom were typically
the writing-practice treatment was the most achieving students.
relevant to this recommendation. 206. This study provided results for three typi-
198. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED = cally achieving students and three students
quasi-experimental design; SCD = single- with learning disabilities. Only the results
case design. for typically achieving students are pre-
199. Note that sample sizes are presented in the sented here; however, there were also posi-
units that the authors selected for their analy- tive effects for the students with learning
ses. For example, if the author analyzed pairs disabilities.
rather than individual students, the sample 207. This component was present in both the
size presented is of pairs. In some cases, the treatment condition and the comparison
unit of analysis does not match the unit in condition; however, the panel viewed it as
which the intervention was delivered. For an essential component of the intervention.
example, the analysis was conducted at the 208. This component was present in both the
student level even though the intervention treatment condition and the comparison
was delivered to pairs of students. condition; however, the panel viewed it as
200. The components of the intervention most rel- an essential component of the intervention.
evant to the recommendation are the focus of 209. Studies that contribute to the level of evi-
the description. Dosage for the comparison dence: Curry (1997); Garcia-Sanchez and
group is the same as the intervention group, Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Glaser and
except where noted. If it is clear from the Brunstein (2007); Graham, Harris, and
study that the intervention was delivered in Mason (2005); Harris, Graham, and
place of typical instruction, that is noted in Mason (2006); Sawyer, Graham, and
the description of the intervention. Harris (1992); Tracy, Reid, and Graham

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(2009). Supplemental evidence: Danoff, 220. Studies that contribute to the level of evi-
Harris, and Graham (1993); Graham and Har- dence: Curry (1997); Garcia-Sanchez and
ris (1989); Graham et al. (1992); Lane et al. Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Graham, Harris,
(2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Mason and and Mason (2005); Harris, Graham, and
Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler et Mason (2006); Sawyer, Graham, and Har-
al. (2004); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999); ris (1992). Supplemental evidence: Graham
Zumbrunn (2010). et al. (1992); Lane et al. (2008); Lienemann et
210. Study that contributes to the level of evi- al. (2006); Mason and Shriner (2008); Saddler
dence: Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009). et al. (2004); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999).
Supplemental evidence: Danoff, Harris, and 221. Study that contributes to the level of evidence:
Graham (1993). Curry (1997). Supplemental evidence: Sad-
211. Tracy, Reid, and Graham (2009). dler (2006).
212. Danoff, Harris, and Graham (1993). Instruc- 222. Supplemental evidence: Graham and Har-
tion was delivered to the whole class; ris (1989); Graham et al. (1992); Lane et al.
however, data were collected for only six (2008); Lienemann et al. (2006); Mason and
students, half of whom were typically Shriner (2008); Saddler (2006); Saddler et al.
achieving students. This is a SCD study that (2004); Troia, Graham, and Harris (1999).
provides supplemental evidence. 223. Study that contributes to the level of evi-
213. Study that contributes to the level of evi- dence: Garcia-Sanchez and Fidalgo-
dence: Glaser and Brunstein (2007). Redondo (2006). Supplemental evidence:
Supplemental evidence: Zumbrunn (2010). Saddler (2006).
214. Glaser and Brunstein (2007). This study 224. Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Har-
contained two treatment groups and a com- ris, Graham, and Mason (2006); Sawyer,
parison group. The comparison between Graham, and Harris (1992).
the full SRSD treatment and the comparison 225. Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Har-
group is discussed here. The comparison ris, Graham, and Mason (2006).
between the full SRSD treatment and the 226. Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Har-
SRSD treatment without self-regulation ris, Graham, and Mason (2006). Com-
instruction is discussed in the section exam- parisons were between SRSD plus an added
ining the impact of minor variations in the peer-support component and a business-as-
intervention on the effectiveness of SRSD. usual comparison group.
215. Glaser and Brunstein (2007). 227. Sawyer, Graham, and Harris (1992).
216. Zumbrunn (2010). This is a SCD study that The comparison was between the full SRSD
provides supplemental evidence. instructional model and direct instruction
217. Studies that contribute to the level of evi- in strategies.
dence: Curry (1997); Garcia-Sanchez and 228. Glaser and Brunstein (2007); Graham,
Fidalgo-Redondo (2006); Graham, Har- Harris, and Mason (2005); Harris, Gra-
ris, and Mason (2005); Harris, Graham, ham, and Mason (2006); Sawyer, Gra-
and Mason (2006); Sawyer, Graham, ham, and Harris (1992).
and Harris (1992). Supplemental evidence: 229. The only exception is Glaser and Brunstein
Graham and Harris (1989); Graham et al. (2007), which had a larger sample.
(1992); Lane et al. (2008); Lienemann et al. 230. Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005); Har-
(2006); Mason and Shriner (2008); Saddler ris, Graham, and Mason (2006).
(2006); Saddler et al. (2004); Troia, Graham,
231. Graham, Harris, and Mason (2005).
and Harris (1999).
232. Harris, Graham, and Mason (2006).
218. Graham and Harris (1989). This is a SCD
study that provides supplemental evidence. 233. Sawyer, Graham, and Harris (1992).
219. Saddler (2006). This is a SCD study that 234. Glaser and Brunstein (2007).
provides supplemental evidence. 235. Ferretti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly
(2009); Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy

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(2000); Graham, MacArthur, and Schwartz 255. Troia and Graham (2002).
(1995); Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur 256. Berninger et al. (2002); Berninger et al.
(2008); Schunk and Swartz (1993). (2006); Dressel (1990); Jampole, Mathers,
236. Schunk and Swartz (1993) [article summa- and Konopak (1994).
rizes two studies]. 257. Dressel (1990).
237. Ferretti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weck- 258. Berninger et al. (2002); Berninger et al.
erly (2009); Ferretti, MacArthur, and (2006); Jampole, Mathers, and Konopak
Dowdy (2000); Graham, MacArthur, and (1994).
Schwartz (1995); Midgette, Haria, and 259. Berninger et al. (2002); Jampole, Mathers,
MacArthur (2008). and Konopak (1994).
238. Ferretti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly 260. Jampole, Mathers, and Konopak (1994).
(2009); Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy
261. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et al.
(2000); Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur
(2000); Berninger et al. (2002); Denton,
(2008) examined comparisons between
Cope, and Moser (2006); Fogel and
audience goals and general goals and audi-
Ehri (2000); Graham, Harris, and Fink-
ence goals and content goals.
Chorzempa (2002); Graham, Harris, and
239. Schunk and Swartz (1993). Fink (2000); Jones (1994); Saddler and
240. Ibid., p. 342. Graham (2005).
241. Ibid., p. 342. 262. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et al.
242. Ferretti, Lewis, and Andrews-Weckerly (2000); Berninger et al. (2002); Denton,
(2009). This study separately examined Cope, and Moser (2006); Fogel and
results for typically achieving students and Ehri (2000); Graham, Harris, and Fink-
students with learning disabilities. Only the Chorzempa (2002); Graham, Harris, and
results for typically achieving students are Fink (2000).
presented here. 263. Fogel and Ehri (2000); Jones (1994).
243. Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy (2000); 264. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008).
Graham, MacArthur, and Schwartz (1995); 265. Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger et al.
Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008). (2000); Berninger et al. (2002); Graham,
244. Graham, MacArthur, and Schwartz (1995); Harris, and Fink (2000); Denton, Cope,
Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008). and Moser (2006).
245. Ferretti, MacArthur, and Dowdy (2000). 266. Studies that contribute to the level of evi-
246. Midgette, Haria, and MacArthur (2008). dence: Berninger et al. (1997); Berninger
247. Graham, MacArthur, and Schwartz (1995). et al. (2000); Berninger et al. (2002);
248. Gambrell and Chasen (1991); Garcia and Denton, Cope, and Moser (2006); Fogel
de Caso-Fuertes (2007); Gordon and and Ehri (2000); Graham, Harris, and
Braun (1986); Guastello (2001); MacAr- Fink-Chorzempa (2002); Graham, Harris,
thur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991); and Fink (2000); Saddler and Graham
Pritchard and Marshall (1994); Riley (2005). Supplemental evidence: Saddler,
(1997); Troia and Graham (2002). Behforooz, and Asaro (2008).
249. Gordon and Braun (1996); Guastello 267. Studies that contribute to the level of evi-
(2001); Pritchard and Marshall (1994). dence: Fogel and Ehri (2000); Saddler
and Graham (2005). Supplemental evi-
250. Guastello (2001).
dence: Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008).
251. Gordon and Braun (1986).
268. Jones (1994).
252. Gambrell and Chasen (1991); Garcia
269. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED =
and de Caso-Fuertes (2007); MacArthur,
quasi-experimental design; SCD = single-
Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Riley
case design.
(1997); Troia and Graham (2002).
270. Note that sample sizes are presented in
253. Troia and Graham (2002).
the units that the authors selected for their
254. MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991).

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analyses. For example, if the author ana- 277. The sample size at the six-month mainte-
lyzed pairs rather than individual students, nance test was 32.
the sample size presented is of pairs. In 278. Effect sizes are calculated by WWC, and
some cases, the unit of analysis does not significance is based on author-reported
match the unit in which the intervention was effects.
delivered. For example, the analysis was 279. This study contains three treatment groups
conducted at the student level even though and a comparison group. The panel deter-
the intervention was delivered to pairs of mined that the comparison between the
students. spelling-only treatment and the treated
271. The components of the intervention most comparison condition was the most relevant
relevant to the recommendation are the to this recommendation.
focus of the description. Dosage for the 280. Only 27 pairs of students were included in
comparison group is the same as the inter- the analysis at maintenance.
vention group except where noted. Where
281. This study contains two treatments and a
it was clear from the study that the inter-
comparison group. The panel determined
vention was delivered in place of typical
that the comparison between the full inter-
instruction, that is noted in the description
vention and the exposure-to-text-only com-
of the intervention.
parison condition was the most relevant to
272. All effect sizes and significance levels are this recommendation.
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise
282. The whole class received the intervention;
noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ
however, only African American students
from author-reported results due to WWC
who exhibited Black English Vernacular syn-
adjustments for baseline differences, cluster-
tactic forms were included in the analysis.
ing, or multiple comparisons. Direct effects
refer to measures of the same skill on which 283. The number of students in the analytic sam-
students were instructed. Effect sizes that ple varied by outcome.
were significant by WWC calculations or 284. MSW = more-skilled writers; LSW = less-
author calculations where no WWC adjust- skilled writers.
ments were required (p 0.05) are marked 285. Sentence-combining is a skill students
with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that employ when revising their writing. Only
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold the outcomes for the revised draft are
are statistically significant or substantively reported here, since the panel would expect
important. Only outcomes that meet WWC to observe the impacts of sentence combin-
evidence standards are listed here. ing instruction on students work only after
273. Generalization effects refer to measures in they employ sentence combining to revise.
the categories of sentence structure, writing 286. Significance level is reported by the author;
output, or overall writing quality. no WWC adjustments were required.
274. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip- 287. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED =
tion of a treated comparison group. quasi-experimental design; SCD = single-
275. This study contains five treatment groups case design.
and a comparison group. The panel deter- 288. Note that sample sizes are presented in
mined that the comparison between the the units that the authors selected for their
visual-cue and memory-retrieval treatment analyses. For example, if the author ana-
and the treated comparison condition was lyzed pairs rather than individual students,
the most relevant to this recommendation. the sample size presented is of pairs. In
276. This study contains two treatment groups some cases, the unit of analysis does not
and a comparison group. The panel deter- match the unit in which the intervention was
mined that the comparison between the delivered. For example, the analysis was
therapeutic-practice treatment and the com- conducted at the student level even though
parison condition was the most relevant to the intervention was delivered to pairs of
this recommendation. students.

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289. The components of the intervention most rel- 302. Graham, Harris, and Fink-Chorzempa
evant to the recommendation are the focus of (2002).
the description. Dosage for the comparison 303. Graham, Harris, and Fink-Chorzempa
group is the same as the intervention group (2002).
except where noted. Where it was clear from 304. Gettinger (1993).
the study that the intervention was delivered
305. Studies that contribute to the level of evi-
in place of typical instruction, that is noted in
dence: Fogel and Ehri (2000); Saddler
the description of the intervention.
and Graham (2005). Supplemental evi-
290. All effect sizes and significance levels are dence: Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008).
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise
306. Fogel and Ehri (2000); Saddler and
noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ
Graham (2005).
from author-reported results due to WWC
adjustments for baseline differences, cluster- 307. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008).
ing, or multiple comparisons. Direct effects 308. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008); Sad-
refer to measures of the same skill on which dler and Graham (2005).
students were instructed. Effect sizes that 309. Saddler and Graham (2005).
were significant by WWC calculations or 310. Saddler, Behforooz, and Asaro (2008).
author calculations where no WWC adjust- 311. Fogel and Ehri (2000).
ments were required (p 0.05) are marked 312. Jones (1994).
with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that
313. Jones (1994). No additional adjustments for
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold
multiple comparisons, clustering, or baseline
are statistically significant or substantively
equivalence were required, so the author-
important. Only outcomes that meet WWC
reported significance level is presented here.
evidence standards are listed here.
314. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
291. Generalization effects refer to measures in
Graham (1991); Pritchard and Marshall
the categories of sentence structure, writing
(1994); Troia and Graham (2002); Yar-
output, or overall writing quality.
row and Topping (2001).
292. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip-
315. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and
tion of a treated comparison group.
Graham (1991); Pritchard and Marshall
293. No effects were found for three students; (1994); Yarrow and Topping (2001).
positive effects were found for one student.
316. Troia and Graham (2002) found posi-
294. Berninger et al. (1997); Denton, Cope, tive effects on persuasive writing quality
and Moser (2006); Graham, Harris, and immediately after the intervention; negative
Fink (2000). effects on story-writing quality were found
295. Graham, Harris, and Fink (2000). at posttest and four weeks after the initial
296. Berninger et al. (1997). post-intervention assessment.
297. Denton, Cope, and Moser (2006). 317. Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988). This is a SCD
298. Berninger et al. (2000); Berninger et study and cannot raise the level of evidence
al. (2002); Graham, Harris, and Fink- above minimal,
Chorzempa (2002). 318. Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988); Yarrow and
299. Berninger et al. (2000); Berninger et Topping (2001).
al. (2002); Graham, Harris, and Fink- 319. Partial alignment: Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck
Chorzempa (2002). (1988). Moderate alignment: MacArthur,
300. Berninger et al. (2000), study 2. Schwartz, and Graham (1991); Pritchard
301. Berninger et al. (2002). The panel cau- and Marshall (1994); Yarrow and Top-
tions that it is rare to achieve large gains on ping (2001). Close alignment: Curry
standardized measures, and the small size (1997); Troia and Graham (2002). Some
of the study sample makes it unsuitable to of the studies discussed in Recommenda-
capture any smaller effects that may have tion 2 incorporated feedback or publishing,
been present. which may be considered components of an

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engaged community of writers. The panel 328. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip-
determined that these studies focused on tion of a treated comparison group.
strategy instruction and not on the charac- 329. This study compared two delivery models
teristics of an engaged community of writ- (resource pull-out and in-class direct), and
ers; therefore, they are not considered in the four treatments within each delivery model.
evidence level for this recommendation. The panel focused its review on the com-
320. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and parisons between treatments delivered in
Graham (1991); Pritchard and Marshall the in-class direct model, because the panel
(1994); Troia and Graham (2002). determined that this model is most relevant
321. Yarrow and Topping (2001). to the broad population for which this guide
322. Curry (1997); MacArthur, Schwartz, and is intended. Among the in-class model treat-
Graham (1991); Troia and Graham (2002). ment comparisons, only the comparisons
between SRSD and Writers Workshop and
323. Pritchard and Marshall (1994); Yarrow
between Writers Workshop and skills-based
and Topping (2001).
instruction met evidence standards (the
324. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED = others did not meet baseline equivalence
quasi-experimental design; SCD = single- minimums). The panel determined that the
case design. comparison between Writers Workshop
325. Note that sample sizes are presented in the and skills-based instruction was the most
units that the authors selected for their analy- relevant to this recommendation.
ses. For example, if the author analyzed pairs 330. Mechanics outcomes were mixed. Students in
rather than individual students, the sample the intervention group reduced the frequency
size presented is of pairs. In some cases, the of their spelling errors in their third draft
unit of analysis does not match the unit in relative to students in the comparison condi-
which the intervention was delivered. For tion; however, the intervention produced no
example, the analysis was conducted at the changes on students punctuation errors.
student level even though the intervention
331. Statistical significance of WWC-calculated
was delivered to pairs of students.
effect sizes could not be determined due to
326. The components of the intervention most missing information on the number of teach-
relevant to the recommendation are the ers per district. The effects displayed here are
focus of the description. Dosage for the for the elementary school sample only.
comparison group is the same as the inter-
332. Data were collected for only 10 students at
vention group except where noted. Where
maintenance.
it was clear from the study that the inter-
vention was delivered in place of typical 333. RCT = randomized controlled trial; QED =
instruction, that is noted in the description quasi-experimental design; SCD = single-
of the intervention. case design.
327. All effect sizes and significance levels are 334. Note that sample sizes are presented in
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise the units that the authors selected for their
noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ analyses. For example, if the author ana-
from author-reported results due to WWC lyzed pairs rather than individual students,
adjustments for baseline differences, clus- the sample size presented is of pairs. In
tering, or multiple comparisons. Effect sizes some cases, the unit of analysis does not
that were significant by WWC calculations or match the unit in which the intervention was
author calculations where no WWC adjust- delivered. For example, the analysis was
ments were required (p 0.05) are marked conducted at the student level even though
with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that the intervention was delivered to pairs of
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold students.
are statistically significant or substantively 335. The components of the intervention most
important. Only outcomes that meet WWC relevant to the recommendation are the
evidence standards are listed here. focus of the description. Dosage for the

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comparison group is the same as the inter- 337. Regular classroom instruction or a descrip-
vention group except where noted. Where tion of a treated comparison group.
it was clear from the study that the inter- 338. Curry (1997); Troia and Graham (2002).
vention was delivered in place of typical 339. Curry (1997).
instruction, that is noted in the description
340. Troia and Graham (2002).
of the intervention.
341. MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham
336. All effect sizes and significance levels are
(1991); Pritchard and Marshall (1994);
calculated by the WWC unless otherwise
and Yarrow and Topping (2001) found
noted. WWC calculations sometimes differ
positive effects on overall writing quality.
from author-reported results due to WWC
adjustments for baseline differences, clus- 342. MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991).
tering, or multiple comparisons. Effect sizes 343. MacArthur, Schwartz, and Graham (1991)
that were significant by WWC calculations or also found negative effects on the number
author calculations where no WWC adjust- of spelling errors and a positive effect on
ments were required (p 0.05) are marked punctuation errors.
with an asterisk (*); ns refers to effects that 344. Pritchard and Marshall (1994).
were not significant. Outcomes listed in bold 345. Yarrow and Topping (1994).
are statistically significant or substantively 346. Jerram, Glynn, and Tuck (1988). This is a SCD
important. Only outcomes that meet WWC study and cannot raise the level of evidence
evidence standards are listed here. above minimal.

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