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think are the causes of this?

What can the government do to encourage young people to become teaching.

Brainstorm

Introduction

- Career in teaching
- Cause and measures from government

Body 1: Cause

- No passion in studying & researching => teaching seems boring and have no positive
influence on students
- Finance: unable to afford basic life => though loving but still quit to find higher
salary-paid jobs
- Abundance in the number of teacher required

Body 2: Solution

- Raise people awareness of the importance of teaching and learning => make teacher as
a model for student to try their best to become
- Pay more attention to the policies for teacher such as salary, pension, training course
- Build a more complete system of education to allocate and provide more job relevant
to teaching

Conclusion

- Choosing teacher as a true career

- Reason for the decreasing and solution from government
 Essay:

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their life to tutor their children, it seems like there isthere is no room for the young to take
part in education system to work as a teacher though loving teaching frankly. Secondly, the
poor finance with low salary and an extremely little low level of subsidy forces students to
choose other jobs to make ends meet their basic life. Finally, students today may be not
enough patience might not be patient enough to devote their whole life for career of
teaching while it could take a lot of time as well as effort to become an experienced teacher,
so they look for an easier job that could give them a certain amount of time to enjoy their
life. For example, if one chooses to work for a factory, they he may work hard in the
daylight but relax in the evening instead of checking homework overnight.
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whole society,; therefore, the government should pay more attention to deal with this
problem. The more young people are paid, the more they could contribute to teaching
career because if they do not need to worry about the finance aspect, they would
choose and only focus on teaching, which quickly increases the number of people
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adults by carry out necessaryenacting favorable policies for teachers such as salary,
pension, training courses that could help them to have a bright future as well as a sense
of belonging and fulfillment. These young students who are oriented to become a
teacher should be respected, which means that the government should raise the
citizens awareness of the importance of teaching and learning. Once their status
could beis highly appreciated, young teachers would dedicate to teaching career.
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efficient solutions that bring the advantages to these young peoples.

Good job!