Direction: Improve the following improperly written sentences. Write your answer in the space provide.

1. Please, inquire about the utilization of additional stamp for mailing the package.
Please inquire about the utilization of the additional stamp for mailing the package.

2. Definitely, Mr. Lim will give consideration to the agents explanation about the cancellation of the meeting.
Mr. Lim will definitely give consideration to the agents explanation about the cancellation of the meeting.

3. Any of the parties can make a classification of the documents before they will make revision on these papers.

4. A gas leakage test must be conducted by a group of electricians.

A gas leakage test will be conducted by a group of electricians.

5. A widening of the gap was caused by electrode war.

The widening of the gap was caused by the electrode war.

6. Colorful drawings of the machine are displayed by the Japanese businessman.

The colorful drawings of the machine were displayed by the Japanese businessman.

7. He proved his knowledge on computer engineering by clearly explaining the operation of the newly bought
electronic device.

8. Pursuant to the proposal you sent me, I deem I need one week more to examine its relevance to the needs of the
company.
Pursuant to the proposal you sent me, I need one week more to examine its relevance to the needs of the company.

9. I am not sure if it is necessary that you display those items there.

I am not sure if it is necessary to display those items there.

10. Her lecture in the seminar should deal mainly with true facts.

11. Each seminar on technical writing made me pay the amount of P3, 000.00.
Each seminar on technical writing makes me pay the amount of P3, 000.00

12. This is to inform you that our general assembly will be at the Heritage Hall.
This is to inform you that our general assembly will be in the heritage hotel.

13. Three weeks was needed by the electricians to examine the device.
Three weeks were needed by the electricians to examine the device.

14. The lady lawyer wish she could see the businessman selling imported soldering guns.
The lady lawyer wishes she could see the businessman selling imported soldering guns.

15. There was one customer requesting a replacement of the Levi pants she bought the other day.
There is a customer requesting for a replacement of a levi pants that she bought the other day.

16. I am thanking you in advance for granting my request.

I am thankful in advance for granting my request.

17. I am cognizant of the numerous aspects about the transmission of the package to our client.

18. Do you mean to say you need more lectures and practice on effective technical writing?

19. The department chairman ordered all salesmen to demonstrate the use of device.
The department chairman ordered all salesmen to demonstrate the use of the device.

20. Your letter of recent date clearly stated the exact amount of your monthly payment.
Your recent letter clearly stated the exact amount of your monthly payment.