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Bahloul Maissa

Jaafar Gadir
Ghanmeh Mohamad
Jackie Abou Kalam
Science Fiction S3
February 8th 2017
Corrected Thesis Statements

1. Ender is a trouble maker


2. The kids in the toon are mean
3. Petra is helpful
4. The games are helpful
5. The kids are detrimental

1) Therefore, because Bernard does not have the ability to make rational decisions, unlike

Ender, he behaves like a trouble maker.

2) Hence, because the kids in the toon are in a competitive environment, it forces them to

create rivalries.

3) Therefore, Enders success in the battles is because of the help he gets from Petra.

4) Through the psychological conflicts within the games, Ender begins to behave like Peter.

5) Therefore, Ender becomes a good soldier because of the kids bullying behavior towards

him.

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