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Title (possible): Lost Bodies

STORY QUESTION: When a series of strange disappearances left the police department clueless
they called John to look for something paranormal, when John discovers is a demon whom is
committing the murders will he succeed in stopping it when the police dept. dub him insane (yet
again)

EXPANDED STORY:

Protagonist: John Howler

Antagonist: Old Lady Beth Ronkhorn/ Burahn(Demon)

Subplot/ Friend and/or Lover: Dave Sparda joins the team due to connection with a victim in
revenge and wanting to help avoiding the VOID to take over.

INTRO/Moment of Change: A series of strange disappearances spread through the city, after the
police was clueless about the identity or possible suspects of such acts due to a lack of bodies and
clues. Dave Sparda friend of one of the victims contact John looking for help finding his friend.

Intro Subplot: Dave fighting against his own skepticism and the idea that magic is plain bullshit.

PLOT POINT #1: John meets with Dave and asks for details and something belonging to his
disappeared friend to perform a tracking spell which point to a known location near the central
park of the town.

Subplot 1: Dave starts doubting John and tells the police about him, dubbing him as some wacky
magician.

PLOT POINT #2: John gets assaulted by something in the middle of the night while patrolling the
area, shortly after another victim went missing near the area where john was. The only people
nearby is Old lady Beth Ronkhorn who gives the description of someone looking like john and
police officer take him into custody.

Subplot2: Dave goes to visit John in jail and says sorry to him, and asks if he found something. John
tells his suspicion about the old lady. Dave goes to scout and decides to help John.
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PLOT POINT #3: After getting released from jail John goes all out to the house of the old lady.
When they got face to face John starts reciting an incantation which revealed the real appearance
of the old lady this being a demon of gluttony, which John and Dave fight and defeat. They found a
gruesome sight in the basement of the house. The bodies of the victims all dried out and in some
cases pieces of their body missing.

Subplot Resolution: Dave realizes that there is another world hidden in plain sight and ask John for
forgiveness and to join him in his works against the dark entities.

Resolution of the Story: John was dictated free of charges and the sudden disappearance of the
old lady point the eyes on her. The story was sold as the case of the old lady working with a young
man and they both ran away in fear of being discovered. John and Dave started working together
and Dave is presented to the Team.

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