Student Erin Goble

Assessor Simon Weintroub

Date
Unit & Title 1 :- Introduction to media processes and technical skills
Project Title Dead Man Walking
Course/Level Level 3 Diploma in Creative Media Production & Technology

Indicates Indicates
Evidence not Pass Learner is Learner is Evidence and General Comments
Unit 1 provided Achieved working at a working at the i.e. Observation, video, essay etc
higher level highest level
R S G E If evidence is missing, note requirements.

1 Understand processes and technical skills used

in creative media production
1.1 Apply understanding of a range of processes to https://eringoblemedial3.weebly.com/unit-
support media activities. 1.html
1.2 Apply media processes and skills safely and https://eringoblemedial3.weebly.com/unit-
appropriately. 1.html
2 Understand the characteristics and methods of
communication within a media context.
2.1 Critically compare a range of communication https://eringoblemedial3.weebly.com/unit-
methods used to convey meaning in creative media 1.html
production.
Although this unit is only marked as Pass the evidence
demonstrates the student is capable of working at a
Final Grade Referral Fail Pass higher level

Indicates the standard of work submitted for assessment

R = Referral / S = Satisfactory / G = Good / E = Excellent
Assessment Feedback / Referral Action Plan:
(Only one further opportunity will be given for submission of work that has been deemed unsatisfactory at the time of assessment)

Erin, this is a very well presented portfolio that evidences a conscientious learner keen to go beyond the minimum to ensure you have hit
the criteria.
You have also evaluated each week throughout which again evidences someone who is keen to learn and assess the success and areas
for improvement for everything youre doing. Well done.
You have worked well within the group and your energy and attitude rubs off well on those around you.
Your editing steadily improves throughout the episodes and its great to see you challenging yourself by being adventurous with regards to
effects and other editing techniques. You use of a vignette for the flashback was particularly effective.
Be careful in future to carefully consider how you soundtrack your scenes as these choices werent always the most appropriate or
effective.

You have also discussed Health & Safety well within your evaluation but be careful not to rush the paperwork itself too much as it may
appear youre doing it for the sake of doing it as opposed to with purpose. You also need to ensure you include a Risk Assessment form
next time.

Your evaluation is strong and clearly identifies the areas you in which you feel you need to improve whilst giving an honest appraisal of the
things youve done well. Your justification for decision making is good.

Development Points

Please ask if you dont understand how to submit your assignments as requested.
Take what you have learned and apply it to an independent project.
Complete Location Recces and Risk assessment to a far more detailed standard.
Use audio recorders for sound to ensure consistent levels of quality.
 Take further care when selecting soundtrack for a scene.

Agreed referral deadline: Date of referral Referral Grade

(Two weeks after original submission:
assessment date) (Referral work is not eligible for
higher grading if applicable to the
FAIL PASS
unit)
Assessor Signature: IV Signature: Date:
Owain Milford 06/11/2017

Simon Weintroub
Student Signature Date: 07/11/17

Learner Name: Erin Goble Date: 10th November 2017

 Unit Number: Unit 1 Assignment title: technical skills/ Dead man walking project

What does the feedback say?

I have a well presented portfolio and add lots so I can ensure that I can hit the correct criteria for my
unit. I have evaluated each of my weeks in the production which shows my willingness to change my
skills each of the weeks

What are the areas in which you need to improve?

To have added a risk assessment to further emphasis the point of health and safety.
To ask if I have an issue with submission
To take this and apply it to my own project.
To use audio recorders for sound

What can you do to improve in these areas?

To really develop myself and make sure I do these health assessment sheets because they will become
important if a location is dangerous and if anyone gets hurt while on the set

Ask for help even if I think I know what I am doing to ensure an easier submission process.
Signed