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Dakota G

Ms. Jizi

UWRT 1104

3 November 2017 Commented [CL1]: The date is fine, just add the title of
the assignment Annotated Bibliography underneath it
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Schulze, Richard. Colds & Flu: A Clinical Doctor/Patient Manual. 1st ed., Natural Healing

Publications, 2010. This book is about naturally treating the cold and flu, and building the Commented [CL3]: Create a new paragraph for your
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immune system. Dr. Schulze goes in-depth in explaining how the immune system works, Commented [CL4R3]:

which is what interested me. His purpose in explaining the process of the immune

system, was to help the reader understand what is going on and to give them a Commented [CL5]: Take out the comma
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background of how everything works. He states that you dont need to know about that if

you just want to feel better, but he thinks it is necessary to explain the behind the scenes

to the reader to help them better understand what really goes on in their body when their

immune system gets to work.

I learned a lot about the immune system from this source. I learned mostly about T and

B-cells and what their role is in fighting off sickness and disease. The book also talked

about how the immune cells have neuropeptide receptors that allow the cells to listen and

react to your thoughts and emotions, which ultimately means that, staying positive is a

huge part in healing. This is all related to my inquiry topic because, I am trying to get a

better understanding of how the immune system works in order to help come to a Commented [CL7]: There is a red line under this phrase. I
clicked on it to figure out how Microsoft wanted to fix it and
they just wanted it changed to to
conclusion with my topic.
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Dr. Richard Schulze was told at the young age of 16, that he would be dead by 20 if he Commented [CL9]: This phrasing is awkward (come to a
conclusion with my topic)
didnt undergo a massive, open-heart surgery to fix his deformed and diseased heart. His Commented [CL10R9]:
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heart wouldnt be able to pump a sufficient amount of blood throughout an adult body, as

a result, he would die. He chose not to go through with the surgery and completely

changed his entire lifestyle. When he was 19, he went back to the same doctors that told

him he would die, and they were amazed. His heart had completely healed and was

healthy. They told him it was a miracle. Since then, Dr. Schulze has acquired seven Commented [CL11]: Im not sure if this part of your
credibility paragraph is necessary. I stopped the highlighting
where you should start if you decide to delete this part. This
degrees (two doctorates and two masters) in things like Herbology and Natural Medicine.
part just tells him about his experience rather than his
credentials.
He also has eight different types of body therapy certifications. He taught at the school he
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graduated from for about 2 decades, while working directly with other famously known why he started his research, I would start out this paragraph
with The reason Dr. Schulze decided to start this research
natural doctors. He has owned, directed, managed several clinics around the globe since is.
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the early 1970s, and in that time, he has had over thousands of patients. Most of his Commented [CL14]: Take this part out
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patients have been told that there is nothing that can be done for them and so they went to
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He taught at _______ for two decades
Dr. Schulze, the Herb Doc, and were miraculously healed.
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Commented [CL19]: Over a thousand? Or thousands?
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tense to past tense which makes the sentence awkward
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