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Rourke Stark
Alan Chandler
POLS 1100
11/12/17
In this Essay I will be analyzing two argumentative views regarding the level of
Equality in the United States of America today. For many years this has been a growing
political issue, and only in the previous most recent years have we seen a rise in social
disturbance to call attention to such a matter. From Black Lives Matter to White Supremacy, the
media, and a left leaning generation have aided in all of the social uprisings of our time, making
The political issue is that today in society, we see extremes from the rich and the poor.
There are those few who make millions of dollars, and the many who struggle to make ends meet
for their families. The arguments are either America IS approaching equality, or it is NOT. Both
articles have certain points that I agree and certain points with which I do not agree.
The paper begins with a brief summary of the issue. It talks about the nations history on
poverty levels. It explains that over time, the social and economic changes have allowed all
people equal benefits. It shows some cause and effect towards the idea of extreme equality,
stating, Any change that mandated more, nearly equal income would greatly diminish the
incentives for invention, discovery, and risk-taking enterprises. As a result, the standard of living
would be much lower and rise much more slowly, and individual freedom would be curtailed by
the degree of state interference in peoples private lives. As explained, any governmental push
for complete equality would greatly decrease the level of quality in our necessary everyday
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services. But the Issue Summary continues by stating, None of these objections will satisfy
those who deplore what they see as an increasing disparity in the distribution of income and
wealth. Now I have a lot to say about this, but that will come later.
The first article argues that YES, America is approaching equality with society. Their
prime sources of proof are found in famous historic figures like Martin Luther King Jr., Andrew
Goodman, James Chaney, Michael Schwerner, and Medgar Evans. They form the article around
a very patriotic feeling of emotions so that the audience can be swayed with the feeling. They
bring up many cases where we have made great strides in the face of uneven odds, and state that
we will continue doing such, so long as we continue voting for people by heart and good deeds
The second argument is that NO, America is not approaching equality with society. They
argue this purely through income and unemployment statistics. Their main point is to prove that
white people have advantages over other races, and this is likely linked to some racial bias.
When I read these articles, I found the more persuasive one to be the first article (YES)
because, although it didnt provide as many statistics as the following, it did seem to cover more
logical points and explain in a very viewer friendly way. The article seemed to be more viewer
friendly, focusing on the problems we have as a whole instead of pointing fingers to prove a
point. It goes over the natural ability we have as people to work towards and achieve our dreams.
The article defines the American Dream, and shows how anyone has access to it in their lives.
The article well depicts a sense of hope and assures that the future will be well because the
American people are good. The other article just tries using numbers which arent as enjoyable to
the majority.
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Now when it comes to my opinion, Id have to say I dont completely agree with either of
the articles. I dont think America is reaching equality, but I think this for completely different
reasons than the second article. I agree more with the first article, but there are some things that
would make the topic much better. First, I would like to bring up the word Privilege. Google
defines first as a Right. When we think of rights, the first article explains it eloquently. It states
that rights are the American Dream, being Decent wages, fair working conditions, livable
housing, old-age security, health and welfare measures, conditions in which families can grow,
have education for their children, and respect in the community. This debunks all arguments
In this day and age, with an end to segregation and Jim Crow laws, with equal rights
given to all men to achieve the American Dream, poverty and crime dont have as much to do
with race as they have everything to do with character. Brookings Institute did a study and found
3 simple rules if you want to avoid poverty. If you follow these 3 rules, you are extremely likely
to make it to the middle class. The rules are, 1. Graduate High School. 2. Dont have kids till
youre married. And 3. Get a job. These rules apply to all races and ethnic groups in the United
States. If you do all those three things, your chances of entering poverty is only 2%, and youll
Many of these allegations towards racism and sexism are all turned towards an ever-
growing desire for socialism. Socialism itself is when all the means of production, distribution,
and exchange are owned or regulated by the community as a whole. As quoted by Ben Shapiro
The basic premise of socialism is Im here, Im breathing, give me crap I have a right to
healthcare. I can force that doctor to go to medical school, spend 200,000 dollars, spend her
entire life learning medicine, and then I can walk into her house and I can force her to buy me
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medicine Its immoral. You dont have the right to somebody elses labor, thats called
slavery, or indentured servitude, and it was ruled out in the 13th amendment. I argue this point
because we are approaching an age where, as stated in the first article, our children accept a
life of lower expectations; where politics is a zero-sum game and where any forms of
disapproval towards differing opinions can be taken as a threat and be confronted with physical
harm.
I hope we can go back to the equality of opportunity, and that we can learn how to be a
fighting generation again, letting our freedom ring, and our desire for a better future show
Citations
Haskins, Ron. Three Simple Rules Poor Teens Should Follow to Join the Middle Class.
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