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Kristin Medina
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Professor Milton
Rhetorical Analysis Essay
An author named Sherry Turkle wrote the article, Connected, But Alone? This article
was a speech given by Turkle at a TED Conference in April 2012. Turkle is an Abby Rockefeller
Professor of Social Studies of Science and Technology at MIT. She is also a licensed clinical
psychologist with a degree from Harvard University. The article, Connected but Alone? by
Sherry Turkle persuades us that technology ends up hiding people from each other even when
they are regularly connected. Her intended audience appears to be people who are involved with
digital technology and education but also the public in general which is anyone. Her purpose is
to show that although she is still excited about technology, she is troubled that it is changing the
way people interact to each other. She believes people are sacrificing conversation for simple
connection.
Turkle identifies within the first couple minutes of her twenty-minute speech that she is a
mother. She uses pathos by sharing with the audience a picture of her daughter and her
daughters friends sitting in a living room. Each one of the girls are on their cell phones and do
not appear to be communicating with one another. This draws forth emotion from the audience
because it allows them to see a significant part of her personal life. An example such as this one
and others like it provides emotional significance that coaxes a reaction from the audience as
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they begin to relate it to the way in which they communicate with their friends, family, and
In addition, Turkle uses an ethical appeal; she reveals that she is a clinical psychologist.
Her experience and long career provide her with a proper appeal for her audience. She tells her
readers that she has been working with the virtual communities since 1996. Her tone is
professional but also down-to-earth. For example, she states, I see that people cant get enough
of each other, if and only if they can have each other at a distance, in amounts they can control. I
call it the Goldilocks effect: not to close, not too far, just right (Turkle). She sounds educated
but also uses the example of a fairy tale many Americans can relate with from their own
childhood.
currently. These examples seem to have a strong emotional appeal. For instance, she relates
An 18-year-old boy who uses texting for almost everything says to me wistfully, Someday,
someday, but certainly not now, Id like to learn how to have a conversation (Turkle). In
another example she tells how a 50-year-old man believes that he doesnt have any real
colleagues at work anymore. Hes afraid to interrupt other workers because theyre too busy on
their email (Turkle). These situations may influence the reader to feel concerned about these
communication problems.
The way in which she presents the information not only appeals to the emotions of the
argumentation and persuasion signifies a strong level of maturity and efficiency. She uses a
PowerPoint presentation to illustrate her points, and a few of her slides contain pictures, but her
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use of simple phrases and words make the presentation relatively easy to comprehend. An
example of this can be seen in her statement, Were letting technology take us places that we
dont want to go (Turkle). This may be a simple statement in itself, but it has large implications
for the audience. The words letting and take us used in that context implies that individuals
have control over the way that they are impacted by external influences, which is a meaningful
Furthermore, Turkle talks about another emotional appeal when she speaks about
purchasing robots for the elderly. The robot seemed to be looking into her eyes. It seemed to be
following the conversation. The woman was comforted (Turkle). It gives the impression that
those humans interaction no longer exists. This is quite upsetting that the elderly has to resort to
an object that doesnt feel anything, instead of the comfort of their family. That is what the world
has come to, where we cant have a decent conversation with our own family that we have to buy
a robot to keep our family entertained. It does touches people heart because there are many
families in which they put their parents into homes and pay strangers to care for them due to
extremity use of the technology taking over their lives and to be able to control it. As we read
articles about issues that concern us, we should also be aware of rhetorical techniques that
authors use to persuade us to accept their opinions. It is important to be able to analyze these
techniques so we can decide which ones provide us with valid evidence. Likewise, being aware
of invalid or faulty evidence can protect us from drawing the wrong conclusions when deciding
about an issue.
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