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Natalie Souza
Dr. HH
December 9, 2017
As I approach the end of my time at Belmont, I cant help but reflect on how
different my life looks compared to how it did when I began my academic career four
years ago. Nearly everything that I identified myself with my freshman year has
completely changed, and while that change was terrifying at times, it has made me grow
I entered Belmont as a music major with no sense of direction for the future. I
knew that I had a passion for music, but did not know how this passion translated into
career aspirations. While I loved learning about music and enjoyed my classes, there was
something that was always off my freshman year. I wasnt happy, not even in the slightest
bit. Having moved 1000 miles away from home, leaving behind my friends, family and
boyfriend back in Connecticut, I felt completely displayed. I could not shake the
homesickness that hung over me at all times. The friends I had made at Belmont did not
make the situation better. They say misery loves company and let me tell you, whoever
they are, they are spot on. I became friends with people who, like me, struggled to find
their place in Nashville, and more specifically, at Belmont. This only heightened my
homesickness and made me feel lost. All my life I had turned to music when I felt this
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way, but in this year, not even music helped. In fact, I longer found joy in music, though it
esteem. I was in a relationship that became toxic quickly, and although deep down I knew
that things had changed beyond repair, I held on too tightly and for far too long, losing
myself in the process. By the time we broke up the summer before my sophomore year, I
had no clue who I was anymore and knew that something needed to change.
I began my sophomore year with the mindset that this year was going to be
different. This was going to be my year. However, my first semester did not uphold these
expectations. While I found new friends who have become such important people in my
life today, I still couldnt shake the doubt, insecurities and sadness that surrounded me.
That is until one day I finally snapped. I was overwhelmed by the unhappiness I felt and
knew it needed to change and that started with my major. I remember calling my mom
one afternoon, balling my eyes out, telling her I had no clue what I wanted to do with my
life, but this sure as hell wasnt it. I went back and forth with what major I wanted to
change to, but in the back of my mind I always knew what I wanted to change to: English.
I had always enjoyed my English classes in middle school and high school, and more
student. That being said, I realized I not only wanted to major in English, but also
Language and American Literature II. Although both of these classes were survey classes,
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they required me to think more critically and adapt as both a reader and writer. They
showed me the love I had for writing and literature, but also made me realize that I
needed to push myself to improve my skills. It was in American Literature II that I wrote
my first (lengthy) critical essay. Dr. Trout had allowed us to submit a draft of the paper so
she could provide feedback before the actual paper was due on the day of the final. I
spent the entirety of my Easter break working on this paper and felt pretty confident
when I turned it in as a draft. When Dr. Trout handed me back my paper, she had entire
page typed of changes I needed to make or things that were missing from my argument.
However, this was not discouraging because with every critique she gave, she also gave
have thought of on my own. It made me realize that there was much I needed to improve
While this American Literature class helped spark my love for the major, it was
Critical Reading and Writing that made me certain that I had made the right decision to
theory, I learned to not only analyze texts from different lenses, but also to look at life
through these different lenses. With each of our papers, I was able to discuss and grapple
with ethical questions that seem to play a major role in all societies. In this way, I could
empathize with the different works, which is a skill I have come to value greatly. I believe
these skills have made me a better student, a better person, and also a better future
teacher. I want to foster these skills in my own students, especially in a society that seems
to use force to solve their problems rather than engaging in thoughtful conversation. In
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addition to teaching my students, I believe these skills will help me create more
However, Critical Reading and Writing was not the only class that has helped
prepare more for the future and shape me as a person. Through taking Senior English
Seminar, I have been forced to reflect on the English and Humanities community as well
as my own personal experience as an English major. I have come to realize, that all my
English courses have changed me in some way. For my first essay in this class, I chose to
edit a piece a wrote in Art of the Essay. The topic of the essay was on lose, and I had
written a short two-and-a-half-page piece about the emotionally toxic relationship I was
in my freshman year. The entirety of the essay was an extended metaphor, which
expressed the pain and struggle I went through, but offered no personal accounts. I hid
behind my metaphor, too afraid to offer my reader details that were too personal.
However, Senior English Seminar has pushed me to grapple with all the emotions I had
during this relationship and the ones I still struggle with today. Although writing about
specific details and incidents about my relationship was and is difficult, it has taught me
so much about who I am and how this difficult time in my life gave me a space to grow as
a person. Being honest and open with myself has also encouraged me to write more
freely about my emotions. One night this semester, while lying in bed, I had an
overwhelming impulse to write about an experience I had over the summer that has
caused me to experience a lot of shame and inner struggle. I even adapted and added to
this note I had written in my phone and submitted it as my letter for Senior English
Seminar. In this letter I was more honest than I have ever been in my writing, which is
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something I would never had been able to do four years ago, let alone one year ago. I feel
a sense of relief knowing that I have writing as an outlet to explore the many emotions
and experiences of my life. It makes me feel better prepared as person going out into a
My second essay for Senior English Seminar also gives me hope for my future, only
this time on a more academic level. I chose to research empowerment supports that can
about countless different methods and approaches that I was completely unaware of,
including the way the colors in your classroom can affect the energy and motivation of
the passion behind this research has come from my English courses. In my courses, I have
learned about disenfranchised voices who are perceived as other simply because of their
gender, sexuality, race, ethnicity, religion or economic status. Through the discussions I
have in my English courses about these marginalized groups, I have learned to empathize
with people who are different than me, but to also advocate for them. Literature has
given me a passion for giving voices to those who are often silenced by society. This
My time at Belmont was nothing like I expected it to be. If you asked me four
years ago how my life would look like today, I would have described a person completely
unlike myself. However, I can say without a trace of doubt that becoming an English
major was the best decision I made at Belmont, for it has shown me my potential as a
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student, as a future teacher, and most importantly as person who yearns to understand