Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Professor Kalas
Evaluation of fiction-
Title-Noahs Ark
Evaluation-
Plot: A re-telling of the story where Jesus told Noah to build an ark and take two of each animal
so when it rained for forty days and forty nights they would all be safe.
Believability- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: You can tell that Noah trusted God and wanted to do what he was asked. You can feel
Noahs trust through the words by them saying that people were making fun of him but he
Other Considerations- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: There was clear conflict between the rest of the people believing why Noah was
building the ark. Also, there was conflict in in doubting if the rain would ever stop. The
Comment: The language used was related for children to understand. The dialogue that was used
was perfect for children to understand what the story is about instead of the dialogue they used
Pacing- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: flowed nicely together and was not too fast for this age group.
Character- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Noah was the dynamic protagonist in this story. He overcame obstacles to get an ark
built in time before the rain. He didnt seem to have any help to build it. Then he had to fit all the
Setting- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: There was missing detail of where or how the ark was being built.
Theme- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I think there was an absence of didacticism because it was Jesus said, build it and
you did now get in and stay until the rain stops and you did. The Bible had a little harder lesson
to be learned from this story. The children might not get the same message from this book.
Other Considerations- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: The mood and tone are good for small children. I believe they can understand the folk
Is it a well-rounded piece? 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: for children of this age group it is a well-rounded piece because they can relate with
how the words are spoken. They can have fun with the pictures and animals in the book.
Overall Rating- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Noahs ark is one of my favorite bible stories. I do believe that this version is better
for small children to understand more about it than reading from the bible.
Synopsis- This is a myth about a Native American boy whose father was the sun and he sets out
of the story.
Compelling details- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Little known facts of why they say the boys father was the sun.
Fascinating comparisons- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: How they compared the sun to be a lord was very interesting. Also, how the boy had
to pass test so the sun knew that it was his boy was interesting.
Comments: Very unusual that a human would actually believe that the sun was his father.
Personalized content- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: There was some first-person accounts when the boy ws talking to the sun. Also when
the sun was telling him what he needed to do to pass the test so he knew that he was his boy.
Accuracy- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Myths always mix facts and fiction together, the same goes for this story. You know
that a boy doesnt just turn into an arrow and get shot up to the sky.
Attractive design- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Photo or artwork- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Very nice tribal artwork. Makes the story feel more real.
Is it a well-rounded piece? 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: As far as myths go it was believable to a point. I did not feel that children would
believe that a boy turns into an arrow and shoots off to the sky.
Rating 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I am not a fan of myths and folklore but this story was pretty interesting.
Summary- Three little pigs leave home an encounter a big bad wolf this story tells how they take
care of him.
Evaluation-
Plot- Three little pigs left home to make their own way. Along the way each pig encountered
material to build a house and a big bad wolf. Each pig deals with the wolf in a different way.
Believability- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: This story is more detailed than your regular three little huff and puff and blow your
house down pig story. It has insight into what the wolf and pigs are thinking.
pig.
Other Considerations- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: There was clear conflict between each pig and the wolf but in the end, it turned out
Comment: There was always the understatement that the pig would outsmart the wolf and it
turned out to be right. You could tell by how all the added dialogue of the wolf being clever and
how he was thinking of different approaches but none of them seemed to work.
Pacing- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Had a nice even flow to it. The story even rhymed a little.
Character- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: The character of the wolf was portrayed how a wolf might be. They seem to be
lurking and waiting for their next meal and the story did great by showing that.
Setting- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I am kind of mutual on the setting because it gives good detail of where they aare but
Theme- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: The lesson here seems to be that some pigs are smarter than others. I look at it as
Comment: Mood and tone was playful for little children and while reading it to them they can
huff and puff with you. Makes the story interactive as well.
Is it a well-rounded piece? 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: This version seemed to give more detail to the little pigs. It was relatable to children
for younger ages and you can be interactive while reading it to the children.
Overall rating 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I like this version because you get to know more about the pigs instead of the whole
Title- Rapunzel
Publisher- Clavis
Summary- A witch locks Rapunzel in a tower and she is the only one to visit her every day when
Evaluation-
Plot: When Rapunzel meets a prince, they plan an escape for her but when the evil witch finds
Believability- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Children can relate with this princess and feel sad when her hair gets cut off. There is
Comment: No dramatic question is present in the story. Just a fairy tale being told.
Other considerations- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: Had a very satisfying ending because the princess got to finally go home to her
parents.
Comment: Dialogue was relatable to children and how they can perceive a story.
Pacing- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: They story came together nicely and was not too fast or slow.
Character- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: The protagonist character is Rapunzel because she is the one who is stuck in the tower
Setting- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: The detail of the modern day seems accurate with princes and princess. They had
Theme- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I didnt feel that there was any lesson this story was trying to teach just telling a story.
Other Considerations- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I felt that the mood and tone of this version of Rapunzel was dull. It didnt have much
excitement in it.
Is it a well-rounded piece? 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Comment: I dont feel it was a bad book but I would not say it was well rounded either. I believe
Overall rating- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
It was a good childrens book but I remember Rapunzel being more energetic and exciting.