Beruflich Dokumente
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Writing the poem
You may work with a partner or on your own
You will choose two different perspectives to feature in the poem Commented [PL1]: Student choice is an important
You will follow the steps in this packet to plan, create your first draft, revise, and component of differentiating instructtion
1) Are you working alone or with a partner? If youre working with a partner, write down their
name below:
Now use the chart to plan your own poem. Remember, Voice 1 and Voice 2 should each speak
alone at least 6 times, and both voices should speak together at least 4 times.
Voice 1 = Maria
Voice 2 = Jackie
Spoken alone by Voice 1 Both voices say together Spoken alone by Voice 2
1) Soy Jackie 1) Somos amigas 1) Soy Maria Commented [PL4]: These students chose to highlight
their shared cultural background by writing and
(Im Jackie) ( Were friends) Im Maria presenting their poem in Spanish. As they presented
their poem, I projected the English translation of their
2) Me gusta salir con mis work on the board for the rest of the class to follow
along.
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3) Me gusta dormir
(I like to sleep a lot) 3) Me gusta a cocinar
(I like to cook )
5) Mi dia favorito es el
viernes (my favorite day is 4)Tenemos el mismo sentido
friday) de humor (we have the same 5) Mi adiccion es mi telfono
sense of humor) (my addiction is my phone)
Soy Jackie
(Im Jackie)
Soy Maria
(Im Maria)
Somos amigas
(Were friends)
Me gusta cocinar
(I like to cook)
Mi adiccion es mi telfono
( I am addicted to my phone)
Name ________________________________________
TWO-VOICE POEM PROJECT - PEER EDITING Commented [PL5]: I collaborated with the Peer
Tutoring Center to arrange for tutors to come into class
Use the provided rubric to get one classmate and one peer tutor to revise your paper. Be sure to sit down next to the person so to help my students edit their first drafts. This allowed
you can make immediate adjustments together. for more opportunities for students to receive
individualized attention.
Comments: Comments:
Comments: Comments:
Grammar/mechanics/formatting Grammar/mechanics/formatting
poem is formatted properly poem is formatted properly
One voice is aligned to the left One voice is aligned to the left
One voice is aligned to the right One voice is aligned to the right
Shared voice parts in the center Shared voice parts in the center
poem is free of grammatical and spelling poem is free of grammatical and spelling
mistakes mistakes
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Me gusta cocinar
(I like to cook)
Mi adiccion es mi telfono
( I am addicted to my phone)
Poem Structure
-each voice
speaks at least 6
times
-the voices
switch back and
forth
-at least 4
shared voice
parts
-poem ends on a
shared voice
part
Poem Content
-two different
perspectives are
presented
clearly
-strong,
interesting, and
varied word
choice
Grammar/mech
anics/formattin
g
-poem is
formatted
properly
-poem is free of
grammatical and
spelling
mistakes
Presentation
-voice is loud,
clear, and varied
-poem is
memorized well,
with few to no
mistakes
-Maintains good
eye contact with
the audience
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