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Rhetorical Analysis
Derek Perez
Rhetorical Analysis
Introduction
In the article The Effects of Social Network Site Use on Appearance Investment and
Desire for Cosmetic Surgery Among Adolescent Boys and Girls, the authors discuss the role of
social network use relating to the alterations of adolescents body image. The article features
three contributions to the theory about appearance pressures and appearance changing strategies.
The first contribution, according to the authors, the study shows that appearance pressures may
also be experienced online and are thus not constrained to face-to-face interactions and
traditional media (Sex Roles 2014, p. 291). Second, the current study highlights increased
appearance-changing strategies (Sex Roles 2014, p. 291). Third, the study contributes to
The article presents the argument that social network use can greatly affect adolescents
into altering their appearance. This article will be analyzed for its rhetorical and the argument
that it presents.
Discussion
There are essential tools in analyzing an academic paper, the understanding of ethos,
pathos, and logos. The understanding of ethos is the understanding of analyzing the paper for
credibility. For example, does the author give enough sources and credit in their paper? Or is
there enough evidence from sources that can hold up theyre argument?. pathos deals with the
emotional analysis of the paper. An example can be does the reader relate emotionally with the
authors emotions?. Finally, logos deals with the logical analysis of the paper. Example, does
the authors paper contain evidence, points, and the paper in general make sense?
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To establish credibility, the authors must understand the ethos appeal. For example, the
authors establish credibility with acknowledgements, thanking the fund for Scientific Research
of Sexuality, and the Ministry of Education, Culture, and Science for providing funds for their
research (Sex Roles 2014, p. 293). The authors appeal to ethos is effective because they state the
institutes where they possibly give lectures. D. A. de Vries, J. Peter is part of the Amsterdam
The Netherlands Youth Institute, and H. de Graaf for Rutgers WPF (World Population
Foundation) (Sex Roles 2014, p. 283). Furthermore, they have their paper reviewed by a peer.
We also thank Patti Valkenburg for her valuable comments on earlier versions of this paper
For pathos, the authors express an emotional appeal in the article, if any. For example,
some would feel a short amount of sympathy for the adolescents who wish to alter their
appearance because of pressure to fit in. As for the pathos appeal, the article had an attempt in
the introduction. In their daily lives, adolescents across the world experience appearance
pressures from several sources (Sex Roles 2014, p. 283), Therefore, the article didnt express or
have any attempt to express any emotional appeals. Finally, it was not very effective for
expressing some sort of pathos appeal as this article aims to become a more clinical article.
To see if the article is logical, the authors must show that they understand the logos
appeal. In the logos appeal, the authors support their argument with many references they cite in
the article, over 50 references (Sex Roles 2014, p. 293-295). The authors argue that social
network use may influence adolescents wanting cosmetic surgery and they argue logically with
various statistics and research. Zero-order correlations showed that desire to undergo cosmetic
surgery, appearance investment, and frequency of social network site use were generally
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positively associated at and across time points among boys and girls (Sex Roles 2014, p. 289).
Finally, the authors kept with their subject. Therefore, the article should not have any logical
fallacies.
Aside from the ethos, pathos, and logos appeal, the articles overall appeal is whether it
was consistent, if the article had counterarguments, etc. The overall tone of the article was
consistent as it didnt shift at all and the impact that may have had on an audience wouldnt be
very impactful. Though, the authors did not include any counterarguments because they kept
consistent with their primary argument, the use of social network has effect on adolescents
wanting to alter their appearance. Next, was the article somewhat persuasive? No, its more
informative than it is persuasive because it gives stats and research about the impact of social
network use with cosmetic surgery for adolescents. The strongest aspect in the article is the
amount of research the authors showed to further and strengthen their evidence in their
argument. Though, the weakest aspect is the lack of a pathos appeal and any counterarguments.
This article should also appeal to a certain audience that may find this paper interesting
and worth reading. For this article, a scholarly audience with interest in the gender studies field.
Gender may also moderate the effects of appearance investment on cosmetic surgery.
Conclusion
showed an emotional appeal, and for its overall appeal. The article showed that social network
use can greatly affect an adolescents physical appearance, but in contrast to the authors
expectations, the use of social network and the alteration of the physical appearance of
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adolescents were not moderated by gender. Therefore, the article presented its argument
References
de Vries, D. A., Peter, J., Nikken, P., & de Graaf, H. (2014). The effect of social network site use
on appearance investment and desire for cosmetic surgery among adolescent boys and