Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Text Organization:
A thesis
Arguments
Reiteration or Conclusion
Language Features :
Emotive words (e.g. worried, alarmed etc)
Words that qualify statements (e.g. usual, Probably etc)
Words that link arguments (e.g. firstly, However, therefore etc)
An analytical exposition is a type of spoken or written text that is intended to persuade the
listeners or readers that something is the case. To make the persuasion stronger, the speaker
or writer gives some arguments as the fundamental reasons why something is the case. This
type of text can be found in scientific books, journals, magazines, newspaper articles,
academic speech or lectures, research report etc. Analytical expositions are popular among
science, academic community and educated people. The generic structure of analytical
exposition usually has three components: (1) Thesis, (2) Arguments and (3) Reiteration or
conclusion.
Argument 1:
Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in
many places. The daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported
corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments or public services of this country.
Corruptions happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get
some documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay.
Manipulations happen everywhere
Argument 2:
The actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to
an end when the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit
corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen in police department, courts where judges,
public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do corruption. All of us also heard in the end of
2004, Probosutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah
Agung which becomes the highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps you have
to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there. You will see practices of bribery
and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions becomes our culture.
Do you like it?
Argument 3:
The citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in
which people have opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules
because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street when they drive a car or ride
motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are
caught by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The
officer let them go then. In other words, the citizens and officers are the same, doing
corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the rules, and
willing to report any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting
country in the world.
Reiteration/ conclusion:
Conclusion Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture
in Indonesia if it is not ended soon by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe
penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this country?
Thesis:
Reading habit is poor among Indonesians because most people haven’t realized the
importance of reading
Argument 1
Reading is important to transform knowledge and technology. By reading, one knows the
world. He or she will understand what he doesn’t see by himself or herself. The lines of the
paragraphs in an article contain pieces of knowledge. The knowledge is needed to improve
the quality of human’s life. Technology transformation from other country can only be done
by reading a lot various sources of literature. Valuable books in libraries and bookstores
mean nothing if they are not read.
Argument 2
Realizing the importance of reading will make someone motivated to read. When we know
that something is very important because it can give us valuable information, we will try to
get or do the thing. For example, a businessman who always follows latest information or
news, will know what to do in his/ her business. He will make a good decision to make a
transaction. Most people in all developed countries have realized the importance or reading
and they have good reading habits. In bus and train stations, vehicles, waiting rooms, parks,
people like reading. They enjoy reading which gives them valuable knowledge and
inspiration.
Argument 3
A good understanding toward the importance of reading can be achieved by well organized
and effective campaign. To plant an understanding in a generation’s minds is not an easy job.
It needs a hard work from all components of the nation, especially the government. A serious
campaign which is organized by the central and local government can help common people
wake up and stand to face the real competition. The campaign can be done through various
kinds of mass media such as TV, radio, booklets, bulletins, newspapers, magazines. It can
also be conducted by teachers, parents and all people who care.
Recommendation
Therefore, a nation-wide effective campaign of the importance of reading by all components
of the nation should be done, facilitated by the government, to face the tighter competition.
The world has forced globalization. Those people with little knowledge will be left behind.
To speed up the better change in this country, a good reading habit is really important.
Corruption
Thesis
(Announcement of issue concern)
Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What is the relation between money and
corruption? Well, corruption is common everywhere in the world, even in the United States.
It’s just a matter of intensity. However, it is quite shocking when one reliable survey claims
Jakarta as the most corrupt place in Indonesia.
Argument 1
The survey has made me sad, actually, because I stay and earn a living here in the capital. As
most people know, Tanjung Priok port smuggling is not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs who
want to minimize their tax payments tend to do such a thing more often. They even bribe the
officials.
Argument 2
Well, I think the measures taken so far to overcome the problem by punishing the corruptors
is still not far enough. We have to prevent the younger generations from getting a bad
mentality caused by corruption.
Recommendation
I believe we should start at the earliest stages in school and I think everyone should be
involved in the effort to eradicate corruption. We must not make any distinction.
Adapted from: The Jakarta Post, February 2005
Before we are going to smoke, it is better to look at the fact. About 50 thousands people
die every year in Britain as direct result of smoking. This is seven times as many as die in
road accidents. Nearly a quarter of smokers die because of diseases caused by smoking.
Ninety percent of lung cancers are caused by smoking. If we smoke five cigarettes a day,
we are six times more likely to die of lung cancer than a non smoker. If we smoke twenty
cigarettes a day, the risk is nineteen greater. Ninety five percent of people who suffer of
bronchitis are people who are smoking. Smokers are two and half times more likely to die
of heart disease than non smokers.
Additionally, children of smoker are more likely to develop bronchitis and pneumonia. In
one hour in smoky room, non smoker breathes as much as substance causing cancer as if
he had smoked fifteen cigarettes.
Smoking is really good for tobacco companies because they do make much money from
smoking habit. Smoking however is not good for every body else.
Notes on the generic structure of this example of analytical exposition
As we know that both analytical exposition and hortatory exposition are classified as
argumentative essay. Both present argument to support the thesis state in the orientation.
This thesis places the writer’s position on the essay. From the generic structure, what
make big different is that analytical exposition ends with paragraph to strengthen the
thesis while hortatory makes a recommendation for readers.
Thesis: This pre-conclusive paragraph states the writer’s point of view about the topic
discussed. Writer has show himself in clear position of the discussed topic. Paragraph 1 is
the thesis of this analytical exposition text. It states the fact of the very fatal impact of the
smoking habit. Clearly the writer wants to say that smoking is not a good habit.
Reiteration: This end paragraph actually is restating the thesis. It is something like
conclusive paragraph from the previous arguments. The last paragraph of this example of
analytical exposition points again that smoking is not good for smokers and people
around smokers. However smoking is very good for Cigarette Companies
Tesis:
Korupsi telah terjadi selama bertahun-tahun dan hari ini menjadi budaya buruk di Indonesia karena
tiga alasan
Argumen 1:
Indonesia yang paling dewasa atau orang asing telah dikenal dan mengakui bahwa korupsi terjadi di
banyak tempat. Surat kabar harian, program berita di TV dan radio telah melaporkan korupsi yang
dilakukan di mana-mana, hampir di semua departemen atau pelayanan publik dari negara ini.
Korupsi terjadi di departemen pendidikan kesehatan, dan bank. Ketika kita berhasil mendapatkan
beberapa dokumen di kantor-kantor pelayanan publik, kita biasanya membutuhkan banyak uang
untuk membayar. Manipulasi terjadi di mana-mana
Argumen 2:
Tindakan untuk menghilangkan korupsi lemah. Budaya semakin kuat tampaknya tidak datang
berakhir ketika lembaga-lembaga yang bertanggung jawab yang harus memperkuat keadilan hari ini
melakukan korupsi. Ini adalah yang terburuk. Korupsi terjadi di kepolisian, pengadilan di mana
hakim, jaksa penuntut umum, pengacara membuat kesepakatan untuk melakukan korupsi. Semua
dari kita juga mendengar pada akhir tahun 2004, Probosutejo melaporkan bahwa ia telah menyuap
Mahkamah Agung, Mahkamah Agung atau disebut yang menjadi tingkat tertinggi di mana keadilan
dapat diperoleh. Mungkin Anda harus mencoba untuk datang ke pengadilan setempat dan melihat
apa yang terjadi di sana. Anda akan melihat praktik penyuapan dan jenis lain dari korupsi. Oleh
karena itu, kita dapat mengatakan bahwa korupsi menjadi budaya kita. Apakah Anda suka?
Argumen 3:
Warga tidak memiliki goodwill untuk melawan korupsi. Mereka menciptakan situasi di mana orang-
orang memiliki kesempatan untuk melakukan korupsi. Warga ingin melanggar aturan karena mereka
tidak disiplin. Misalnya, di jalan ketika mereka mengendarai mobil atau sepeda motor naik, mereka
tidak memiliki SIM atau dokumen yang diperlukan. Kemudian, mereka tertangkap oleh polisi
setempat. Untuk menghindari lebih banyak kesulitan, mereka ingin menyuap petugas. Petugas
membiarkan mereka pergi kemudian. Dengan kata lain, warga dan petugas yang sama, melakukan
korupsi bersama-sama. Kalau saja orang-orang yang kritis, disiplin, dan mematuhi aturan, dan
bersedia untuk melaporkan setiap perilaku yang salah, negara ini tidak akan menjadi nomor satu
negara merusak di dunia.
Pengulangan / kesimpulan:
Kesimpulan Berdasarkan alasan, kita dapat menyimpulkan bahwa korupsi menjadi budaya buruk di
Indonesia jika tidak segera berakhir oleh kita semua. Tampaknya bahwa harus ada lebih hukuman
berat bagi koruptor. Apakah kita masih peduli tentang masa depan negara ini?
Sebelum kita akan merokok, lebih baik untuk melihat kenyataan. Sekitar 50 ribu orang meninggal
setiap tahun di Inggris sebagai akibat langsung dari merokok. Ini adalah tujuh kali sebanyak
meninggal dalam kecelakaan di jalan. Hampir seperempat dari perokok mati karena penyakit yang
disebabkan oleh merokok.
Sembilan puluh persen dari kanker paru-paru disebabkan oleh merokok. Jika kita merokok lima
batang sehari, kami adalah enam kali lebih mungkin untuk meninggal akibat kanker paru-paru
daripada non perokok. Jika kita merokok dua puluh batang sehari, risikonya lebih besar sembilan
belas. Sembilan puluh lima persen orang yang menderita bronkitis adalah orang-orang yang
merokok. Perokok kali dua setengah lebih mungkin meninggal akibat penyakit jantung daripada non
perokok.
Selain itu, anak-anak perokok lebih mungkin untuk mengembangkan bronkitis dan pneumonia.
Dalam satu jam di kamar berasap, non perokok bernapas sebanyak zat penyebab kanker seolah-olah
ia telah merokok lima belas rokok.
Merokok benar-benar baik bagi perusahaan tembakau karena mereka menghasilkan uang banyak
dari kebiasaan merokok. Merokok namun tidak baik untuk setiap tubuh lain.
Seperti kita tahu bahwa baik analitis eksposisi dan menegur eksposisi diklasifikasikan sebagai esai
argumentatif. Kedua argumen hadir untuk mendukung negara tesis dalam orientasi. Tesis ini
menempatkan posisi penulis pada esai. Dari struktur generik, apa yang membuat berbeda besar
adalah bahwa eksposisi analitis berakhir dengan ayat untuk memperkuat tesis sementara menegur
membuat rekomendasi untuk pembaca.
Tesis: Ini pra-paragraf konklusif menyatakan titik penulis pandang tentang topik yang dibahas. Writer
memiliki menunjukkan dirinya dalam posisi yang jelas dari topik yang dibahas. Ayat 1 adalah tesis
dari teks ini eksposisi analitis. Ini menyatakan fakta dampak yang sangat fatal dari kebiasaan
merokok. Jelas penulis ingin mengatakan bahwa merokok bukanlah kebiasaan yang baik.
Argumen: Mempresentasikan argumen dalam teks eksposisi analitis adalah sama pentingnya dengan
memberikan alur konflik dalam teks naratif. Rangkaian argumen akan memperkuat tesis dinyatakan
sebelumnya. Dalam contoh teks eksposisi analitis, ayat 2 dan 3 adalah argumen detail disajikan
dalam fakta pelaporan untuk mendukung bahwa merokok tidak baik bahkan untuk perokok sendiri.
Selain itu, orang yang tidak merokok tapi mereka berada di daerah berasap memiliki efek buruk juga
dari kebiasaan merokok.
Pengulangan: Ini paragraf akhir sebenarnya adalah ulangan tesis. Ini adalah sesuatu seperti konklusif
paragraf dari argumen sebelumnya. Paragraf terakhir dari contoh ini analitis eksposisi poin lagi
bahwa merokok tidak baik bagi perokok dan orang-orang di sekitar perokok. Namun merokok sangat
baik untuk Perusahaan Rokok
3. Reiteration
Bagian ini merupakan bagian penutup dari sebuah teks Analytical Exposition yang selalu terletak di
akhir paragraph. Reiteration berisi penulisan kembali atau penempatan kembali main idea yang
terdapat di paragraph pertama. Reiteration juga biasa disebut dengan conclusion.
Language Features Analytical Exposition (Kebahasaan)
Dalam sebuah Analytical Exposition Text, terdapat beberapa ciri-ciri kebahasaan seperti di bawah ini,
yaitu:
Menggunakan simple present
Mengunakan reltional process
Menggunakan internal conjunction
Menggunakan casual conjuction
Corruption has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in Indonesia for three
reasons.
Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in many
places. The daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions are done
everywhere, almost in all departments or public services of this country. Corruptions happen in health,
education departments and banks. When we manage to get some documents in public service offices, we
usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere.
The actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to an end
when the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit corruption. This is the worst.
Corruptions happen in police department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do
corruption. All of us also heard in the end of 2004, Probosutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme
Court, or called Mahkamah Agung which becomes the highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps
you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there. You will see practices of bribery and
other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions becomes our culture. Do you like it?
The citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in which
people ahave opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because they are not
disciplined. For example, in the street when they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving
license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they
like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words, the citizens and officers are the same,
doing corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the rules, and willing to report
any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Conclusion Based on the reasons, we can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in
Indonesia if it is not ended soon by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty for the
Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this country?
Further, music can unite people for a cause and changes the world. A song with good
lyric and striking deep chord can stimulate the universal feeling of all people. We can see it in
the case of the famous and legendary Michael Jacson's Heal the World. It can arouse
humanism of a lot people in this world.So what would the world be like without music? It
would be lonely.
First, modern schools tend to applyfast transferring knowledge because the school
needs to catch the target of curriculum. Every subject will tend to be given in demonstrative
method. Consequently students need extra media cover the subject. Since there is a laptop
on every students' desk, this method will help student to get better understanding.
From all of that, having mobile computer is absolutely useful for students who want
to catch the best result for their study. Buying laptop online is advisable because it will cut
the price. This online way is recommended since online shop also provide several laptop
types. Students just need to decide which type they really need.
Being physically active offers many advantage. In physical reword, exercise can
reduce weight then our body will become fitter. Exercise is also believed to reduce stress
levels, improve sleep patterns, and reduce the risk of heart disease, diabetes and some forms
of cancer. Beside physical advantage, exercise also brings good effects mentally. Due to the
fitter body, exercise can make us feel refreshed and happy then we can increase our
life quality and expectancy.
How can we do exercise while we are busy? Such question is commonly found among
us. Actually exercise can be done in simple ways. We can go walking while shopping. In the
office we can take stair rather than lift to run up and down. Or we can go cycling while enjoy
the leisure time.
Over all, doing exercise is little bit difficult in busy life but the little bit of exercise will
help better.
Fast Food
Fast food nowadays is considered a normal eating venture. People are not just eating
out on special occasions or weekends anymore. It means that all the time they mostly eat fast
foods. However is fast food good for health?
Fast food has its popularity in the 1940’s. Within a few years, fast-food operations
popped up everywhere. With the compelling rise in fast-food restaurants since the 1940’s,
oddly it started the rise in obesity and cancer during that same time period.
Fast food is highly processed with a wide array of additives. To ensure fast food’s low
cost, the fast food products are made with highly-processed ingredients to give it shelf-life, to
hold consistency, and to enhance flavor. Fast food is altered from its original healthy form.
It is not the calories in fast food which damage health and waistline. It is the chemical
additives such as aspartame and MSG (monosodium glutamate). Studies show that the
chemical additives lead to weight and disease issues.
So, there is absolutely nothing nutritional about fast food. Fast food simply feeds
hunger and craving.
Learning English
Why is Learning English Important? Language is the mean of communication.
Mostly groups of society have their own languages. Some of them appear the top global
languages. Most people in the world hear about English, Arabic, and Mandarin. However
English is the most global spoken language. Then if a man wants to catch a global goal, he
has to master English.
Besides usage in daily interaction, English is also used as a key to open doors leading
to scientific and technical knowledge. No wonder we find manual guides andinstructions of
many devices written in English. Even if we have a pack of instant noodle, we will see the
cooking instruction also written in English. This transfer of science and technic will include
many countries in economic, social and politics developement.
Finaly, the most easily seen in the importance of learning English is that most top
requirement in filling job opportunities is the ability using English; active or passive.
Job applicants who master English are more favourable than ones who do not.
The above facts prove that everybody needs to learn English if he likes to greet the
global era.
Jakarta Issue
Jakarta is the second-worst place for expatriates to work in outside of the United States of America,
Canada and Western Europe. It is according to a recent report published by Businessweek.
The Businessweek report ranked emerging markets that might be challenging to move into due to
their level of pollution, disease, political violence and availability of good and services.
The report ranked Jakarta second, just below lagos in Nageria and above Riyadh Saudi Arabia, saying
the threat of violence from extremest, in particular, was serious drawback to living in Jakarta. Bombings
targeting foreign interests in Jakarta, such as the JW Marriot hotel bombing in 2003, have been repeated
elsewhere in the city.
The report said despite problem common to many developing cities such as the risk of disease, poor
sanitation, and excessive pollution, Indonesia can be an enticing location.
In response, the Jakarta administration took the report positively, saying it could spur the
administration to improve its performance.
Ninety percent of lung cancers are caused by smoking. If we smoke five cigarettes a
day, we are six times more likely to die of lung cancer than a non smoker. If we smoke twenty
cigarettes a day, the risk is nineteen greater. Ninety five percent of people who suffer
of bronchitis are people who are smoking. Smokers are two and half times more likely to die
of heart disease than non smokers.
Additionally, children of smoker are more likely to
developbronchitis and pneumonia. In one hour in smoky room, non smoker breathes as
much as substance causing cancer as if he had smoked fifteen cigarettes.
Smoking is really good for tobacco companies because they do make much money
from smoking habit. Smoking however is not good for every body else.
As the US. financial crisis has now spread to Europe, the oil-rich countries such as Saudi Arabia,
Kuwait and Arab Emirate which have accumulated hundreds of billion of Dollars in their foreign reserve, are
now reviewing their holding or investmentvehicle. They are looking for more diversified investmentoutside the
US and Europe.
Because of unfavorable political developments in Thailand and Malaysia over the past few months,
Indonesia which has largely Muslim population could become one of these oil-rich countries' favorite place for
foreign direct investment. That wil be true if the conditions, legal and market infrastructure are conducive for
Islamic financial instruments.
The government had improved the legal framework with the recent actment of laws on sharia
banking and bonds. The long term nature of Islamic bonds could make them the most
suitable investment instrument for Indonesia, as these bondsgrant an investor a share in an asset along with
the cash flows and risks commensurate with such ownership.
The financial crisis that has gripped the globe and weakening economic growth in the rest of the
world will serve to the government to accelerate the investment reform measures in order to grab the hidden
opportunity in the global crisis. (simplified from the jakartapos.com on Oct 9)
Gold is safe and profitable for investment. In uncertain situations, many people are
turning to gold because gold has a more stable value and regarded as currency without
limitation assets. It is secure and can be cashed out at any time we need. The Gold
values tend to be stable; take a look an IRA gold discussion. It is zero inflation effect. It is
very rare that the gold prices fell. Even every year, the gold price tends to increase.
Moreover, some people do not just think gold as an investment, but also as
collections. Because the character is a collection so the uniqueness and rareness are the
point. There might be coins that cost up to more than a million because of the history
variables, ownership, and perhaps an important event when the coin is launched.
Career in Translation
Functionally, translation is transferring the message or the meaning and not the
word. According to Nida, such translation is called dynamic equivalence translation. It tries
to bring the precise message in different language.
Many people like to watch Hollywood movie but many get trouble in understanding
to the actors' dialogue. So the way they get the understanding about the movie is reading the
translating text running. If Hindi translation is provided, it will bring the better
understanding for Indian moviegoer.Hollywood movie spread over other Asia countries.
Therefore,Arabic translation, Indonesian translation and Farsi translationare widely needed
and that is a big chance for English masterin that countries.
India is likely being an English speaking country. Indiatranslation will grow better
and. It seems Indonesia, Malaysiaand Filipina will reach that mark too soon. Translation
job will be great in amount and that is good development for translating job seekers.
Blog writing is an increasingly popular way to earn money online determined by the owner of the
blog. They are very popular because of tBlogs are usually written on a certain subject area but can vary as its
content is heir simplicity to get up and running. There are many free websites out there that will help you set
up your own blog if you choose to go that route because blog plus advertisement is a potential money
Article writing is also good money to earn money online. Make sure to gear your articles to promote
and advertise you own business ventures. These articles are a free way to market the products and services
you offer for free. The most effective advertising with these articles comes from the dialogue box that is
inserted at the end of each article. These dialogue boxes contain links to basically any website you would like
to drive traffic to. For instance, you might have one link in your dialogue box to a product you are selling and
one to a blog where you are promoting a discussing other products.
Writing takes some time to gain credibility through but once it’s done’ earning potential can become
very powerful.
The role of parent in assisting and directing children in using computer is very
necessary. Installation of software monitor such as key logger which has function to watch
and note all activities relating to keyboard usage is helpful but not enough to
protect children from potential harms. Children tend to hide what they have done in front
of the computer to their parent. They see that all of they have done are their privacy and no
one may know.
Many students select certain school depending more on short term factors like friend
influence and short distance from home. It is not bad since commuting actually needs much
cost. Choosing school which is closer to home will save time, energy and money. However if
that school is not accredited, the time and money spent along studying seems to be waste in
the long term because it could become a limiting factor in gaining future opportunities.
Accredited school is not the only factor which will drive student’s success. Personality
and characterization are very important too. However a student with good personality who
comes from an accredited school is better than the others.