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1. The way things usually go, we make an effort to notify most of our customers
regarding the status of their accounts, irregardless of their balance.
2. We find it necessary to inform you that we've located other office space to use during
the period of the project while the building is being remodeled.
3. Mrs. Hanson has referred our company to many useful sources; therefore, its
essential that the secretary draw up a certificate of appreciation for her as soon as
possible.
4. Considering the difficulties of the marketing team, we may want to give some thought
and reflection to the aforementioned idea presented by the production group.
5. He personally thinks that there are too few favorable surveys being returned back in
to the personnel department in order to justify a raise for anyone.
6. The marketing manager was forcefully prodded into making a poorly considered
decision.
7. I may have to answer in the positive, but I think the action you requested wouldn't
have the desired affect on the advertising campaign. It seems that you might have
overlooked this fact.
8. Long before the product was first introduced into the city, the marketing team planned
and strategized how to sort of reach the target population.
9. In past, bygone days, the company had an entire array of products which could have
been shown to any of our several potential buyers should they have happened to
stop by our only office.
10. Every one of the letters, notes, memos, and etc. should have arrived in the
courthouse no later than 15 February.
8. Long before the product first was introduced into the city, the marketing team planned
and strategized how to sort of reach the target population.
the
9. In ^ past, bygone days, the company had an entire array of products which could have
if had
been shown to any of our several (potential) buyers ^ should they ^have happened to
ped
stop ^ by our only office.
and
10. (Every one of) the letters, notes, ^memos, and etc. should have arrived in the courthouse
by
no later than^ 15 February.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
1. Per the previously stated conditions of our contract, you'll forthwith be receiving our
draft in the specified amount of $345.67.
2. Should it come about that you're unable to get adequate financing prior to the close
of business tomorrow, I'd advise you to consider seeking out a less expensive house.
3. The manager of the clothing store advised me that the suit had spots on it's jacket
prior to my purchasing it.
4. I'm happy to inform you that I was able to reach the manager in re her new
computer.
5. The court had delivered to me the exact same type of subpoena that you received.
6. Your telephone call referring to your horse has been duly recorded with good
intentions.
7. With regard to your request, I'm forwarding you all of my personal correspondence
received subsequent to 20 May.
9. Even though the machines were very tiny, they were significantly heavy and,
therefore, had to be shipped in accordance with governmental regulations.
10. Seeing how the commission has decided to consider the proposal that Ms.
Lawrence presented, the personnel director personally thinks it should applaud her
lobbying efforts.
Inflated Jargon
advise easement
inform } tell on margin
share
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
5. The court had delivered to me the exact same type of subpoena that you got.
Thank you for about (Thank you for calling me about...)
6. ^Your telephone call^ referring to your horse has been duly recorded with good
intentions.
As you requested sending
7. With regard to your request^, I am forwarding to^ you all of my personal
after
correspondence received^ subsequent to 20 May.
begun
started
8. We've^ inaugurated a series of two-hour workshops on the fundamental basics of
teaching English writing (techniques); this series will be one of several (programs)
we('re) plan(ning) to offer in the future.
9. Even though the machines were tiny, they were significantly heavy and, therefore,
had
(according to) ~ under
to be shipped^ in accordance with governmental regulations.
Because { is considering } 's
proposal
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10. Seeing how^ the commission has decided to consider the proposal that Ms.
Lawrence^
presented, the personnel director personally thinks it should applaud her lobbying
efforts.
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2. If there are decreases in freight rates by the shipping lines, there's the
possibility of their making our bids uncompetitive.
5. An audit of all the invoices for the institutional customers was performed
by Mrs. González.
10. There will certainly be an overheating of the radiator by our ancient en-
gine.
1. After customers' requests for refunds are accepted by the manager of the
department, credit coupons are then sent to them by it.
2. Mr. Saddam has been informed of your recent assignment by the new
director.
3. There were chemical processors that were acquired from several sources
by the company's buyers.
4. The workshop following the teacher's presentation was cut short because
few people had questions.
5. The moldy cheese was taken out of the crates of good cheese by the dairy
manager and was eventually sold to pig farmers.
6. Purchasing the usual goods via the regular channels was Mr. Geer's de-
cision.
8. Their fulfilling a sales quota of nine trucks per month is the stipulation of
the manager of the sales department.
9. This television show was produced by Mr. Conn for children who'll soon
enter school.
10. The current decrease in output might be brought about by the fact that
there is little supervisory help.
{buy }
Mr. Geer decided to purchase through?
6. ^Purchasing the usual goods via^ the regular channels was Mr. Geer's
decision.
His firm's evaluators had to ('s) (in order to {measure} its
7. It was essential that ^ a check of the machinery^ be done by his firm's
evaluators ^ (to determine ^it's) output rate.
d}
The manager of the sales department stipulates insists on, requires
8. ^(Fulfilling) a sales quota of nine trucks per month is the stipulation of the
manager of the sales department.
Mr. Conn produced
9. ^This television show was produced by Mr. Conn for children who'll soon
enter school. ...soon entering...
Output might (currently) be decreasing because of
10. ^The current decrease in output might be brought about by the fact that
there is little supervisory help. .might (currently) be decreasing output.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
1. This colorful piece of plastic can be used to obtain money overseas and is honored in all
international hotels.
3. These 500 companies which have the highest yearly revenues will be recruiting on
campus.
4. In some area of the world, merchants use a small device of wood and beads to calculate
their profit.
5. At my school, some students eat their second meal of the day in this eating area.
6. Inc. magazine discusses the many dimensions of new, small, growing, creative
businesses.
7. The two largest American cities have only nasty, contaminated, gray environments in
common. [pollution]
8. These certificates of company ownership are bought and sold on the largest U.S. stock
exchange. [traded]
9. She ran water over her hands with a bit of soap after she got them dirty in the laboratory.
10. My high-tech electronic device attached to the phone is acting a little strange.
1. I'm writing to inform you that the product which you ordered has been out of
stock for somewhere around three weeks.
6. We've already previously gone through each of the reports and chosen the
most completely accurate one.
7. I'm writing you in regard to your interest in our training program--the matter
which we discussed earlier on the phone.
8. Files which are old and outdated should be discarded in the garbage.
9. If any problems which we didn't foresee should arise, please contact Mrs.
Zhurkov, who's our sales manager.
I saw the riot of the crowd. I saw the rioting crowd. I saw the crowd riot.
I'm hoping for the end of the war. I'm hoping for the war to end.
{allowing us to use}
{are waiting for} for our using
3. My associates and I await the realization of a decision ^which would allow us to utilize the facilities
(they have) available. ... their facilities ... permission to use ...
{understood }
We him because comprehended
4. He was^ hired^ on the premise that^ he had a good comprehension of^ our
{current} well
present-day^ situation^.
(<-------------->)
5. The information which is attached herewith is of a confidential nature.
read
6. We've already ~ previously {gone through} each of the reports and chosen the most completely
accurate one.
about
7. I'm writing (you) ^ in regard to your interest in our training program--the
what discussed
matter of which^ we spoke^ earlier on the phone.
1. While leaving the room, his head bumped into the dangling, low fixture.
2. In his arms, the teacher was holding a baby lecturing to the students.
4. At the next Toastmasters meeting, she wanted to give her speech badly.
6. To pay off their loan in full, they wanted to make the last payment on their car in
the bank.
7. After having played golf for twenty years, the courses designed by Arnold Palmer
(1929I10-20xx) still seemed challenging to me.
9. She decided on Friday to call him. [This sentence has two meanings. Give each
in a separate sentence.]
10. He talked over the raucous music with his guitar-picking pal. [This sentence has
two meanings because of the two-word verb. Give each in a separate sentence.]
Only John only sings only here only. He's a strong person and friend. [?]
Dangling Modifiers: The following pattern must be used: ... VERBAL ..., SUBJ ...
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{we }
For you you must
3. ^To swim well, ^some practice is required.
badly
4. At the next Toastmaster's meeting, she ^wanted^ to give her speech badly.
(Carla was) was inspired by her
5. When ^only a child, Carla's ^kindergarten teacher inspired her.
car ir
6. To pay off their^ loan (in full), they wanted to make the^ last payment on their car in the bank.
{I had } I still seemed challenged by
7. After (my) having played golf for twenty years, ^ the courses designed by Arnold Palmer still
seemed challenging.
I found
8. Driving home, ^the road was wet and slippery. While ...
On the next day, she DIFFERENT (on) the next day
9. ^She decided on the next day to call him ^.
10. He talked over the raucous music with his guitar-picking pal. [This sentence has two meanings
because of the two-word verb. Give each in a separate sentence.]
2. Dr. Zen is the area monk, and he'll be happy to meet you on April 13.
3. Enclosed is a reproduction of your ink drawing, which has been retouched and airbrushed and
which is for your collection.
4. The Gourmet-Gourmand Club announced a new and improved recipe for the creating of spinach
quiche.
5. On the counter, there's food that's tasty and healthy and cheap.
6. These hand-held, sophisticated computers have been created for salespeople who are in the
home-security business.
7. The CEO presented new guidelines for the hiring and promoting and rewarding and firing of vice-
presidents at the closed meeting which is being held by the pool.
The following sentence is oversubordinated. I.e., it's made too long by too many modifying clauses
and phrases. Break it up, making your editing changes right in the example. Then rewrite the entire
correction on your paper. You should have at least two new sentences.
8. The university possesses a variety of computers and printers, each type with it's own unique
problems and idiosyncrasies, causing mass chaos and confusion during peak hours at the
computer center, which need new ribbons.
Hierarchy
The following sentence is oversubordinated. That is, it's made too long by too many modifying
clauses and phrases. Break it up, making your editing changes right in the example. Then rewrite the
entire correction on your lined paper. You should have at least two new sentences.
Hierarchy
2. Typing on the computer isn't difficult, but to input data into dBASE is another story.
3. You'll begin reading financial statements and how to write a business plan.
4. The negotiator researches the opponent's position first , then his own, and finally his strategy is
determined.
5. Financial analysts must carefully read The Wall Street Journal daily to check the Dow Jones
database, and watching Wall Street Week in Review is helpful.
6. I believe Ms. Green is intelligent, reliable, and has the potential to learn quickly.
7. She believes that the successful candidate should possess quantitative and qualitative business
skills and analyzing financial statements is crucial.
8. For an assembly-line worker to work efficiently is making the factory a more productive
environment.
9. Toastmasters gave her the opportunity to meet a variety of students at Thunderbird and speaking
practice.
10. The marketing function emphasizes the four components of product, price, promotion, place, and
stressing rational management.
______________________
// PLCL
Keep in mind that repetition is frequently useful and proper in creating parallel structures, and it
can be used for emphasis, sparingly. In parallel structures--lists, TOC, a series of conjuncts--begin
each item with the same word or phrase type.
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ting
2. Typing on the computer isn't difficult, but to input^ data into dBASE is another story.
(to learn how) to read . . . . . . . . . . (how) to write
(learning ^to) ing
3. You'll begin reading financial statements and how to write^ a business plan.
5. Financial analysts must carefully read the Wall Street Journal daily to check the Dow Jones
database, and (should) watching Wall Street Week in Review is helpful.
is {able
6. I believe Ms.}Green is intelligent, ^reliable, and has the potential to learn quickly. ...can learn
quickly.
...has intelligence, reliability, and the potential to ... ...is potentially quick to learn.
business skills,
7. She believes that the successful candidate should possess quantitative ^and
,
qualitative business skills^ and the crucial ability to analyze analyzing financial statements is crucial.
...quan. & qual. bus. skills and be able to... ...not only 1+2 but also 3...
to make
8. For an assembly-line worker to work efficiently is^ making the factory a more productive
environment.
to practice speaking and
9. Toastmasters gave her the opportunity^ to meet a variety of students at Thunderbird and speaking
practice.
stresses rational management and
10. The marketing function ^ emphasizes the four components of product, price,
and
promotion,^place, and stressing rational management.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
3. Near the Thunderbird pool far from the library, the student was last seen.
6. Most of the students in this semester's InterAd class are excited about their projects
John told me that he was upset by the amount of research which must be
conducted.
8. The French professor dismissed class early he could be on time for his
golf game.
10. The typical paid vacation is two weeks per year in the U.S. its five weeks
per year in France.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
{, but?}
3. Near the Thunderbird pool and far from the library, the student was last seen.
{or }
4. Could you take Randy and me snow-skiing this weekend?
{, but }
7. Carolyn is fascinated with marketing; however, she abhors accounting. , and because
; however,
{; nevertheless,}
, and
9. The pub is filled to capacity, but the students continue to pour in.
10. The typical paid vacation is two weeks per year in the U.S.
while
{; however,}
, but '
, and its five weeks per year in France.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
1. Ms. Smith is a regular gal although she flies off the handle at times.
2. I'd like to most graciously thank you for your nifty, swell ideas.
3. At your earliest convenience, I'd be most grateful if you could please, kind sir, make haste with your
reply to me.
4. Mr. Gomes is a rather creative art director at the ad agency although he seems to have lost his marbles
as of late.
5. Moshe O'Hara had a plethora of errands to run; he looked like a chicken with its head cut off.
8. Mr. Sing is pulling his hair out; all of his students skipped his afternoon class.
{ordinary }
pleasant person loses her temper
1. Ms. Smith is a ^regular gal although she^ flies off the handle at times.
{wonderful}
T excellent
2. I'd like to most graciously thank you for your ^nifty, swell ideas.
4. Mr. Gomes is a (rather) creative art director at the ad agency although he seems to have lost his
marbles as of late lately ~ recently lost touch ~ become nervous ~ been upset.
lot
5. Moshe O'Hara had a ^plethora of errands (to run); he looked like a chicken with its head cut off.
(extremely) busy.
{ devoured }
friends greedily ate delicious
10. My ^pals and I ^gobbled down the ^scrumptious chicken potpie.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
1. If you fail to pay your last month's telephone bill within three days, you won't receive any more service
from us.
3. No product can be purchased before 10:00 A.M. or after 5:00 P.M. on weekdays.
4. Make payment in the amount of $350.69 to our office no later than 2 October.
5. Its necessary that your new address be reported to us no longer than one week after you move.
6. Our billing department doesn't accept any inquiries after 3:00 P.M., so why did you call later?
7. Why are you always late for your appointments with Dr. Kramol?
8. Because you came to the president's office without proper authority, your actions appeared to us to be
highly unprofessional.
9. I am hereby notifying you that you may not attend any of our meetings or activities without written
permission from this office.
10. You must notify us of your intention to attend the president's reception because such failure will create
confusion.
{Please}
1. If you fail to ^pay your last month's telephone bill within three days,
to continued
you won't ^ receive any more ^ service from us.
<from> <to>
P s {between} {and
3. No product^ can be purchased ^before 10:00 A.M. ^or after 5:00} P.M. on weekdays. You can...
VOI
Please pay us by
4. Make payment in the amount of ^$350.69 to our office no^ later than 2 October.
{come}
Please be on time
7. Why are you always late ^for your appointments with Dr. Kramol?. Please keep your...
8. Because you came to the president's office without proper authority, your actions appeared to us to be
highly unprofessional. Please make an appointment to see the president.
Y
9. I am hereby notifying you that you may not attend any of our meetings or activities without written
permission from this office.
1. As requested, the user's manual for our hi-fi stereo is enclosed. Its hoped that this manual will help you
solve the stated problem.
2. It would offend us if you didn't meet the quality requirements of our agreement.
3. This letter informs you of our need for you to perform as the guest speaker at the 2005 medical
conference in Phoenix.
4. Its suggested that you submit your employment application no later than 1 July.
5. Your insurance claim has been reviewed by our examiner, who reported to us that its not valid.
6. You're expected to make your payment by 31 August; otherwise, this officer will have to repossess our
furniture.
7. We're always pleased to receive letters from people who like our dish-washing liquid.
8. Customers should carefully answer the questionnaire and send it back to us to cooperate in our
satisfaction survey.
9. All orders should be made well in advance of the designated delivery date.
10. The chairman of the Mathematics Department will be in the office between 1:00 P.M. and 3:00 P.M. on
weekdays and can be contacted by advance appointment only.
Exercises for Kenman, “Tone and Style”
Please by
4. ^Its suggested that you submit your employment application^ no later than 1 July.
I regret that is
5. ^Your insurance claim ^as been reviewed by our examiner, who reported to us that its not valid.
Please
6. ^You're expected to make your payment by 31 August;otherwise, this to keep officer will have to
y
repossess ^our furniture. ~...so that you can keep your furniture.
Please me participate
8. ^Customers should carefully answer the questionnaire and send it back to us^ to cooperate^ in our
satisfaction survey.
Please
9. ^All orders should be made well in advance of the designated delivery date.