Student Name: Hossam
Nashwa
Level: Writing Course
Level: Intermediate
Age: (16-22)
Comments:
Actually, I like your variation in using different sentence structure, it seems you well used the
punctuation marks appropriately, but you have a problem with some words spelling.
Exemplary
4 pts
Spelling
Spelling is generally
correct.
Punctuation
The punctuation is
accurate, even creative,
and quides the reader
through the text easily.
Grammar
and usage Grammar and usage are
always correct and
enhance the writing clarity
and style.
Sentence
Fluency Writing has an easy flow,
with strong varied
sentence structures. There
are varied and purposeful
sentence beginnings.
Total 11 pts
Teacher Name: Ms.
Accomplished
3 pts
Spelling is usually correct on
common words, but more
difficult words are
problematic.
Punctuation is somewhat
accurate, and shows a good
command for readability, but
not creativity.
Grammar and usage is good,
but does not always add to
the style of the writing.
Sentences get the job done,
constructed correctly, and
sound. Sentence structures
attempt to vary, as do
sentence beginnings.
Date: July 22nd, 2016
Developing
2 pts
Spelling errors are frequent
and repeated.
Punctuation is random, and
only the easiest rules show
awareness of correct use.
Problems with grammar and
usage are not serious
enough to distort the
meaning, but may not be
correct or accurately applied
all the time.
Sentence structures are
simplistic and monotonous.
Need complexity, but they
do make sense.
Beginning
1 pts
Spelling gets in the way of
understanding the content
Lack of punctuation, or
numerous errors in
punctuation affect the
readability of the text.
Errors in grammar and
usage are very noticeable,
frequent, and affect
meaning.
Sentences do not make
sense, ramble, begin the
same way, and endlessly
connect to others.