LO1 FEEDBACK

Connor Rogerson LO1 Feedback. 13/10/17

Current Grade for LO1: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall:

Some good work here, but I can’t pass you as some is missing. Please manage your time
more effectively to ensure work doesn’t go unfinished in the future.
LO1 Part A. Advertising Types & Styles
Some good work here, you have explained the main types of advertising and the persuasive
devices.

Lo1 Part B. Regulation

This provides a good overview of the regulation of advertising.

LO1 part C. Analysis.

Well done Connor, the advertising analysis of the Beckham fragrance covers the criteria for
a merit grade. You have successfully explained how the brand incorporates additional
advertising to further the campaign message.