Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JhXMJlm852A
Article: How fat has become a political issue, by Lionel Shriver, 2013. Accessed at
http://www.theglobeandmail.com/life/health-and-fitness/health/how-fat-has-become-a-
Short Film: The old lady and the pigeons (La vielle et les pigeons), directed by Sylvain
les-pigeons-the-old-lady-and-the-pigeons/
https://www.poetrylibrary.edu.au/poets/harpur-charles/an-aboriginal-mother-s-lament-
of oppression, with these texts having been selected purposively to demonstrate disparate
notions and experiences of the concept in relation to a focus on inequality through texts. The
selection of these texts has been done so that there is a variance in the types of inequality that
are represented, allowing for students to delve into oppression as a multifaceted concept. The
study of oppression will be achieved through texts of varying forms, to ensure that students
consider and engage with the use of language, and other textual features as a means of
conveying inequality (Outcome 1, BOSTES, 2009). This is significant as the texts allow for
students to engage with multiliteracies, being able to understand meaning across a range of
Oppression is varied, and impacts individuals in different ways, with it limiting opportunities
such as in How fat has become a political issue by Lionel Shriver. Perceptions of oppression
and its impacts on groups or individuals are highly dependent on personal, social, cultural,
and historical contexts. Coupled with this, oppression may be prevalent, but only be
oppression. Oppression can arise or be experienced due to a myriad of reasons, with students
engaging with these texts to explore inequalities that arise as a result of gender, race, and
socio-economic status. Students will investigate the positives and negatives of oppression.
Tupac Shakur’s Changes was selected as the first text of study as it explicitly references to
the nature of society for African-Americans in low-socio-economic areas. The song is in the
form of rap, and poetically weaves contextual factors of inequality into the song that are
highly relevant in the contemporary landscape of racial oppression. Changes explicates the
limited avenues that youth face, and students can engage with the ways in which rhythmic
and conversational language can navigate and portray not only experiences of racial
oppressions, but the perceived attitudes that the government holds towards the inequalities
(Outcome 3 & 4, BOSTES, 2009). Students through examination of this text can engage in
analysis of race, and how opportunities, and safety are inseparable from this.
The second text to be selected is the trailer for Freedom Writers, by Richard LaGraveness.
The selection of this text is due to the fact that the clip deals with race, and the impacts it has
on youth. This text builds off of student understandings of the concept built through
Changes, and further allows for students to investigate and uncover the affects that
inequalities have on individuals. The text portrays the oppression of certain races as being
encompassing of all aspects of life, highlighting inequality as being tinged with sadness,
anger, violence, and loss. Through the study of this text students will consider the elements
of film, and the way in which a coalescence of these elements convey meaning (Outcome 4,
BOSTES, 2009). This will allow for students to garner insight into the confronting nature of
The article How fat has become a political issue by Lionel Shriver has been selected as the
text deals with disparities between gender, and the affects that this has. Through the study of
this text students will engage with how inequality may involve individuals being given
supposed character traits based off of gender or appearance. The analysis of this text allows
for students to engage with underlying inequalities, which through the text are conveyed
The old lady and the pigeons, by Sylvain Chamet highlights socio-economic oppression.
Students through engagement with this text are required to consider the way in which
humanity factors in with inequality. Through analysis of this film students will understand
the ‘unseen’ nature of oppression, and how through the film the starving man is ignored
despite his situation. The selection of this text is due to the fact that visual modes are an
effective medium of conveying meaning (McCallum, 2012). This will means “students will
have to consider image, movement, and sequences as a key element of filmic language. They
will explore how codes and conventions of film work together to create meaning” (Gannon,
Howie, & Sawyer, 2009, p. 180). This is evident through this text through the lack of spoken
word apart from in the opening and closing sequence. Students through interaction with this
text will engage with extended visual metaphors of hunger, and of animals being better fed
than humans, as a vehicle for conveying economic and social oppression and inequality.
Retrieved from:
http://www.boardofstudies.nsw.edu.au/syllabus_hsc/pdf_doc/english-syllabus-
from2010.pdf
Green, A. (2013). A Practical Guide to Teaching English in the Secondary School. New
Gannon, S., Sawyer, W., & Howie, M. (2009). Charged with meaning (3rd ed.). Melbourne:
Phoenix Education.
McCallum, A. (2012). Creativity and Learning in Secondary English. Teaching for the
The use of an example response by the teacher is a means of Student: Students will listen to teacher
allowing for students to garner a guided insight as to how the and watch as the teacher goes through
texts may be explorer, supporting student engagement and an example response.
learning (Beardwood, 2012).
Resources: IWB, PowerPoint, slides on
the exemplar of scaffolded answer
25 Students will use the scaffold to breakdown the two texts Teacher: Direct observation of S
Whilst this task is occurring the teacher should monitor students to ensure that they are able
student engagement ensuring that students are able to do to complete the tasks.
the task.
Student: Students use the scaffold to
breakdown the texts, finding at least 5
Scaffolding helps ensure inclusivity and student engagement, examples of inequality in each
and the scaffolded approach to this task has been developed
using Vygotsky’s zone of proximal scaffolding. (Fani, & Resources:
Ghaemi, 2011). Scaffold
The use of direct observation is an effective measure of Student notes on texts
student learning as a formative assessment means (Marsh, PowerPoint
Clarke, & Pittaway, 2014).
40 Think-ink-pair-share exercise where students share their Teacher: Direct observation, and S
understandings with one another, 6 mins for the pair, 6 mins monitoring of students engaging in the
for sharing. This allows for collaboration, whilst students still activity, the teacher should make note
write down ideas. if interesting ideas raised to use for the
discussion
The choice of think-pair-share is due to the fact that such an
exercise is beneficial to students as it allows for collaborative Student: Students share and convey
problem solving, and is an effective strategy to enhance understandings with peers and then in
critical thinking (Kaddoura, 2013). smaller groups of 6 students.
Resources: Student Notes
45 Teacher gets students to finish group task, and remain in Teacher: Engage students in discussion, S/T
groups but face the front. The teacher should act as a guide utilising Bloom’s Taxonomy to range
probing students based off of observations during the the possible questions from lower to
previous activity to engage the group as a whole. higher-order. The initial comments
Questions for this: 1) What were some interesting points that should be from the teacher to start the
your group raised? 2) The rest of these questions will be discussion by mentioning students that
built off of the student responses in groups utilising Bloom’s raised interesting points asking them to
Taxonomy. explain or discuss why they believed
that from the text.
55 For the last 5 minutes, students will engage in a timed Teacher: Teacher Provides question S
exercise writing their responses to the provided question on
the board. This serves as a means of consolidating student Student: Students write as much
learning and allows for the teacher to assess whether possible to consolidate knowledge at
students are grasping the concepts of the unit. the end of the lesson in response to
the question provided.
Question: Discuss the insights gained into racial oppression
through the study of Changes and Freedom Writers. Resources: PowerPoint
Student:
Resources: nil
Reflection
What have I learned about the teaching and learning process when preparing this lesson?
Through the preparation of this lesson it has experientially highlighted to me the limited
timing of lessons and how constricted it is to achieve analysis of the two texts. It was also
challenging to ensure that the lesson was adequately student-centred which is necessary to
the engagement of students through the lesson (Ford, 2015). Furthermore, it was a
challenge in providing a lesson that sufficiently met the outcomes of learning, and covered
the concept within the allotted time of the lesson. This was especially difficult considering
the fact that the lesson period had to have students engaging with 2 texts.
Other considerations
Complete the table below by inserting the AISTL graduate standards that you are
demonstrating and indicates the evidence from this lesson that should comply with the
standard.
Graduate Evidence within this lesson
Standards
1.1 Piaget (2013) utilised to ensure tasks appropriate for development level.
2.1 Use of technical pedagogies specific to English teaching
2.2 Content and sequence of texts chosen to maximise student
understandings.
3.1 Challenging learning goals conveyed at the outset of the lesson
3.3 A range of teaching strategies have been used through the lesson
5.1 Assessment means have been considered in the lesson.
WHS
What are the key risk issues that may appear for and need to be reduced/eliminated in this
lesson? Using your syllabus and support documents as well as other WHS policy- Outline the
key WHS considerations that are to be applied in this lesson?
As this is a class-based lesson there are minimal health and safety risks. Even so, the teacher should
ensure that before the lesson there are no furniture or other classroom objects positioned in an
unsafe manner. Coupled with this, the teacher should ensure adequate access to exits of the
classroom. There is a potential risk of injury in the lesson whilst students are transitioning into the
sharing activity. In order to minimise this risk, the teacher should ensure students move into these
groups in a calm manner and limit student movement. Upon entering and exiting the classroom there
are potential risks, which the teacher can control by asking students to be seated as soon as they
enter the classroom and monitoring students when exiting.
Publications
Board Of Studies Teaching and Educational Standards. (2009). English Standard Syllabus
hsc/english-std-adv.html
Fani, T., & Ghaemi, F. (2011). Implications of Vygotsky’s zone of proximal development
http://www.det.nsw.edu.au/proflearn/docs/pdf/qtinprog.pdf
difference: Challenges for teachers, teaching, and teacher education (pp. 15-33).
doi:1372123014
Marsh, C., Clarke, M., & Pittaway, S. (2014). Marsh’s becoming a teacher (6th ed.). Frenchs
providing social support. Intervention in school and clinic, 43(3), pp. 158-167.
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d=36155
Resources Attached:
Resources are on the following pages
Resources for Lesson 1
Scaffold for Text analysis
Changes by Tupac Freedom Writers by Insights in both
Shakur Richard LaGravenese
Authors Context
Textual examples of
how oppression is
represented
2Pac – Changes Breakdown of text
Lesson Two
Lesson two is focused on the texts How fat has become a political issue as well as The old
lady and the pigeons. These two texts will move on from racial oppression that was
explorer in the first two texts in the previous lesson, instead drawing focus on gender
lesson will be outcomes 1.1, 1.2, 2.1, 2.2, and 4.1 (BOSTES, 2009). Outcome 1.1 and 1.2
will be attained through the lesson through utilising a scaffold in student the student
activities. This will serve to ensure that students breakdown the way in which
oppression is conveyed through language features. Outcomes 2.1 and 2.2 will be
accomplished. Outcomes 2.1, and 2.2 will be accomplished through this lesson through
students working together to analyse the ways the texts create an understanding of
inequality. Throughout the lesson, the teacher will employ use of informal assessment
The outset of the lesson will be begin with conveyance of clear expectations of learning,
with the whole class then engaging in a mind-mapping exercise to reaffirm and
consolidate the learning of the previous lesson (Edwards, & Cooper, 2010). Students
will then transition into utilising the scaffold for the lesson to analyse how inequality
and meaning of the concept of inequality is conveyed through the texts. This strategy is
built upon Zepke (2013) that is designed to provide learning that is supportive to
enable students to achieve the outcomes. Coupled with this, Vygotsky’s zone of
proximal development is utilised, evident through the provision of a scaffold for the
analysis exercise (Fani, & Ghaemi, 2011). After this students will consolidate
understandings further through a jigsaw groups exercise, which will run for 15 minutes
of the lesson. This is a beneficial strategy that is cognizant with students being able to
At the summation of this task, students will convey the group-understandings with the
rest of the class. This serves as a means of discerning student understanding, with the
teacher able to probe the depth of knowledge with directed open-ended questioning
(Marsh, Clarke, & Pittaway, 2014). Students will in the last 5 minutes of the lesson
way in which the use of language forms and features through the 4 texts you have
analysed, convey inequality’. The open-ended questions, as well as the writing response
question for use in the class have been developed according to Bloom’s Taxonomy
By the end of this lesson, students should be able to understand the ways in which the
meaning of inequality is conveyed through texts, and be able to understand the ways
References for Lesson 2
Board Of Studies Teaching and Educational Standards. (2009). English Standard Syllabus
hsc/english-std-adv.html
Edwards, S., Cooper, N. (2010). Mind mapping as a teaching resource. Doi: 10.1111/j.1743-
498X.2010.00395.x
Fani, T., & Ghaemi, F. (2011). Implications of Vygotsky’s zone of proximal development
doi:1372123014
Marsh, C., Clarke, M., & Pittaway, S. (2014). Marsh’s becoming a teacher (6th ed.). Frenchs
Ursani, A., Memon, A., & Chowdhry, B. (2014). Bloom’s Taxonomy as a pedagogical model
Zepke, N. (2013). Student engagement: A complex business supporting the first year
experience in tertiary education. The International Journal of the First Year in Higher
Textual examples of
how Oppression is
represented
Lesson 3
Lesson three involves students investigating the text, An Aboriginal Mother’s Lament by
Charles Harpur. The examination of this text will allow for students to investigate
oppression as being a cultural experience. Through the study of the text, students will
be required to consider the contexts of the poem, and how this creates or allows for
more meaning to be uncovered from the text. Through this lesson, students are
expected to achieve the following outcomes, being outcome 1.1, 1.2, 1.4, 2.1, 2.2
(BOSTES, 2009). The assessment of whether these outcomes are being met will be
The teaching of this lesson, as with the subsequent lessons operates on the notion that
students have already read the text and made preliminary notes on it. The lesson will
begin with the teacher conveying expectations of learning on the interactive white
the provision of high expectations during the lesson (Foley, 2008). Following this, the
teacher will go through the poem, highlighting contextual factors of the poem, allowing
for students to then investigate the text. This use of guidance of the reading of the text is
Students after this will use the scaffold to breakdown the text, which should be a 10-
minute individual activity. Students will then engage in think-pair-share, which will
oppression. The pairing task itself will be scaffolded through the provision of questions
Students will spend the remainder of the lesson responding to the question Appraise
the idea of oppression being varied and experienced in different ways. In student
responses, synthesis of texts and how they reveal the concept of oppression is required.
Outcomes 1.1, and 1.2 will be assessed through direct observation of the engagement of
participation during the think-share-pair activity, The BOSTES outcome 1.4 will be
& Gold, 2006). The responses students write will be collected at the summation of the
lesson and will be used by the teacher to evaluate the attainment of outcomes 2.1, and
2.1 (BOSTES, 2009). This in-class task is not a formal means of assessment, but is aimed
Through the provision of scaffolded exercises and social support through group-work
tasks, students of EALD background or with learning difficulties are supported through
the learning process through the strategies in teaching the content listed above (Pearce,
Reference list for Lesson 3
Board Of Studies Teaching and Educational Standards. (2009). English Standard Syllabus
std-adv.html
Foley, F. (2008). Quality Teaching Framework in your program- What it looks like?. Department of
http://www.det.nsw.edu.au/proflearn/docs/pdf/qtinprog.pdf
Green, A. (2013). A Practical Guide to Teaching English: Teaching for the Creative Classroom.
Abington: Routledge.
https://www.poetrylibrary.edu.au/poets/harpur-charles/an-aboriginal-mother-s-
lament-0003019
Marsh, C., Clarke, M., & Pittaway, S. (2014). Marsh's becoming a teacher (6th ed.). Frenchs Forest,
Australia: Pearson.
Michaels, W., & Gold, E. (2006). As time goes by. Sydney: Australia. METAphor Committee
Pearce, M., Gray, J., Campbell-Evans, G. (2009). The inclusive secondary teacher: The leaders’
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Resources for Lesson 3
Textual examples of
how Oppression is
represented
Essay Writing Scaffold
When analysing points…
P- Point
R- Relevance
L- What other points does this link into
E- examples in the text
When writing…
SEXI Paragraphing scaffold
Thesis Statement
Example
Explanation
Importance?
Essay Writing Scaffold
(Copy and paste more body paragraph scaffolds as required for tasks)
Introduction
General statement….
Thesis statement…
Point/layout of argument…
Scope…
Body Paragraphs
Thesis statement…
Example…
Explanation…
Importance/link…
Conclusion
Points…
Thesis Statement…
General statements…
Discussion…
Appendix A: Tupac Shakur- Changes
Come on come on
I see no changes wake up in the morning and I ask myself
Is life worth living should I blast myself?
I'm tired of bein' poor and even worse I'm black
My stomach hurts so I'm lookin' for a purse to snatch
Cops give a damn about a negro
Pull the trigger kill a nigga he's a hero
Give the crack to the kids who the hell cares
One less hungry mouth on the welfare
First ship 'em dope and let 'em deal the brothers
Give 'em guns step back watch 'em kill each other
It's time to fight back that's what Huey said
Two shots in the dark now Huey's dead
I got love for my brother but we can never go nowhere
Unless we share with each other
We gotta start makin' changes
Learn to see me as a brother instead of two distant strangers
And that's how it's supposed to be
How can the Devil take a brother if he's close to me?
I'd love to go back to when we played as kids
But things changed, and that's the way it is