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Welcome
Welcome to the sixteenth The Dutch philosopher, Desiderius Erasmus, wrote a
edition of The Speechwriter very popular C16th school textbook on how to enhance
newsletter. The purpose of speechwriting skills. He encouraged students to cultivate rich,
this publication is to circulate poetic and colourful language. But he advised this was often
examples of excellent speeches to the fruit of laborious exercises - like rewriting the sentence,
members of the UK Speechwriters’
‘Your letter has delighted me very much’, in over 150 different
Guild. We do this by picking out
ways. Here is a selection of soundbites from his textbook,
openings, closings, one-liners
and quotations and other topical
De Copia.
extracts from newspapers and the
internet to identify techniques,
…that person It will serve
to whom laconic to suggest that
stimulate your imagination and
brevity in speech is whoever wishes
provide models which you can pleasing…will not to be more fluent
emulate. make use of every in speech should
argument, but only observe and collect
This newsletter appears the chief ones. from the best
quarterly and is available to authors a great
anyone who is a Standard
Everywhere number of striking
tedium should metaphors.
Member of the UK Speechwriters’
be lightened
Guild or the European by variety, Collect as
Speechwriter Network. cheerfulness and many topics as
humour. possible. Take
them partly from
We keep our classes of virtues
audience in a and vices, partly
receptive mood from those things
Contribute most effectively by that are important
suitable transitions. in human affairs,
We welcome book reviews, and that are accustomed to come
speeches and articles for the The first way to embellish up often in persuasion; and it will
magazine. Every contribution thought is to relate at length and be best to arrange these according
published gets a £10 Amazon treat in detail something that to affinity and opposition. Then
could be expressed summarily whatever you come across in
token. Please send your
and in general. And this, in fact, is any author, especially if it is very
submissions to: the same as if one should displace noteworthy, you will immediately
merchandise…rolled up in carpets, mark down in its proper place.
8 info@ukspeechwritersguild.co.uk then should unroll the carpets and This method will have the effect
disclose the merchandise, exposing it of imprinting what you read more
completely to sight. deeply on your mind, as well as
accustoming you to utilising the
Speech is enriched by riches of your reading.
descriptions of places.
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W hy should speechwriters
look at compellingness
foundation theory? Well: we want
and language. Note to speechwriters:
quotations and idioms will stick if
they are patterned simply.
or research. As we rush to keep
up, the cabinet-of-commonalities
approach ironically generates a
our speeches to compel. What do kind of attention deficit disorder.
humans find compelling? ‘Strange And fourth, we are compelled by ‘Meditation sounds relaxing,’ pants
as it may seem,’ answers Davies, incongruity. It triggers the desire to Davies as we swerve into Buddhism,
‘compelling things share many understand, and understanding gives ‘but some, this author included, find
similarities.’ Indeed, ‘the qualities that us pleasure. it more like taking your brain to the
are common to all these things fit like gym. It’s hard work.’
a key in a lock with our psychological There’s plenty of useful ideas here.
proclivities.’ Hey presto – a theory. Tell stories. Address your audience’s Maybe he should try less hard.
fears and hopes. Create simple,
Nothing as useful as a good repetitive patterns with added
theory, I say. – not too many – incongruities.
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M ike Sacks asserts that, as a learning ‘what role you play every
comedy writer, you ‘make a single day’ and how that changes.
career out of attempting to induce
laughter from complete strangers For my money, Amy Poehler,
with only the words or images that writer and actor on Parks and
you create’. Recreation and Saturday Night Live,
has the best advice in the book for
For ‘induce laughter’, substitute any writer who works with others
‘persuade’ or ‘influence’, and you have and whose work is going to be
the task of a speechwriter. Sacks and spoken. (She also delivered the Class
his interviewees emphasise that the Day address to Harvard University
key to comedy writing is finding your in 2011, so she evidently knows
writers of anything’. Anybody can something about speechwriting.)
own voice – arguably far easier in
tweet a joke, or post a video on
comedy than speechwriting, which
YouTube: ‘there’s no one to stop you’. ‘Read your stuff out loud’, she
has to deal in facts, usually spoken by
Are the old rules of comedy dead? says. ‘Sometimes the way it reads in
someone else.
An increase in output does not your head sounds different when
necessarily equate to an increase in someone says it.’ When working with
The comedy writer/performer
quality. others, ‘be open to changing all the
relationship has definite parallels
with the speechwriter/speaker material you think is really brilliant…
Speechwriters are in a slightly and don’t be precious’.
relationship. A comedy writer
different situation. They’re not
relies on somebody else to deliver
competing against their peers on the
their lines effectively; so does a
internet as comedy writers are. True,
speechwriter. A good performance
P
their speech will probably be filmed eople talk plainly as long as
can lift a bad premise, just as bad
and put online. Soundbites will be they don’t think about it. In
delivery can sink good writing.
tweeted across the world. What conversation without rehearsal or
literary theorists call ‘destabilising the preparation, they somehow manage
What does Poking a Dead Frog
text’ is now happening on a global to express themselves so clearly that
have to offer speechwriters? Comedy
scale. And indeed, speechwriters nobody asks for an explanation. How
gets an audience on your side and
surely benefit from the ability to do they do it?
can draw people together, just like a
‘reach out to others almost instantly’.
good speech. Seth Meyers, writer on
Saturday Night Live, has coined the The solution to the puzzle is easy:
But their primary audience is the they use big words, and a fast pace,
term ‘clapter’ for when a comedian is
one in the room. Their initial focus and the ordinary rules of grammar,
looking for easy laughter and ‘earnest
must be on the material and its but they give the other fellow time to
applause’ to get an audience onside
delivery, rather than the wider social understand. They pause between
and make them feel good about their
impact. The old craft is as relevant as sentences; they repeat themselves;
opinions.
ever. they use filler words between the
The ‘Pure, Hard-core Advice’ big important ones; they space their
Speechwriters will recognise a
sections are probably the most useful ideas. The secret of plain talk is in-
similar temptation.
parts of this book for speechwriters, between space.
though the relentless doom and
Mike Sacks argues comedy
gloom about ‘never making it’ and The Art of Plain Talk by Rudolph
writing is now a more level playing
‘working hard for nothing’ seems Flesch
field than it’s ever been: ‘there has
more like jaded posturing than
never been a better time for writers
helpful advice from these remarkably
of comedy – or, for that matter,
successful writers.
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They said he had to go to an AA she’d be a nervous wreck. She’d be It’s a humorous way to define
meeting. They took him to a meeting. cursing, but she was perfectly calm, neurosis as an attempt to change
He listened to a man who said he’d because she knew the Jets were things that you can’t change. Instead
been sober for four years. But he’d going to win. of using energy on the things you
lost his job, he’d fallen behind on his really do need to be spending energy
mortgage payments, his wife had And she said that ever since she’s on, you waste time complaining
divorced him and took custody of the been a member of AA, she knows that 2 + 2 = 4. He goes on to quote a
kids, and then the finance company that sometimes she’s 20 points Jewish text which reveals how much
took his car. behind at half time, but she always of life you have influence over.
knows she’s going to win.
The man insisted: ‘God hasn’t Everything’s in the hands of heaven,
brought me all this way only to I showed this sermon to my wife a except for one’s awe of heaven.
let me down now.’ Twerski was few days before our child was due.
impressed by the man’s resilience. That suggests that quite a lot of
Sure enough, when my wife things that happen to us are beyond
He used this story to set up a had been in home labour for about our control. What is in our control?
second story. He was miserable in nine hours, the midwife called for Our reaction to reality. I’m in control
Manhattan, so he decided to go to an an ambulance. I had a sense that, of how I feel about my life. Having
AA meeting there. A woman spoke of like the Jets, we were in a difficult a fight with the facts of life. That’s
how she’d got into drugs, her life had situation. Thinking about that story where the suffering of the world
gone awry and she’d got into debt, helped me feel calmer. I could comes from - fighting with reality.
but she’d turned herself around. manage my anxiety.
Twerski said that he’d heard that The insight is a useful one for
story hundreds of times before. The third rabbi who I watch is leaders. There is such a thing as
Shais Taub. He’s also an expert in reality, and it’s worth defining. How
But then she said mentioned she addiction. many policies, programmes and
was a passionate fan of the New York speeches are made in defiance of the
Jets: an American football team. She He has a repertoire of Borscht fact that 2+2 = 4?
was out of town and she couldn’t Belt routines, literary references (he
watch the match. She never missed quotes Hamlet) and one liners. Like Craig R Smith, you might
a match. She asked a friend to record be wary of mentioning where you
it on her VCR. And when she went His father was a psychologist, and get your ideas from in respectable
round to pick it up, the friend said: ‘By one day he sat him down and told company, but speechwriters can
the way the Jets won’. him a joke. learn a lot from rabbis. You can enjoy
Shais Taub’s laconic delivery on
The woman went home and What is the difference between YouTube.
started watching the video. The Jets psychosis and neurosis?
were playing really badly. They were Psychosis is when you think 2 + 2 = 5
getting mauled. They were 20 points Neurosis is when you think 2 + 2 = 4
down at half time. She said normally and you can’t stand it.
CONFESSIONS OF A SPEECHWRITER
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A sa
speechwriter, when
I’m going to reprint the
conclusion of the speech in its
entirety so it can be studied as a
‘Always there echoes and re-echoes:
Duty, Honor, Country.
you bring a speech model. First, note the subtle way ‘Today marks my final roll call
to a close, you want in which Gen. MacArthur lets the with you, but I want you to know that
to do two things. audience know he is drawing to a when I cross the river my last conscious
First, you want to close. thoughts will be of The Corps, and The
signal your audience that the speaker Corps, and The Corps.
is coming to the end, so that they will Second, once he signals that he’s
be primed and ready to applaud. But coming to the end, note how with ‘I bid you farewell.’
you don’t want to do that by having each successive line he ratchets up
the speaker say something as trite as the emotional level another notch, Granted that this was a unique,
‘In conclusion...’ until the tension is wound so tight and even historic occasion, and that
that when he concludes the audience Gen. MacArthur was a brilliant orator.
Second, you don’t want the virtually has to applaud to relieve But there are lessons here that can be
audience to applaud because they their pent-up feelings. applied to other occasions and less
feel they have to—or worse, because illustrious speakers.
they feel sorry for the speaker. You Here is Gen MacArthur:
want them to applaud because they First, we can be subtle in the
mean it. To do that, you have to give ‘The shadows are lengthening way we signal the audience that the
them a reason to applaud. for me. The twilight is here. My days speaker is coming to an end. Second,
of old have vanished, tone and tint. we can build suspense as the speaker
One of the best examples I know They have gone glimmering through works to his conclusion. And third
of how to end a speech is Gen. the dreams of things that were. Their and most important, we can give the
Douglas MacArthur’s ‘Duty, Honor, memory is one of wondrous beauty, audience a reason to applaud at the
Country’ address that he gave at West watered by tears, and coaxed and end.
Point in 1962. caressed by the smiles of yesterday. I
listen vainly, but with thirsty ears, for Hal Gordon wrote speeches for
Gen. MacArthur was then 82 the witching melody of faint bugles the Reagan White House, Gen. Colin
years old. He knew, and his audience blowing reveille, of far drums beating Powell, and a raft of corporate CEOS.
knew, that this would probably be his the long roll. In my dreams I hear He currently freelances in Houston,
last address to the West Point cadet again the crash of guns, the rattle of Texas. He blogs for
corps. So, at the end of his speech, he musketry, the strange, mournful mutter www.punditwire.com and can be
milked the drama of the occasion for of the battlefield. reached through his web site:
all it was worth. www.ringingwords.com
‘But in the evening of my memory,
always I come back to West Point.
…there are about 17 subjects that make people read. These 17 subjects get attention:
And you will probably find ten of them every day in any
Animals, Babies, Cars, Disasters, Entertainment,
popular newspaper. I hold the view that if you take any
Famous Personalities, Fashion, Food, Fortune-telling,
popular paper for one year, you will have read everything
Jokes (cartoons) Money (how to make it), Royalty, Scandal
it’s ever going to print. From year two, only the people, the
(gossip columns), Sex, Sports, Wars, Weddings.
places, the numbers of the dead and wounded change.
Certainly, I believe if all the world’s news dried up, most of The copywriter can use most of these subjects to help
our press wouldn’t notice the difference. get over his message.
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Regardless of whether you give a Guild, ‘… and that way down deep Can you give us any tips on how
speech or a presentation, you should in the heart of life’s extraordinary to flatter a German audience?
try to make sure that your delivery complexity is ... extraordinary
follows a fil rouge and has a story simplicity.’ (Peggy Noonan, On ‘Don’t mention the war!’ I’m
arc to bind it all together. With or Speaking Well). just kidding. I cannot answer that
without the visualisation on slides, because I do not know what the
whiteboards, or whatever: take your What font do you use for your stereotypical ‘German audience’ is.
audience on a journey they will scripts? Sorry.
remember.
That’s a trade secret. No, seriously, The European Speechwriter
Incidentally, I believe that Peggy I have no clear answer for this. I guess Network Autumn conference will
Noonan would sympathise when it kind of depends on what mood I take place in Berlin, Germany in
it comes to crafting scripts with am in or on the topic I write about. October 2015
the Zen-style simplicity advocated
by Garr Reynolds for slide design. What’s your favourite reference
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