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Kati Vaughan
Abstract
Academic disciplines can tackle the same topic; however, they would do so from
different perspectives and utilize different forms of evidence. When looking at the topic of social
media, the article “The Relation between Media Multitasking, Intensity of Use, and Well-Being
perspective while the article “Election Campaigning on Social Media: Politicians Audience, and
the Mediation of Political Communication on Facebook and Twitter” by Sebastian Stier analyzes
social media in the political realm. After analyzing both pieces of academia, it is evident that the
types of conventions and evidence used in Hatchel’s article creates a better argument as a whole
rather than Stiers. Both are exemplary pieces of work for their field of academia and analyzing
them along their fields guidelines, one cannot say one or t ether is better, however from an
Just as a song writer has a purpose behind his or her lyrics or a children’s author has a
behind the lesson he or she is trying to convey to the audience, works in academic disciplines
have a purpose behind their writing as well. Whether it is to persuade or inform, each academic
discipline presents a claim or argument to their peers and support it through a plethora of
evidence. This evidence reflects the priorities and conventions utilized in the given academic
field which, as a whole, creates a reliable, credible and valid argument that other scholars in that
field of study will agree with. Furthermore, each academic discipline takes a different approach
even when they are analyzing the same topic. This idea is apparent in the psychology article
“The Relation between Media Multitasking, Intensity of Use, and Well-Being in a Sample of
Ethnically Diverse Emerging Adults” by Tyler Hatchel where the topic of social media is
brought to the surface and analyzed through a psychological lens and the political science article
“Election Campaigning on Social Media: Politicians Audience, and the Mediation of Political
Communication on Facebook and Twitter” by Sebastian Stier which analyzes social media in a
political realm. However, when looking through a critical lens, Hatchel’s work has a more
thorough argument than Stier’s due to its plethora of statistical evidence and theoretical evidence
utilized.
Professionals in the field of psychology tend to observe the behavior of individuals along
with delving deeper into the mind and thinking behind that said behavior; to do so, this discipline
primarily relies on studies which further theories that explain our cognitive and behavioral
actions. When called to study the topic of social media, professionals in this field questioned
what effects social media have on emerging adults in our society. In the article “The Relation
Diverse Emerging Adults.” by Tyler Hatchel, the author utilizes statistical and theoretical
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evidence to attack the question at hand. He came to the conclusion that “intense digital media use
may be problematic for some youth's psychological well-being, but also beneficial for other
youth” (Hatchel, 2018). To get to this conclusion, Stier set up a study which questioned a diverse
group of college students to see the correlation of social media use and the well-being of oneself.
By utilizing countless tables and graphs which highlight their data they thoroughly supported
ordinary person,
however psychologists
the data is stating along with knowing its valid and reliable. A sense of reliability and validation
are established due to the utilization of concrete facts which can be referred in tables such as
these. Anyone can easily see the correlation between the subject’s self-esteem, the activities they
participate in and what effect it has on them. Hence why statistical evidence is the logical path to
follow in this discipline because it clearly outlines the data produced in the study.
Not only does statistical evidence create validation and credibility, it is also established
through the author’s use of theoretical evidence that calls upon other psychologist’s work and
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theories proven. Solely looking at the reference pages (Hatchel, 2018, p.122-123), the audience
can see that the ideas and theories presented in the article are backed up by countless other
psychologists who also studied and proved their claim to be true. For instance, the author pulls
information from J. J. Arnett’s book “Emerging adulthood: A theory of development from the
late teens through the twenties” which gives their claim a little more backbone and strengthen.
For the specific field of psychology, utilizing theoretical and statistical evidence poses a hard
argument to disagree with and makes it harder to disprove if someone wanted to.
Professionals in the field of history and political science tend to analyze political theory
and behavior throughout history and use it in today’s political realm. In the article “Election
Communication on Facebook and Twitter” by Sebastian Stier, it addresses the question of how
social media platforms interact with political campaigns and what topics are proposed to the
public. To answer this question, Stier and his colleagues knit picked Twitter and Facebook and
looked at the language used and presented a study just as the psychology discipline had done.
Even though this discipline also utilizes statistical analysis, the main two pieces of evidence
found in this source are analytical and textual which prove to be more effective for their audience
of politicians who heavily rely on the idea of “who said what”. On page 64, they have a whole
section of research dedicated to “Analysis at the Word level” which delves into the deeper
meaning behind the words, phrases, and language utilized by politicians on social media. They
directly pulled common words such as “pension,” “family policy,” education,” etc. (pg. 60-61),
from these sources, which revealed how politicians use Twitter and Facebook to draw in
different crowds and try to gain support from the mass audience (Stier, 2018). They are heavily
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relying on analytical evidence and explaining their flow of thought in order to persuade the
Along with analytical evidence, the author also uses textual evidence to gain more
credibility for their claims and findings in the study. Stier makes his findings stronger by directly
quoting other politicians, researchers, and a plethora of researches which delve into social media
in a political campaign. As seen on pages 58-63, Stier and his colleagues also use textual data
such as charts in order to convince the audience that this information is correct and reliable. All
of these combined have the intention to further support the claim “that social media is not an
ideal data source for citizens seeking clearly structured information on policies or researchers
using textual information to locate parties in an ideological space” (Stier, 2018) in order to
convince their audience that this claim is true. By using textual and analytical evidence, other
politicians who would be reading this are able to trust the findings in this article and use it to
Both of these articles were successful in presenting their information through their chosen
evidence however there are always holes in arguments. Looking from an outside perspective it is
easier for the reader, who is not associated with that scholarly field, to knit pick the work and
find weaknesses that lie within it. As stated above, Hatchel’s article heavily relies on statistics
and theoretical evidence which allows it to gain credibility and validity in the eyes of their peers;
nonetheless, numerous weaknesses can be overlooked with this type of evidence. Despite
statistics presenting hard facts, it can also be deceiving through the way it is presented to its
audience. If an author wants to omit part of the data collected, they could easily cloud it by
providing a plethora of information which can lead the audience to overlook the flaws within the
data. Also, they could easily skew the graphs and tables to their liking and convey a different
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message than what the data actually presents. Despite these flaws, the information presented still
is strong and built upon hard facts which is hard to deny. Theoretical data is backed up by
numerous accredited scholars who came to the same conclusion which again is very reliable and
Just as the psychology article, Stier’s political science article is also successful in the
presentation of its information. As noted above, Stier utilizes statistical data however primarily
uses analytical and textual evidence; By utilizing analytical and textual evidence, the authors
claim is more believable, however this evidence references other professionals in their field
whose beliefs can be biased. It makes sense as to why Stier would quote other professionals in
this discipline, for their views on these topics would prioritize what he is trying to argue versus
someone who might not in another field of academia. Even though Stier pulls quotes from other
pieces of work, at the end of the day it boils down to the fact that those are merely opinions and
bias. Someone can easily disagree with what they are saying or can easily find another source
that says the contrary. Again, Stier’s argument is well supported for its field however, as a
whole, someone reading from an outside view can easily see that these are opinions and can
social media from numerous outlets and taking on a well-rounded argument with a plethora of
hard evidence. Even when looking at the title of the psychology article, “The Relation between
Emerging Adults,” there are three main points that contribute to the claim which reveals how
well rounded the argument is compared to Stier’s. The political science article “Election
Communication on Facebook and Twitter” is solely looking at how elections are proposed to
different audiences only on two different social media platforms; Looking at this from a surface
level, this is a solid argument however it is attacking the topic from one perspective versus the
three in the psychological article. Even when glancing over the article, one can see how well-
developed Hatchel’s argument is through the section headings. The plethora of different
approaches can be seen in the section headings and reveal to the audience that this study is
concrete.
On the other hand, Stier and his colleagues only analyze the linguistics and word choices
on Twitter and Facebook while there are other forms of social media that cover campaigns as
well. Branching out could have brought more support to their claim as a whole and created a
more well-rounded argument with less holes. As previously stated, by utilizing more textual and
analytical evidence a reader could easily disagree with what someone was claiming despite the
quote than for concrete data and statistics. For example, on page 53 it states “Politicians seeking
opinion. Sure, it may seem logical, however someone can easily disprove or disagree with this if
they wanted to. Furthermore, it is evident Hatchel’s article, which utilizes theoretical and
statistical data, creates a more thorough, strong, and reliable argument in comparison to Stier’s.
Again, for each field of academia, Stier and Hatchel create compelling arguments that are
effective and appeal to their intended audience, however from an omniscient point of view there
Hatchels argument in “The Relation between Media Multitasking, Intensity of Use, and
Well-Being in a Sample of Ethnically Diverse Emerging Adults” develops a more thorough and
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Audiences, and the Mediation of Political Communication on Facebook and Twitter” primarily
due to the evidence utilized. Though Stiers argument did have a compelling argument supported
through analytical and textual evidence, Hatchel’s argument better supported itself through its
use of statistical and theoretical evidence along with approaching the issue of social media and
how it effects the minds of the youth from different angles. Scholars in each field follow an
unwritten format for their discipline even if that means using evidence that is not the strongest in
a broad spectrum. However, for their own discipline this evidence could speak wonders.
Furthermore, the purpose behind an author’s decision to utilize certain conventions, which in the
readers eyes could strengthen or weaken the argument, is all situational. It depends on which
field of academia they fall under. Looking at it from an outside perspective, Hatchel’s argument
appears to be sounder however when analyzing it from a psychological perspective it may not be
as sound as the reader thinks; Again, it is all situational. It is evident that it all depends on what
audience the reader falls into; for the purpose of this assignment, it is clear that the evidence
Resources
Hatchel, T., Negriff S., & Subrahmanyam, K. (2018). The relation between media multitasking,
Stier, S., Bleier, A., Lietz, H., & Strohmaier, M. (2018). Election Campaigning on Social Media: