Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Student ID 800987808
Studio Six
Due 4/27/2018
UWRT 1104-004
Professor Malcolm Campbell
Margin Outline
Paragraph 1. Topic Sentence- “Establishment of the Olympic Movement which spurred the re-
establishment of the Olympic Games.”
A) Next Point. “Differentiation between Summer and Winter Olympics
and the quantity there of.”
B) Next Point. “Establishment of the International Olympic Committee”
C) Next Point. “Date and place of the first modern Olympics.”
D) Next Point. “Date, place, and establishment of ice-hockey as a winter
Olympic sport.”
E) Next Point. “Quantity of events that have been added.”
Paragraph 2. Topic Sentence- “A current story of two sisters playing ice-hockey on two
different teams at the 2018 Winter Olympics.”
A) Next Point. “Attempt to evoke the reader by establishing a story.”
B) Next Point. “Identifying the names of the two sisters as well as the
parents.”
C) Next Point. “Identifying the uniqueness of their situation.”
D) Next Point. “Establishing the sister’s love for the game of ice-hockey.”
E) Next Point. “Attempt to evoke emotion in the reader.”
F) Next Point. “Surprise of response to the question.”
G) Next Point. “An example of family.”
H) Next Point. “Why this story is current and relevant to my topic.”
I) Next Point. “Cause for reflection on my own sibling bonds.”
J) Next Point. “Establishing what my inquiry is.”
K) Next Point. “A deeper reason to solve this inquiry.”
L) Next Point. “An example for support.”
Paragraph 3. Topic Sentence- “Date and a sense of time of when I was born.”
A) Next Point. “Birth of one of my sisters.”
B) Next Point. “Acknowledging the landscape change.”
C) Next Point. “Establishing my street credit.”
D) Next Point. “Mother remarried.”
E) Next Point. “Father remarried.”
F) Next Point. “Birth of a baby sister.”
David Ramsey
Student ID 800987808
Studio Six
Due 4/27/2018
UWRT 1104-004
Professor Malcolm Campbell
Paragraph 11. Topic Sentence- Explanation as to why I did not mention the deidentification
process and favoritism.”
A) Next Point. “Definition of the deidentification process and purpose.”
B) Next Point. “Brief explanation of favoritism as we already know what
it is.”
C) Next Point. “Statistics about parents displaying favoritism.”
D) Next Point. “Reason for their exclusion.”
E) Next Point. “Restating my purpose for inquiry.”
Paragraph 12. Topic Sentence- “After learning the environmental factors, how can I apply
them.”
A) Next Point. “Identified the four theoretical perspectives that I will be
utilizing.”
B) Next Point. “Identifying how I will use the theoretical perspectives as
lens to examine the environmental factors.”
C) Next Point. “Definition of psychoanalytic-evolutionary perspective.”
D) Next Point. “The two theories that I will utilize under this
perspective.”
E) Next Point. “Definition of the attachment theory.”
F) Next Point. “Explaining the infant’s first year in which they establish
attachment relationships with a caregiver.”
G) Next Point. “Explaining the second year of a child’s life in which they
use the caregiver as a base.”
H) Next Point. “Pointing out that this attachment sets the tone for further
relationships like that of a sibling bond.”
I) Next Point. “Definition of Adler’s theory.”
J) Next Point. “Explanation of a key concept to his theory which is the
inferiority complex.”
K) Next Point. “Definition of social psychological perspective.”
L) Next Point. “Identifying who proposed the social comparison theory.”
M) Next Point. “Definition of social comparison theory.”
N) Next Point. “Definition of social learning theories.”
O) Next Point. “Defining the principles of observational learning.”
P) Next Point. “Discussing how this process teaches children to learn
social concepts.”
Q) Next Point. “Definition of family-ecological systems.”
R) Next Point. “Explanation of the principles of family system theory.”
David Ramsey
Student ID 800987808
Studio Six
Due 4/27/2018
UWRT 1104-004
Professor Malcolm Campbell
a) The main point of this exploration was to figure out some of the aspects of the jig-saw
puzzle I call my sibling bonds and find new areas to progress further for even more
knowledge and by those standards the conclusion, completely captures this essence.
As far as if the conclusion offers up something new I suggest that it does due to the
power of a quote to motivate the reader to apply these new ideas to probe their own
sibling bonds.