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TP-2 Report
Roadmap
Towards a Written Deliverable
Welcome to the TP-2 Report Roadmap, a blueprint designed to
develop a tightly edited and extremely well-written and
academically researched document.

Shawna Pandya
ISU - MSS07
4/20/20071
Contents

0 REPORT CONSOLIDATION PROCEDURES AND TASKS.......................... .........5


CHAPTER MANAGERS/RESEARCH DIRECTORS – PLEASE READ THIS CHAPTER
BEFORE YOU BEGIN....................................................................................5
1.0 NOTES:...................................................................................................................5
1.1 INSTRUCTIONS FOR CHAPTER MANAGERS..................................................................... 5
0.1 REPORT STATUS........................................................................................................6
0.2 CHAPTER MANAGEMENT WORK BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE............................................ .6
0.3 PART I: BUILDING THE CHAPTER FRAMEWORK..............................................................7
0.4 PART II: PROCEDURE FOR PULLING TOGETHER A PROPER CHAPTER................................. 8
0.5 REPORT COMPLETION WORK BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE................................................11
0.6 EXECUTIVE SUMMARY WORK BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE...............................................12

1 INTRODUCTION........................................................................................... ............13
1.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................13

CHAPTER 1 - INTRODUCTION.................................................... ...........................14

CHAPTER 2 – THE PLAN/OVERVIEW (MAKE IT CLEAR TO THOMAS


THAT THIS IS AN INTRODUCTION TO OUR ENTIRE REPORT, NOT JUST
THE TWO TECHNICAL CHAPTERS)............................................... .......................15

2 PROJECT G.A.S. P.U.M.P...................................................................... ...................17


2.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................17

3 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. ARCHITECTURE & ITS OPTIMIZATION: STORAGE...........18


3.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................18

CHAPTER 3 – THE DETAILS.................................................................... ................18

4 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. ARCHITECTURE & ITS OPTIMIZATION: DELIVERY.........21


4.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................21

CHAPTER 4 – TO MAXIMIZE THE PERFORMANCE, DURABILITY &


UTILITY OF OUR PRODUCT.......................................................... ..........................21

5 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – THE BUSINESS PLAN.................................................. ..............23


5.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................23

[JUN NEEDS DATA FROM STORAGE AND DELIVERY THE NUMERICAL


SOLUTIONS (E.G. WRT STORAGE & DELIVERY, BY-PRODUCTS, MARKET
DEMAND BEFORE HE CAN COME UP WITH NUMBERS].................................23

CHAPTER 5 – THE BUSINESS CASE................................................................... ...23

6 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - THE POLITICO-LEGAL PERSPECTIVE...............................25


6.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................25

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CHAPTER 6 – OVERCOMING THE POLITICAL & LEGAL BARRIERS
(CHANGE TITLE)......................................................................................................... 25

7 CONCLUSIONS & RECOMMENDATIONS............................... ...........................27


7.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................27

CHAPTER 7 – CONCLUSIONS & RECOMMENDATIONS (SHOULD BE A


‘GRAND SYNTHESIS’).................................................................................... ............27

8 EXTRAS............................................................................................ ..........................28
8.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................28
8.2 STUDENT PREFACE..................................................................................................28

12 TEAM MEMBER NAMES & AFFILIATION........................... ............................33

14 ACKNOWLEDGMENT TRACKER................................................................... ....34

15 ACRONYM TRACKER.......................................................................... .................35

16 PROOF OF PERMISSION SHEET FOR USE OF COPYRIGHTED FIGURES


................................................................................................................... ......................37

17 REQUEST FOR PERMISSION OF USE FORM............................................... ....39

APPENDIX TRACKER........................................................................................... .....40

18 INDEX OF TERMS TO BE CROSS-REFERENCED...........................................41

19 9 – REFERENCES.................................................................................... ................43

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_____________________________________Chapter 0
0 Report Consolidation
Procedures and Tasks

Chapter Managers/Research
Directors – PLEASE READ THIS
CHAPTER BEFORE YOU BEGIN

1.0Notes:
1. If you only read 2 sections, make sure it is this one and the one
you are in charge of. These are cross-referenced within the Table
of Contents and the Work Breakdown Structure table, so hit
‘ctrl+click’ to get there without scrolling through the document.
2. So far I have only copy-and-pasted the outline with minor edits
into the relevant sections. EXPECT THESE TO CHANGE QUITE A
BIT.
3. The research submissions are compiled in a separate document
called ‘Compiled Submissions round 1.’
4. Let me know if you have questions!

1.1Instructions for Chapter Managers


Welcome to the wonderful world of Chapter Management! ;)
Basically, in order to pull together a first rough draft for Tuesday, I am
putting you all in charge of a chapter for Tuesday (see next section for
Chapter assignments). It is a lot of work, so make sure you ‘contract it
out’ – i.e. delegate in order to meet your deadline! If you are too busy,
delegate the Chapter Manager role to someone in your group to take
care of it – but you are still responsible for having something for
me by Tuesday, April 21, 2007.
N.B.: There is a lot to be done, so I will try to assist you as
much as possible. I have identified my general role within the
chapters as noted in the table entitled ‘Report Integration
Duties.’

N.B.-2: For SUBMISSIONS: Only send me your sections, not the entire
document!! Delete the rest.

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0.1Report Status
Research Group Status

Drivers & Constraints ~80%

Storage 20% (aiming for 100% by


Thursday, April 26)

Transport Unknown

Practical Implementation 50-60%

Tuesday, April 24, 2007 9AM – Deliverables from Groups:


• Complete & edited detailed synopses for each chapter from each
chapter manager
• Submit to me what you have in terms of ACTUAL chapter content
at this point so I know what you are
Wednesday, April 25, 2007 9AM – Deliverables
• Edited & complete synopses from Shawna & Brian (?)

0.2Chapter Management Work Breakdown


Structure
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
3
Chapter 1: Introduction Dag &
Shawna
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Chapter 2: Project G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Rodolphe &
Shawna
20
Chapter 3: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture & Dave
Its Optimization: Storage
20
Chapter 4: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture & Thomas
Its Optimization: Delivery
25
Chapter 5: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – The Business Jun
15
Chapter 6: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - The Politico- Jun & Shawna
Legal Perspective
6
Chapter 7: Conclusions & Shawna
Recommendations

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25
Chapter 8: Extras (Table of Shawna
Contents/Figures/Tables, Appendices,
Index, Acronyms, Acknowledgments,
Disclaimer, Authors’ List)

TOTAL Approx.
150

0.3Part I: Building the Chapter Framework


1. Shawna Assembles Chapter Objectives: I will start filling in the
Chapter Objectives in list format based on the outline,
submissions and presentations you gave on Wednesday, noting
which group is doing what. It is up to you to build the chapter
synopsis around it.
Please note that within the objectives:
a. Missing content is hi-lighted in yellow;
b. New content that has been assigned to a group is
hi-lighted in turquoise
c. Redundant content is hi-lighted in pink
d. Research that has been determined to be COPY AND
PASTED is high-lighted in green. This is a huge problem
and you, as RDs, are responsible for dealing with
this. Andreea & Violetta have determined that all 4
research group submissions were heavily guilty of
this. If this is not dealt with, I am reporting the offending
parties to faculty, NO EXCEPTIONS. (note: we’ll deal with it
internally first if possible)
e. Chapter Managers: You are responsible for filling in the
gaps, meeting with the other groups to determine who will
cover the redundancy identified within your group and
‘de-plagiarizing’. Contact Shawna and let her know when
you have addressed these so she can update this
document.
2. Chapter Managers Build Chapter Synopsis: Fill in the Chapter
Synopsis in as much detail as you can. Please see the Synopsis
example that I am working on for the Introduction to see what I
want (included at the end of this document). Basically, the
synopsis is a blueprint as to the content and organization of
each chapter. Include headings if you can.
Example:
Chapter 1: Introduction - Synopsis & Objectives
Shawna fills in Objectives:
‘Within this chapter, we will state the following:
As part of this discussion, we will define the scope of our
project, stating:

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(i) How we defined this topic, summarizing our
previous work and defending the decision to
move away from Helium-3
(ii) Justify the decision to disclude Low Lunar Orbit
and limit the discussion to the Lunar surface
(iii) Our focus is on Hydrogen, Oxygen and H2O, but
we will explore uses for by-products in later
chapters, as part of our business case.
(iv) The timeframe to which our project applies’
So whoever is in charge of this section builds the
Synopsis around these Objectives, for example:
‘This chapter is intended to “set the stage” for our report.
Specifically, it will start on the broad scope of human
lunar exploration, what it was (a space-race for glory and
national superiority, what it has become (lunar missions
driven by scientific and economic return) and how we
have evolved to the current framework (what drivers led
us there? Mention science and the emergence of private
sector interest in field). From here, we will explore the
needs of the current framework (multiple needs: e.g.
sustainable base, lunar transport, extraction process for
fuels, fuel itself), leading into a specific discussion on the
importance of transport & fuel, what research has been
conducted thus far and concluding by exposing the
existing literature gap that our report will address,
allowing us to underline the importance of meeting this
need, thereby explaining why our report is relevant and
timely…’
3. Where to Find the Content: For your reference, I compiled the
submissions you gave me this week in a single 137-paged
document. The content has been roughly ordered within
chapters according to our outline. The full outline is at the
beginning of the document while each chapter is also preceded
by the outline content for that specific chapter.

0.4Part II: Procedure for Pulling Together a


Proper Chapter
Please follow the procedure outlined below for making it a polished
product.
N.B.: When submitting to the faculty, include this list as
checklist to inform them as to the chapter’s progress, so they
know what level of feedback to give you (i.e. if you have only
completed the first 3 steps, indicate as such so they don’t
ream you for something that seems like patchwork).
1. Read the Chapter Synopsis.
2. Access the research submissions and pull together the
appropriate content to reflect the Synopsis. N.B. It is up to the

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Chapter Manager to ensure that the content reflects this
synopsis.
3. Integrate the research material in a logical and coherent
manner, taking care to eliminate redundancies.
4. Add the essential chapter elements: Introduction, Conclusion,
transition paragraphs, discussion, etc.
5. Hi-light research gaps and changes you’d like to see in the
Chapter Synopsis and resubmit to the Report Manager and PFs,
who will review the changes and reassign gaps to the
appropriate research group.
6. Once you have a chapter that reads coherently, POLISH IT by
taking it through the edits outlined below. N.B.: Do not
attempt to carry all these edits out on your own.
Delegate these tasks out to other TP members, give them
a deadline that allows you to complete your own work on
time, and note which TP member is in charge of what.
Report Integration Duties – Work Breakdown Structure
Task Description Responsibility Deadline

PART I

Chapter Create a technical list of Shawna


Objectives specific content the
chapter needs to address

Chapter A summary of how the Chapter 1: Dag &


Synopsis chapter will be organized Shawna
to incorporate and
Chapter 2:
present the objectives
Rodolphe
Chapter 3: Dave
Chapter 4: Thomas
Chapter 5: Jun
Chapter 6: Jun &
Shawna
Chapters 7&8:
Shawna

PART II

Transforma Take the patchwork of [Unknown;


tion from research group Suggested TP
Research submissions and weave it members: Shawna,
Group together into a coherent Scotty Rocket,
Submission and complete chapter Brian, Renee,
into Report that flows with an Thiago, Dag]
Material introduction, conclusion
and discussion

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Content Read and edit the Chapter
Audit from beginning to end for
flow and readability,
ensuring that the chapter
does not seem like a
patchwork
Edit for spelling,
Language
grammar, punctuation
Technical
and sentence structure.
Edit
Check that the work
Formatting
complies with the
Technical
formatting specification
Edit
with respect to font,
margins, spacing,
indentation, etc.
Reference Check that citations that
Editing appear in the text appear
in the final reference list
and vice-versa. Check
that formatting
specifications are met.
Randomly cross-check
references to check for
copy-and-pasting. Note
where citations are
needed and/or are
excessive.
Edit any data, calculations
Numerical
& equations; double-
Edit
check both the equations
as well as the final
formatting of the
numbers. Also check that
SI units have been used
throughout and that any
conversions have been
done accurately.
Check that all figures are
Figures &
legible, relevant in gray-
Graphics
scale, and add value to
Edit
the text. Check that the
correct captioning
protocol has been
followed for figures &
tables and that the
content of the figures and
tables are both accurate
and relevant to the text.

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Acronyms: ensure that
Appendices
the acronyms that have
,
been defined appear
Acronyms,
more than once in the
Indexing &
text, are common
Acknowled
acronyms and also that
gments
any acronyms in the
Edit
acronym list appear in the
text.
Index: Check that indexed
terms that are relevant.
Acknowledgments: Check
that persons listed for the
acknowledgments list
have contributed
significantly to the
development of the
project and research.
Appendices: Check that
any appendices listed for
inclusions actually appear
in the final report, and
have been thoroughly
edited.
Global Edit Once you have completed N.B.: The RM and
for the above, assign a TP PFs will be
Readability member to read your reading through
Chapter and the Chapters the entire
immediately preceding document to
and following for flow, audit it as well.
consistency and
redundancy.

0.5Report Completion Work Breakdown


Structure
[For Shawna’s Reference Only]
Task Completion Progress as of
Strategy [Date]
Executive Summary [See below]
Cover Design
Mission Statement
Project Name
Online Accessibility to
Research Submissions
Appendices
Index
Acronyms Table
Global Formatting
Table of Contents,
Figures, Tables

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Extra pages: Title
page, copyright page,
etc.
Acknowledgments
Table
Student Preface
Faculty Preface
Authorship Table
Abstract
Global Reference Edit
Guide to the Report
Structure for the
Reader [JF’s
suggestion; for us to
decide – Shawna]

0.6Executive Summary Work Breakdown


Structure
[For Scott & Shawna’s Reference Only]

Task Completion Strategy Progress as of


[Date]

Template Design

Title Page Design

CD Cover Design

Text Creation &


Integration

Figures Integration

Text Editing

Global Edit of Layout,


Text & Figures

Submission to Faculty
for Feedback 3 days
before deadline

Submission to Joel
Hermann

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_____________________________________Chapter 1
1 Introduction

Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
3
Chapter 1: Introduction Dag &
Shawna

1.1Synopsis & Objectives


[Note to self: define headings within this chapter: Make this a broad
overview; have a diagram of where we progress; look at previous
reports’ introductions; talk about Why the Moon – the Symposium and
this is our solution – also distinguish what goes into the Student
Preface and what goes into the intro]

[Make the report direction and content clear]


This chapter is intended to “set the stage” for our report [and to what
extent the project itself?]. Specifically, it will start on the broad scope
of human lunar exploration, what it was (talk about the Cold-War era –
a space-race for glory and national superiority, what it has become
(lunar missions driven by scientific and economic return – but keep it
brief! 1-2 sentences max!) and how we have evolved to the current
framework (what drivers led us there? Mention science and the
emergence of private sector interest in field). From here, we will
explore the needs of the current framework (multiple needs: e.g.
sustainable base, lunar transport, extraction process for fuels, fuel
itself), leading into a specific discussion on the importance of transport
& fuel (and how they are necessary for ALL these activities), what
research has been conducted thus far (here we bring our mini-lit
review) and concluding by exposing the existing literature gap that our
report will address, allowing us to underline the importance of meeting
this gap, thereby explaining why our report is relevant and timely.
[N.B.: In addition to external literature, here we will also specifically
refer to past ISU design projects and wha will allow us to develop and
how other areas have been extensively covered: for example the 2000
MSS Team Project designed a lunar surface transport system entitled
“Autonomous Lunar Transport Vehicle” while the 2006 Masters’ class
extensively explored in-situ resource extraction and utilization with
“FERTILE Moon.” NOTE TO SELF, FINISH THIS.

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This will lead us in into the discussion of what we will be specifically
addressing: facilitating ‘post-storage’ accessibility to specific
propellants necessary for lunar mobility: Hydrogen, Oxygen & H2O. As
part of this discussion, we will define the scope of our project, stating:
(i) How we defined this topic, summarizing our previous work
and defending the decision to move away from Helium-3
(ii) Justify the decision to exclude Low Lunar Orbit and limit the
discussion to the Lunar surface
(iii) Our focus is on Hydrogen, Oxygen and H2O, but we will
explore uses for by-products in later chapters, as part of our
business case.
(iv) The timeframe to which our project applies

In the next section, we will expand upon the drivers, taking into
account:
(i) The Exploration roadmaps of the major space agencies
(ii) (Note to self: Place in Chapter 2)
(iii) NOTE: When elaborating upon the plan, talk more about
Brian’s idea about analogizing to Earth gas stations….
(iv) NOTE: Look into what other reports have done for other
introductions and model this upon that

CHAPTER 1 - Introduction

A. Introduction: Setting the Stage for the Project Scope


a. What is the purpose of this report? Why is there a need?
What are the drivers? (To be determined)
i. Why do we need Oxygen and Hydrogen, who needs
it, in what format and in what quantity? (D&C)
b. The timeframe of the project (Seun, D&C)
c. Plans & Roadmaps of the major Agencies
d. What has been done? Explain extraction here (D&C)
i. Refer to previous ISU reports (Use the spreadsheet
on shared drive that refers to how previous reports
relate to our project)
ii. Mapping the location of Oxygen and Hydrogen
deposits (Wale, D&C)
iii. Identifying the difficulties involved with location
(sun exposure, eclipse frequency, temperature
variations, etc) (Wale, D&C)
iv. Identifying the exploitation methods possible
(Hubert, D&C)
v. Identifying the production methods possible
(Hubert, D&C)
e. Gap Analysis (To be determined)
i. What is missing in this frame work?
ii. A Market Analysis, seeking to (D&C):
1. Identify the Customers and their nature
2. Evaluate their demand, needs and interest

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3. Brief overview of constraints (this is
explained in more detail in the relevant
Technical, Legal and Business sections)
f. Definition of Scope & Justification (D&C & PI)
i. What is included
ii. What is excluded (include Helium-3, Low Lunar
orbit, and explain why)
g. Limitation to Storage, Transport & Delivery of HOx (D&C)
i. Product & Service Overview (Carlos, Kieran, Isra,
PI ) [Note – this is different from the detailed
description to be provided in the Business Analysis
Section]

CHAPTER 2 – The Plan/Overview (make it clear to Thomas that


this is an introduction to our entire report, not just the two
technical chapters)

A. Our proposed solution


i. Definition of mission development Phase (PI)
1. Exposition of typical mission architectures
and where we fit into it
a. How many infrastructures will we
need? (including the factory storage,
delivery, gas station, etc.)
b. What about Launch Vehicles?
c. Description of the Lunar Surface
2. Where our customers (agencies/companies)
plan to land (Seun, D&C)
3. With what vehicles (Dimitrios, D&C)
4. With which accuracy (Dimitrios, D&C)
5. Which resources (Oxygen/Hydrogen) they
need (Dimitrios, D&C)
6. For which purposes (Dimitrios, D&C)
7. In what format (gases/liquid) (Dimitrios,
D&C)
8. In which quantity (volume/mass) (Dimitrios,
D&C)
9. Of which quality (purity) (Dimitrios, D&C)
a. Assumptions (Which groups will be taking part in
this?)
i. Assumption of reliable technology for extraction,
production & supply (D&C)
ii. Not storing gaseous form, no density (Stor.)

[Figures & Tables:


 Timeline of our proposed project (Seun, D&C)
 Lunar maps identifying zones of future hotspots of activity
(Seun, D&C)
 Quantification of customer needs (Seun, D&C
 This section will include a Lunar Map ID’ing Deposits & by-
products (Wale, D&C)
 This section will include a Lunar Map ID’ing proposed production
sites (Wale, D&C)

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 This section will include a database encompassing all Oxygen
and Hydrogen exploitation and production methods according to
desired QUANTITY and LOCATION (Hubert, D&C)]

B. Explanation of Approach & Methods for Technical Design (Stor. &


Trans.) (This section needs development)
a. The Data (Trans.)
i. input standards for sample “day in the life of a
refuelling company” on Earth
b. Models (Trans.)
i. requirements for inputs to “set the stage” –
predictions of production, storage and product user
locations, other customer requirements

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_____________________________________Chapter 2
2 Project G.A.S. P.U.M.P

Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
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Chapter 2: Project G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Rodolphe

2.1Synopsis & Objectives


NOTE: When elaborating upon the plan, talk more about Brian’s idea
about analogizing to Earth gas stations…
(what are the technical & economic drivers for this)
(start with a diagram)
(define & rationalize the project based on this)
(basically have this section as detailed background information about
our project)
(assumptions, drivers & consumptions)

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_____________________________________Chapter 3
3 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture &
Its Optimization: Storage

Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
20
Chapter 3: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture & Dave
Its Optimization: Storage

3.1Synopsis & Objectives


Update from Dave:

STORAGE
Abstract
1. Introduction
1.1 Problem Identified
2. Challenges and Potential Solutions
2.1. Technologies to Address
3. Short Term Solution
3.1 LSAM Modifications
3.2 Operational Usage
4. Long Term Solution
5. Discussion and Conclusions

CHAPTER 3 – The Details

A. Gap 1: Storage

[D&C will output storage vehicle specifications to Stor.]

[Figures:

 Table of Tanks for different uses]


a. Introduction (Dave, Stor.)
b. Materials
i. Hydrogen (LH2) (Scott, Stor.)
ii. Oxygen (LO2) (Alma, Stor.)
iii. Form of storage (water?) (Dave, Stor.)

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iv. Liquid 02 and H2 tanks (fixed and mobile) (Scott,
Alma, Stor.)
v. (Construction? Lifetime? Strength?) (To be
determined)
vi. Table of Tanks for different uses: (To be determined)

Tank Tank Tank Duratio Tank Reliabili Designed for


Capacit Usag Materi n ofShap ty Atmosphere/Vacu
y e al Storag e um
e

c. Subsystems

i. Outgassing / Venting / Boil Off (Liquid volatiles can't


be stored in open topped craters? Can they? (Not
yet assigned, Stor.)
ii. Thermal Control (Not yet assigned, Stor.)
iii. Standardized Interfaces (valves, mechanisms)
(Andreea, Stor.)
iv. Storage Specifications (To be determined)

1. Design (Calculated capacity, chosen


materials)
2. Capacity
3. Location [To be defined later by Stor.]

vii. Other Issues

1. Quality Control (Not yet assigned, Stor.)


2. Maintenance (Not yet assigned,
Stor.)
B. Heading 2 Gap 2: Delivery & Distribution Design (Trans.)

[D&C will output delivery vehicle specifications to Trans.]

[Allocation of Trans. Researchers to be inputted]

a. Introduction & Possible Alternatives


i. Fixed Infrastructure
ii. Aerial VS ground ways.
iii. Supporting carriage (rail, conveyor, gondola)
b. Mobile Platforms
i. Wheeled vehicles
ii. Tracked Vehicles
iii. Ballistic Vehicles
iv. Walkers
v. Hoppers
c. Criteria for Selection and Trade-Space Analysis
i. Cost
ii. Matching of Customer Needs (delivery time and
frequency, volumes required…)

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iii. Level of Autonomy
iv. Technical Readiness and Feasibility
d. Design Parameters
i. eg. distance between storage facilities and product
users
ii. Energy Supply
iii. Propulsion Alternatives
iv. Other
v. [From Shawna: Put a note for content to include:
criteria used as inputs for the system optimization
tool & reasons for selection]

e. Design of the Delivery System


i. Propulsion System
ii. Energy Supply System
iii. Communication System
iv. Tank & Interface
v. Other

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_____________________________________Chapter 4
4 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture &
Its Optimization: Delivery

Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
20
Chapter 4: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture & Thomas
Its Optimization: Delivery

4.1Synopsis & Objectives


CHAPTER 4 – To Maximize the Performance, Durability & Utility
of Our Product

A. Trade-off Studies & Options for System Optimization (Stor. &


Trans.)
a. Optimization as a Design Aid; Using Optimization for
Operations (Stor. & Sport)
i. Purpose of optimization: Needed to overcome
limitations of current technology, maximize
performance, etc. (Which group will do this?)
ii. how [computer] modeling is useful for this
application to choose between disparate [storage
and] delivery systems (fixed and mobile, manned
and unmanned)
b. Location Optimization (Stor.)
i. methods for comparing storage locations based on
predicted production facility and customer locations
c. The Engine: Preferred Algorithms
i. describes algorithms suitable for continuous
surface with fixed and moving locations
d. Route Optimization (Trans.)
i. methods for comparing delivery system designs
based on predicted routes
e. Trade-offs for Financial, Technical, Mass & Performance
Optimization (formerly: Optimization Applied to the
Business Case) (Stor. & Trans.)

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i. leads back to the business plan and how this
method will help management with risk assessment
and predictions
ii. Groups, please note the change to this
section’s title – it will require more analysis –
S.

B. Technical Risk Assessment & Mitigation Strategies (Stor. &


Trans.)
a. Intro to Risks considered (Stor. & Trans.)
b. Reliability & Maintenance Operations
i. System design life
ii. Failure prediction and mitigation through planned
maintenance
c. Health & Safety Issues

i. Health Monitoring (Sensors, Gauges) (William, Stor.)


ii. Managing Human Safety on the Road (Trans.)
iii. describes specific hazards to astronaut health from
cargo and delivery system and mitigation strategies
[Note: this section may be unnecessary if we
choose un-crewed transportation]
iv. Environmental Issues (Spill Management) (Laure-
Helene, Stor. & UNKNOWN from Trans. – who?)

1. describes potential for harm to the lunar


environment and mitigation, specifically
spills, ground-breaking and waste
management

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_____________________________________Chapter 5
5 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – The Business
Plan

Tentative
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Chapter 5: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – The Business Jun
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5.1Synopsis & Objectives


[Jun needs data from Storage and Delivery the numerical
solutions (e.g. wrt Storage & Delivery, by-products, market
demand before he can come up with numbers]

CHAPTER 5 – The Business Case

A. Business Analysis
a. Business Case Assumptions (Henrik, Kenneth, PI)
i. Private Companies
ii. National Government and Private Corporate Entity
iii. Multinational Government and Private Corporate
Entity
iv. Multinational Government, Private and Venture
Capital
v. Agencies
vi. IAC (Note to PI – please clarify what you mean)
b. Consider their evolution over time (Note to PI – please
clarify what you mean)
c. Marketing Analysis (D&C & PI)
i. Industry Overview (Sebastian, D&C & Pierre, PI)
1. Perform a Competitors’ Analysis
d. Detailed Description of Products/By products/Service/Spin-
off definition (as opposed to general description in the
introduction) (PI & D&C)
i. Product definition: H2, O2, H2O (Carla, Kieran and
Isra)

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1. Byproduct (Analysis of which ones: Platinum-
fuel cells catalyst, CO-atmosphere control,
He4-Pressurization) (Hubert, D&C)
2. Spin-off definition (PI)
3. Service definition: (Carla, Kieran and Isra, PI)
1. Self service gas station analog
2. Full service gas station analog
3. Storage of H2 or O2
4. Spin-Off Services
ii. Commercialization plan (Carla, Kieran, and Isra, PI)
1. Partnerships (spin-ins\spin-offs) products use
and service provision (with GM, Honda,
Chrysler, Texaco, Energia, space tourism
industry-offering stay for Astronauts)
iii. Price & Cost Analysis (Henrik, Kenneth, PI)
1. Cost Category
2. Cost Breakdown Structure
3. Cost Model (FERTILE Model from MSS/MSM
2006 TP)
4. Total Cost Estimation (Interface with other
groups)
5. Financial Analysis
1. Revenues
2. Net Present Value
3. Capital Expenditures
6. Price Determination
iv. Risk Assessment (Carla, Kieran and Isra, PI)
1. Political
2. Business
3. Policy (Public Support)
v. Place and Distribution (Carla, Isra)
vi. Promotion (Carla, Isra)

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_____________________________________Chapter 6
6 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - The Politico-
Legal Perspective

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Chapter 6: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - The Politico- Jun & Shawna
Legal Perspective

6.1Synopsis & Objectives


CHAPTER 6 – Overcoming the Political & Legal Barriers (change
title)

A. Barriers to Implementation (D&C) (change title to something


more along the lines of “Short overview of the Existing
Legal Regime))
a. Policy (Violetta, Carlos, PI)
i. Objective of the policy
ii. Political issues
iii. Economic
iv. Scientific
v. Societal (Kieran)
vi. Private involvement policy issues
b. Politico-Legal Considerations
i. Property rights vs. national property
ii. International Legislation (e.g. OST, Moon Treaty)
(Pierre, D&C)
iii. National Trade & Export control regulations. ITAR as
an example (Pierre, D&C)
B. LEGAL PROPOSAL (Violetta, Carlos, PI)
a. International Cooperation
i. Company structure
ii. Equity share and funds
b. Commercial utility
i. Short overview of the existing legal regime for
Lunar resources exploitation
c. Enabling legality of the project
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ii. Adoption of temporary national legislation
iii. Amendment of the Outer Space Treaty
iv. Ratification of the Moon agreement, Establishment
of international regime for exploitation of resources
v. New treaty for exploitation of lunar resources
d. Establishing the framework of contracts awarded to sub-
contractors (Eg for Production) (Pierre, D&C)
i. Sample Contract to be awarded to sub-contractors
(PI)
C. Business Law (PI) (change title to something more
reflective, e.g. “Other Legal Considerations”)
i. Liability
ii. Insurance
iii. Warrantee
iv. Taxes
v. Contracts (Models) (P. Imp & Pierre, D&C)
1. Clients
2. Sub-contractors
vi. Certification (PI)
c. Ethical Considerations
i. Planetary Protection Issues

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_____________________________________Chapter 7
7 Conclusions &
Recommendations

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Chapter 7: Conclusions & Shawna
Recommendations

7.1Synopsis & Objectives


CHAPTER 7 – Conclusions & Recommendations (Should be a ‘grand
synthesis’)

A. Conclusion: The Result (Writer To be determined)


a. Summary of Needs, Technical Plan, Legal/Technical
Constraints, Plans to overcome Constraints, Benefits)
b. Future Directions & Recommendations
c. Concluding Statement

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_______________________________________Chapter 8
8 Extras

Tentative
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Chapter 8: Extras (Table of 25
Shawna
Contents/Figures/Tables, Appendices,
Index, Acronyms, Acknowledgments,
Disclaimer, Authors’ List, 1-paged
abstract & guide to Report Structure for
Readers’ Use)

8.1Synopsis & Objectives

8.2Student Preface
GAS PUMP (General Architectural Structure: Procedures for Usage of Moon
Propellants): The Big Picture

During the decades of the Cold War Era, the ‘Space Race’ pushed humanity
to farther frontiers, sending the first humans beyond the confines of the
Earth, first to near-Earth space and low-Earth orbits, but eventually to the
Moon itself.

Despite the initial pride and excitement stemming from these monumental
achievements, the magnitude of these large-scale ventures proved
themselves to be unsustainable, especially without the competition of the
Cold War as a driver. As a result, the post-Cold War decades bore witness to a
significant decline in interest in ambitious human ventures, amongst the
general public and by way of resulting decreases in dedicated funding and
resources from national space agencies.

This trend has recently reversed itself as political will and public interest have
once again come together to reignite an interest in human exploration of the
Moon, this time coupled with scientific and economic drivers. For these

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reasons, NASA, JAXA, and ROSKOSMOS, for example, have all described plans
for establishing a human presence on the Moon within the next 20 years.

Importantly, amidst these plans lies the emerging realization that these new
visions for lunar exploration necessitate pragmatic approaches and
meticulous planning if humanity is to move beyond the previous philosophy
of lunar exploration for thrill and achievement, and into an era of exploration
for scientific and economic gain.
The nature of this new exploration calls for elements necessary to sustainable
exploratory missions and eventual lunar bases, including, for example, life
support systems, communication networks, mobility methods and reliable
power sources.

The space agencies’ varied reasons for returning to the Moon and the
activities planned on-site mean that reliable transportation will be a key
element in navigating the Moon. This is a concept that is well-reviewed in the
literature in several aspects, but not so much in others. For example, the
2000 ISU design project, “Autonomous Lunar Transport Vehicle,” was
dedicated to a lunar transport system for crew and cargo, while the 2006 ISU
project, “FERTILE Moon,” explored In-Situ Resource Utilization processes for
energy and fuel usage. However, gaps still exist in this field, both within the
ISU and the external literature.

Realistically, if exploration is to be carried out on a Moon-wide scale, then


beyond the issue of simple and accessible transport systems and fuel
acquisition lies the issue of propellant accessibility: after all, fuel is of no use
if it cannot be properly stored and delivered.

The focus of the 2007 ISU design project, then, is exactly that: to design a
lunar propellant storage and distribution system that is safe, reliable, cost-
effective and efficient. The value of this project is two-fold: firstly, the
systems, designed with the utmost care by referencing the existing literature
and experts in numerous fields, provide a fuel-accessibility architecture that
will be crucial to the success of lunar exploration and mobility. Secondly, this
project resists obsolescence owing to the development of a systems selection
tool that outputs a ‘best’ system based on a comparison of existing
technologies, qualities and assumptions – hence it can be modified as
technology evolves to continue to generate the most capable and appropriate
system for what is required of it.

It is the intent of the GAS PUMP design team that this project will be of the
utmost value in supporting lunar exploration and mobility, serving as an
innovation to the future generations of lunar explorers who boldly and
brazenly dare to expand humanity’s reach beyond the Earth.

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9

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Supporting Documents for Chapter


Writing
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TABLE OF CONTENTS

0 REPORT CONSOLIDATION PROCEDURES AND TASKS...................................... ...5


CHAPTER MANAGERS/RESEARCH DIRECTORS – PLEASE READ THIS CHAPTER BEFORE
YOU BEGIN..........................................................................................................5
1.0 NOTES:.........................................................................................................................5
1.1 INSTRUCTIONS FOR CHAPTER MANAGERS........................................................................... 5
0.1 REPORT STATUS..............................................................................................................6
0.2 CHAPTER MANAGEMENT WORK BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE................................................... 6
0.3 PART I: BUILDING THE CHAPTER FRAMEWORK....................................................................7
0.4 PART II: PROCEDURE FOR PULLING TOGETHER A PROPER CHAPTER....................................... 8
0.5 REPORT COMPLETION WORK BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE......................................................11
0.6 EXECUTIVE SUMMARY WORK BREAKDOWN STRUCTURE.....................................................12

1 INTRODUCTION....................................................................................................... ......13
1.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................13

CHAPTER 1 - INTRODUCTION................................................................ .....................14

CHAPTER 2 – THE PLAN/OVERVIEW (MAKE IT CLEAR TO THOMAS THAT THIS


IS AN INTRODUCTION TO OUR ENTIRE REPORT, NOT JUST THE TWO
TECHNICAL CHAPTERS)...................................................................................... ..........15

2 PROJECT G.A.S. P.U.M.P.................................................................................. .............17


2.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................17

3 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. ARCHITECTURE & ITS OPTIMIZATION: STORAGE.................18


3.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................18

CHAPTER 3 – THE DETAILS............................................................................... ...........18

4 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. ARCHITECTURE & ITS OPTIMIZATION: DELIVERY...............21


4.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................21

CHAPTER 4 – TO MAXIMIZE THE PERFORMANCE, DURABILITY & UTILITY OF


OUR PRODUCT..................................................................................................... .............21

5 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – THE BUSINESS PLAN.............................................................. ........23


5.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................23

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[JUN NEEDS DATA FROM STORAGE AND DELIVERY THE NUMERICAL
SOLUTIONS (E.G. WRT STORAGE & DELIVERY, BY-PRODUCTS, MARKET
DEMAND BEFORE HE CAN COME UP WITH NUMBERS].......................... .............23

CHAPTER 5 – THE BUSINESS CASE.................................................. .........................23

6 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - THE POLITICO-LEGAL PERSPECTIVE.....................................25


6.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................25

CHAPTER 6 – OVERCOMING THE POLITICAL & LEGAL BARRIERS (CHANGE


TITLE).......................................................................................................................... ........25

7 CONCLUSIONS & RECOMMENDATIONS.......................................... ......................27


7.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................27

CHAPTER 7 – CONCLUSIONS & RECOMMENDATIONS (SHOULD BE A ‘GRAND


SYNTHESIS’)............................................................................................ ..........................27

8 EXTRAS........................................................................................................ ....................28
8.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................28
8.2 STUDENT PREFACE........................................................................................................28

12 TEAM MEMBER NAMES & AFFILIATION....................................... ......................33

14 ACKNOWLEDGMENT TRACKER................................................. ...........................34

15 ACRONYM TRACKER...................................................................................... ...........35

16 PROOF OF PERMISSION SHEET FOR USE OF COPYRIGHTED FIGURES.....37

17 REQUEST FOR PERMISSION OF USE FORM............................. ...........................39

APPENDIX TRACKER......................................................................... ............................40

18 INDEX OF TERMS TO BE CROSS-REFERENCED.............................. ...................41

19 9 – REFERENCES............................................................................................... ...........43

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12 Team Member Names & Affiliation

Research Group: ______________________


Instructions:
Please have all team members fill in the table below exactly as they would
like the information to appear in the report.

Name Country Degree University

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14 Acknowledgment Tracker

Research Group: ______________________


Instructions:
Fill in the Names & Affiliation/Positions of internal & external individuals who
have played a key role in the development of your work.

Acknowledgment Name Position & Affiliation

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15 Acronym Tracker

Research Group: _____________________


Instructions:
1) Define all acronyms the first time they appear in text ONLY IF THEY
ARE USED MORE THAN ONCE
2) Use only COMMON acronyms; DO NOT MAKE UP YOUR OWN
3) Verify that each acronym appears in the final version of the text
4) Add rows/delete letters as needed. LEAVE AN EMPTY ROW BETWEEN
THE LAST ACRONYM AND THE NEXT LETTER. MAKE SURE ONLY THE
LETTER ITSELF IS BOLDED. (See “AU” example below)
A
AU Astronomical Unit

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16 Proof of Permission Sheet for Use of Copyrighted Figures

Research Group: ______________________


Instructions:

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It is imperative that we obtain permission for all figures and images we
borrow, therefore please be impeccable with your permissions tracking by
filling in this sheet.

Figure/Imag Source Permission Permission Proof of


e Details: Granted? Permissio
Request Sent n Handed
In? in to
By Whom? Shawna?

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17 Request for Permission of Use Form

Dear Permissions Editor:

I request permission to use the material specified below from …… (title of


publication) in a section of a handbook (give title and name of editor) which I
am preparing, and in future editions or revisions thereof, to be published by
……(name of publisher).

In particular, I request permission to use [Title, author, and what is to be


reprinted].

It is understood, of course, that full credit will be given to your publication,


either as a numbered reference in the bibliography, where the citation will be
given in full, or as a footnote or credit line (from (author’s name), (title of
book), (publisher and place), (date of publication), (page numbers)).

Your prompt consideration of this request will be appreciated. For your


convenience, a release form is given below. The duplicate is for your files.

Yours sincerely,

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Signature ……………………….. Date …………………………..
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Appendix Tracker

Research Group: ______________________


Instructions:
Please indicate the names of any appendices you wish to be included in the
final report

1)

2)

3)

4)

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18Index of Terms to be Cross-Referenced

Research Group: ______________________


Instructions:
1) Like many previous reports, we will be including an index if our 150-
page allowance permits. Therefore, please include list of all terms you
wish to appear in the final index, so that we may cross-reference later.
2) Make sure that the term actually appears in your final draft.
3) Add rows/delete letters as needed. LEAVE AN EMPTY ROW BETWEEN
THE LAST ACRONYM AND THE NEXT LETTER. MAKE SURE ONLY THE
LETTER ITSELF IS BOLDED.
A
Astronomical Unit

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