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TP-2 Report
Roadmap
Towards a Written Deliverable
Welcome to the TP-2 Report Roadmap, a blueprint designed to
develop a tightly edited and extremely well-written and
academically researched document.
Shawna Pandya
ISU - MSS07
4/20/20071
Contents
1 INTRODUCTION........................................................................................... ............13
1.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................13
2
CHAPTER 6 – OVERCOMING THE POLITICAL & LEGAL BARRIERS
(CHANGE TITLE)......................................................................................................... 25
8 EXTRAS............................................................................................ ..........................28
8.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES.........................................................................................28
8.2 STUDENT PREFACE..................................................................................................28
19 9 – REFERENCES.................................................................................... ................43
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_____________________________________Chapter 0
0 Report Consolidation
Procedures and Tasks
Chapter Managers/Research
Directors – PLEASE READ THIS
CHAPTER BEFORE YOU BEGIN
1.0Notes:
1. If you only read 2 sections, make sure it is this one and the one
you are in charge of. These are cross-referenced within the Table
of Contents and the Work Breakdown Structure table, so hit
‘ctrl+click’ to get there without scrolling through the document.
2. So far I have only copy-and-pasted the outline with minor edits
into the relevant sections. EXPECT THESE TO CHANGE QUITE A
BIT.
3. The research submissions are compiled in a separate document
called ‘Compiled Submissions round 1.’
4. Let me know if you have questions!
N.B.-2: For SUBMISSIONS: Only send me your sections, not the entire
document!! Delete the rest.
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0.1Report Status
Research Group Status
Transport Unknown
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Chapter 8: Extras (Table of Shawna
Contents/Figures/Tables, Appendices,
Index, Acronyms, Acknowledgments,
Disclaimer, Authors’ List)
TOTAL Approx.
150
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(i) How we defined this topic, summarizing our
previous work and defending the decision to
move away from Helium-3
(ii) Justify the decision to disclude Low Lunar Orbit
and limit the discussion to the Lunar surface
(iii) Our focus is on Hydrogen, Oxygen and H2O, but
we will explore uses for by-products in later
chapters, as part of our business case.
(iv) The timeframe to which our project applies’
So whoever is in charge of this section builds the
Synopsis around these Objectives, for example:
‘This chapter is intended to “set the stage” for our report.
Specifically, it will start on the broad scope of human
lunar exploration, what it was (a space-race for glory and
national superiority, what it has become (lunar missions
driven by scientific and economic return) and how we
have evolved to the current framework (what drivers led
us there? Mention science and the emergence of private
sector interest in field). From here, we will explore the
needs of the current framework (multiple needs: e.g.
sustainable base, lunar transport, extraction process for
fuels, fuel itself), leading into a specific discussion on the
importance of transport & fuel, what research has been
conducted thus far and concluding by exposing the
existing literature gap that our report will address,
allowing us to underline the importance of meeting this
need, thereby explaining why our report is relevant and
timely…’
3. Where to Find the Content: For your reference, I compiled the
submissions you gave me this week in a single 137-paged
document. The content has been roughly ordered within
chapters according to our outline. The full outline is at the
beginning of the document while each chapter is also preceded
by the outline content for that specific chapter.
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Chapter Manager to ensure that the content reflects this
synopsis.
3. Integrate the research material in a logical and coherent
manner, taking care to eliminate redundancies.
4. Add the essential chapter elements: Introduction, Conclusion,
transition paragraphs, discussion, etc.
5. Hi-light research gaps and changes you’d like to see in the
Chapter Synopsis and resubmit to the Report Manager and PFs,
who will review the changes and reassign gaps to the
appropriate research group.
6. Once you have a chapter that reads coherently, POLISH IT by
taking it through the edits outlined below. N.B.: Do not
attempt to carry all these edits out on your own.
Delegate these tasks out to other TP members, give them
a deadline that allows you to complete your own work on
time, and note which TP member is in charge of what.
Report Integration Duties – Work Breakdown Structure
Task Description Responsibility Deadline
PART I
PART II
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Content Read and edit the Chapter
Audit from beginning to end for
flow and readability,
ensuring that the chapter
does not seem like a
patchwork
Edit for spelling,
Language
grammar, punctuation
Technical
and sentence structure.
Edit
Check that the work
Formatting
complies with the
Technical
formatting specification
Edit
with respect to font,
margins, spacing,
indentation, etc.
Reference Check that citations that
Editing appear in the text appear
in the final reference list
and vice-versa. Check
that formatting
specifications are met.
Randomly cross-check
references to check for
copy-and-pasting. Note
where citations are
needed and/or are
excessive.
Edit any data, calculations
Numerical
& equations; double-
Edit
check both the equations
as well as the final
formatting of the
numbers. Also check that
SI units have been used
throughout and that any
conversions have been
done accurately.
Check that all figures are
Figures &
legible, relevant in gray-
Graphics
scale, and add value to
Edit
the text. Check that the
correct captioning
protocol has been
followed for figures &
tables and that the
content of the figures and
tables are both accurate
and relevant to the text.
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Acronyms: ensure that
Appendices
the acronyms that have
,
been defined appear
Acronyms,
more than once in the
Indexing &
text, are common
Acknowled
acronyms and also that
gments
any acronyms in the
Edit
acronym list appear in the
text.
Index: Check that indexed
terms that are relevant.
Acknowledgments: Check
that persons listed for the
acknowledgments list
have contributed
significantly to the
development of the
project and research.
Appendices: Check that
any appendices listed for
inclusions actually appear
in the final report, and
have been thoroughly
edited.
Global Edit Once you have completed N.B.: The RM and
for the above, assign a TP PFs will be
Readability member to read your reading through
Chapter and the Chapters the entire
immediately preceding document to
and following for flow, audit it as well.
consistency and
redundancy.
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Extra pages: Title
page, copyright page,
etc.
Acknowledgments
Table
Student Preface
Faculty Preface
Authorship Table
Abstract
Global Reference Edit
Guide to the Report
Structure for the
Reader [JF’s
suggestion; for us to
decide – Shawna]
Template Design
CD Cover Design
Figures Integration
Text Editing
Submission to Faculty
for Feedback 3 days
before deadline
Submission to Joel
Hermann
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_____________________________________Chapter 1
1 Introduction
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
3
Chapter 1: Introduction Dag &
Shawna
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This will lead us in into the discussion of what we will be specifically
addressing: facilitating ‘post-storage’ accessibility to specific
propellants necessary for lunar mobility: Hydrogen, Oxygen & H2O. As
part of this discussion, we will define the scope of our project, stating:
(i) How we defined this topic, summarizing our previous work
and defending the decision to move away from Helium-3
(ii) Justify the decision to exclude Low Lunar Orbit and limit the
discussion to the Lunar surface
(iii) Our focus is on Hydrogen, Oxygen and H2O, but we will
explore uses for by-products in later chapters, as part of our
business case.
(iv) The timeframe to which our project applies
In the next section, we will expand upon the drivers, taking into
account:
(i) The Exploration roadmaps of the major space agencies
(ii) (Note to self: Place in Chapter 2)
(iii) NOTE: When elaborating upon the plan, talk more about
Brian’s idea about analogizing to Earth gas stations….
(iv) NOTE: Look into what other reports have done for other
introductions and model this upon that
CHAPTER 1 - Introduction
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3. Brief overview of constraints (this is
explained in more detail in the relevant
Technical, Legal and Business sections)
f. Definition of Scope & Justification (D&C & PI)
i. What is included
ii. What is excluded (include Helium-3, Low Lunar
orbit, and explain why)
g. Limitation to Storage, Transport & Delivery of HOx (D&C)
i. Product & Service Overview (Carlos, Kieran, Isra,
PI ) [Note – this is different from the detailed
description to be provided in the Business Analysis
Section]
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This section will include a database encompassing all Oxygen
and Hydrogen exploitation and production methods according to
desired QUANTITY and LOCATION (Hubert, D&C)]
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_____________________________________Chapter 2
2 Project G.A.S. P.U.M.P
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
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Chapter 2: Project G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Rodolphe
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_____________________________________Chapter 3
3 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture &
Its Optimization: Storage
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
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Chapter 3: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture & Dave
Its Optimization: Storage
STORAGE
Abstract
1. Introduction
1.1 Problem Identified
2. Challenges and Potential Solutions
2.1. Technologies to Address
3. Short Term Solution
3.1 LSAM Modifications
3.2 Operational Usage
4. Long Term Solution
5. Discussion and Conclusions
A. Gap 1: Storage
[Figures:
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iv. Liquid 02 and H2 tanks (fixed and mobile) (Scott,
Alma, Stor.)
v. (Construction? Lifetime? Strength?) (To be
determined)
vi. Table of Tanks for different uses: (To be determined)
c. Subsystems
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iii. Level of Autonomy
iv. Technical Readiness and Feasibility
d. Design Parameters
i. eg. distance between storage facilities and product
users
ii. Energy Supply
iii. Propulsion Alternatives
iv. Other
v. [From Shawna: Put a note for content to include:
criteria used as inputs for the system optimization
tool & reasons for selection]
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_____________________________________Chapter 4
4 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture &
Its Optimization: Delivery
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
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Chapter 4: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. Architecture & Thomas
Its Optimization: Delivery
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i. leads back to the business plan and how this
method will help management with risk assessment
and predictions
ii. Groups, please note the change to this
section’s title – it will require more analysis –
S.
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_____________________________________Chapter 5
5 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – The Business
Plan
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
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Chapter 5: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. – The Business Jun
Plan
A. Business Analysis
a. Business Case Assumptions (Henrik, Kenneth, PI)
i. Private Companies
ii. National Government and Private Corporate Entity
iii. Multinational Government and Private Corporate
Entity
iv. Multinational Government, Private and Venture
Capital
v. Agencies
vi. IAC (Note to PI – please clarify what you mean)
b. Consider their evolution over time (Note to PI – please
clarify what you mean)
c. Marketing Analysis (D&C & PI)
i. Industry Overview (Sebastian, D&C & Pierre, PI)
1. Perform a Competitors’ Analysis
d. Detailed Description of Products/By products/Service/Spin-
off definition (as opposed to general description in the
introduction) (PI & D&C)
i. Product definition: H2, O2, H2O (Carla, Kieran and
Isra)
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1. Byproduct (Analysis of which ones: Platinum-
fuel cells catalyst, CO-atmosphere control,
He4-Pressurization) (Hubert, D&C)
2. Spin-off definition (PI)
3. Service definition: (Carla, Kieran and Isra, PI)
1. Self service gas station analog
2. Full service gas station analog
3. Storage of H2 or O2
4. Spin-Off Services
ii. Commercialization plan (Carla, Kieran, and Isra, PI)
1. Partnerships (spin-ins\spin-offs) products use
and service provision (with GM, Honda,
Chrysler, Texaco, Energia, space tourism
industry-offering stay for Astronauts)
iii. Price & Cost Analysis (Henrik, Kenneth, PI)
1. Cost Category
2. Cost Breakdown Structure
3. Cost Model (FERTILE Model from MSS/MSM
2006 TP)
4. Total Cost Estimation (Interface with other
groups)
5. Financial Analysis
1. Revenues
2. Net Present Value
3. Capital Expenditures
6. Price Determination
iv. Risk Assessment (Carla, Kieran and Isra, PI)
1. Political
2. Business
3. Policy (Public Support)
v. Place and Distribution (Carla, Isra)
vi. Promotion (Carla, Isra)
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_____________________________________Chapter 6
6 G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - The Politico-
Legal Perspective
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
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Chapter 6: G.A.S. P.U.M.P. - The Politico- Jun & Shawna
Legal Perspective
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ii. Adoption of temporary national legislation
iii. Amendment of the Outer Space Treaty
iv. Ratification of the Moon agreement, Establishment
of international regime for exploitation of resources
v. New treaty for exploitation of lunar resources
d. Establishing the framework of contracts awarded to sub-
contractors (Eg for Production) (Pierre, D&C)
i. Sample Contract to be awarded to sub-contractors
(PI)
C. Business Law (PI) (change title to something more
reflective, e.g. “Other Legal Considerations”)
i. Liability
ii. Insurance
iii. Warrantee
iv. Taxes
v. Contracts (Models) (P. Imp & Pierre, D&C)
1. Clients
2. Sub-contractors
vi. Certification (PI)
c. Ethical Considerations
i. Planetary Protection Issues
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_____________________________________Chapter 7
7 Conclusions &
Recommendations
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
6
Chapter 7: Conclusions & Shawna
Recommendations
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_______________________________________Chapter 8
8 Extras
Tentative
Chapter Title Chapter
Page
Manager
Note: These are only working titles Allocation
only! Our project is not actually
named GAS PUMP!
Chapter 8: Extras (Table of 25
Shawna
Contents/Figures/Tables, Appendices,
Index, Acronyms, Acknowledgments,
Disclaimer, Authors’ List, 1-paged
abstract & guide to Report Structure for
Readers’ Use)
8.2Student Preface
GAS PUMP (General Architectural Structure: Procedures for Usage of Moon
Propellants): The Big Picture
During the decades of the Cold War Era, the ‘Space Race’ pushed humanity
to farther frontiers, sending the first humans beyond the confines of the
Earth, first to near-Earth space and low-Earth orbits, but eventually to the
Moon itself.
Despite the initial pride and excitement stemming from these monumental
achievements, the magnitude of these large-scale ventures proved
themselves to be unsustainable, especially without the competition of the
Cold War as a driver. As a result, the post-Cold War decades bore witness to a
significant decline in interest in ambitious human ventures, amongst the
general public and by way of resulting decreases in dedicated funding and
resources from national space agencies.
This trend has recently reversed itself as political will and public interest have
once again come together to reignite an interest in human exploration of the
Moon, this time coupled with scientific and economic drivers. For these
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reasons, NASA, JAXA, and ROSKOSMOS, for example, have all described plans
for establishing a human presence on the Moon within the next 20 years.
Importantly, amidst these plans lies the emerging realization that these new
visions for lunar exploration necessitate pragmatic approaches and
meticulous planning if humanity is to move beyond the previous philosophy
of lunar exploration for thrill and achievement, and into an era of exploration
for scientific and economic gain.
The nature of this new exploration calls for elements necessary to sustainable
exploratory missions and eventual lunar bases, including, for example, life
support systems, communication networks, mobility methods and reliable
power sources.
The space agencies’ varied reasons for returning to the Moon and the
activities planned on-site mean that reliable transportation will be a key
element in navigating the Moon. This is a concept that is well-reviewed in the
literature in several aspects, but not so much in others. For example, the
2000 ISU design project, “Autonomous Lunar Transport Vehicle,” was
dedicated to a lunar transport system for crew and cargo, while the 2006 ISU
project, “FERTILE Moon,” explored In-Situ Resource Utilization processes for
energy and fuel usage. However, gaps still exist in this field, both within the
ISU and the external literature.
The focus of the 2007 ISU design project, then, is exactly that: to design a
lunar propellant storage and distribution system that is safe, reliable, cost-
effective and efficient. The value of this project is two-fold: firstly, the
systems, designed with the utmost care by referencing the existing literature
and experts in numerous fields, provide a fuel-accessibility architecture that
will be crucial to the success of lunar exploration and mobility. Secondly, this
project resists obsolescence owing to the development of a systems selection
tool that outputs a ‘best’ system based on a comparison of existing
technologies, qualities and assumptions – hence it can be modified as
technology evolves to continue to generate the most capable and appropriate
system for what is required of it.
It is the intent of the GAS PUMP design team that this project will be of the
utmost value in supporting lunar exploration and mobility, serving as an
innovation to the future generations of lunar explorers who boldly and
brazenly dare to expand humanity’s reach beyond the Earth.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
1 INTRODUCTION....................................................................................................... ......13
1.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................13
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[JUN NEEDS DATA FROM STORAGE AND DELIVERY THE NUMERICAL
SOLUTIONS (E.G. WRT STORAGE & DELIVERY, BY-PRODUCTS, MARKET
DEMAND BEFORE HE CAN COME UP WITH NUMBERS].......................... .............23
8 EXTRAS........................................................................................................ ....................28
8.1 SYNOPSIS & OBJECTIVES...............................................................................................28
8.2 STUDENT PREFACE........................................................................................................28
19 9 – REFERENCES............................................................................................... ...........43
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12 Team Member Names & Affiliation
13
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14 Acknowledgment Tracker
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15 Acronym Tracker
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16 Proof of Permission Sheet for Use of Copyrighted Figures
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It is imperative that we obtain permission for all figures and images we
borrow, therefore please be impeccable with your permissions tracking by
filling in this sheet.
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17 Request for Permission of Use Form
Yours sincerely,
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I hereby grant permission for the use of the material requested above.
Signature ……………………….. Date …………………………..
Publisher ………………………..
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Appendix Tracker
1)
2)
3)
4)
5)
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18Index of Terms to be Cross-Referenced
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19 9 – References
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