4
3
2
1
Score
Introduction
Catches
the
reader’s
attention,
Generally
grabs
the
Sets
a
basic
framework
or
Missing
-‐-‐-‐
or
very
simple;
I
gives
me
a
reason
to
be
reader’s
interest,
with
backstory
for
my
project
more
or
less
just
state
my
interested
in
this
process— some
detail.
purpose
and
jump
in
to
the
makes
a
strong
human
essay
connection
Thesis/goal
I
let
my
reader
know
clearly
I
let
my
reader
know
I
let
my
reader
know
what
I
suggest—or
my
what
their
goal
should
be/final
generally
what
their
goal
their
goal
should
be
or
what
thesis/goal
is
missing
product
should
look
like
should
be/final
product
final
product
should
look
altogether
should
look
like
like
–
more
detail
might
be
needed
Background
I
give
any
necessary
I
give
any
necessary
I
give
some
background/
I
give
little,
if
any,
background/
context/
background/
context/
context/
ingredients;
some
background/
context/
ingredients
in
vivid
detail
ingredients
in
detail
elements
may
be
missing
or
ingredients
-‐-‐
no
detail,
or
including
alternatives,
sources,
incomplete
too
generic
things
to
avoid
Steps
–
My
steps
are
broken
into
easily
My
steps
are
broken
into
Some
organization
of
my
Little
obvious
organization
Clarity,
workable
chunks,
presented
chunks,
presented
with
steps,
although
more
could
of
steps/broad
with
such
detail
(and
any
some
detail
be
needed,
or
the
generalizations—I’d
have
detail
necessary
warnings)
that
my
description
of
the
step
is
to
guess
at
what
a
step
reader
can
easily
complete
vague
looked
like
them
Steps
–
I
seamlessly
connect
ideas
I
connect
ideas
with
I
connect
some
ideas
with
Little,
if
any,
transition
use
Transitions
with
transitions,
use
them
to
transitions.
transitions;
transitions
may
–or
transitions
are
use
establish
relationships
be
basic
in
nature
incorrectly.
between
steps/ideas
Language
I
pick
words
that
are
vivid,
I
pick
words
that
are
I
pick
words
that
may
be
I
pick
words
that
are
use
engaging,
appropriate
for
my
interesting,
appropriate
bland,
or
used
incorrectly
–
repetitive,
or
basic,
or
topic.
Sentences
flow
well.
for
my
topic
Generally,
they
communicate
my
perhaps
used
incorrectly
–
Essay
is
pleasant
to
read
my
sentences
flow.
meaning,
but
that’s
about
it
I
don’t
use
language
to
overall.
connect
with
my
reader
Mechanics/
My
work
is
polished
and
My
work
shows
evidence
My
work
has
a
number
of
My
work
has
so
many
conventions
professional,
with
few,
if
any
of
proofreading,
with
few
errors,
some
of
which
may
errors
that
it’s
hard
for
a
errors
errors
get
in
the
way
of
the
reader
to
read
it/follow
my
reader’s
understanding
reasoning
(Journal For The Study of The Old Testament. Supplement Series - 98) Younger, K. Lawson-Ancient Conquest Accounts - A Study in Ancient Near Eastern and Biblical History Writing-JSOT Press (1990)