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Introduction:
John Muir Middle School is located in South Los Angeles, with major
intersecting streets of Vermont and Slauson Ave, right off the 110 freeway. The school is
in the inner city with the vast majority of students coming from a low-income level
household. The demographics of the school are 80.3% Hispanic and 19.2% African
American. The school is a Title I program and receives financial assistance to help the
students meet the state academic standards. The school provides free lunch for students
who qualify, which is the majority of the students. There is also a magnet program
incorporated within the school that collaborates during department meetings. The
proficiency levels of math and English Language Arts from the previous year are below
basic and are part of the school’s single plan to improve them.
I am currently teaching a 6th, 7th and 8th grade English Language Development
1, self-contained class. The only subject not being taught with me is physical education.
The demographics of the classroom is 100% Hispanics. All of the students are native
Spanish speakers and have been exposed to the English language for less than a year.
About six of the students have familiarity with native dialects like quiche. One student is
currently being referred for an Individualized Educational Program.
Students are grouped depending on their skills and mastery of the standard, when
working with the teacher. Even though, all students have been in the country for less than
a year, some students are able to transfer their Spanish literacy skills into the English
language. Therefore, Students have been assigned to three different groups. There is an
emergent, bridging and expanding group. Teacher works with the emergent group on a
daily basis, which are the students who have difficulty with the language and are not
meeting the language standards on various lessons. The bridging group meets with the
teacher every other day and is the group of students who can meet some of the standards
with less difficulty. The expanding group meets with the teacher at least once a week,
they are the small portion of the class who meet the ELD standards with little or
difficulty. During whole group instruction students groups are mixed. The students are
paired with different literacy backgrounds for support.
Academic Development
In order to help students achieve their full potential academically, the material
presented to the class is always scaffold to build background knowledge. Many of the
students have no prior knowledge of the content being presented, therefore is important to
build it before instruction. The engagement of the lesson is always a great opportunity to
introduce new vocabulary to students. The vocabulary is always introduced with a visual
and a sentence to put the vocabulary word into context. In order to help students learn the
new academic vocabulary students have to work with the vocabulary words as many
times as possible. The lessons are designed with sentence frames for students to use in
writing and speaking. The teacher always models the academic vocabulary and activities
during the instruction part of the lesson. She is also constantly checking for
understanding and having a lot of opportunities for students to check with each other
what is being instructed. If students are struggling, individual support is provided to
achieve academic development during the lesson.
Language Development
Planning for this class is focused on the ELD standard curriculum, where all
students are emergent in the English language. All students need to develop language
acquisition and expand in the four English language domains, which include reading,
writing, speaking and listening. Students were given the CELDT test at the beginning of
the 2017-2018 school year. All students scored 1 in all English domains. Students were
also tested by the teacher on their native language in order to obtain the student’s native
language proficiency. The majority of the students can read and write in their native
language, but not at grade level. However there is an exception of one student who
cannot read or write in his native language. Among peers, students communicate with
each other in their native language, with the teacher students use sentence frames
provided by the teacher to communicate in English. One strength that students have is
that they are all readers. Lessons need to focus on vocabulary development where
students engage in different activities to work on learning new vocabulary. Students also
need phonetic instruction because even though students are already readers there is no
transfer in some letter sounds. Lastly, another instruction that will benefit the students in
their speaking and listening is opportunities to use the language functions in authentic
communication activities.
Social Development
The social development of the students in the classroom appears to be at grade
level. The students know the classroom expectations and are able to follow them
accordingly. The students are also able to communicate respectfully within the classroom
setting. The majority of the students are comfortable sharing information with the whole
group, without feeling embarrassment of their language acquisition. However, there are
other students who do not feel comfortable and need extra support, when prompted to
share with the class. They are learning to work collaboratively with a partner and a group.
Students are also learning how to manage their own social emotions and their peers
through the Second Step Program. The program teaches students how to have empathy
for others and how to manage confrontational situations responsibly and is implemented
every Tuesday school wide.
Family and Community Contexts
The socio-economic and cultural context of the school is a low-income area.
According to the US census the crime rate of the community is high with an 8.8% of
violent crime rate per ten thousand people. The median household income is $31,236 and
about 86% of the students in the school are considered low income. The average
household size ranges from three to five people in a single home. About only 3.7% of
residents 25 and older have a four-year degree, which is also low for the city of Los
Angeles and low for the county. As a class, only one student in the classroom has a
college graduate. The majority of the students in the classroom live in the United States
under political asylum. Many of students live with one parent and others live with a
relative because their parents had to stay behind in their country. The vast majority of the
students attend the after school program Boys and Girls Club because the
parent/guardian's work. Other students, mainly the boys stay to play soccer with their
peers.
The school requires teachers to teach the curriculum with fidelity. There is a year
pacing plan for every subject. The administrators in the school expect teachers to abide
by the pacing plan. Administration also requires teachers to submit a weekly lesson plan
that is detailed with objectives, standards and activities. There are specific requirements
that administrators look for in every classroom. For example, every classroom needs to
have posted the habits of mind posters, second step posters, school expectations posters,
and an outline of the agenda for every subject on a white board. The school also requires
to use CHAMPS as a behavior management strategy to be incorporated into the lesson.
Nevertheless, there is mandatory five-week progress monitoring assessment per grade
level. All of the factors mentioned affect my instruction at different levels.
Connections Connections
Big Idea/Concept:
Leader
Peer Assessment:
Task Description: Students will revise each
The purpose of this unit is to help students develop 21st other’s paper for capitalization
century skills, which include collaboration, creativity, critical punctuation and sentence
thinking, and problem solving. Using these skills, students will structure.
analyze primary and secondary sources where they will read
various excerpts, literature and photographs about Alexander the Final Outcome:
Great. Using the primary and secondary sources, students will be Students will be able to use
able to analyze facts and opinions from different points of view. evidence from their primary
While at the same time, use the different sources to explore in and secondary sources to
depth the key concept of a “leader’ and determine whether construct an educated writing
Alexander was really a great leader. Students will engage in opinion.
different activities throughout the unit to answer the supporting
questions while learning about Alexander. Leading to the focused Thinking Tools:
inquiry question, where they will synthesize information using Charts and class discussions
graphic organizers and use their critical thinking skills to form
and informed opinion and to be able to answer the inquiry
question, Was Alexander the Great really great leader? And
perhaps the compelling question. Finally, students will
collaborate and engage in a community leadership role by solving
a minor problem within their community.
This is important because we want students to be
thinkers. Students should be able to use different sources in order
to synthesize information and create an informed opinion about a
certain topic. Students are the leaders of the future and our future
depends on them. Learning about Alexander the Great will
expand their knowledge about how leaders take action and can
overall affect the lives of other individuals.
Engagement/Motivation
Then, teacher will ask students, ”What do you think about the
word “great”? Have students share with their group before
responding. Next, have students identify world leaders of today
that they consider to be great. Ask, what do you think might be
characteristics of a great leader?
Engagement/Motivation Objective:
Create a thinking map to around the
The teacher will then introduce the Compelling question, “ What compelling question.
makes a leader great?’ Students will work together to share ideas
and respond to the meaningful question. Teacher will record the
responses on a word web, using construction paper. After the
discussion, teacher will communicate the purpose of the lesson
and tell students they will be reading different sources about
Alexander to gain insight on his life as a leader. Furthermore,
explain to the students they will also be working on answering the
Focused Inquiry Question, “Was Alexander the Great really
great?”
Activity 1: Objective:
Students will create a sketch of the
story for comprehension.
Supporting question 1.: Who was Alexander the great?
Mid Unit Motivation: Documentary about Alexander the Objective: Film will provide a vivid
image about he life of Alexander
Great
Activity 5: Objective:
Create a family home to school
connection where family members
Oral History- Family Interview can become in the student’s academic
life.
In order to make a home-school connection, students will
participate in a family interview. The interview will consist of
asking a family member of a leader they admire or know by
describing the characteristics of the individual. Prior to the
activity, the class will create interview questions with a partner.
Students will create a Google document to type the questions for
the interview; therefore everyone will have a chance to
participate. Teacher will help students decide what questions are
the most appropriate. If a student does not have a computer at
home a print out will be provided. Students will also be
encouraged to record the interviews to be shared with the class.
Students will then write a brief summary about the concept of
leader to introduce the topic to a family member.
The interview will be assigned over the weekend, so students can
have enough time to select a person to interview. Students will
then share their responses with the class. The students will
finalize the home connection by writing a thank you note to the
person they interview.
Extension:
War Games
Students can work together in cooperative groups to design an
Alexander the Great board game. The game should teach or
review important biographical information about Alexander,
dates and battles, military strategies, related historical figures, and
geography.
Once each group of students figures out a goal for a game and the
physical format that the game will take, the students will need to
compose and print out a clear set of instructions. Then groups
should exchange their games and instructions and try out each
other's creations.
Connections Connections
Task Description:
Students will analyze 4 sources to describe whether Alexander was great or inadequate
leader. In order to answer the focus question, students will first examine the documents
independently to determine whether the source is a primary or secondary source.
Students will then read the excerpts of text to identify three reasons why Alexander the
Great deserves to be called the “great” and three reasons why he might not be called the
great. Next, students will sort evidence from the 4 sources into “yes great” and “not
great” categories. Then, students will identify one quote from each document that helps
answer the question, “Was Alexander the Great really a great leader?”. Finally, students
will use the evidence to support their opinions using sentence frames as to whether
Alexander the Great was really a great leader
Accommodations/Scaffolding: First, the writing prompt is scaffold so that students understand the General Resources:
elements of their writing and the order with which to write it. Second, students will be given time in class ipads
to complete a brainstorm in a collaborative setting. Each student must have their own work, however chrome books
students will be able to discuss with their peers. worksheets
English Learners: 33
Children with Special Needs:0
Gifted and Talented: 0
Source #1: Primary Source: The Alexander mosaic From the House of the Faun,
Pompeii, c. 80 B.C. National Archaeologic Museum, Naples, Italy (believed to be a
picture of the battle of Gangamela) (Appendix 5)
Lesson 1a:
Students will then write three reasons why Alexander the Great deserves to be called the
“great” and three reasons why he might not be called the great.
Possible responses:
He is a good leader because he is in war with his soldier.
He is a bad leader because he kills people.
Lesson 2: Objective:
Source #2 – For students to
Teacher will model a close reading strategy. Students will focus in significant details or patterns in order to determine purpose an
develop a good understanding of the excerpt. Teacher will discuss the text to underline sentences that state
when alexander appears to be a good leader and circle sentences that might state he was and inadequate notice features and
leader. Teacher will model how to write he citations on the corresponding boxes.
language used by the
author so that they ca
think thoughtfully an
Source #2:
“I could not have blamed you for being the first to lose heart if I, your commander, had methodically about
the details in the text
not shared in your exhausting marches and your perilous campaigns; it would have
been natural enough if you had done all the work merely for others to reap the reward. and why they were
used.
But it is not so. You and I, gentlemen, have shared the labor and shared the danger, and
the rewards are for us all. The conquered territory belongs to you; from your ranks the
governors of it are chosen; already the greater part of its treasure passes into your
hands, and when all Asia is overrun, then indeed I will go further than the mere
satisfaction of our ambitions”
Write three reasons why Alexander the Great Write three reasons why he might
deserves to be called the “great”. not be called the “great”.
Lesson 3: Objective:
Source #3– Teacher will model a close reading strategy. Students will focus in For students to
significant details or patterns in order to develop a good understanding of the excerpt. determine purpose an
Teacher will discuss the text to underline sentences that state when alexander appears to notice features and
be a good leader and circle sentences that might state he was and inadequate leader. language used by the
Teacher will model how to write he citations on the corresponding boxes. author so that they ca
think thoughtfully an
methodically about
Source #3
the details in the text
PLUTARCH Historian, Ancient Greece Excerpt from writings, A.D. 90, Translated and why they were
by John Dryden … used.
For when any of his friends were sick, he would often prescribe them their course of diet, and
medicines proper to their disease… He was naturally a great lover of all kinds of learning and reading;
…
… While Philip [Alexander’s father] went on his expedition against the Byzantines, he left Alexander,
then sixteen years old, [in charge] in Macedonia, … not to sit idol, [he] reduced the rebellious …, drove
out the barbarous inhabitants, and plant[ed] a colony of several nations …, [He] called the place after his
own name, Alexandropolis.
…When he came to Thebes, … the city … was sacked and razed. Alexander’s hope being that so severe
an example might terrify the rest of Greece into obedience, … thirty thousand, were publicly sold for
slaves; and it is computed that upwards of six thousand were put to the sword.
Alexander, by founding more than seventy cities among the barbarian tribes, … suppressed their savage
and uncivilized customs … Those whom Alexander conquered were more fortunate than those who
escaped … [He desired to give] all the races in the world … one rule and one form of government,
making all mankind a single people. …
Write three reasons why Alexander the Great Write three reasons why he might
deserves to be called the “great”. not be called the “great”.
Lesson 4:
There will be a class discussion to synthesize the most use quotes into one graphic
organizer.
Source # Citation
Source # Citation
Source # Citation
Lesson 5
Responding to the Focused Inquiry Question:
Students will respond to the inquiry question using the following tool. Teacher will read
the worksheet with the class and model her thinking while writing her example.
Other Possible Lessons: Grammar review, in text- citations, primary secondary
sources
Writing Analyses:
1 1 1 1 1 0
2 1 1 1 1 0
3 1 1 1 1 0
4 1 1 1 1 1
5 NS NS NS NS NS
6 1 1 1 1 0
7 1 1 1 1 0
8 1 1 1 1 NS
9 1 1 1 1 1
10 1 1 1 1 1
• Purpose:
The student’s purpose was shortly stated in a manner of three to four words. Some of the
statement were, “ In my opinion Alexander was good leader” Students do not elaborate
on why the evidence is sufficient or what it means. For the most part students used
reasoning such as, “because he is a good leader” or “because he is greedy” Students have
a habit of not connecting ideas. For this reason, no student received a score of 4. Most
• Organization:
Given the 10 student samples, the overall average of the organization score was 1
Points. In part because they were given a sentence frame and it will not be the same on
real testing. Students had a topic sentence to state their opinion, followed with a source
Given the 10 student samples, the overall average of the evidence score was 1 point.
This was the most difficult task for the students to complete. Although this task was
Scaffold throughout the social studies and writing lessons. Students should have been
• Lang/Vocabulary:
The students’ language and vocabulary in their opinion was very limited. Even though,
cognitively they are very developed and can present well-rounded opinions in their native
• Conventions
The students spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and grammar help make a student's
were overall a 1. One of the strengths includes that all students started the paragraph with
a capital letter and ended with punctuation. However, on the weakness side, many of
them were missing punctuations at the end of a sentence, but continue with a capital for
the next sentence. There were also miss use of quotations and commas. For example one
student wrote, “ source “2,” you and I gentlemen have shared the labour.” The student
Synthesis of Analysis:
The assessment gave me significant information about the students writing skills and how
they are prone to perform on SBAC. It informed me about individual strengths and
I learned that all my students have very limited writing skills and the SBAC is not
designed to assess their writing. A better form of assessment would have been the
ELs. However, even though their writing skills are limited, it gave a sense of how their
writing can be improved. I regard them as writers and know that it takes time to develop
On the other hand, planning the lesson allowed introducing vocabulary using many
visuals to build a schema. Words were read and track for students and put into context.
During the implementation of the lesson, students were able to be successful because
different strategies and support cues were used to aid. I know, I was successful if the
students were engaged in the lesson and there was learning happening. I hoped for all my
students to meet the proficient criteria, but every individual is at different level of their
next time will be supporting my students more during the sharing activity by providing
sentence frames in advance. Oral sentence frames given by the teacher are more difficult
to master because they actually need to see it ahead of time and have a process moment.
Last but not least, I have learned that modeling is a significant factor to be successful
in implementing a lesson with English learners. Even writing the name and date on paper
needs to be model, we cannot assume students have been instructed certain skills in their
native country. I will provide a sequence when modeling activities for the students by
using order words. Also lessons should be within their comprehension level. Learning a
new concept and skill at the same time it’s a great deal for English learners. Lessons on
expanding their vocabulary should be done on a daily basis and students should have
Next Steps:
Based on the students' writing samples, there are many areas that need improvement, but
I also have to take in consideration their limited language acquisition. Having this in
mind, a lesson that students will benefit from will be on conventions because it's an
important skill in writing. Even though, I repeat my self over and over again, about
having a capital letter at the beginning of the sentence and ending it with a period, many
of the students are still omitting punctuation and capitalization. An activity for
At this point the purpose and organization its very vague because they are using a
sentence frame, which provides the the majority of the organization for them. I believe
organization will have scored an NS for the majority of the students. Another challenge
for students doing the opinion writing was their anxiety about writing their ideas
correctly and writing the information in English. In order to get students comfortable
with the idea of just putting ideas on paper and not worrying about mistakes, I a may start
doing "quick writes." For "quick writes" I can give the students a topic and then tell them
to write as much as they can for five minutes. This will get them just to writing without
thinking too much about writing their ideas correctly and its also a great way to get them
Reflection:
Planning a unit for students who are at CELDT beginning level was challenging.
As I prepared for the unit, I thought about multiple ways of making the material
accessible for all learners in the classroom. Keeping in mind that their English language
acquisition is very limited. Most of my emphasis ways put on activities and strategies to
use for English Learners. I thought about the scaffold necessary on my behalf and how
much each individual will need my support. I also thought about the time, since many of
my students where being pulled out for ELPAC, RI and SBAC math testing. I knew that
Selecting the material was another factor, I made graphic organizer to meet the
need of the students and organize their writing. This was done to organize their evidence
and use it accordingly. I knew that for most of them it would be their first time writing an
opinion piece and citing their evidence to make an informed opinion. I thought about the
ways that it will be the most effective. Thankfully, I was taking TED 412 at the time. The
Professor had many graphic organizers that helped EL's be successful in writing opinion
pieces. I also decided to use the strategy by focusing on small excerpts of literature as the
primary and secondary source. At the bottom of each excerpt I will model with students
After the implementation of the lesson, I feel like there were a lot of challenges.
AS noted before, this was their first time writing an opinion piece with evidence. Two
big things I realized was, first that I did not allow enough time per activity, and two, the
assumption that some students had written opinion pieces before. I learned to never
assume and to add more time for activities, but due to the time constrains I was not able
to. Overall, I feel good about the lesson because my students walk a little bit taller that
day after leaving the class, knowing they had written piece of information with sources