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Carmen Villeda

Professor Batty

English 101

May 29, 2018

Visual Rhetoric Reflection

This essay was a little hard for me because I had to find a political or social view on a

mural of my choosing. The mural I pick was Banksy "Parking" and this particular mural did not

have much information or articles behinds its meaning. I did my best with what information I

could find. I added a little more information about Banksy into my introduction, as to who they

are. With Tia help, our classroom tutor, she was able to help me by splitting the first paragraph

into two paragraphs and also move thing around for each paragraph to have a solid topic. We

rewrote my thesis for it could have an argument and for it to have a political or social message. I

fix any grammar mistake I could find while I reread and rewrote this essay, it was hard finding

my mistake and I hope I found them all. With all the feedback I receive d from Tia and professor

Batty I was able to make a lot changes to this essay. As I reread, it has impover greatly.