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Jennifer Robledo
Dr. Ogden
English 1A Hybrid
20 May 2018
Education; a word loosely thrown out there by society. What exactly does it mean to be
educated? What are the benefits of education? Our society has imposed us into thinking that
education is necessary to prosper, but is it really? Education is said to be a human right, but so
many countries lack the material to give their citizens a proper education. If education is so
important than why isn’t anything done to fix the school systems? Like me, most people have
thought about these questions as well. It might seem like nothing is being done to fix our broken
school systems or that education doesn’t necessarily benefits us, but you are wrong. You see
education has the power to empower people. Education can be a way to change the world, or just
your personal world. It can help us achieve great things and leave behind a past doomed for
For some time now, women have been seen as unequal to men. We are unfit to be
successful, accomplished women. Education has helped us show the world our worth.
Empowerment of women through education will help break the pattern of gender discrimination
and bring lasting change for women in developing countries. Educated women are essential to
ending gender bias. A society will grow and prosper when they ensure women have the same
opportunity rights, resources and voices as men. The empowerment of women’s education for
equality will develop a better society and world for all human beings. Women will be
acknowledged as an equal gender to men once we empower women with the help of laws,
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employment, and education. “Research demonstrated that investing in women, and more
specifically women’s education, has numerous positive effects…..” (45) Quality education
prepares girls and women for productive lives. Education is necessary for more than the skills
and knowledge attained. Investing in women helps families, communities and countries magnify
economic growth.
Stories like the one from Beneatha in Raisin in the Sun shows us the willingness of
women trying to rise from gender bias through education. A husband, the man of the house
recently deceased left his family insurance money. Walter Lee Younger, the oldest, has big
dreams. The check has not been received, yet Walter is already planning big things for his
family. A lifelong dream, to open a liquor store, in hopes of getting his family out of the rut they
live in; to provide and give his son Travis a better future than what he has. But Beneatha,
Walter’s sister, has her own purpose for the money. Beneatha wants to become a doctor, she
needs that money to pay for her studies. In a time where women are looked upon as only being
housewives, Beneatha wants to prosper and get an education. An education that she believes will
make her be more than just an ordinary “housewife”. Beneatha is constantly trying to show her
worth. She is trying to show that she is worthy of getting her school paid so that she can receive
the education needed to prosper in life. Like Beneatha, Mary Pipher too has shown us how
Mary Pipher is a psychologist and writer. Through education she has found a way to
share her knowledge on writing. In her book Writing to Change the World she gives us an
instructional manual on writing. Writing is such a powerful tool; if used properly it can change
the world. It has the power to connect people all around the world as explained by Pipher
herself. Writing has ways of helping us escape our “real world” problems and helps us deal with
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any inner darkness. Writing enables us to find our inner voice. That inner voice that as children
we are taught to silence. Pipher suggest that we should use language as a source to connect with
people. Her goal is to educate new writers the tools needed to become a “change agent”. Writers
are capable of influencing readers one at a time. Writers help people build “I-thou” relationships
with one another. I-thou relationships display respect towards an individual, thus building a
relationship. Writers make connections with their readers and by writing with clarity they help
their readers make clear distinctions. One of the best way of connecting with readers is by
healing stories." One of the simplest and most effective ways to move readers to action is to
create for them a story about the conditions that moved us to care." (97) It’s those stories that are
relatable and easy to learn from that serve as healing stories. Let our experiences be the guide to
finding out what interest us the most. Her knowledgeable criteria have lead way to us finding
amazing stories of individuals who through knowledge where able to change their future.
This is true when looking at Malcom X story of how writing and reading changed him
into a better individual. Malcom X discusses how growing up in the streets he knew how to
hustle but was illiterate. He was good at speaking but when it came to writing he had a hard time
expressing what he felt. “I became increasingly frustrated at not being able to express what I
wanted to convey in letters that I wrote…..” (253) He decided to broaden his vocabulary and by
doing so it became easier for him to understand readings from books. His love for reading is
what made him become more educated and passionate about his ancestor’s history. Writing and
reading changed him in a way that made him become a better person; more intellectual. He
found reading as his way to escape from reality of him being imprisoned. According to Pipher,
Malcom X is a changed writer. “Writing to connect is “change writing” which, like good
therapy, creates the conditions that allow people to be transformed.” (8) (Pipher) Malcom was
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transformed because of his constant reading, he found a new way to look at the world; a world
that dehumanized African Americans. I think all this knowledge is what made him become an
activist, sure a violent one but that was his way of expressing himself. “Good writing enlarges
readers’ knowledge of the world, or empowers readers to act for the common good, or even
Rodriguez in Achievement of Desire is another of the stories where Pipher’s criteria for a
change writer is noticeable due to education. Rodriguez starts off by giving his readers a little
background story. He is a child of immigrant parents. He reminisces about a time when he was a
child; on his first day of class he was barely able to speak English. Oh, how time has changed
twenty years later he is a well-educated individual. But once upon a time there was a little boy
and he had a tough choice to make; the desire to prosper or keeping that sacred bond between his
family. It wasn't easy for him, but he chose the life of a “scholarship boy” as he refers to himself.
He was a good student, always so eager to learn; learning that would disconnect him from his
family little by little. It came to the point where he would always exclude himself from his
family; buried in his books. Any attempt from his family in trying to gain interest in his studies
was underappreciated. Good schooling required that he alter any early childhood habits. Thus,
also affecting his attitude towards his parents. Education had changed him. He first learned to
speak English in school. English was imposed on him. It was where he lost his individuality and
became what society expected him to become; a well-spoken American. Because of school
always forcing him to speak English, including in his home, that is why he lost that bond he had
with his family. He was known as the "Pocho" which is true, he let go of his Mexican tradition to
fit into a society that was "Americanized". Rodriguez gives his readers a different perspective,
one that most people wouldn’t be able to relate unless they came from immigrant parents. It
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shows people the struggles of wanting to achieve that "American Dream" and the lengths of what
some people are willing to do. His story was a "teaching tool" something we as students can
learn from his experiences. Yes, education is very important, but we must never let it come
between family. Mary Pipher states " One of the simplest and most effective ways to move
readers to action is to create for them a story about the conditions that moved us to care." (97)
This is exactly what Rodriguez story did for me, I made a connection with his story; something
that is well known to me. The struggle between the desire to succeed and family. We get so
caught up with our desire to become someone better that we push away those that love us.
At times the desire to become educated is larger than anyone can possibly imagine. Some
people are willing to leave their families and countries behind in sake of better educational
possibilities. Undocumented college students deal with so many struggles. As if being away from
family wasn’t enough, they have had to deal with racism, lack of formal education, and
discrimination. All these factors affect undocumented students in reaching their full potential and
from reaching the highest level of education, thus having less chances of earning scholarships or
internships. Undocumented students have turned to activism, where they engage in protest,
demonstrations, and spreading the word out on social media as well as on campus. Studies done
on undocumented students have found that students have found their empowered voice through
the acts of activism. Showing that activism has helped students find their inner voice; finding
their identity.
There are many unknow heroes fighting for the education of our children. So, don’t
freight, a change in our school systems is upon us. Periodicals have been written by the
education deans to fix our broken school system. They protect three values that underlie their
vision for education in a democratic society like ours. Furthermore, protecting and nurturing the
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children is their important value. The portion of public schools and university budgets from state
and federal funding has decreased significantly. If that was not bad enough, the administration
has proposed to cut federal education funding by over 9 billion dollars, which is equivalent to 13
% of the education budget. In K-12 schools the administration has refused to act against
discrimination towards transgender students. Higher education has too suffered from the
incompetent administration to protect their students from fraudulent debt and cuts to financial
aid. The second value is to empower educators instead of undermining them. Federal leaders are
constantly voicing hostility towards public school teachers. The federal leaders claim that
teachers are always in need of being told what to do; implying that teachers can’t act on their
own. When in reality school’s curriculum is taught by very highly educated teacher, whom are
qualified to teach students. They also demonstrate empathy towards their students. The goal is
for teachers to be appropriately compensated and acquire job protection. The third value is to
invest in public school and stop the government from making them private. Politicians argue
that the funds for education should not be wasted in public schools but instead in be put into use
at private schools. When indeed research has been done suggesting that students in private
schools perform worse academically than in public schools. Overall a democracy society must
offer the very best of education for every child. Providing such education will provide a better
future for all! Children are our future! Which is why the following organization has gone above
An organization called “Global Partnership for Education” has a goal to help the citizens
of Uzbekistan with a better education system. Over the past 20 years the number of preschools
has decreased by almost half. Sadly, their statistics show that in the year 2012 Uzbekistan’s
preschool enrollment rate was at 23.3%, indicating that it was among the lowest in the
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world. This organization has started a project, that if it succeeds will enroll over 100,00 boys
and girls in over 2,400 rural preschools nationwide by 2019. The project focuses on improving
educational opportunities all throughout Uzbekistan. They believe that early childhood is a
critical period in a child's development since what a child experiences early on can define their
futures. The education of children in the early stages is widely recognized as a crucial part of
their up bring, thus the government announced that they plan to expand ECCE (Early Childhood
Care and Education) with the goal of enrolling 100% of Uzbekistan children by 2021.
Another hero in disguised is Goyal, whose goal is for better high-quality education in
India. Goyal has been very successful in India. Within three years she created six new schools.
The creation of these school led for six principals to form an approach that would be beneficial.
The six pillars consist of investment into educators, progressive curriculum and pedagogy,
scalable cost model, accountability to results, parents as partners and more time on tasks for
students. Although Goyal is no longer involved in hands on teaching the students, she is still
fighting to provide for them better education. Her fight in a better education system has given the
children of India a fighting opportunity and a pathway to a better life that did not exist before.
Many children have had to encounter obstacles to get a good education and strive for
success. Anindya states that receiving help from people or programs is the key component for a
child to achieve success. Students should be given guidance to help lead students to reach
prosperity. Students should not be discriminated in receiving equal educational opportunities due
to their background. The support to strive for greatness should have no requirements; no child
should be left behind. Any child can be successful, all it takes if for someone willing to help
them. We all need a good support system at times. Why not give children the unconditional
Education, a word that can be defined in so many ways. A word that holds so many
meanings in a society like ours. So many people are willing to sacrifice everything and spend so
much money for the concept of a better future. And so, we shall. The right to have an education
is part of our human right. Education has the power to empower people, stop gender bias, and
has the potential to make people see an individual as “important”. Education can change the
world through writing how Pipher in her book demonstrates. It could make an individual become
a better version of themselves, like with Malcom X. There are so many heroes in disguised
fighting so that our children get the high -quality education they deserve, because they are the
future! If so many people are willing to fight for it, then it must be worth it right?
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