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This story came from a city that has peace and tranquility, that is looks like.

However,
maybe you do not know if the city has a dark side until now. The city is full of very
complicated criminal acts, acts of murder, rape, drugs, and other criminal acts. However, all
of that has subsided since the appear of two mysterious detective. No one knows the
existence of that mysterious detective. But all good people proud with them.

Black : We both didn’t have a name. But people usually call me Black.

White : And as you know, my name already seen from my clothes, white

Black : We always solve a big problem, but i only solve an interesting problem

White : (berjalan menuju kamera) If you have a problem, you can just call me a letter with
invisible text

*****

In a famous school

(review kegiatan murid)

Headmaster : why so many bad reports about the behavior of students at this school. In
fact, I see, it looks like normal students. What is really going on here? I do not know. But so
many reports that I have received. What should I call the police instead? No. I'm afraid the
good name of this school was contaminated. I'd better call that detective (membuat file
permohonan)

(review tempat tinggal detektif)

White : see, it looks like we got an email from someone

Black : who?

White : (sambil blok tulisan) hmm... I think this is from a headmaster from SMA 50

Black : hahaha, the headmaster asked for help? I guess this is not interesting

(black dan white membaca)

White : how about you, bro?

Black : it seems, this is looks like normal, but my detective's instinct felt this case will lead us
to a very challenging case.

*****

(in other place, police station headroom)


Bad Police : excuse me, why are you calling me suddenly?

Head police : John, do you have time for a few weeks? I would like to discuss a case and
want to solve it with you which is the most elite members of this police station

Bad Police : Well, for one week I have not events, what a case, boss?

Head police : recently, I got the information about the presence of a drug dealer who was
very influential in this city, and I heard he was in the school environment

Bad Police : (terlihat kejut, karena yang dibicarakan merupakan orang yang ia lindungi) O..o..
Okay, but why the investigation is done just the two of us? Would not it be nice to put all
police units there?

Head police : No no, the deployment of all police unit will only make people aware of us and
immediately destroy evidence. Therefore, I ask you to do the impersonation, remembering
your face look young

Bad Police : (tersenyum sinis karena mendapat ide) Okay, I will take this case

*****

(Dua hari kemudian, di kantor kepala sekolah)

Headmaster : good afternoon sir, please sit down. You want to drink?

White : straight to the point

Headmaster : Well, as I said before, a lot of reports that say that there is something strange
in this school. But I think there is no problem in this school. But as a headmaster, I want my
school to be free from the pressure that happened of this school. I want the problem solved.
Therefore I want you to resolve this is case

Black : I also smelt interesting things in the case in this school (sambil melihat white
meminta persetujuan)

White : Well, what if we do impersonation? I will be disguised as a student and Black will be
disguised as a teacher, how?

Headmaster : Coincidentally, yesterday there who want to enter this school. If there are two
new students, it is not that there will be a suspect you, and we are also a shortage of
teachers, so Black can be a teacher for a while

White : Well, our investigation will begin tomorrow

Headmaster : ok, I'll pay you with a reasonable amount

Black : no, an interesting case is well paid.


*****

(Keesokan harinya, di SMA 50)

(bel sekolah)(semua siswa di kelas)

Headmaster : Okay students, this time we get two new students, that man who have pale
white skin and act cool named Smithy Webber Jaggemen Janson, and that muscular man
named John. All right, you two should sit down in a place that you want.

(white duduk di sebelah origa)

(Amry duduk di sebelah Arya, di depan gusdwik)

Headmaster : and also, this time there will be a new teacher who taught you math, and will
teach you after this break

Good student : Is the teacher female? Is she sexy?

Headmaster : unfortunately, he is male

Good student : oh no, okay

(bel istirahat)

White : hey, are you the student who sitting with me, right?

Good student : Yes, you’re Smithy Webber Jaggemen Janson, right?

White : Yes. By the way, what is your name?

Good student : my name is Yugo, the wolf

White : okay yugo, good to see you. I hope we can be friends with both and can introduced
to this school environment

Good student : okay smithy webber jaggerman jansen. By the way, where is your last
school?

White : hmm ... I moved from the side city. By the way, can you explain about this school?
So I can adapt here

Good Student : well, don’t worry, I know all about this school

*****

Bad Police : (berjalan-jalan di sekolah) (berbicara sambil bisik-bisik)it seems we don’t need
to get acquainted right aryando?
Drug Dealer : Khu Khu Khu

Bad Police : are you happy here?

Drug Dealer : Hahahaha, did you know? Many fools studen can we manipulated here

Bad Police : hahaha, you're too confident with your thinking, but do you know? the police
now suspect your being here

Drug Dealer : Huh, is that true? It means your being here to arrest me?

Bad Police : give me a break, man. Hahaha. criminals like you are very lucky. Stupid head
police appointed me to investigate you. So I can save by accusing other people, and your
existence will be very safe

Drug Dealer : (tersenyum lega) thank you john. But, do not ever tell if we've met before.

(Gusdwik datang menghampiri)

Immanuel : Hey Aryando, so you have a new friend, right?

Drug Dealer : Let me introduce my new friend, John

Immanuel : My name is Immanuel, nice to meet you

Bad Police : Nice to meet you too Immanuel

*****

(bel masuk) (semua diem di kelas) (pura-pur saling ngobrol satu sama lain) (guru baru
masuk)

Black : good afternoon my student

All : Good Afternoon mister

Black : Let me introduce myself, my name is The Hash Slinging Slasher.

All : the hash singing, the blash singing, the dash vinging

Black : The Hash Slinging Slasher, kids. This time I will replace Sir Mawa to teach you math.
Okay straight to the lesson.

*****

(sore hari, di ruang kepala sekolah)

Headmaster : how about your investigation, did you get anything?


White : Because, it is the first day, I only got a little bit of information. Maybe I wanted to
hear the analysis of black

Black : As I see, from the behavior of students from classes I teach, there are some people
who I suspect

Headmaster : hmm, hmm, ohh, okay, I hope your investigation work smoothly

White : we will investigate the students deeper

*****

(beberapa hari berlalu) (suatu ketika, di kelas)(Black yg nyamar jadi guru melihat 3 siswa
berbicara bisik-bisik)

Immanuel : Huh, I was very stressed with this curriculum. If only I can be free of this stress
for a while

Drug Dealer : (menoleh gusdwik) oh, so you stress? Pity you. Do you know the secret of why
I am always fun?

Immanuel : how? Online game? DOTA? PES? it was boring

Drug Dealer : No, It is very simple. If you're curious, I'll tell how. Come to a secret location on
this week, I'll tell you later. There you will meet someone who can relieve your stress

Immanuel : Should I bring cash or other? Is this like the game?

Drug Dealer : Just come at this week

(tiba-tiba Black menghampiri)

Black : what are you talking about? It was an hour of my classes. I do not want my student
became stupid for not seeing me

Bad Police : forgive us sir, we just had a chat about the famous game today, getrich. My
friend got a 10000 (dibaca ten thousand) diamond in that game

Black : what? Fantastic. I hope I'm lucky like that too

*****

(sore hari di …..)

Head Police : How investigation there? I wonder why in this case, you're not as fast as usual.
Are you not happy with this case?
Bad Police : I'm sorry boss, I've been trying to solve it, but it seems to me difficult cases

Head police : well, never mind, I hope you can work it out

(tiba-tiba anak baik melihat perbincangan mereka dari jauh)(lalu mengendap-endap duduk
di sebelah mereka berdua)

*****

(hari minggu di mangrove/ tempat terpencil)(gusdwik sedang duduk menunggu seseorang


itu) (gusdwik mencari dan menemukan sesosok pria misterius berkrudung makek headsed)

Immanuel : H..hey…, are you the person who my friend talk about?

Drug Dealer : (mengangguk-angguk) (ngasi suatu produk)

Immanuel : What is this? Can it relieve my stress?

Drug Dealer : (mengangguk) (suara diusahakan beda, agak sangar dikit) just tri it

Immanuel : o .. okay, how much I pay to buy this?

Drug Dealer : (mengangkat jari membentuk angka 1)

Immanuel : 100 dollar?

Drug Dealer : (menggeleng)

Immanuel : 1000 dollar?

Drug Dealer : (menggeleng)

Immanuel : 10000 dollar?

Drug Dealer : (menggeleng)

Immanuel : so, how much? 1 dollar?

Drug Dealer : (mengangguk sambil menjulurkan 2 jempol)

Immanuel : Well, it's the money, this may be useful for me (memberi uang)

*****

(di kelas, nunggu guru masuk ceritanya)

Good Student : hey, Smithy Webber Jaggemen Janson

White : Whats going on?

Good student : what do you know, last Saturday I saw something unusual
White : What is that? About what?

Good student : do you know that new student? (nunjuk amry)

White : yeah, I know? What happened with him?

Good student : Last Saturday I saw him discuss some things with the words of the case, it
probably was mediocre, but does it looks general if high school kids talk about it with people
who are older and using formal language

White : really?

Good student : don’t you think it's suspicious?

White : (sambil mikir) maybe no, or maybe yes

(guru masuk)

Black : Good morning all

Semua : morning mr.

Black : Now i will call the name of you all, who is absent today?

Semua : Immanuel, sir. no information why he was not in school now

Black : wow, clever and smart student like him can be alpha, why can it happened?

Semua : we don’t know, sir

*****

Scene gusdwik kecanduan di kamar sambil oleng

Sore hari, Black mengunjungi rumah gusdwik (ngendarain motor) tiba-tiba melihat gusdwik
terkapar di halaman, lalu dengan cepat black membuka pintu mengecek nadi gusdwik . lalu
membawa gusdwik ke rumah sakit.

Di depan rumah sakit, bertemu dengan kepala sekolah

Black : oh, headmaster, what’s up?

Headmaster : I heard you take my student to this hospital, right? Thank you

Black : Okay, you’re welcome

Headmaster : and also thanks to the investigation, we finally found the criminal
Black : (terkejut) hah?

Headmaster : I was very impressed with your work, thank you black

Black : (terdiam)(pasang tampang serius) okay, no problem, you’re welcome

*****

2 hari kemudian

Black : I hear, the criminal is your friend

White : I'm not sure, he does not look like a criminal

Black : Why you not sure?

White : Because I think he. . ., wait black, look here

Black : (menghampiri) what’s up?

White : I found a suspicious website, let’s we try to watch this (menonton video)

(video) Drug Dealer : welcome to this website, if you feel stressed and bored with your work
and school? Or maybe you dizzy face curriculum 2013? Here, you can get a rare item that
can make your stress disappear in an instant. Sign in on this website and I will determine the
schedule of our meetings. thank you

Black : This is very strange, there is shown a video uploaded yesterday, is not the criminal
had been arrested two days ago?

White : might be, what if I meet him?

Black : Okay, I'm going to prepare plans

*****

2 hari kemudian, di .. white sedang menunggu bandar, tiba-tiba datanglah seseorang yang
misterius, tidak lain adalah bandar. White menghampiri bandar

White : Are you the . . .

Drug Dealer : (menyetop pembicaraan)(mengangguk-angguk),( memperhatikan sekitar)


(memberi barang)

Tiba-tiba, white mencengkram tangan bandar, dan black datang menghampiri bandar, lalu
bandar melepas cengkraman dan menendang white, lalu terjadi saling kejar-kejaran.
(action)
Di saat bandar terdesak, tiba-tiba datang polisi jahat menembak bahu black, lalu pistolnya
terlempar jauh.

White : So, you are???!!!

Bad Police : hahaha, I don’t think you will continue this investigation

Black : (menahan sakit) I suspected you were involved in this case

Bad Police : hahaha, I’m sorry, I just want to protect my client, so now…, I WILL KILL YOU!!!

(suara tembakan) (mengenai bahu polisi, pistol terlempar)

Bad Police : b..boss!!

Headpolice : stop all this, I already know everything. I've been looking for you from the
beginning. And now I'm sure with all of this

Bad police : Why do you suspect me?

Head police : after I heard the information of this person (gusdwik dan origa muncul)

Bad Police : Its Imposible…, NOO!!!!

Kedua plaku diborgol, kepala polisi memborgol polisi jahat, white menolong black, gusdwik
dan origa memborgol bandar, namun saat akan memborgol, gusdwik terkejut

Immanuel : I… it's you, why are you doing all this?

Drug Dealer : I just wanted to relieve the suffering of all of you all due this 2013 curriculum,
forgive me

***

Di kantor kepala sekolah

Black : cases have been solved, real criminal was Aryando, the Drug Dealer

Headmaster : thank you, because you guys, it will be no more reports of bad things in this
school, again, thank you…, Black, White

(credits)
Black = hash slinging slasher = AGUNG

White = Smithy Webber Jaggemen Janson = ORIGA

Bad police = John = AMRY

Head police = KURNIAWAN

Good Student = Yugo the wolf = ARY SUTA

Headmaster = CHADYA

Immanuel = GUSDWIK

Drug Dealer = Aryando = ARYA

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