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Aine McGonigle
3, December 2018
New School. New Adventure. New Challenge. New Chapter in Life. These are four of
the things that come to my mind when I think of how I had felt during the beginning of the Fall
2018 semester. I felt so excited to be given a fresh new start and a chance to better myself. I
could not wait for the challenges that awaited me in each course and how I would react to each.
English 15 was a class that, when registering, was not one of my main focuses but I could not
wait to see what it would teach me over the next few months. Each English 15 class helped to
build upon what I had previously learned and it gave me the ability to find enjoyment in writing
again. The biggest takeaway I have from this class is that we find writing everywhere and each
piece is jam-packed with course concepts and jargons that make it distinct in its specific genre.
When I first walked into class, I was expecting to do one of the generic “get-to-know-
me” games that each teacher does on the first day and then move onto a serious discussion on
each type of paper we would be writing throughout the semester. I also thought that this class
was going to be a class that I would struggle to understand any of the topics we were learning
and would feel just like my English class junior year of high school (the class was very technical
and demanded much intelligence as well as a wide knowledge of vocabulary and literature). But
once the class began, I knew that this class would be one of the most unique and impactful
classes I could of taken. The first class was so unconventional and not what I had anticipated.
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We started talking about genres and what the conventions of each genre were. I became excited
The next couple of classes, we would spend time looking into different genres and what
made them what they were. From country songs to horror movies, I began to see how this lesson
paralleled the one taught in the Navigating Genres article we were assigned to read where Kerry
Dirk discussed how genres “take seriously the rhetoric in which we are immersed and the
situations in which we find ourselves,” (Miller 155). He used the same exact examples we used
in the classroom and he saw that by using pop culture genres, he would catch the attention of
those millennials reading his writing. I also saw the keys to a good genre analysis from another
reading which stated, “genres are often identified by their functions and uses, their textual
features, their modes of inquiry, and their use(s) of evidence,” (De Piero). This class kept me
searching for more and dying to see how this was going to translate into assignments.
Our first official assignment came along and we were assigned to choose a textual genre
that interest US and analyze its rhetorical features and conventions. The big word there for me
was US because I got the chance to determine my subject and do research on a topic that I want
to learn more about. As I was writing my PB1A on Broadway Musical Reviews, I finally
understood each of the key concepts we had spent days discussing and reading about and how
they are prevalent in our writing process. I saw how genres can be found in any situation and are
all unique and special in their own way. In my journal I remember saying “the one thing I
learned from doing my PB1A is that the conventions are all very noticeable and I look for those
conventions every time I write.” I now see how this assignment helped me to see how well I
could write when I was writing about something I was passionate about and how intelligent I
When it came time begin the first BIG writing paper, my determination and drive to write
the best paper possible was at an all-time high. I could not wait to apply the lessons I had learned
while writing my PB’s in order to produce a paper I was proud of. I applied the nesting dolls
tricka visual metaphor to help us think through and refine a textual genrewhile debating a
topic for my paper. This trick helped me to see how I could take a broad topic such as Home
reviews and narrowing it down to New Jersey Beach House Reviews on Zillow. I now will
occasionally use this trick to help me decide what I want when I am searching for something
online.
I came to the decision to write about music reviews about Ariana Grande’s album
Sweetener. As I began to write my paper, I saw how difficult it was for me to integrate my
discoveries from my assigned readings and my key concepts into my paper. I decided to just
write the paper and then after I could add quotes and vocabulary words I learned during my time
in class. Looking back, I now see why I received the grade I did for this assignment because it
did not showcase all of the new skills and knowledge I had absorbed in class and it did not come
across as strongly as I had hoped. I also see how this assignment demanded full involvement and
dedication that I did not deliver. The comments made by my professor also helped me pick apart
the tiny details lacking in my paper as well as the flow of a good paper. From that point on, I
realized that even though I was writing about something I was passionate about and enjoyed, I
still had to infuse evidence and proper vocabulary in order for my work to be successful.
As I have taken time to reflect, I can see how the reading Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps
toward Rhetorical Analysis could have been a piece to constantly reference back to help me
make to connection needed for my paper. In this reading, Laura Bolin Carroll argues that the
skills that we have used in a rhetorical analysis can apply to each situation in life as well as why
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these skills can help us see things in a different light. She gives the reader a breakdown of each
examples of their occurrence in an Ad. If I had used this piece to help me see that by
incorporating logos as well as factual information on the chosen topic, I could have had a much
As the time came for the next big assignment, WP2, I was focused on having as much
information as possible while also showing the class that I had made the connections between
our lessons and my topic. This assignment did intimidate me because it was to be presented to
the classwhich was/is not my strong suit. I chose to discuss a topic similar to my major and
what I was learning in my Communications 100 class so I could have an abundant amount of
information to choose from. I went into the assignment wanting to be the most informed and
When it came time to present my project, I began to have flashbacks to high school
where I had to do an entire presentation without any notes and in front of my peers who, at the
time, I thought were judging me on my every move. As I worked through my anxiety and my
countless amount of notecards, I came to the realization that I had to just power through it. I
messed up so many times that I did not seem like I was a girl who loves performing in musicals
but a girl who was petrified of public speaking and doing something to make people talk about
her. As I finished the presentation, I was happy with the amount of information I delivered to my
audience but disappointed in my lack of self-confidence. I took time to see what the class and my
professor thought of the presentation and was expecting generic comments saying I was shaking
and did not make eye contact. But to my surprise and appreciation, my classmates were all
impressed with my presentation and all gave kind and encouraging words about how I should
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“Being more confident!” and that I know my stuff so “preach it.” These comments helped me to
see how I could improve and show that I am a smart and charismatic person and it was really
helped me to be see how I could apply myself even more to get the desired result.
The boost in confidence received after WP2 helped me to significantly improve my work
for WP3. The concept for WP3 “piggy-backed” off of what we had presented for WP2 by having
us send an email to my desired professor along with an annotated bibliography compiling some
of the research we had already began to gather. I discovered the conventions of an outreach
email and how by having those along with an understanding of the potential ACURA Project
topic would lend me to achieving great success in the future. I was correct in this assumption
because I received a 10/10 on this assignment and it really allowed me to see my improvement
develop a writing process that I was so desperately lacking was this E-Portfolio that this essay is
included in. The different improvements made in each of my writings throughout the semester
helped me to prove to myself that I am a great writer and I can always make adjustments to a
first draft. The E-Portfolio introduced me to a reverse outline which will now be a key part of my
writing development and process in the future. I hope to always see places where I can
implement to lessons learned throughout this entire semester and help others realize that writing
is everywhere, we use these advanced skills through each moment of our lives., and we are all
great writers.
As I reach the end of this semester, I am extremely grateful for the lessons learned
through this class and for this new-found appreciation for writing and its impact on our lives. I
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100% believe that this class introduced me to concepts and skills that I will use in my writing for
the rest of my life. I learned the importance of textual genres in our everyday lives as well as
how we can always use rhetoric to improve any argument made. I realized that writing can be
fun if you just apply yourself and discuss topics that you feel inspired by. I cannot wait to see
what the future holds for my development as a writer and a person with all of my newfound
Work Cited:
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3. Collin, Laura Bolin. “Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps toward Rhetorical Analysis”, Writing
4. De Piero, Zack. “Genre Analysis: Guiding Questions.”, UCSB Writing Program. 2018.
5. My Freewriting.