Gathering information

Topic: describe your dormitory room

Brainstorming:

1. Soft beige carpet

2. Two comfortable chairs

3. A neat desk

4. A black printer

5. A single bad

6. A skateboard

7. A French window

8. Two cute throw pillows

9. A string of blue wind chimes

10. A skateboard

11. A beautiful floor lamp

12. A large locker

13. Different kinds of playing cards

14. A computer with a colorful screen

15. A beautiful picture on the wall

16. Storage room and a rest room

Plan:

1. When you open the door, you can see Soft beige carpet under your feet and a

very beautiful picture on the wall

2. Near the door is a string of blue wind chimes

3. On the right is my neat desk, above which is my black printer.

4. Next to the printer is a big colored computer screen with some books.

5. In front of the table is two comfortable chairs.

6. In the corner of the room is a single bed with two lovely throw pillows. The

end of the bed is a French window with the beautiful scenery outside. There

is a floor lamp beside the bed.

7. To the left of the room is the storage room and the bathroom, where there is

a large storage cabinet with various playing cards.

8. Next to the lockers are my skateboard.

Wu Xu

Professor Caza

ESL 0345

9/28/2018

My Dormitory Room

I have always wanted to have a room to study and live in by myself. I

have a room of my own and now that I am a student at FIT. When you open the

door, you see a yellow carpet, which is tassel-like and very comfortable to

step on. Look up, and you can see a very beautiful picture on the wall a

girl and a big fish, but the big fish is up in the sky, which gives a very

dreamy feeling. Next to the door is a string of blue bells. When the breeze
 blows, the wind chimes sing and the sound is very clear. On the right is my

desk. There is a black HP printer. Next to the printer is a large color

computer screen. There are also two very comfortable chairs in front of the

table. This is where I learn and play, and it's my favorite place in the

room. In the corner of the room is a single bed, which is made of wood,

with grey sheets and feathery patterns. My bed also has two lovely throw

pillows, a bear, and a rabbit throw pillow. There is a French window at the

end of the bed, and outside there is the forest. The palm trees by the

window look as if a sentinel is standing guard for me. The head of

a bed has a floor lamp. the shade is cream-colored and has a classic look

to it. On the left is the storage room and the bathroom. There is a big

locker in the storage room with my clothes and all kinds of cards. Next to

the lockers are my skateboard. This is my dormitory room, and its privacy

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