Illegal Alien.

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by Michelle Rosales

Submission date: 31-Oct-2018 02:09PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 1030593885
File name: Illegal_Alien.pdf
Word count: 1109
Character count: 5677
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

90
Michelle,

Overall, your discussion of this term is well done. I

think that you do an excellent job contextualizing the
term and explaining why it matters. T hat said, your

/100
images needed to be incorporated in your def inition
in such a way that allows us to better understand
the term. When you revise f or your portf olio, you
will want to make sure to do that.

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Comment 1 | Rhet Focus

While these are good images, they need to more seamlessly incorporated into your def inition
so as to augment the overall understanding of your explanation of the term.

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Comment 2 | Rhet Focus

Great discussion here.

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RUBRIC: 30 1 DEFINITION RUBRIC

RHET FOCUS Below Basic

Rhetorical Focus: Write f ormally and inf ormally, in-class and out-of -class, f or a variety of audiences and
purposes.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

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ORGANIZ AT ION Absent

Organize, f ocus, and communicate one’s thoughts clearly and ef f ectively to address a rhetorical situation.

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LANG & DESIGN Below Basic

Academic Language and Design: Recognize, evaluate, and employ the f eatures and contexts of language
and design that express and inf luence meaning and that demonstrate sensitivity to gender and cultural
dif f erences.

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CIT AT ION Absent

Use your major’s customary citation style to ethically cite and communicate inf o f rom a variety of
appropriate sources

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