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Ryan Findlen
Mrs. Price
English II Honors
18 October 2018
One of every five children that is between the age of 6 to 19 has obesity and it shows no
signs of stopping. For the past decade there has been a spike of obesity at young ages and this
can cause health problems further down in life. Some of the health problems that can occur when
older are heart disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. When it comes to the reasons why
obesity is on the rise there are many of them. It could be due to genetics, bad diet, or not
exercising but all of that can be solved or improved by people just improving their lifestyle.
Obesity has gone to epidemic levels and it now the worst its been since humans have
been on earth. In a article by CDCP (Centers of disease control and prevention) it states “ Data
from 2015-2016 show that nearly 1 in 5 school age children and young people (6 to 19 years) in
the United States has obesity.” This quote proves my claim by it showing that it has gone to
epidemic levels and is shown to rise as the years go on. In another article by NBC news it says
“26 percent of 2 to 5-year-olds were overweight and more than 15 percent were obese.” This
quote really shows the problem because it shows that toddlers has young as 2 are getting obesity
and not just a few toddlers it is a quarter of them. Overall the rise of obesity has gone to
epidemic levels and shows no sign of stopping in the up and coming years.
As there are a lot of problems for obesity there are also lots of solutions for it. Some
included these fat free food or there merical drinks that cure it, most of these come from
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commercials on T.V. The most effective way to lose weight or to be healthier is to improve
people’s overall lifestyle. In the Article by VMC (Virtual Medical Centre) it states “Lifestyle
treatments for weight loss focus on reducing energy intake and increasing physical activity
through diet, exercise and behavioural measures.” Those treatments that are in the quote are very
effective in the long term and shows that it works. In another article “Obesity Prevention Source”
by Harvard T.H. Chan “Calories matter for weight-and some foods make it easier for us to keep
our calories in check. Healthy eating is a key to good health as well as maintaining a healthy
weight” this solution is not easy but it’s shown to be effective and it take a lot of willpower to do
This is the most realistic solution there is because there isn’t a magic potion that makes
people healthy, the people have have to work for it and not just eat junk food and not exercise.
In the article “Prevention of Overweight and Obesity: How Effective is the Current Public Health
Approach” the data says that “there will be about 2.3 billion overweight people aged 15 years
and above”. The data in the article is very helpful when determining overweight people around
the world and how it will look in the future. In the article “Lifestyle Changes for Obesity and
Weight Loss” it talks about the dietary ways to improve your life. This Article helps people
understand what food is bad for health and what food that will improve health. Overall Changing
or improving the lifestyle of many people can help battle obesity and stop the epidemic.
There many problems with our health that cause obesity for example genetics, bad diet or
not being active. There is way to counteract these factors and that just improving people's overall
lifestyle.Obesity is a growing epidemic and its not an easy thing to stop but there are ways to
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stop it from spreading it to more people. By just improving the lifestyle can solve many
Works Cited
“America's Obesity Epidemic Reaches Record High, New Report Says.” NBCNews.com,
www.nbcnews.com/health/health-news/america-s-obesity-epidemic-reaches-record-high-new-repo
rt-says-n810231
Chan, Ruth S.M, and Jean Woo. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health,
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2872299/
“Overweight & Obesity.” Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, Centers for Disease Control