Descriptive Essay

1. SPECIFIC TOPIC:
- My Annoying Brother

2. THESIS STATEMENT:
- Having a sibling is a ruin to your life’s peace because of their disobedient he or she will make to disrupt
you.

3. OUTLINE:
I. Introduction
A. Facts Siblings
II. Body
A. Introduce My Brother
B. “How He Annoys Me”
III. Conclusion
A. Truth of action

4. ESSAY:

My Brother is a Baboon
What comes in your mind when you heard the word ‘sibling’? You might think of a person who’s born
by the same parents like you, but for me, a sibling is a wild baboon from a forest, and as a three-wattled bellbird
that alarms for the whole year once or twice within seconds. Having a sibling is a ruin to your life’s peace
because of the disobedience he or she will make to disrupt you.

Sibling is the word to describe people who had parents in common and is someone lovable, but I
disagree. Since the birth of my brother, I couldn’t lie that his appearance is tall, with a mole beneath his nose,
young and charming, as an 8 years old child, he usually gets gifts from his female classmates, but within six
years he became poor in attitude. Bean will act well and tamed with adults, but alone with me, he’s arrogant
and disobedient. My brother would do anything to frustrate, and disrupt me. What is his attitude toward me?
Try to think of a baby monkey who climbs everywhere and always get his mother or siblings frustrated, that
could describe who Bean acts. Next, you might want to know how I feel at that time, I would say that if I am at
the highest peak of the Himalayas, and scream still it couldn't calm my anger, even my mom sometimes she
could deny that her tolerance is not enough to handle him.

At last, even though my brother and I appear to dislike each other, however, both of us love each other
so much that we could do anything to make both of us spend more time together before there will no longer be a
chance, and that’s why my brother always annoys and frustrated me.

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 Expository Essay
1. SPECIFIC TOPIC: South Korea Decrease 15% Suicide Rate Because of 2011 Law.
2. OUTLINE:
I. Introduction
A. General Facts about Suicide Rate
II. Body
A. Suicide Statistics Yearly
B. Decrease Statistics with 2011 Law
III. Conclusion
A. Warning Sentence

4. ESSAY:

South Korea’s 2011 Law

Imagine how depressed or stressed must you be for you to desire to end your life by committing suicide.
Some countries, for example, South Korea had become one of the countries with the highest rate of suicide
death. How did they control the situation? South Korea establish a law which gave 15 percent decrease of the
suicide rate in its country.
In 2010, South Korea was at the10𝑡ℎ rank as the country with the highest suicide rate from 33 per
100,000 people, demonstrating how depressed and stressed South Korea’s countries population faces in the
society and within the family resulting from problems about media, family, economy, education, mental illness,
and public image. But how did South Korea’s government apply to decline the increasing rate of people
committing suicide? According to the article written by Rachel Premack, South Korea established a law in 2011
which helped decrease the suicide rate by 15 percent. In South Korea, an estimate of 20 percent of Korean
people who committed suicide had attempted to use paraquat (PQ) a highly toxic weed killer clarified that could
be bought generally at any shops or supermarket, to poison their body to death. Rachel Premack had claimed in
an article that the banning of paraquat was recorded as the main key in the fall of suicide rates, in which the
banning began in 2011 and totally banned its sale in 2012. In the gap of time from 2011 to 2015, the
diminishing of 15 percent of the suicide rate was showed by 2017 World Health Organization Report. In 2015,
the suicide rate was 28.3 per 100,000 referring from WHO report, which points of a drop of 5 people per
100,000.
As a country, Rachel Premack had remarked in the article that South Korea had planned to achieve by
2020 only 20 of death per 100,000. How about your country’s government do they have any plans in decreasing
suicide?

Reference:
Premack, R. (June 9, 2018). South Korea has the highest rate of deaths by suicide in the
developed world — but a 2011 law helped decrease rates by 15%. Retrieved from
https://www.businessinsider.com/south-korea-suicide-rate-decrease-2018-6
Yonhap. (April 26, 2018). Suicide No.1 cause of death for S. Korean teens, youths. Retrieved
from http://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20180426000581

Suicide in South Korea. (September 7, 2018). Retrieved from

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suicide_in_South_Korea

Hong, S. (n.d.). Paraquat Intoxication in Subjects Who Attempt Suicide: Why They Chose
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 Narrative Essay
1. OUTLINE:
I. Introduction
A. Car Accidents
II. Body
A. The setting of the Incident
B. The Car Crashes
C. Emotions on the Accident
III. Conclusion
A. Warning Sentence

4. ESSAY:

Car accidents or “traffic collision” is one of the ways people had died from it. While car accident occurs
the resulted from the crash could either be property damage, severe injuries, or death. Some people died from
car accidents and other who lucky to survive but in exchange, their properties are damaged and they might have
an injury.
On May 21, 2018, I described myself as the luckiest person, who survived from this terrifying car crash.
On noon that day, I was eating at Khao Yai’s famous restaurant with my family including my younger brother,
my mom, and dad. We were chatting about how delicious the meal was, but halfway from finishing my meal, I
start to feel terrible and my mom realized it from my face and asked me what happen. I remembered I told her, I
that I’m afraid for no reason and it felt like my instinct was warning me about something. We continued to
finish the meal, paid for it, and while my dad was driving us down the mountain, along with another car, a
MiniCooper sped up and went in front of my family’s car. We drove like this for a while, until the MiniCooper
stopped with no lights on as a warning, and my family’s car was just about four meters behind, with a speed of
90 kilometers per hour. We didn’t know why the car ahead of us suddenly stopped, but we noticed that we
crashed the car. As the car stopped, I immediately looked for my dad. He’s fine, then looked back seats for my
mom and my brother who was found in my mom’s arms, with a pale skin, and bleeding on his forehead but
turned out the wound was not big and skin turned pale because of the fear. All after, we were all fine.
I had read some news on car accidents because of the negligence of the Thais while driving, and luck is
not always with everyone. I want to warn people who drive that some careless actions might kill people.

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 Informative Process Analysis Essay
Topic’s Information:
1) Be in a comfortable place.
One thing that could help fight laziness is finding a good location. Being in a comfortable place whether
it’s in your favorite coffee shop, or just in your own bedroom that is free from distractions could help you to
relax your mind and focus on studying.

Outline:
1. SPECIFIC TOPIC:
- How To Overcome Laziness

2. OUTLINE:
I. Introduction
A. Facts About Laziness
II. Body
A. Finding A Good Location
B. Avoid Distractions
III. Conclusion
A. Suffer from My Laziness

3. ESSAY:

Overcoming Laziness
Have you ever felt like doing nothing? The feelings you have at that moment are called “laziness”.
Laziness can be found in any person and once they get into the laziness feeling probably most of them would
feel like they are nailed into their comfort, also won’t give any will to do their work, which might affect their
daily routine. Laziness isn’t good at all, and overcoming it is not hard not all.
Laziness is the feeling of being unwilling to do work or use energy, and by then, how can someone
overcome laziness? Overcoming laziness is not a hard work at all, and all you need to do is find a good location
and get rid of anything that might disrupt you. A good location is a place where you feel comfortable to stay in,
it can be your home, a park which has good conditions, and if you are afraid to be alone find someone you feel
comfortable to be with, some of these people could include your parents, sibling, or close ones, but make sure
that he or she would not distract your working process. Another thing you should know, anything that might
disrupt you, for example, television, and games, should be kept away to keep your focus on the work. In
addition, you can bring something that would make you feel relax. It could be a cup of tea or coffee. By doing
this it will help you to eliminate unnecessary thoughts unrelated to work.
Lastly, I am a person who is mostly defeated by laziness but then found out that finding a good location
and keeping free from distractions works best for me.
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 Persuasive Essay
SPECIFIC TOPIC: The Cloning of Endangered Animals Should Be Permitted in Thailand

OUTLINE:
I. Introduction
A. Effects Human Activities Endangered Species
B. My Opinion
II. Body
A. Provides Balance Environment
B. Evidence that Extinction Effects Environment
C. Provides Researches
D. Scientific Improvements from Cloning
III. Conclusion
A. Short Summary

Thailand Should Permit the Cloning of Endangered Species

In Thailand, some species of organisms were threatened by human activities, and the further their
population shrinks the highly it has a risk to become an endangered species. Some people had debated that
Thailand should permit the cloning of endangered species before the species comes to an end. Should cloning
endangered animals be forbidden in Thailand? In my opinion, I strongly believe that the cloning of
endangered species should be allowed in Thailand because cloning endangered species provides balance to
the environment it lives in and gives human medical researches and studies.

One advantage of cloning endangered species is that it provides balance to the environment. Every
species has its own role in an ecosystem, as well as endangered species. According to Hearst Seattle Media
(2018) and James Board’s (August 2, 2016) article, it points out that if one species in a food web extinct there is
a high chance that the ecosystem will collapse. The Pyrenean ibex, an extinct species had caused a decreased of
the predators resulting in the failure of the ecosystem (April 12, 2017). Analyzing from the ecosystem’s fall, the
extinction of the Pyrenean ibex had proven that the absence of a species could lead to a collapse of the
ecosystem. From this, I think that if the extinction human beings will have an effect on it as well. When the
effect happens to an ecosystem cloning will be another option to prevent the extinction of the animals and help
maintain an environment's stability too.

Another benefit the cloning of endangered species is that it provides human being medical
researches. Thailand’s endangered species were under the Wildlife Preservation and Protection Act declared by
King Bhumibol Adulyadej. This law gave the endangered species a protection from actions that could harm
either physically or mentally (19th February 1992). In addition, the law also prevented scientists to make any
experiment on the preserved animals. When scientist couldn't make an action on the protected animals, they
continuously die from human activities. Those human activities that lead to the death of the endangered animals
happen against the law and Thailand’s government had not made any actions to eliminate the issue. Apart from
Thailand, scientists had developed experiments in cloning the living animals and collected some information
from the test, besides they discovered new things within the experiment and made an improvement in each
experiment (n.d.). For example, on the 27𝑡ℎ of January 2018, NewScientist had reported in an article about the
discovery that cloning could help in treating cancer (27 January 2018). From my perspective, cloning would not
only help the endangered species to survive the threatening but also give Thailand a chance in improving
medical and anatomically knowledge from cloning instead of borrowing knowledge from other countries.
 In conclusion, I would like to encourage cloning endangered species to be permitted in Thailand. At
first, cloning of the species will help scientists to discover facts about cloning and improve their medical
studies. Second, scientists would also help prevent the collapse of the food web affecting from the extinction,
furthermore preventing is easier to do in action than solving. Beyond the reasons given, the studies made from
cloning species would support children who desire to protect endangered species as well.

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References
Lee, Kevin. (2018). What Happens When Something in a Food Chain Goes Extinct? Retrieved
from https://education.seattlepi.com/happens-something-food-chain-goes-extinct-4656.html
Broad, James. (August 2, 2016). What would happen if the producers in the ecosystem died in all of a sudden?
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https://www.quora.com/What-would-happen-if-the-producers-in-an-ecosystem-died-all-of-a-sudden
Calvin. (April 12, 2017). Extinction of The Pyrenean Ibex. Retrieved from
https://prezi.com/cmvsscakquxn/extinction-of-the-pyrenean-ibex/
King Bhumibol Adulyadej. (19 February 1992). Wild Animal Reservation and Protection Act, B.E. 2535
(1992). Retrieved from http://thailaws.com/law/t_laws/tlaw0317.pdf
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Scientists have cloned monkeys and it could help treat cancer. (27 January 2018). Retrieved from
https://www.newscientist.com/article/mg23731623-600-scientists-have-cloned-monkeys-and-it-could-help-treat-
cancer/