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Persuasive Speech Sample Paragraph

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Topic: Barbie is a negative role model for young girls.

H. Firstly, Barbie is unnaturally proportioned. B. She may look like


she has the perfect body but, if she was a real person, she wouldn’t be
able to stand up and would have to walk on her hands and knees. F.
Why? Well, because she would be 7 foot 2 inches tall, weigh 115
pounds, have a 48 inch bust, 18 inch waist, and 36 inch hips. I. She
would tip over because of her tiny feet. D. If you were a parent, would
you want your daughter admiring someone who looked like that? E.
Less than 2% of Americans women could even look remotely similar to
Barbie naturally or with cosmetic surgery. A. In 2006, researchers
from the University of Sussex in England found that girls exposed to
images of Barbie dolls had a “greater desire for a thinner body shape”
than other girls. G. Eating disorders such as anorexia or bulimia may
be the result of girls wanting to look like the doll they grew up
admiring. C. These disorders can cause severe health problems and, if
they get out of hand, even death.
Topic: Barbie is a negative role model for young girls.

H. Firstly, Barbie is unnaturally proportioned. TOPIC SENTENCE = the point

B. She may look like she has the perfect body but, if she was a real person, she
wouldn’t be able to stand up and would have to walk on her hands and knees.

F. Why? Well, because she would be 7 foot 2 inches tall, weigh 115 pounds, have
a 48 inch bust, 18 inch waist, and 36 inch hips.

I. She would tip over because of her tiny feet.

D. If you were a parent, would you want your daughter admiring someone who
looked like that?

E. Less than 2% of Americans women could even look remotely similar to Barbie
naturally or with cosmetic surgery.

A. In 2006, researchers from the University of Sussex in England found that girls
exposed to images of Barbie dolls had a “greater desire for a thinner body shape”
than other girls.

G. Eating disorders such as anorexia or bulimia may be the result of girls wanting
to look like the doll they grew up admiring.

C. These disorders can cause severe health problems and, if they get out of hand,
even death.
Topic: Barbie is a negative role model for young girls.

A. In 2006, researchers from the University of Sussex in England found


that girls exposed to images of Barbie dolls had a “greater desire for a
thinner body shape” than other girls.

B. She may look like she has the perfect body but, if she was a real person,
she wouldn’t be able to stand up and would have to walk on her hands
and knees.

C. These disorders can cause severe health problems and, if they get out of
hand, even death.

D. If you were a parent, would you want your daughter admiring someone
who looked like that?

E. Less than 2% of Americans women could even look remotely similar to


Barbie naturally or with cosmetic surgery.

F. Why? Well, because she would be 7 foot 2 inches tall, weigh 115
pounds, have a 48 inch bust, 18 inch waist, and 36 inch hips.

G. Eating disorders such as anorexia or bulimia may be the result of girls


wanting to look like the doll they grew up admiring.

H. Firstly, Barbie is unnaturally proportioned.

I. She would tip over because of her tiny feet.

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