Ryan Shields

Mrs. Hooks

ERWC

02/08/19

Reflective Narrative

The Green Living Essay was written my junior year in AP literature. When writing I had
made many mistakes such as word spelling and grammar. I also failed to use words that
bring more attention and are not as dry. Learning what I had over the years, I have
corrected my mistakes by using more vivid diction and finding the little mistakes. I also
failed to put the essay into a well throughout format.