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TIME SKYPE NAME SKYPE ID VIDEO MATERIAL FEEDBACK

4:00 matsuda live:23dcca71e59d3f80 YES RJ Grammar for JISSEN


sheyla Beginner
18/1 Specific Material or Hello Sheyla-san,
Info: No.60
You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to give relevant answers to the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
fresher – comparative of fresh

*GRAMMAR*
You said: Are the products there more fresh?
Correct: Are the products there fresh/ expensive/cheap?

You said: It is more easy to remember.


Correct: It is *easier* to remember.

You said: What an beautiful sister you have!


Correct: What an *intelligent* sister you have!

*PRONUNCIATION*
awesome
expensive
graceful
building

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


4:30 KAGAWA kagawakyoko NO DNA Hello Kyoko-san,
KYOKO
You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.
0/0
*OVERALL*
You were able to understand the article and you were able to give relevant
answers to the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
deal - an agreement or arrangement, esp. in business
*GRAMMAR*
You said: H&M and Forever 21 are popular brands in Japan, especially young
people.
Correct: H&M and Forever 21 are popular brands in Japan, especially
*among* young people.

You said: It represent a figure…


Correct: It *represents* a figure…
You said: I wonder to see these icons…
better: I’m *curious* to see these icons…

You said: Brand should be good image…


Better: *The brand would have* a good image…

*PRONUNCIATION*
Lacoste

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


5:00 maruyama live:2df5e97ec7e36dd7 YES Go for it! 1 YL STUDENT
tomoya Specific Material or ASK HOMEWORK
2/0 Info: Lesson 37

6:30 Tomoe Miharu LESSON ROOM YES Go for it! 1 YL STUDENT


Specific Material or ASK HOMEWORK
29/0 Info: Lesson 36
*COMPREHENSION-4*
-you understood the lesson

*ACCURACY-3*
You said: Does Ben likes hamburger?
Correct: Does Ben like hamburger?

You said: We buy hamburger for Sarah.


Better: *Let’s* buy *a* hamburger for Sarah.

You said: She is chef.


Correct: She is *a* chef.

You said: She favorite pasta is pesto.


Correct: *Her* favorite pasta is pesto.

You said: Her favorite cakes are cheesecake and apple cake.
Correct: Her favorite cakes are cheesecake and apple *pie.*

*FLUENCY-4*
-you hesitated in answering some questions
*ATTITUDE-5*
-you actively participated

*MISPRONUNCIATION*
-salad

*SELF-EVALUATION*
-3

*HOMEWORK*
-done

7:00 Anna live:go2theb_ch YES Jitsuyo Eikaiwa Lv. YL STUDENT


4
31/11 Specific Material or Hello Anna,
Info: Level 4
Chapter 2 Lesson You did well in today's Jitsuyo Eikaiwa lesson. Let me share today's lesson
7 feedback.

*Personalized FEEDBACK*

*RANGE*
You said: I bought the file.
Correct: I bought *a clear book.*

*ACCURACY*
You said: I like just right clothes.
Better: I like clothes *that are just right. *

You said:Her costume is not definitely simple.


Correct: Her costume is *definitely not* simple.

*FLUENCY*
Pauses: SOMETIMES in between sentences
Fillers: ‘um’

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

7:30 HIDEKO ht2009tokyo YES DNA Student


-lives in Tokyo (hometown)
-works for an American-based supply management company
155/1 -supply chain management (import, export)
-has been playing piano since the age of 5
-plays the piano well; joins local competitions every year; plans to join the
Chopin competition in Warsaw this September
Hello Hideko-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to understand the article and you were able to share good
insights about the article.

*VOCABULARY*
You were familiar with all the words.

*GRAMMAR*
You said: I live Tokyo until now.
Correct: I live *in* Tokyo until now.

You said: I play piano since 5 years old.


Correct: I *have been playing* piano since *I was* 5 years old.

You said: I transfered the resume from Japanese to English.


Correct: I *translated my* resume from Japanese to English.

You said: They don’t have to wait long queue.


Better: They don’t have to wait *in* long queues.

You said: Co-op’s card also using…


Correct: The Co-op card also *uses* …

You said: They tend to use app very friendly.


Better: They tend to use apps very *frequently.*

*PRONUNCIATION*
developed

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


8:00 HITOKI Aono johncharukin YES JISSEN 7-6-1 JISSEN

0/0 Student
-works for an American company (for 4 years); 3rd company-chemical
industry
-in charge of internal and external communication
-has a lot of global colleagues

Hello Hitoki-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE- 4*
You were able to understand company sales trend from a presentation.
*VOCABULARY*
sharp fall (noun) -A quick and sudden drop
recovery (noun) -A process of regaining something
dip (verb) - To decrease for a short time
*GRAMMAR*
You said: There was a steady increase the products between January and
March.
Correct: There was a steady increase *in ice cream sales* between January
and March.

You said: Of course, sales increase is one of the factor…


Correct: Of course, sales increase is one of the *factors* …

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


8:30 NATSUMI live:hiro09090116 YES Beginner YL STUDENT
Conversation
14/0 Material (new) Student
Specific Material or
Info: Lesson 18 -17 y/o
-lives in Nagasaki prefecture
-watching TV (Japanese anime – One Piece), playing sports (volleyball,
track and field)

Hello Natsumi-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to give relevant answers to the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
French fries

*GRAMMAR*
You said: A woman is shopping in hamburger shop.
Better: A woman is *buying food in a* hamburger shop.

You said: potato and juice


Correct: *French fries* and juice

You said: My mother very good at cooking.


Better: My mother *is* very good at cooking.
*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

10:00 Takabumi live:takbm024 YES Jissen Business JISSEN


Akashi Lv.5
50/5 Specific Material or Student
Info: Level5
Chapter6 Unit3 - -works for an IT company (3 years)
On the Web -currently working on a US project, so he often goes to the US for business
Notes: Page No.5 trips
Exercise -playing videogames, board games with his sons (9 and 7 years old)
No.Challenge Item
No. Hello Taka-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You did your best to answer the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
You were familiar with the expressions.

*GRAMMAR*
You said: I researched our competitor, Gellar Motors.
Correct: I researched *about* our competitor, Gellar Motors.

You said: I think Gellar Motor’s quality is very highest.


Better: I think Gellar Motor *products have excellent quality.*

You said: We have the most highest quality in safety products in the world.
Correct: We have the *highest* quality in safety products in the world.

*PRONUNCIATION*
garage
values
meticulous

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


10:30 Takashi live:5b513c363cf13be5 YES JISSEN 5-1-1 JISSEN

110/4 Student
-chemical researcher
-lives in Saitama prefecture
-skiing and traveling
-has a daughter – 21 y/o, son – 19 y/o

Hello Takashi-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE-4 *
You were able to listen to and recall a coworkers introduction

*VOCABULARY*
main – most important
monitor – to check
involve – to join or be a part of something

*GRAMMAR*
You said: My hobby is skiing and traveling.
Correct: My *hobbies are* skiing and traveling.
You said: Next conference will hold in June.
Correct: The next conference *will be* held in June.

You said: My company pay this lesson.


Correct: My company *pays for* this lesson.

You said: She’s also involved in compensation benefits.


Better: She’s also involved in compensation *and* benefits.

You said: His main task is to development marketing strategies.


Correct: His main task is to *develop* marketing strategies.

You said: If you have concern, please ask him.


Correct: If *I have some concerns, I will ask/approach him.*

*PRONUNCIATION*
involve

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


11:00 Yang live:hycabms YES RJ4B Intermediate JISSEN
Level
71/8 Specific Material or Student
Info: Chapter1 Unit
2 -33 y/o
-Chinese
-married to a Chinese woman
-graduated from a Japanese university
-has 2 sons – 4 y/o, 1 y/o
-mechanical engineer; designing power plants
-likes doing sports and watching sports games

Hello Yang-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to give relevant answers to the exercises.

*VOCABULARY*
initiate - to cause something to begin
tie up loose ends - To take care of, finish, or resolve some issues or
pieces of business that are not critical but have remained outstanding

*GRAMMAR*
You said: It seems that someone has different opinions so they still haven’t
arrived a resolution yet.
Correct: It seems that *each person has a different opinion/ they have
different opinions* so they still haven’t arrived *at* a resolution yet.

You said: No one try to give some idea…


Correct: No one *tries* to give some idea…

You said: It’s very important that someone give a…


Correct: It’s very important that someone *gives* a…

*PRONUNCIATION*
consolidate
proposals

Have a nice evening ahead and see you next time!


11:30 KUDO live:12a79246233129dd YES Jitsuyo Eikaiwa Lv. JISSEN
TAKAHIRO 3
2/3 Specific Material or Student
Info: Level 3
Chapter 1 Lesson -31 years old
3 -lives in Yokohama (40mins by train)
-works in Tokyo
-works for the government office (for 7 years)
-in charge of Fukushima reconstruction (after the earthquake)/ nuclear
disaster; goes to Fukushima twice a week
-likes playing tennis, traveling, watching TV

Hello Taka-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.
*OVERALL*
You were able to read the figures correctly.

*VOCABULARY*
manicure
Pedicure
dollar

*GRAMMAR*
You said: I come back home just now.
Correct: *I just came home. *

You said: I have worked for seven years.


Better: I have *been working in the government office for* seven years.

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


YL STUDENTS
ALWAYS ASK ABOUT THE HOMEWORK
*COMPREHENSION*
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*ACCURACY*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

*FLUENCY*
-

*ATTITUDE*
-

*MISPRONUNCIATION*
-

*SELF-EVALUATION*
-

*HOMEWORK*
-

Hi ,

You did well in today's class. Please see today's lesson feedback below:

1) Comprehension -
You were able to understand the lesson well.

2) Accuracy -
You made some mistakes like:

3) Fluency -
You hesitated in answering some questions.

4) Attitude -
You actively participated during the lesson.

5) Homework -

6) Self Evaluation

7) Mispronunciation:

Please do not forget your homework. See you in our next lesson.
JISSEN
Hello -san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to use the expressions fluently.
For you to get a score of 4, please practice your L&R sounds.

*VOCABULARY*
*GRAMMAR*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Better:

You said:
better:

You said:
Better:

*PRONUNCIATION*

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!


JITSUYO EIKAIWA
Hello -san,

You did well in today's Jitsuyo Eikaiwa lesson. Let me share today's lesson
feedback.

*Personalized FEEDBACK*

*RANGE*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

*ACCURACY*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

*FLUENCY*
Pauses: SOMETIMES in between sentences
Fillers:
Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

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